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Tweaking

Spiderleg (A) ~ Denied

OAs were Shimmerpool, Ivyheart, and SnowedLightning. Tweaked to restrict brown to underbelly only. --Zoot vine ^{the perzoot of happiness 19:26, November 8, 2015 (UTC)}

define the shading User:Winterflurry/Sig 22:45, November 9, 2015 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. --Zoot vine ^{the perzoot of happiness 01:22, November 11, 2015 (UTC)}

I can't see the brown very well. Songheart

I can see the brown just fine. Its just under the shading User:Winterflurry/Sig 21:50, November 12, 2015 (UTC)

Maybe lighten the shading on the brown a little. It shouldn't be hard enough to see that I have to stare at it for my eyes to adjust to the darker colours.Stealth f🔥re ^{❤Warriors Forever!❤} 02:56, November 14, 2015 (UTC)

Still working?Stealth f🔥re ^{❤Warriors Forever!❤} 21:01, November 17, 2015 (UTC)

Denied due to lack of work.Stealth f🔥re ^{❤Warriors Forever!❤} 05:43, November 19, 2015 (UTC)

Can I take over? ❀ m ei ❀ ^GOGOBEBE 17:13, November 19, 2015 (UTC)

Willowshine (Alt.) (K) - Tweaked

OAs were Frostheart and myself. tweaked for sourceless shading and earpink Splook ^sweet ^{^creature} 01:07 Tue Nov 10

I still can't see your light source. - Fox^{僕たちはひとつの光} 01:25,11/10/2015

There also needs to be some depth on the tail and leg shading. Even if the light source landed both of them completely in the dark, they would still have shading to show depth, rather than being one solid color. Paleh Send help 05:20,11/10/2015

Still working? - Fox^{僕たちはひとつの光} 06:55,11/14/2015

She is, yeah. She's gonna upload it tonight. Apple dash ^the ^light ^of ^honor 14:16, November 14, 2015 (UTC)

reuploaded. sorry for the wait. i messed with the shading a lil bit. Splook ^sweet ^{^creature} 21:35 Sat Nov 14

switch the head shading around - it's contradicting with the light source - Fox^{僕たちはひとつの光} 12:12,11/15/2015

reuploaded Splook ^sweet ^{^creature} 22:36 Tue Nov 17

Dappletail (Ki) ~ Tweaked

OA is Bramblesnow. Tweaked to add white patches.Stealth f🔥re ^{❤Warriors Forever!❤} 23:52, November 14, 2015 (UTC)

the patches are smudged, not blurred - Fox^{僕たちはひとつの光} 03:11,11/15/2015

I gave them a smudge then a blur, but if you think it should be smudged more (possibly sharpened a bit), let me know and I'll do that.Stealth f🔥re ^{❤Warriors Forever!❤} 05:13, November 15, 2015 (UTC)

use a 1 px hard edged brush and smudge the white. I didn't blur the patches on the StarClan - Fox^{僕たちはひとつの光} 05:18,11/18/2015

Reupload Stealth f🔥re ^{❤Warriors Forever!❤} 04:43, November 19, 2015 (UTC)

Still looks blurred - Fox^{僕たちはひとつの光} 05:11,11/19/2015

Reupload Pure smudging, I didn't blur at all.Stealth f🔥re ^{❤Warriors Forever!❤} 05:41, November 19, 2015 (UTC)

Dust Muzzle (K) - Tweaked

Tweaked to give him long fur. OA is me, last one to tweak was Skt. Jayie ^{Unwritten words~} 04:20, November 15, 2015 (UTC)

not an actual tweak really, just his eye colour. can you define the tail shading a bit? david ^🌈 12:55, November 15, 2015 (UTC)

Still working?Stealth f🔥re ^{❤Warriors Forever!❤} 20:37, November 19, 2015 (UTC)

Bramblestar (W) - Redone

File:Bramblestar.warrior.png OA was the amazing sandy, and it was also touched by Nightshine, Ivy, Bloo, Mounty, Ferk, Beebs, and me. Redone to match Hawkfrost. This looks kinda better I think. Apple dash ^the ^light ^of ^honor 03:59, November 18, 2015 (UTC)

The pale chest looks too sharp and the front paws look a bit flat. Nice - Fox^{僕たちはひとつの光} 05:17,11/18/2015

Re-uploaded: Also added the scar. Apple dash ^the ^light ^of ^honor 22:08, November 18, 2015 (UTC)

define the light on the paws - Fox^{僕たちはひとつの光} 03:28,11/19/2015

Also, the pale chest looks kinda orange - Fox^{僕たちはひとつの光} 05:13,11/19/2015

Same applies as below. Also, define the light on the paws a bit. Paleh Send help 00:06,11/20/2015

Bramblestar (L) - Redone

File:Bramblestar.leader.png OA was Shelly, and it was touched by Cloudy and me. It looks like other people touched it too but I'm not sure if they redid it or tweaked ... Redone to match Hawkfrost's stripes. Apple dash ^the ^light ^of ^honor 03:59, November 18, 2015 (UTC)

The pale parts look orange/red and they could use smudging. User:Burntclaw/Sig 08:14, November 18, 2015 (UTC)

I don't smudge, and that's the shading. Apple dash ^the ^light ^of ^honor 12:19, November 18, 2015 (UTC)

Re-uploaded: Also added the scar. Apple dash ^the ^light ^of ^honor 22:08, November 18, 2015 (UTC)

Normally I wouldn't mention this, but given that he's specifically meant to be a mackerel tabby, he really needs to have the head stripes of one too. Something a bit more like this. Also, those eyes are pretty distinctly orange. The hue needs to be closer to yellow for them to be amber. And since Bramble's said to have the same amber eyes as Tigerstar, shouldn't they also be pale? Paleh Send help 00:05,11/20/2015

Mothflight (mc) ~ Tweaked

File:Mothflight.mc.png OAs were Scarletwind and Paleclaw. Tweaked to be graying - Fox^{僕たちはひとつの光} 11:04,11/19/2015

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