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Tweaking

Jayfeather (A) ~ Redone

 OA of last version was Ducksplash; redone to thin stripes/match his other images. ~☯ Breeze ^{Five Nights at Freddys} 23:50, January 13, 2015 (UTC)

Could you define the texture on both images? ~ Burntclaw ^{Yolo ♫ ♪} 00:16, January 14, 2015 (UTC)

Smudge the stripes a bit too on both images. —Jayce(07:08, 1/15/2015)

Waitwait, why was his MCA approved while the comments were obviously directed at both images? Just confused. ~ Foxy ^{Don't eat my food} 04:08, January 17, 2015 (UTC)

Smudge the stripes much more and lighten up his base. Also, he has some hidden mottles under his tabby layer. ☽➸ Hawky ^{Void Shadowshot}4:22 Sat Jan 17

I restored the image where it belongs since there is stuff that needs to be done, and I already said to smudge the stripes... —Jayce(11:20, 1/17/2015)

I should be able to reupload sometime in the next few days, if time allows.~☯ Breeze ^{Five Nights at Freddys} 19:47, January 17, 2015 (UTC)

Re-uploaded.--~☯ Breeze ^{Five Nights at Freddys} 22:28, January 17, 2015 (UTC)

Lighten up his base, he looks quite dark compared to his other images. ~ Burntclaw ^{Yolo ♫ ♪} 07:42, January 18, 2015 (UTC)

Can you smudge the stripes some more? I can barely see that it's smudged. Also, try using the hard-edge brush - that's what I used on the MC and the kit. ☽➸ Hawky ^{Void Shadowshot}14:54 Sun Jan 18

Jayfeather (MCA) ~ Redone

Last OA was Ducksplash, redone to thin stripes/match other images.~☯ Breeze ^{Five Nights at Freddys} 23:51, January 13, 2015 (UTC)

Archived. Jayie ^{Unwritten words~} 03:43, January 17, 2015 (UTC)

I'm readding this to the tweak page because there's stuff that needs to be done. Please see the apprentice's section. —Jayce(11:20, 1/17/2015)

Re-uploaded.~☯ Breeze ^{Five Nights at Freddys} 22:29, January 17, 2015 (UTC)

See the apprentice. ☽➸ Hawky ^{Void Shadowshot}14:55 Sun Jan 18

Graywing (WC) (Ro) ~ Redone

File:Graywing (WC).rogue.pngKind of hard edged? Tiger ^{Sunny days} 03:11, January 16, 2015 (UTC)

Can you make the shading style the same as the other images to match them a bit more? That's mostly why I nominated for it. Thanks! --Stealthfire star (talk) 03:20, January 16, 2015 (UTC)

The shading is really dark. (Not sure if I'm allowed to comment on these or if i just can't tweak/redo please let me know if i did something wrong thanks) ♎ giaria ^{time on my side} 04:41 Fri Jan 16 04:41, January 16, 2015 (UTC)

Shading style is not required to match. Although I think the shading on this is a bit too thick- can you thin it out? —Jayce(04:44, 1/16/2015)

blur it a bunch too and maybe darken his pelt a bit? this doesnt even look dark grey, more neutral. david ^🌈 14:13, January 16, 2015 (UTC)

Re-upped Tiger ^{Sunny days} 03:43, January 17, 2015 (UTC)

Add more light to the tail tip. ~ Foxy ^{Don't eat my food} 04:08, January 17, 2015 (UTC)

Blur the shading a ton on his haunch. ~ Burntclaw ^{Yolo ♫ ♪} 11:15, January 17, 2015 (UTC)

Re-uploaded Tiger ^{Sunny days} 19:04, January 18, 2015 (UTC)

Blur the shading tons more and add depth to it. ☽➸ Hawky ^{Void Shadowshot}20:57 Sun Jan 18

Define the light source? Dazzy 10:23, January 20, 2015 (UTC)

Beetlewhisker (w) ~ tweaked

OA be iceheart, tweaked for brown, which i used skt's method in doing so. comments? Queen Beebs 19:13, January 18, 2015 (UTC)

He looks rather flat. Try adding some highlights? ~ Burntclaw ^{Yolo ♫ ♪} 00:20, January 19, 2015 (UTC)

tbh I say just define the shading and that should do it. ☽➸ Hawky ^{Void Shadowshot}2:05 Mon Jan 19

re-up this cat just came to me...and he said 'mess me up' Queen Beebs 03:19, January 19, 2015 (UTC)

Brighten up the white, please. He looks so gray. —Jayce(19:16, 1/20/2015)

re-up Queen Beebs 19:53, January 20, 2015 (UTC)

Brighten the white a bit, and define where the shadows are falling, especially on his neck. Jayie ^{Unwritten words~} 21:51, January 20, 2015 (UTC)

re-up i think i had to rework his lightsource a teeny bit whoop Queen Beebs 22:33, January 20, 2015 (UTC)

Now his entire neck seems to be in shadow. Maybe put part of it in the light? Jayie ^{Unwritten words~} 23:01, January 20, 2015 (UTC)

Reedtail (Ki) ~ Redone

david ^🌈 11:55, January 20, 2015 (UTC)

Define the shading on both front legs. Tiny Reedtail is cute. —Jayce(19:51, 1/20/2015)

its a little me define the tail shading Queen Beebs 19:54, January 20, 2015 (UTC)

re-uploaded shouldnt make chararts when im half asleep tbh david ^🌈 23:15, January 20, 2015 (UTC)

Shadow (L) - Tweaked

File:Shadow.leader.png OA is Atelda and I made her darker and defined the flat shading. —Jayce(19:50, 1/20/2015)

you think you could dull her earpink a little? it looks a bit bright, especially on a black cat anyway. david ^🌈 21:12, January 20, 2015 (UTC)

Shadow (Star) - Tweaked

File:Shadow.star.png OA is Icy and I made her darker. In the process, the shading went a wee bit off-the-chart, so I kinda had to tweak that. —Jayce(19:50, 1/20/2015)

Brackenfur (A) ~ Tweaked

OA is Rainfacestar. Tweaked to remove green. I used .Trollsky's technique for this for the others tweaking his kit and Warrior, I used the colour #A95800. --Stealthfire star (talk) 23:01, January 20, 2015 (UTC)