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Tweaking

Spiderleg (A) ~ Denied

OAs were Shimmerpool, Ivyheart, and SnowedLightning. Tweaked to restrict brown to underbelly only. --Zoot vine ^{the perzoot of happiness 19:26, November 8, 2015 (UTC)}

define the shading User:Winterflurry/Sig 22:45, November 9, 2015 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. --Zoot vine ^{the perzoot of happiness 01:22, November 11, 2015 (UTC)}

I can't see the brown very well. Songheart

I can see the brown just fine. Its just under the shading User:Winterflurry/Sig 21:50, November 12, 2015 (UTC)

Maybe lighten the shading on the brown a little. It shouldn't be hard enough to see that I have to stare at it for my eyes to adjust to the darker colours.Stealth f🔥re ^{❤Warriors Forever!❤} 02:56, November 14, 2015 (UTC)

Still working?Stealth f🔥re ^{❤Warriors Forever!❤} 21:01, November 17, 2015 (UTC)

Denied due to lack of work.Stealth f🔥re ^{❤Warriors Forever!❤} 05:43, November 19, 2015 (UTC)

Can I take over? ❀ m ei ❀ ^GOGOBEBE 17:13, November 19, 2015 (UTC)

Yeah just reserve it first.Stealth f🔥re ^{❤Warriors Forever!❤} 05:01, November 20, 2015 (UTC)

Willowshine (Alt.) (K) - Tweaked

OAs were Frostheart and myself. tweaked for sourceless shading and earpink Splook ^sweet ^{^creature} 01:07 Tue Nov 10

I still can't see your light source. - Fox^{僕たちはひとつの光} 01:25,11/10/2015

There also needs to be some depth on the tail and leg shading. Even if the light source landed both of them completely in the dark, they would still have shading to show depth, rather than being one solid color. Paleh Send help 05:20,11/10/2015

Still working? - Fox^{僕たちはひとつの光} 06:55,11/14/2015

She is, yeah. She's gonna upload it tonight. Apple dash ^the ^light ^of ^honor 14:16, November 14, 2015 (UTC)

reuploaded. sorry for the wait. i messed with the shading a lil bit. Splook ^sweet ^{^creature} 21:35 Sat Nov 14

switch the head shading around - it's contradicting with the light source - Fox^{僕たちはひとつの光} 12:12,11/15/2015

reuploaded Splook ^sweet ^{^creature} 22:36 Tue Nov 17

The head lighting's still contradicting the rest. The light source for the head is directly above, while the light source for the body and tail are coming from the left. Paleh Send help 00:11,11/20/2015

Dappletail (Ki) ~ Tweaked

OA is Bramblesnow. Tweaked to add white patches.Stealth f🔥re ^{❤Warriors Forever!❤} 23:52, November 14, 2015 (UTC)

the patches are smudged, not blurred - Fox^{僕たちはひとつの光} 03:11,11/15/2015

I gave them a smudge then a blur, but if you think it should be smudged more (possibly sharpened a bit), let me know and I'll do that.Stealth f🔥re ^{❤Warriors Forever!❤} 05:13, November 15, 2015 (UTC)

use a 1 px hard edged brush and smudge the white. I didn't blur the patches on the StarClan - Fox^{僕たちはひとつの光} 05:18,11/18/2015

Reupload Stealth f🔥re ^{❤Warriors Forever!❤} 04:43, November 19, 2015 (UTC)

Still looks blurred - Fox^{僕たちはひとつの光} 05:11,11/19/2015

Reupload Pure smudging, I didn't blur at all.Stealth f🔥re ^{❤Warriors Forever!❤} 05:41, November 19, 2015 (UTC)

There's too much white on the tail - Fox^{僕たちはひとつの光} 05:58,11/21/2015

Reupload Stealth f🔥re ^{❤Warriors Forever!❤} 19:54, November 21, 2015 (UTC)

Dust Muzzle (K) - Tweaked

Tweaked to give him long fur. OA is me, last one to tweak was Skt. Jayie ^{Unwritten words~} 04:20, November 15, 2015 (UTC)

not an actual tweak really, just his eye colour. can you define the tail shading a bit? david ^🌈 12:55, November 15, 2015 (UTC)

Still working?Stealth f🔥re ^{❤Warriors Forever!❤} 20:37, November 19, 2015 (UTC)

Bramblestar (W) - Redone

File:Bramblestar.warrior.png OA was the amazing sandy, and it was also touched by Nightshine, Ivy, Bloo, Mounty, Ferk, Beebs, and me. Redone to match Hawkfrost. This looks kinda better I think. Apple dash ^the ^light ^of ^honor 03:59, November 18, 2015 (UTC)

The pale chest looks too sharp and the front paws look a bit flat. Nice - Fox^{僕たちはひとつの光} 05:17,11/18/2015

Re-uploaded: Also added the scar. Apple dash ^the ^light ^of ^honor 22:08, November 18, 2015 (UTC)

define the light on the paws - Fox^{僕たちはひとつの光} 03:28,11/19/2015

Also, the pale chest looks kinda orange - Fox^{僕たちはひとつの光} 05:13,11/19/2015

Same applies as below. Also, define the light on the paws a bit. Paleh Send help 00:06,11/20/2015

Is it possible for me to get some sort of extension on this? I asked for Hawkfrost's file from Sunjaw since I think that could help this charart a lot. Apple dash ^the ^light ^of ^honor 03:08, November 21, 2015 (UTC)

Re-uploaded: Thank you Sunjaw for the file!! It made the colors so much easier, but I still don't know if I got them 100% correct. Apple dash ^the ^light ^of ^honor 04:19, November 21, 2015 (UTC)

Bramblestar (L) - Redone

File:Bramblestar.leader.png OA was Shelly, and it was touched by Cloudy and me. It looks like other people touched it too but I'm not sure if they redid it or tweaked ... Redone to match Hawkfrost's stripes. Apple dash ^the ^light ^of ^honor 03:59, November 18, 2015 (UTC)

The pale parts look orange/red and they could use smudging. User:Burntclaw/Sig 08:14, November 18, 2015 (UTC)

I don't smudge, and that's the shading. Apple dash ^the ^light ^of ^honor 12:19, November 18, 2015 (UTC)

Re-uploaded: Also added the scar. Apple dash ^the ^light ^of ^honor 22:08, November 18, 2015 (UTC)

Normally I wouldn't mention this, but given that he's specifically meant to be a mackerel tabby, he really needs to have the head stripes of one too. Something a bit more like this. Also, those eyes are pretty distinctly orange. The hue needs to be closer to yellow for them to be amber. And since Bramble's said to have the same amber eyes as Tigerstar, shouldn't they also be pale? Paleh Send help 00:05,11/20/2015

I used the stripe from Hawkfrost's kit. Do you just want me to change it anyways? Apple dash ^the ^light ^of ^honor 00:13, November 20, 2015 (UTC)

Maybe... probably should ask for some second opinions on that, since it would imply that hawkfrost's kit and apprentice should be tweaked as well, and if they're not, Bramble and HAwk won't actually have identical patterns at that point. Paleh Send help 04:42,11/20/2015

Is it possible for me to get some sort of extension on this? I asked for Hawkfrost's file from Sunjaw since I think that could help this charart a lot. Apple dash ^the ^light ^of ^honor 03:08, November 21, 2015 (UTC)

Re-uploaded: nevermind, Sunjaw gave the file to me. This is all the colors from Hawkfrost and the stripes are the same too. Apple dash ^the ^light ^of ^honor 20:26, November 21, 2015 (UTC)

The stripes don't look like they match. They matched better before, and were much closer to a mackerel tabby pattern. Personally, I'd suggest going back to your last pattern, just with the new colors (though given it's their tabby pattern that's said to be identical, I don't think the color matching is strictly necessary either). Paleh Send help 22:45,11/21/2015

Oh, looking at Bramble's warrior, that looks fine, it's just the leader. So I'm not sure if going back to the last pattern will work or not, but regardless, this current pattern doesn't match. Paleh Send help 22:46,11/21/2015

Mothflight (mc) ~ Tweaked

File:Mothflight.mc.png OAs were Scarletwind and Paleclaw. Tweaked to be graying - Fox^{僕たちはひとつの光} 11:04,11/19/2015

Could you blur the shading a tad? Paleh Send help 07:57,11/20/2015

Re-uploaded - Fox^{僕たちはひとつの光} 08:30,11/20/2015

Sparrowpelt (SC) (Ki) ~ Redone

File:Sparrowpelt (SC).kit.png OA is me. Redone for multiple issues. Here is an unshaded image for the others working on Sparrowpelt.Stealth f🔥re ^{❤Warriors Forever!❤} 07:34, November 20, 2015 (UTC)

But I nominated the images... that's kinda not fair to me- I already have the two other images done, and I made it clear that I wanted to set the pattern. I was going to post earlier, but I was running late for work... =\ Considering I was the OA of the previous pattern, I think I should get to design it. I would also like to point out that I had both images reserved long before you did. —Jayce(08:42, 11/20/2015)

Since Skye obviously stated he wanted the pattern, and adding the fact he was the OAs of two images he nominated, I think it was pretty rude to just post it before he has even had the chance, especially when he reserved them first. User:Burntclaw/Sig 14:40, November 20, 2015 (UTC)

yeah its actually really rude and its not hard to ask for a file for the pattern before its posted, yknow. david ^🌈 17:35, November 20, 2015 (UTC)

I did not realize and made a mistake. I already agreed to follow whatever pattern Snowed chooses when they post their images. I do not appreciate three users suddenly telling me when I made a mistake kinda just woke up I think Snowed's comment is enough. I am a pretty decent person. Right? So I won't do anything until Snowed posts their images and I'll just match it. Simple as that.Stealth f🔥re ^{❤Warriors Forever!❤} 21:06, November 20, 2015 (UTC)

Sparrowpelt (SC) (W) - Redone

File:Sparrowpelt (SC).warrior.png Posted for Cloudy. This is Cloudy's image. He asked me to post this for him. Apple dash ^the ^light ^of ^honor 22:46, November 20, 2015 (UTC)

Oh my gosh this is great! Can I have the file of either warrior or kittypet please? Whichever you like, I don't mind.Stealth f🔥re ^{❤Warriors Forever!❤} 23:37, November 20, 2015 (UTC)

Sparrowpelt (SC) (KP) - Redone

File:Sparrowpelt (SC).kittypet.png Posted for Cloudy. This is Cloudy's image. He asked me to post this for him. Apple dash ^the ^light ^of ^honor 22:46, November 20, 2015 (UTC)

Falling Feather (AT) ~ Tweaked

I was the OA, edited for shading tweaks. Not my greatest tweak. ❄Sorrel _It's _{everything I} _dreamed 15:46, November 21, 2015 (UTC)

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 The stripes don't look like they match. They matched better before, and were much closer to a mackerel tabby pattern. Personally, I'd suggest going back to your last pattern, just with the new colors (though given it's their tabby pattern that's said to be identical, I don't think the color matching is strictly necessary either). {{User:Paleclaw/Sig2|22:45,11/21/2015}}
+Oh, looking at Bramble's warrior, that looks fine, it's just the leader. So I'm not sure if going back to the last pattern will work or not, but regardless, this current pattern doesn't match. {{User:Paleclaw/Sig2|22:46,11/21/2015}}
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