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Tweaking

Sparrowpelt (A) - Redone

File:Sparrowpelt (SC).apprentice.png OA was scarlet, me, and Nightshine. Redone for reasons and all colors are from cloudy's file. Comments? Appledash ^{the light of honor} 05:02, November 26, 2015 (UTC)

Smudge the earpink more? nice! bcprincess ^{a giant woman} 20:27 Thu Nov 26

Re-uploaded: Thanks! Appledash ^{the light of honor} 20:45, November 26, 2015 (UTC)

define the shading - Fox ^{僕たちはひとつの光} 09:31,11/27/2015

Re-uploaded: I know there's waste. Appledash ^{the light of honor} 04:09, November 28, 2015 (UTC)

Tallstar (R) ~ Tweaked

OA = me. Tweaked for blotchy shading - Fox ^{僕たちはひとつの光} 12:38,11/26/2015

Can you please smudge the white spot on his leg? It just looks really sharp compared to the rest of the body - same with the white spot on his shoulder. Appledash ^{the light of honor} 13:49, November 26, 2015 (UTC)

Could you smooth out the shading above the thigh? bcprincess ^{a giant woman} 20:28 Thu Nov 26

Re-uploaded - Fox ^{僕たちはひとつの光} 08:59,11/27/2015

Tigerstar (App) ~ Redone

File:Tigerstar.apprentice.png Sziri ^{the goat sails away ツ} 19:29, November 26, 2015 (UTC)

For reference, the base is #372111, the stripes are #1e120b, and the pale chest is #ac8a75. But this looks very nice! - Fox ^{僕たちはひとつの光} 08:58,11/27/2015

Re-ups Thx for the ref c: Sziri ^{the goat sails away ツ} 15:24, November 27, 2015 (UTC)

Define the texture User:Winterflurry/Sig 19:32, November 27, 2015 (UTC)

Tigerstar (L) - Redone

File:Tigerstar.leader.png Appledash ^{the light of honor} 20:45, November 26, 2015 (UTC)

Could you define the texture? I can't see it. Maybe you could draw more lines - Fox ^{僕たちはひとつの光} 08:56,11/27/2015

The eye color doesn't seem to match. User:Burntclaw/Sig 04:36, November 28, 2015 (UTC)

Re-uploaded: Appledash ^{the light of honor} 04:53, November 28, 2015 (UTC)

Mothflight (star) ~ Tweaked

File:Mothflight.star.png Tweaked to have a graying muzzle. OA is Kelpsy. ❀ mei ❀ ^GOGOBEBE 16:30, November 27, 2015 (UTC)

It shouldn't just be the muzzle unless it specifically says so, and it doesn't. It should be the entire pelt. —Jayce(19:31, 11/27/2015)

re-up man this day is getting worse and worse. ❀ mei ❀ ^GOGOBEBE 01:28, November 28, 2015 (UTC)

re-up stupid waste. ❀ mei ❀ ^GOGOBEBE 01:29, November 28, 2015 (UTC)

Please put emphasis on the fact that she is greying. User:Burntclaw/Sig 04:35, November 28, 2015 (UTC)

now she looks like she's pale grey when she isn't. david ^🌈 05:39, November 28, 2015 (UTC)

Poppydawn (Alt. W) ~ Tweaked

Tweaked to have a bushy tail OA's were Sweetflower and FerretclawLover. I didnt touch anything but the tail. ❀ mei ❀ ^GOGOBEBE 02:01, November 28, 2015 (UTC)

Hmm, I don't think it's enough. It's also long and thick too. Try to thicken the tail and make it a little longer.Stealthf🔥re ^{❤Warriors Forever!❤} 05:37, November 28, 2015 (UTC)

no, it should only really be bushier. that's all it was nominated for, and she isn't known for a long tail. david ^🌈 05:38, November 28, 2015 (UTC)