Talk: Charart/Tweak Page

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Tweaking

Beechfur (RC) (W) ~ Tweaked

OA was Duck, tweaked for flat shading.~☯ Breeze ^{Five Nights at Freddys} 19:24, October 12, 2014 (UTC)

Smooth out the shading and blur it. —Jayce(20:10, 10/12/2014)

Re-uploaded.~☯ Breeze ^{Five Nights at Freddys} 19:15, October 13, 2014 (UTC)

Lighten up the shading a bit. ☽➸ Hawky ^{Void Shadowshot}20:37 Mon Oct 13

Re-uploaded.--~☯ Breeze ^{Five Nights at Freddys} 23:24, October 13, 2014 (UTC)

Smooth it out a bit more- it clashes a little too much still. —Jayce(22:45, 10/14/2014)

Re-uploaded.--~☯ Breeze ^{Five Nights at Freddys} 05:57, October 18, 2014 (UTC)

It still clashes a bit too much. -Ducksauce 21:04, October 19, 2014 (UTC)

Boulderfur (A) ~ Tweaked

OA was CinderxLion, tweaked for shading. User:Notquiterocketwildbokan/Sig 7:54 PM, Mon Oct 13, 2014

Could you define the lightsource a bit more? It seems to be coming from multiple directions. Brick ^{The Bite of '87} 19:01, October 14, 2014 (UTC)

I can try... but that'd mean redoing the image completely. I can only work with what's there. Any advice from older members on this one? User:Notquiterocketwildbokan/Sig 7:16 PM, Tue Oct 14, 2014

Hmmmm, I think if you use a lot of layers, you can fix the lightsource. Shinxy used Thunderbolt! 21:09, October 14, 2014 (UTC)

Hmm... I tried a little and it looked very... odd to say the least. I'll try again, but tbh I think this may be easier as a redo. User:Notquiterocketwildbokan/Sig 10:36 PM, Tue Oct 14, 2014

Can I get some more comments on how to fix this or should I re-try what Shinx said? User:Notquiterocketwildbokan/Sig 6:30 PM, Sat Oct 18, 2014

You can try adding some more shading around the legs and such. ☽➸ Hawky ^{Void Shadowshot}18:55 Sat Oct 18

Re-up Okay so I removed the shading I did and re-did it, I think that helped. Comments? (is there a way to remove the shading on the base coat so it doesn't make the tail and legs look darker then everything else where there is no shading?) User:Notquiterocketwildbokan/Sig 7:25 PM, Sat Oct 18, 2014

Color pick the lightest color of the base pelt and run it over the tail as a highlight. ☽➸ Hawky ^{Void Shadowshot}20:03 Sat Oct 18

reup Okay I think I fixed it. c: User:Notquiterocketwildbokan/Sig 5:40 PM, Sun Oct 19, 2014

Blackstar (A) ~ Tweaked

OA was Rowan tweaked because it looked grey and flat shading. Can I please dull the earpink a bit, too? Shinxy used Thunderbolt! 21:09, October 13, 2014 (UTC)

Earpink is fine, imho. Lighten the shading up a little bit? User:Notquiterocketwildbokan/Sig 9:38 PM, Mon Oct 13, 2014

Re-ups Shinxy used Thunderbolt! 21:43, October 13, 2014 (UTC)

Smooth out the shading and highlights a bit more. —Jayce(22:43, 10/13/2014)

can you define the highlight on the tail? david ^🌈 01:20, October 14, 2014 (UTC)

Done and done. Shinxy used Thunderbolt! 08:17, October 14, 2014 (UTC)

Lighten up the shading jussst a tiny bit. Like just a few pixels on the opacity bar. ☽➸ Hawky ^{Void Shadowshot}21:39 Tue Oct 14

Re-ups Shinxy used Thunderbolt! 12:17, October 15, 2014 (UTC)

Try and smooth out the shading and highlights, and lighten the shading a bit more- it still seems dark for a white cat and it even looks a bit blotchy. —Jayce(19:22, 10/15/2014)

~ Shinxy used Thunderbolt! 11:03, October 17, 2014 (UTC)

Sunfish (A) ~ Tweaked

OA was Rowan, plus a tweak by me that takes up half of the file history, tweaked because i sucked at tweaking, and so the shading was still flat. Shinxy used Thunderbolt! 17:00, October 14, 2014 (UTC)

Lighten up the shading. It looks too dark for the pelt. ☽➸ Hawky ^{Void Shadowshot}20:20 Tue Oct 14

reups Shinxy used Thunderbolt! 12:21, October 15, 2014 (UTC)

I think there's a bit of waste outside the right ear. Brick ^{The Bite of '87} 18:04, October 15, 2014 (UTC)

Re-ups Shinxy used Thunderbolt! 11:00, October 17, 2014 (UTC)

Ivypool (Alt Ki) ~ Tweaked

OA was Ivy, tweaked for shading and neon earpink. User:Notquiterocketwildbokan/Sig 6:42 PM, Sat Oct 18, 2014