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Feathertail (Sc) - Redone
i apologize, for it has been quite a white since i made art here. anyway, redid to be more silver-gray, like her momma. Splook sweet creature 16:33 Sat Aug 1
This should be named Feathertail.star.png, Splook; why didn't you just upload over the original? She needs the bushy tail, define the shading a tad, and darken the stripes just a bit. ★ Berry ★ Midnight Monster's Parade! <smI Iall>16:47 Sat Aug 1
Give Splook a break. She /just/ came back. Can you lighten the paw shading? This is beautiful, Splook. I'm going to have a really hard time matching this ._. Appledash the light of honor 17:01, August 1, 2015 (UTC)
Reuploaded. i told you i hadn't done this in awhile so i apologize that i didn't name it correctly. Splook sweet creature 21:52 Sat Aug 1
Do you mind smudging/blurring the tail stripes a tad? This is beautiful Splook. =)~☯ Breeze Five Nights at Freddys 22:35, August 1, 2015 (UTC)
Reuploaded. thank you! :> Splook sweet creature 00:30 Sun Aug 2
Could u smudge the ear pink more? And define the shading on the legs. Nice work! - Fox 僕たちはひとつの光 01:22, August 2, 2015 (UTC)
Smooth out the shading? I think her tail should be more... fuzzy? A tail wouldn't be smooth edged like this? I'm not sure. Also, I think you shouldn't change the entire style of her stripes, as it was agreed to be redone for the color(by most of the voters), I believe. It was asked to be redone only because it would be hard to tweak it. It's not fair for the OA when the entire pattern gets redone just because the base color is too dark. ~ Cheryl Champagne Problems 🍷 (16:12,8/2/2015)
I literally copied the pattern from a picture of an actual silver-tabby cat. There are a lot of chararts that are redone and look completely different than the original image, and what the OA had depicted. I was trying to go for realism, and use a real-life tabby design. If anyone else feels like I should redo my entire image, then say so, but no one ever said that I had to redo to match the original tabby design. The entire set of chararts were being redone anyways. Splook sweet creature 16:34 Sun Aug 2
She's silver-gray instead of silver in the first place. I thouht silver-gray cats don't have black stripes unless they're said to have them??? If realism is everything, I would nominate half of PCA's images ~ Cheryl Champagne Problems 🍷 (16:49,8/2/2015)
I think her stripe style is fine. As she said, she copied it frm an actual picture and /no one/ said that the original pattern had to be kept. That's basicaly the reason it was nominated anyways. Appledash the light of honor 16:53, August 2, 2015 (UTC)
Can you define the shadow in the earpink and the shading on the head? :) User:Winterflurry/Sig 17:06, August 2, 2015 (UTC)
Lighten her base just a tiny bit- I think it's still too dark in places, but tweaking the base might help solve that issue. Also, the stripes are fine- no one said that keeping the stripe pattern was mandatory, therefore Splook is allowed to choose whatever pattern she so wishes. —Jayce(18:54, 8/2/2015)
can you lighten her base pelt a bit? i think that was a reason it was nominated too since shes supposed to be silvery i guess david 🌈 18:59, August 2, 2015 (UTC)
Her base is light enough, just the light needs to be defined. ~ Cheryl Champagne Problems 🍷 (00:12,8/3/2015)
I disagree- I don't think it's light enough. Given that she was asked twice to do so, I think it could use a bit of lightening up. I didn't say too much, though. Probably just a shade or two. She seems more neutral gray, when she's been said multiple times to have the same silver pelt as her mother. —Jayce(00:19, 8/3/2015)
Do you mind removing the small spot/stripe off the nose? Its fine if you disagree, however. Its just a preference.~☯ Breeze Five Nights at Freddys 03:08, August 3, 2015 (UTC)
I'm really sorry for this to come out and if it's bothering - but can you make the pupil rounder and bigger? It's really just preference too. And perhaps make them more focused to one side? It currently looks kind of like she's looking at both sides which seems...strange but for me only. I still think the stripes should be dark gray instead of black, because she's silver-gray and not silver. If everyone still disagree with me, fine. The light should be defined anyway whether the base is light enough or not. ~ Cheryl Champagne Problems 🍷 (04:22,8/3/2015)
The eyes are fine, honestly. I make mine like that and many a times have they gotten approved- eye style is artist's choice, and just because it's not big and extravagant doesn't mean it's not acceptable. Also, Splook says that she got everything from a picture of a silver cat- there is nothing wrong with the stripe color. When I search "silver-gray cats", I get a bunch of silver tabbies. —Jayce(22:09, 8/3/2015)
Idk if I'm repeating anyone's comments, but can u define or darken the shading? I can't see it. - Fox 僕たちはひとつの光 06:51, August 4, 2015 (UTC)
The stripes on the tail look too thick. ~ Silvercloud There is always hope... 16:15, August 4, 2015 (UTC)
Halftail (E) ~ Tweaked
OA is Bramble and tweakers are Atelda and Mount Everest. Tweaked to damage tail more. Yes, I know the bone (bit gross) looks beige. That's because bones true color is beige. It turns white when it dries out. I'm pretty sure if it dried out completely it would have fallen off.Stealthf🔥re ❤Warriors Forever!❤ 04:07, August 3, 2015 (UTC)
Nah, the color of the bone is fine as it is now^^ Mind covering the flesh more? It's less red and "exposed" on his StarClan and warrior :P ~ Cheryl Champagne Problems 🍷 (09:07,8/3/2015)
Add a little bit of scarring around the skin and lower the opacity of the lineart separating the bone from the skin. ★ Berry ★ Midnight Monster's Parade! 09:30 Mon Aug 3
Reupload I'm going to talk to one of the tweakers of the other images to ask how they did the texture and scarring.Stealthf🔥re ❤Warriors Forever!❤ 21:52, August 3, 2015 (UTC)
Thin out the lineart on the damaged part of the tail. I don't think it should be that thick. —Jayce(22:06, 8/3/2015)
Reupload Stealthf🔥re ❤Warriors Forever!❤ 03:31, August 4, 2015 (UTC)
Troutclaw (K) - Tweaked
User:Burntclaw/Sig 05:22, August 4, 2015 (UTC)
Ottersplash (Q) - Tweaked
OA is Scarletwind. User:Burntclaw/Sig 05:39, August 4, 2015 (UTC)
Rowanstar (BS) (L) ~ Redone
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(special thanks to jayce for uploading for me;;) ★ Berry ★ Midnight Monster's Parade! 13:11 Tue Aug 4
Just so no one tries to decline this, I did give him to Berry- I was unable to match David's pattern, and I knew Berry would enjoy making this. =P —Jayce(13:13, 8/4/2015)