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Rosetail(E) - Redone
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Fail image iz fail. I redid it to match the others, OA=seniór Sparrowsong -Bloo!yo
21:58, October 5, 2011 (UTC)
beautiful my love. xDD Darken the shading a lot. ❄swagstorm❄ 21:59, October 5, 2011 (UTC)
Damn Icey. I was going to say that. This is wonderful, and the only issue I have with it is the shading. —Garrus ღ 22:00, October 5, 2011 (UTC)
Lol. 3 edit conflicts. Looks great! Can you define the earpink, and add stripes to the tail? Its supposed to be a pale ginger tail, so it should have stripes. ∗ Mistystar ∗ Trust the Fire Within... 22:01, October 5, 2011 (UTC)
It's pinkish-orange, and the others don't have tail stripes. —Garrus ღ 22:03, October 5, 2011 (UTC)
Oops. xD ∗ Mistystar ∗ Trust the Fire Within... 22:04, October 5, 2011 (UTC)
Reuploaded ohohoh, now this is startin' to be not such a fail! B) -Bloo!yo
22:06, October 5, 2011 (UTC)
No its not; just erase the waste. ∗ Mistystar ∗ Trust the Fire Within... 22:07, October 5, 2011 (UTC)
Dear. Waste, my love. Make the ear pink redder. ❄swagstorm❄ 22:07, October 5, 2011 (UTC)
reuploaded again grooaaan, Im stupid, forgot about the waste DX And I got the earpink from the other images. -Bloo!yo
22:09, October 5, 2011 (UTC)
Oh no. XDDD Can you blur it some more? ❄swagstorm❄ 22:26, October 5, 2011 (UTC)
22:35, October 5, 2011 (UTC)
Can you blur the tail shading any more? ∗ Mistystar ∗ Trust the Fire Within... 22:53, October 5, 2011 (UTC)
Nooope! I'll tell you now that for every image I make I blur the shading to the max x) -Bloo!yo
00:00, October 6, 2011 (UTC)
Darken the tail colour a bit? llwildheart™l03:56 Thu Oct 6
04:08, October 6, 2011 (UTC)
I know the others don't have this, but her head looks kinda...bare. I really think it need at least one stripe on it. Also, she needs stripes on her front legs because on her kit she has it (dunno why the warrior version doesn't) This is very good, it is kinda strange seeing a cat with a pink tail though x3 Autumnstar✦Triumph over tragedy✧ 14:38, October 6, 2011 (UTC)
reuploaded I know right?!? -Bloo!yo
21:23, October 6, 2011 (UTC)
I think you should redden the earpink, or define it, even if the other versions don't have it like that. You don't have to, of course, but I like it when the earpink is easy to see. ∗ Mistystar ∗ Trust the Fire Within... 23:43, October 6, 2011 (UTC)
If I redden it it'll blend in too much. It looks fine to me -Bloo!yo
02:52, October 7, 2011 (UTC)
All I see is that perhaps you can stretch the shading or define it more below the chin. Otherwise this looks awesome! :D Atelda 02:57, October 7, 2011 (UTC)
Reuploaded Thank you, thank you very much x) -Bloo!yo
03:04, October 7, 2011 (UTC)
Wonderful. This is approved. —Garrus ღ 22:38, October 8, 2011 (UTC)
Goldenflower (Q) - Redone Edit
I'm quite surprised her elder got approved already, but I'm not complaining xp Anyways, she needed to be redone for the same reasons before: she needed to be pale ginger and have stripes. OA is Sandwich989, later tweaked by (ironically) Goldenpaw. I don't like this as much as her elder but I still think she looks so pretty. Comments for improvement? Autumnstar✦Triumph over tragedy✧ 01:12, October 6, 2011 (UTC)
..Well Im making first comment! blur the shading x) -Bloo!yo
02:39, October 6, 2011 (UTC)
Reuploaded and oh, it's because it's so amazing that it's left everyone utterly speechless, and you sir are a daring individual and have the guts to speak up! Haha jokes of course =) Autumnstar✦Triumph over tragedy✧ 04:05, October 6, 2011 (UTC)
XD, the earpink looks brownish-purplish. Could you redden it, even though it was like that on the elder? ☾Mint☽Luckily, there is a Family Guy. 20:23, October 6, 2011 (UTC)
Oh, and, blur the belly shading. ☾Mint☽Luckily, there is a Family Guy. 20:31, October 6, 2011 (UTC)
Reuploaded And I took it off of Sandstorm's. I just put it above the shading layer, and I can always do the same for her elder. Autumnstar✦Triumph over tragedy✧ 21:07, October 6, 2011 (UTC)
Looks great! Darken the tail shading. ∗ Mistystar ∗ Trust the Fire Within... 23:13, October 6, 2011 (UTC)
Reuploaded Autumnstar✦Triumph over tragedy✧ 00:11, October 7, 2011 (UTC)
Lighten the shading on the left foreleg some. ☾Mint☽Luckily, there is a Family Guy. 20:39, October 7, 2011 (UTC)
Reuploaded Bloodstripe Your demise comes ŧΦɲΪĢĦ†...
21:35, October 7, 2011 (UTC)
Over 24 hours without comments. Approved. —Garrus ღ 22:40, October 8, 2011 (UTC)
Pebbleheart (W) - RedoneEdit
Meh... Gray tabbies aren't exactly my thing... OA was me. Neither it or his MC looked very realistic so I'm planning on redoing them both. Comments? -Scarletwind✧Lisanna✧ 22:04, October 7, 2011 (UTC)
This is beautiful. Extend the highlights to the tail tip. If you don't have highlights just put less shading there. 00:09, October 8, 2011 (UTC)
Expand the chest highlight(if ya use them of course) - 00:17, October 8, 2011 (UTC)
I'm amazed. There's the smallest bit of waste near the muzzle. 00:19, October 8, 2011 (UTC)
Re-uploaded. Thanks all for the nice words, I'm becoming quite fond of it myself. :) -Scarletwind✧Lisanna✧ 00:22, October 8, 2011 (UTC)
Lighten the shading. 14:02, October 8, 2011 (UTC)
Re-uploaded. -Scarletwind✧Lisanna✧ 23:13, October 8, 2011 (UTC)
None, Approved. -Scarletwind✧Lisanna✧ 23:19, October 9, 2011 (UTC)
Merry (L) - Redone Edit
Needed stripes~ Comments? I tried tweaking it, I really did ;-;. The stripes looked kooky and awkward, so I redid it. Sorry! Selene; She's got eyes of the bluest sky~ 20:14, September 17, 2011 (UTC)
Naw, naw. This looks epic! add earpink --Bloo!yo
20:31, September 17, 2011 (UTC)
Reuploadedd~Don't know how I forgot earpink xD. Comments? Selene; She's got eyes of the bluest sky~ 20:43, September 17, 2011 (UTC)
Make the earpink triangular --Bloo!yo
01:56, September 18, 2011 (UTC)
Looks great, but it seems like you put stripes on the white fur too. I don't think that's actually possible, so can you make it so only the ginger fur has stripes? ♔ⓅⓐⓁⓔⒸⓛⒶⓦ♕ ☆StarClan be with you★ 02:37, September 18, 2011 (UTC)
Also, define/darken the shading a little. --Bloo!yo
04:10, September 20, 2011 (UTC)
Gorgeous! Define the earpink. ShadewingBlades of the Night 22:11, September 22, 2011 (UTC) Shadewing
Darken the shading and blur the patches. Its been 5 days without an upload... ∗ Mistystar ∗ Trust the Fire Within... 23:01, September 22, 2011 (UTC)
You still working on this? ♔ⓅⓐⓁⓔⒸⓛⒶⓦ♕ ☆StarClan be with you★ 01:01, September 24, 2011 (UTC)
Yeah, tweaking it a tad before I reupload it. Haven't figured out how to remove the stripes from the white xD. I might have to redo it, so that might take a few days with my procrastinating self. Selene; She's got eyes of the bluest sky~ 02:22, September 24, 2011 (UTC)
I kind of like the stripes on the white, even if it isn't conventional. There's some blurred lineart on the ear. Define and brighten the earpink. ❀ wildheart ❀ 04:10, September 24, 2011 (UTC)
Man HOW do you do that? awesome! But darken the shading. Squishee DONT EAT MY FOOD! 04:05, September 25, 2011 (UTC)
Reuploaded~ Thanks :). Comments? Selene; She's got eyes of the bluest sky~ 17:46, September 25, 2011 (UTC)
Wow this is awesome work I love it! Yes, I can't see ear pink, can you define it? Leaf-storm,17:49,September 25,2011 (UTC)
Reuploaded :3 Thanks Leaf ^^. Comments? Selene; She's got eyes of the bluest sky~ 18:07, September 25, 2011 (UTC)
Awesome, I looked on the charart cearfully and I think there can be some more ear pink colour on the white tip of ear. Only a little. It's looking like she have ear only on orange part. Leaf-storm,17:31,September 26,2011 (UTC)
Make the earpink more centered, and more triangular too. ∗ Mistystar ∗ Trust the Fire Within... 23:35, September 28, 2011 (UTC)
Please work on this or it will be declined. —Garrus ღ 03:12, October 1, 2011 (UTC)
Yeah It's awesome (want help) Leaf-storm,14:18,October 1,2011 (UTC)
Yes, I can't figure out what you mean Leafstorm D:. Itt's just me and my stupidity acting up again xD Selene; She's got eyes of the bluest sky~ 00:47, October 2, 2011 (UTC)
Enlarge the ear-pink, make it brighter and more triangular. -Scarletwind✧Lisanna✧ 01:56, October 2, 2011 (UTC)
- forget it* right? :-) Leaf-storm,9:10,October 2,2011 (UTC)
Elorisa, this hasn't been re-uploaded since the 25th of September. If you don't re-upload soon, I will be declining this. It's just taking up space. —Garrus ღ 17:14, October 4, 2011 (UTC)
Sorry, sorry, I'll reupload it today. Personal life has been impeding, and that's a bit more important than charart. Selene; She's got eyes of the bluest sky~ 20:05, October 4, 2011 (UTC)
Did you reupload it? Too lazy to check the file page... Make the earpink bigger. ∗ Mistystar ∗ Trust the Fire Within... 00:52, October 5, 2011 (UTC)
Reuploaded. Selene; She's got eyes of the bluest sky~ 01:11, October 5, 2011 (UTC)
I think you may have blurred some lineart on the ear. And make the earpink more triangular. It's kind of smooshed against the lineart. SenbonzakuraDance of the Cherry Blossoms... 21:26, October 5, 2011 (UTC) Shadewing
Reuploaded. Better? Selene; She's got eyes of the bluest sky~ 02:07, October 6, 2011 (UTC)
The earpink looks a little strange when it's layered over the transition between white and ginger. Maybe make the ear completely ginger and then put to the earpink on. llwildheart™l03:50 Thu Oct 6
I think it looks fine; I've done other cats with there ears like that. Selene; She's got eyes of the bluest sky~ 14:54, October 8, 2011 (UTC)
There's blurred lineart and lighten the stripes on the white transistion. ❄swagstorm❄ 16:59, October 8, 2011 (UTC)
Reuploaded, better~? --Selene; She's got eyes of the bluest sky~ 21:28, October 8, 2011 (UTC)
Fine. -❄ſceheart ♥ Blah blah 23:52, October 9, 2011 (UTC)
Spottedleaf (MC)~ TweakedEdit
The patches needed to be smudged more like the other images. I also made the ear pink bigger, and changed the nose back to black. -❄ſceheart ♥ Blah blah 01:50, October 3, 2011 (UTC)
Change the nose back to pink. It's part of her description. —Garrus ღ 01:57, October 3, 2011 (UTC)
Make her mottled, and define the stripes on her tail. Maple♥poolMischief brewing 02:01, October 3, 2011 (UTC)
Did you re-do this...❄swagstorm❄ 21:42, October 3, 2011 (UTC)
Why did you delete two of your own messages, Icestorm? llwildheart™l21:46 Mon Oct 3
Oops. x3 I said - darken the hue of the eye color and who was the OA? ;) ❄swagstorm❄ 22:11, October 3, 2011 (UTC)
Icey, we're not starting something else. Not here. Take it up with her elsewhere. Darken the shading a tad. —Garrus ღ 23:05, October 3, 2011 (UTC)
Reuploaded- After Kitty's message everyone knows who the OA was. And no i didnt redo it. -❄ſceheart ♥ Blah blah 22:50, October 5, 2011 (UTC)
Can I ask how you managed to make the pelt look like that if you didn't re-do it? I'm curious, because I like it. —Garrus ღ 22:51, October 5, 2011 (UTC)
Colour pick and float (under select) then you can do whatever without messing up the lineart. I just smudged them. I used to do it with all my images, up until Echomist when i acctually started saveing layers. -❄ſceheart ♥ Blah blah 22:54, October 5, 2011 (UTC)
It looks nothing like my image...:| Darken the shading.❄swagstorm❄ 23:10, October 5, 2011 (UTC)
Reuploaded- Dont you think if i redid it i would be claiming it as redone? -❄ſceheart ♥ Blah blah 23:18, October 5, 2011 (UTC)
Ugh acctually nevermind. That was a redone version. Didnt do it on purpose. The right versions up now. -❄ſceheart ♥ Blah blah 23:21, October 5, 2011 (UTC)
...but you did. Lighten the shading. ❄swagstorm❄ 23:28, October 5, 2011 (UTC)
Reuploaded-...I was ging to. But then in a show of good faith to the new rules, i just tweaked it. This is yours with my tweaking. -❄ſceheart ♥ Blah blah 23:31, October 5, 2011 (UTC)
Define the earpink. ;D ∗ Mistystar ∗ Trust the Fire Within... 23:40, October 5, 2011 (UTC)
Maybe brighten the earpink a bit, too. llwildheart™l03:52 Thu Oct 6
Like Cloudy said, don't start anything here, take it somewhere else. This is supposed to be a nice, friendly project. I don't see that she has a mottled face yet, and it says she has a dappled coat, I'm not exactly sure if that's the same as mottled or not, but if it's what I think it is then add dapples to her fur. Autumnstar✦Triumph over tragedy✧ 14:44, October 6, 2011 (UTC)
All i did was define the ear pink. I cant dapple/mottle it without redoing it, and even if i make it look bad with mottles and dapples like this the others will also have to be tweaked. ---❄ſceheart ♥ Blah blah 23:11, October 6, 2011 (UTC)
Then, we will tweak them, not a problem, and you can do it w/o redoing it, i did with Rainstrom, just add highlights and shading with a small sized bruah (five or Nine) and smudge them a bit, then blur, it won't redo the image, only reason Pebblefoot looked re-done, was 'cause I added shading and highlights. Maple♥poolMischief brewing 00:40, October 7, 2011 (UTC)
I know how to do it, it just looks bad. Anyway gave it my best shot and still wishing i could redo it. -❄ſceheart ♥ Blah blah 04:00, October 8, 2011 (UTC)
Lighten the chest and mottles. Why do you want to re-do it? It's fine. ❄swagstorm❄ 14:36, October 8, 2011 (UTC)
And darken the earpink? It's hard to see. Sky- Trick and Treat 17:17, October 8, 2011 (UTC)
Reuploaded- Ugh its icky looking to me. But im to lazy to redo it i just want to do a new image. -❄ſceheart ♥ Blah blah 20:08, October 8, 2011 (UTC)
Don't get down, Icestar. This looks great! Darken her markings a tad, redden the ear-pink, and there's this streak of highlight color running down from her face to her chest. Is that supposed to be there? -Scarletwind✧Lisanna✧ 23:18, October 8, 2011 (UTC)
Looks fantastic! Define the earpink. Awesomeness STONEY Fantasticness 16:37, October 9, 2011 (UTC)
Reuploaded- -❄ſceheart ♥ Blah blah 17:44, October 9, 2011 (UTC)
24 hours. -❄ſceheart ♥ Blah blah 19:13, October 10, 2011 (UTC)
Swiftbreeze (Q) - RedoneEdit
Whew, who knew I'd be doing her queen image? Sooo, OA= Sandstar12 and redid it to match the warrior image -Bloo!yo
00:35, October 9, 2011 (UTC)
This is fantastic, Bloo! Blur the ear-pink and darken the shading on the face. -Scarletwind✧Lisanna✧ 00:41, October 9, 2011 (UTC)
Blur the smudged fur a tad. Wonderful job, Bloo! —Garrus ღ 01:13, October 9, 2011 (UTC)
Reuploaded okay, I redid the shading cause I forgot to put the other one on another layer -Bloo!yo
02:55, October 9, 2011 (UTC)
And fill in the nose too. :3 Sky- Trick and gimmie candy 05:29, October 9, 2011 (UTC)
Reuploaded Aw, man forgot the nose -Bloo!yo
16:44, October 9, 2011 (UTC)
Blur the white smudging a bit. -❄ſceheart ♥ Blah blah 23:55, October 9, 2011 (UTC)
00:47, October 10, 2011 (UTC)
24 hours. -Scarletwind✧Lisanna✧ 01:47, October 11, 2011 (UTC)
Goldenflower (W) - Redone Edit
Next one on her lineup. OA was Sandstar12, needed to be pale ginger and have stripes. I've had this done for a few days, along with her kit. Comments for improvement? Bloodstripe Your demise comes ŧΦɲΪĢĦ†... 22:45, October 8, 2011 (UTC)
Looks awesome dude, darken the shading a bit & expand the shoulder highlight (if ya use them) -Bloo!yo
00:35, October 9, 2011 (UTC)
Blur and smudge the stripes and darken the shading a lot. The ear pink is too purple and the stripes are a tad bit too dark. Squishee DONT EAT MY FOOD! 01:46, October 9, 2011 (UTC)
It needs to match her elder image, Sandstorm, which it does. Check the other images before commenting next time. —Garrus ღ 01:48, October 9, 2011 (UTC)
Reuploaded and highlights, on my Goldenflower? Where? xDBloodstripe Your demise comes ŧΦɲΪĢĦ†... 05:00, October 9, 2011 (UTC)
If you dont use highllights just fix the shading in accordance, but raise the shoulder highlight and make it bigger. -❄ſceheart ♥ Blah blah 23:54, October 9, 2011 (UTC)
Reuploaded Bloodstripe Your demise comes ŧΦɲΪĢĦ†... 00:19, October 10, 2011 (UTC)
Blur the shading on the midrift. ☀Mint☀Disturbia, the darkness is the light. 20:12, October 10, 2011 (UTC)
Reuploaded Bloodstripe Your demise comes ŧΦɲΪĢĦ†... 21:22, October 10, 2011 (UTC)
Brighten the ear-pink a tad. -Scarletwind✧Lisanna✧ 01:46, October 11, 2011 (UTC)
Reuploaded (Is excited to put up her kit pixil) Bloodstripe Your demise comes ŧΦɲΪĢĦ†... 01:49, October 11, 2011 (UTC)
Epic images, as always Ivy. Approving. —Garrus ღ 18:33, October 11, 2011 (UTC)
Mousefang (E) ~ RedoneEdit
Needed to be a sandy color, as well as have stripes. Ivystripe told me to use Sandstorm's pelt color, and I did, but I darkened it a tad. OA is the wonderful and awesome Riverpelt. —Garrus ღ 01:13, October 9, 2011 (UTC)
Pretty :) I think there is some miscolored lineart on the paw. It's orangy. Ivyheart =P 04:49, October 9, 2011 (UTC)
Re-uploaded. —Garrus ღ 04:56, October 9, 2011 (UTC)
And perhaps make the earpink a tad redder? Sky- Trick and gimmie candy 05:30, October 9, 2011 (UTC)
Re-uploaded. —Garrus ღ 05:43, October 9, 2011 (UTC)
Hmmmm, define the stripes on the front legs, I can't really see them *needs glasses* SnowyXPerry = Serry! 11:52, October 10, 2011 (UTC)
- There is your glasses xD I dont know, cats can wear glasses?!* Oh yes add some stripes on the chest, only two small lines, I imagining it now and I thing it is good idea. *Her brain is sleeping, can someone wake it please?* *Happy Leaf-storm* Leaf-storm,19:00,October 10,2011 (UTC)
Define the stripes on her haunch and tail. I had an image ready for this, but, your's is good. ☀Mint☀Disturbia, the darkness is the light. 20:14, October 10, 2011 (UTC)
I see no need to add stripes to the chest. Not all cats have them. Also, sorry Mint. First come, first serve. —Garrus ღ 22:55, October 10, 2011 (UTC)
Re-uploaded. —Garrus ღ 23:01, October 10, 2011 (UTC)
24 hours without comments. —Garrus ღ 00:12, October 12, 2011 (UTC)
Pebbleheart (MC) - RedoneEdit
Redone to match the warrior charart. OA was Icecloud. Comments? -Scarletwind✧Lisanna✧ 03:32, October 10, 2011 (UTC)
The stripes on the arm + chest look darker than in the warrior. Add some depth to the herbs that are closest to us. Bloodstripe Your demise comes ŧΦɲΪĢĦ†... 03:33, October 10, 2011 (UTC)
Re-uploaded. lol. I forgot the highlight layer... -Scarletwind✧Lisanna✧ 03:44, October 10, 2011 (UTC)
And blur the shading a smidge. Sky is better than candy 03:49, October 10, 2011 (UTC)
Re-uploaded. -Scarletwind✧Lisanna✧ 01:43, October 11, 2011 (UTC)
24 hours. -Scarletwind✧Lisanna✧ 00:47, October 12, 2011 (UTC)
Brackenfur (W) - TweakedEdit
I re-did the stripes and shading, and make the scar more redder. Kinda taking a break from Crookedstar's image. I was up all night perfecting his deputy image. Comments? ❄swagstorm❄ 14:01, October 8, 2011 (UTC)
Very good! Could you desaturate the stripes some, they stand out a lot. ☾Mint☽Luckily, there is a Family Guy. 14:15, October 8, 2011 (UTC)
Re-Uploaded: Thanks :) I have no idea how to desaturate stripes on GIMP, so I just lightened them a tad. Comments? ❄swagstorm❄ 14:32, October 8, 2011 (UTC)
The stripe looks a bit blobish, thin it out a tad. Selene; She's got eyes of the bluest sky~ 14:51, October 8, 2011 (UTC)
What do you mean? They're supposed to be thick. ❄swagstorm❄ 15:02, October 8, 2011 (UTC)
It looks a tad overblurred and not natural. Selene; She's got eyes of the bluest sky~ 15:04, October 8, 2011 (UTC)
The scar is fine, it looks like Tigerstar's, and he is approved. Ivyheart =P 15:37, October 8, 2011 (UTC)
Oh, also make him more golden-brown. He looks yellowish. Selene; She's got eyes of the bluest sky~ 21:20, October 8, 2011 (UTC)
Make the scar the same color as the earpink. ♔ⓅⓐⓁⓔⒸⓛⒶⓦ♕ ☆StarClan be with you★ 21:50, October 8, 2011 (UTC)
Good but blur everything and make the stripes on the face thicker somewhat. And the stripes look to...unreal like it's placed by a person. Try to make it more absract slightly. Squishee DONT EAT MY FOOD! 01:45, October 9, 2011 (UTC)
Stripes are fine, Sandstorm. There are other images like Brackenfur's that have been approved. —Garrus ღ 01:49, October 9, 2011 (UTC)
Lighten the front feet. -❄ſceheart ♥ Blah blah 23:59, October 9, 2011 (UTC)
The front feet are fine...the shading's there, it's supposed to be dark from the angle I did the shading at. How is he yellowish...? ❄swagstorm❄ 23:49, October 10, 2011 (UTC)
He looks more green-brown than golden brown. Like his fur is tinted more with yellow and green than it is golden or brown. Hope that made sense ^^. Selene; She's got eyes of the bluest sky~ 02:09, October 11, 2011 (UTC)
Re-Uploaded: I lightened the highlights - is that better? ❄swagstorm❄ 15:50, October 11, 2011 (UTC)
Can you make the stripes browner too. Ack, i feel like such a nag D:. Sorry! ^^ Selene; She's got eyes of the bluest sky~ 20:09, October 11, 2011 (UTC)
Re-Uploaded: You aren't ;) I darkened them a bit, GIMP doesn't work when it comes to colorizing certain things on a certain layer. Comments? ❄swagstorm❄ 22:28, October 11, 2011 (UTC)
Re-Uploaded: Sorry. I could NOT stand these stripes. They drove me crazy. I re-did them. ❄swagstorm❄ 00:11, October 12, 2011 (UTC)
I like these stripes better :). Add a few more stripes to the face, unless it looks too busy, then just ignore that comment xDD. Selene; She's got eyes of the bluest sky~ 01:02, October 12, 2011 (UTC)
Dull the earpink and scar, and maybe lighten the shading a litte? Beautifully done. SenbonzakuraDance of the Cherry Blossoms... 01:06, October 12, 2011 (UTC) Shadewing
The scar and ear pink are fine - they're supposed to be red. And dark shading is my style. ❄swagstorm❄ 01:10, October 12, 2011 (UTC)
Looks good to me, Icey. Approving. —Garrus ღ 06:06, October 12, 2011 (UTC)
Reedwhisker (D) Re-doneEdit
OA is Mousetalon, needed to be long haired. Sky- Seek! Locate! Exterminate! 22:02, October 5, 2011 (UTC)
Darken the shading and blur the ear pink. Looks good. —Garrus ღ 22:03, October 5, 2011 (UTC)
Define the shading, and redden the earpink. xD ∗ Mistystar ∗ Trust the Fire Within... 22:04, October 5, 2011 (UTC)
Also, make the shading thicker. I advise you to make the haunch shading darker than the rest. ❄swagstorm❄ 22:06, October 5, 2011 (UTC)
I knew the shading was too light...oh well. Re-uploaded. Sky- Seek! Locate! Exterminate! 22:20, October 5, 2011 (UTC)
Make the ear pink smaller, redder, and blur it. ❄swagstorm❄ 22:25, October 5, 2011 (UTC)
Re-uploaded. The evil ear pink strikes again. Sky- Seek! Locate! Exterminate! 22:34, October 5, 2011 (UTC)
Its better now. Blur the edges of the earpink. ∗ Mistystar ∗ Trust the Fire Within... 22:54, October 5, 2011 (UTC)
Re-uploaded. Try it now. Sky- Seek! Locate! Exterminate! 02:43, October 6, 2011 (UTC)
Emphasize the shading more, it's somewhat hard to see. Looking good! Atelda 02:59, October 7, 2011 (UTC)
Re-uploaded. How bout now? Sky- Allons-y! 10:48, October 7, 2011 (UTC)
Darken the shading a little more, and blur it just a small bit. Very nice. ☾Mint☽Luckily, there is a Family Guy. 20:35, October 7, 2011 (UTC)
Re-uploaded. Helloooo? Sky is better than candy 15:32, October 9, 2011 (UTC)
Darken the earpink JUST a little bit more :3 llwildheart™l21:49 Mon Oct 10
Blur and maybe lighten the highlights a tad. -Scarletwind✧Lisanna✧ 01:45, October 11, 2011 (UTC)
Re-uploaded. Sky is better than candy 18:49, October 11, 2011 (UTC)
24 hours without comments. ∗ Mistystar ∗ Trust the Fire Within... 21:22, October 12, 2011 (UTC)
Spiderstar - Tweaked Edit
Bah, I've done better, OA= senior Oblivion and I added teh patch on his shoulder-Bloo!yo
02:01, October 11, 2011 (UTC)
No! I wanted to do this one!!! xD Perhaps not so many black lines on the left side of the patch? Sky is better than candy 02:02, October 11, 2011 (UTC)
Perhaps change the earpink color so it doesn't look like the skin. Nice work. Atelda 02:23, October 11, 2011 (UTC)
Reuploaded - I cant do anything about the earpink, srry -Bloo!yo
02:47, October 11, 2011 (UTC)
I feel like there should be more shading on the wound :P I'm not sure how you're going to do that, though.... but try anyway llwildheart™l03:37 Tue Oct 11
01:47, October 12, 2011 (UTC)
24 hours without a comment. ∗ Mistystar ∗ Trust the Fire Within... 21:02, October 13, 2011 (UTC)
Darkflower (Q) - RedoneEdit
Redid the charart. OA was Spottedwing. Comments? -Scarletwind✧Lisanna✧ 01:03, October 12, 2011 (UTC)
Blur the shading. —Garrus ღ 19:57, October 12, 2011 (UTC)
Highlights, as well. ❄swagstorm❄ 22:11, October 12, 2011 (UTC)
Re-uploaded. @Icy. No highlight layer on this one. -Scarletwind✧Lisanna✧ 01:55, October 13, 2011 (UTC)
Ban you blur the haunch and tail shading more? Also, darken the nose color. ∗ Mistystar ∗ Trust the Fire Within... 20:51, October 13, 2011 (UTC)
Re-uploaded. -Scarletwind✧Lisanna✧ 22:52, October 13, 2011 (UTC)
24 hours. -Scarletwind✧Lisanna✧ 23:53, October 14, 2011 (UTC)
Beechfur (RC) (W) ~ Redone Edit
OA was Sandwich989, redone as a longhair. ∗ Mistystar ∗ Trust the Fire Within... 21:25, October 12, 2011 (UTC)
It was also redone by me and I made it worse. xD Blur the shading. —Garrus ღ 21:33, October 12, 2011 (UTC)
Re-Uploaded. If I blur it any more, it'll be blotchy. ∗ Mistystar ∗ Trust the Fire Within... 21:39, October 12, 2011 (UTC)
That's fine. I wasn't expecting a lot of blurring, only a tad. Looks better now. —Garrus ღ 21:59, October 12, 2011 (UTC)
You can't blur it anymore? Do so, and see what happens. ❄swagstorm❄ 22:09, October 12, 2011 (UTC)
I tried. It looked really blotchy. Besides, Cloudy said that it doesn't need any more blurring. ∗ Mistystar ∗ Trust the Fire Within... 20:26, October 13, 2011 (UTC)
Blur the highlights then. ❄swagstorm❄ 20:51, October 13, 2011 (UTC)
And lighten the front paw's shading, it looks like the paws are a different tone then the pelt :3 SplookSweet serendipity. 20:54, October 13, 2011 (UTC)
Re-Uploaded. ∗ Mistystar ∗ Trust the Fire Within... 20:56, October 13, 2011 (UTC)
24 hours. -Scarletwind✧Lisanna✧ 23:58, October 14, 2011 (UTC)
Cinderheart (W) - Redone Edit
So it said Cinderheart needed to be done for multiple reasons, mainly to get rid of the Y stripes and add dapples. Sorry about the fail dapples. XD Do I need to darken the stripes? OA was either Sand or Bramble I think. ♔ⓅⓐⓁⓔⒸⓛⒶⓦ♕ ☆StarClan be with you★ 23:26, October 6, 2011 (UTC)
Paleclaw, if you say you fail or suck ever again, some stuff is going to go down. Define the shading on the legs and haunch a little more ;3 The stripes look good, better light then dark actually. SplookSweet serendipity. 23:28, October 6, 2011 (UTC)
Can you define the earpink a ibt? Also, make the eyes more blue, they look a bit too gray. ∗ Mistystar ∗ Trust the Fire Within... 23:32, October 6, 2011 (UTC)
Reuploaded - *slowly backs away from Splashy* But what if it's true.....? *hides* ♔ⓅⓐⓁⓔⒸⓛⒶⓦ♕ ☆StarClan be with you★ 23:37, October 6, 2011 (UTC)
I dunno if it's supposed to be like this or you want it to, but she looks blue-ish. Ivyheart =P 00:04, October 7, 2011 (UTC)
Oh my god. Paleclaw. -dies- THIS IS AMAZING. ❄swagstorm❄ 00:15, October 7, 2011 (UTC)
Darken her eye color, it looks to pale. Maple♥poolMischief brewing 00:18, October 7, 2011 (UTC)
Reuploaded - Yes, it was tinter blue. I usually do that with my chararts by coloring the shading, but I desaturated it a bit more now. And I darkened the eye color. Thank you Icy! *bows* So, no more apprentices, even tweaks, right? Cause I wanna do all her images, but that'd only be the kit if we're not tweaking the apprentices anymore. I personally think maybe we should tweak the ones that look completely different from the main image, since they're gonna sit like that till OOTS is done if not, and that's kind of a long time.... ♔ⓅⓐⓁⓔⒸⓛⒶⓦ♕ ☆StarClan be with you★ 05:04, October 7, 2011 (UTC)
Omg.....this is gorgeous Paleh! You never fail to make a charart look awesome. Anyways, darken the shading a teensy bit and blur the earpink a bit more. This is epic! :3 ❋Rainey 10:44, October 7, 2011 (UTC)
Redden the earpink and there are no apprentice tweaks. ☾Mint☽Luckily, there is a Family Guy. 20:42, October 7, 2011 (UTC)
Paleclaw, still working on this? —Garrus ღ 14:30, October 12, 2011 (UTC)
Yeah I am, I'm working on it now. I'm SOOOO sorry, I've been really busy, then the little time I've had on the computer I've procrastinated. X.X I need to work on not doing that.... but anyways, I'll upload today, probably within the next few minutes if I can. Sorry again! I'm not usually one to let my images sit this long. ♔ⓅⓐⓁⓔⒸⓛⒶⓦ♕ ☆StarClan be with you★ 04:43, October 13, 2011 (UTC)'
Reuploaded' ♔ⓅⓐⓁⓔⒸⓛⒶⓦ♕ ☆StarClan be with you★ 06:49, October 13, 2011 (UTC)
Lighten the front part of the front paws. ∗ Mistystar ∗ Trust the Fire Within... 21:30, October 13, 2011 (UTC)
They're meant to be dark grey. That's just how I made her. The paws are the same color as the stripes and I'm not changing that. ♔ⓅⓐⓁⓔⒸⓛⒶⓦ♕ ☆StarClan be with you★ 23:59, October 13, 2011 (UTC)
24 hours. -Scarletwind✧Lisanna✧ 23:58, October 14, 2011 (UTC)
Birdflight (Q) - RedoneEdit
Her stripes and shading needed to be redone. The original artist was Maplefern. So yup, comments? Atelda 02:23, October 11, 2011 (UTC)
Define the ear pink. —Garrus ღ 06:22, October 11, 2011 (UTC)
Reuploaded. I don't want to do much to the earpink as I got it straight from the warriior charart. Atelda 12:42, October 11, 2011 (UTC)
Her pupils look dialated. Can you make them smaller please? Very pretty btw ^^ Bloodstripe Your demise comes ŧΦɲΪĢĦ†... 20:51, October 11, 2011 (UTC)
Reuploaded. Thank you! Atelda 22:54, October 11, 2011 (UTC)
Atelda, she looks kinda.. cross-eyed. Try copying the eyes from Daisytail, Daisy, or Brook. :3 —Leggo QuailXStoat 03:55, October 12, 2011 (UTC)
Her eyes look good to me. I'd not like to see them changed, but if they're not how they're supposed to be, go ahead. :) Darken the shading a bit everywhere except on her front legs, and there's a little line of gray lineart on her front paw closest to us. Also there's a gray lineart dot on her front paw I described before, and all lineart actually on the fur on the back paw is gray. Except the seperating toe lineart things. If you don't know what I mean, tell me and I'll upload a second image with the gray parts circled.-Kittycat79aka Rowantail 06:21, October 12, 2011 (UTC)
You're not uploading a redline to show where a small speck of gray is. Anyways, the lineart on that like on all the queens, so don't tell her to fix it, unless you want each and every user to go back and fix it on their images. —Garrus ღ 14:27, October 12, 2011 (UTC)
Also, eye style is artist's choice. —Garrus ღ 14:28, October 12, 2011 (UTC)
Reuploaded. o.o Atelda 23:17, October 12, 2011 (UTC)
Can you darken the nose pink? ∗ Mistystar ∗ Trust the Fire Within... 21:00, October 13, 2011 (UTC)
Reuploaded. Yup. Atelda 01:44, October 14, 2011 (UTC)
This is outstanding. Define the earpink a little. ❊ Starrk ❊ I'm Not Alone 15:08, October 14, 2011 (UTC) Shadewing
Ear-pink is fine. Improvements made. -Scarletwind✧Lisanna✧ 23:58, October 14, 2011 (UTC)
Goldenflower (ki) - Redone Edit
OA was Ashshadow. Needed to be pale ginger and stripes like before. I really like this ^^ Comments for improvement? Bloodstripe Your demise comes ŧΦɲΪĢĦ†... 18:39, October 11, 2011 (UTC)
Ivy...I love this! I am probably in tears because of how stunning this is. All I see is that you need to blur the edges of the shading and darken the face stripes. ❄swagstorm❄ 22:23, October 11, 2011 (UTC)
...<3 Reuploaded Bloodstripe Your demise comes ŧΦɲΪĢĦ†... 22:50, October 11, 2011 (UTC)
Make the earpink less brown. Other than that, stunning! SenbonzakuraDance of the Cherry Blossoms... 01:02, October 12, 2011 (UTC) Shadewing
Reuploaded and it was not brown to begin with. Glad you like it. Bloodstripe Your demise comes ŧΦɲΪĢĦ†... 01:06, October 12, 2011 (UTC)
Pretty! Blur the earpink. Awesomeness STONEY Fantasticness 14:37, October 12, 2011 (UTC)
I'm only going to blur it a smidge because the area is so small. Bloodstripe Your demise comes ŧΦɲΪĢĦ†... 15:47, October 12, 2011 (UTC)
The bottom of the earpink still needs to be blurred. Great work! ∗ Mistystar ∗ Trust the Fire Within... 20:53, October 13, 2011 (UTC)
Reuploaded Iveh Yo! 23:41, October 13, 2011 (UTC)
24 hours. -Scarletwind✧Lisanna✧ 23:58, October 14, 2011 (UTC)
Mousefang (W) ~ RedoneEdit
Eww. Let's get this over with. I wanna do Creekkit. FYI, I have no idea who the OA is. There's too many different users to even to even think of who the OA is... Probably Bramble. xD —Garrus ღ 06:09, October 12, 2011 (UTC)
Also, I am not changing the colors of the base pelt, stripes, ear pink or eyes. Those came straight from the .xcf file of her elder image. Nor am I adding stripes to the belly. —Garrus ღ 06:10, October 12, 2011 (UTC)
Darken the shading. This is really good! Awesomeness STONEY Fantasticness 06:40, October 12, 2011 (UTC)
Oh, and add more stripes to the head. Awesomeness STONEY Fantasticness 08:09, October 12, 2011 (UTC)
Re-uploaded. Don't tell me to add any more stripes, 'cause then it won't match. —Garrus ღ 14:02, October 12, 2011 (UTC)
There's some lighter pixels along her back, below her front and back paws, and at the bottom of the tail. Maybe you should fill them in? --Leafstrike-- 19:42, October 12, 2011 (UTC)
It's how I shade, Moon. I erased part of what I shouldn't have. xD —Garrus ღ 19:46, October 12, 2011 (UTC)
Re-uploaded. —Garrus ღ 19:58, October 12, 2011 (UTC)
Lighten the shading and blur it. ❄swagstorm❄ 22:10, October 12, 2011 (UTC)
Re-uploaded. Crap, crap and crap. —Garrus ღ 22:29, October 12, 2011 (UTC)
Not crap at all. Lighten the haunch, and you don't have to, but can you make the stripes a bit further apart? ❄swagstorm❄ 23:10, October 12, 2011 (UTC)
I've done better. Re-uploaded. If I spread them out, I'd have to re-do them, and that color combo is quite annoying. —Garrus ღ 23:19, October 12, 2011 (UTC)
Lighten the chest and hanunch more. ❄swagstorm❄ 20:52, October 13, 2011 (UTC)
Re-uploaded. —Garrus ღ 21:13, October 13, 2011 (UTC)
24 hours. -Scarletwind✧Lisanna✧ 23:58, October 14, 2011 (UTC)
Whitetail (Q) ~ RedoneEdit
Needed to get rid of the prickly shading, it was on the re-do list. Comments? Ivyheart =P 00:02, October 7, 2011 (UTC)
Who was the OA? :3 Looks great! Blur the haunch and tail shading, and blur the earpink. ∗ Mistystar ∗ Trust the Fire Within... 00:04, October 7, 2011 (UTC)
Sorry I forgot that. OA is Darkhallows. Ivyheart =P 00:05, October 7, 2011 (UTC)
Reuploaded. Ivyheart =P 00:08, October 7, 2011 (UTC)
Is it me, or does she have the FAINTEST stripe of waste on her back? lol, i just read her page, how do you get a PALE WHITE cat? Maple♥poolMischief brewing 00:21, October 7, 2011 (UTC)
I checked, I don't think there's waste. And I know, right? xD Ivyheart =P 00:26, October 7, 2011 (UTC)
Shouldn't she be shorthaired? Aren't all WindClan cats being redone to be short haired? (at least that's what I remember xD) Selene; She's got eyes of the bluest sky~ 21:13, October 7, 2011 (UTC)
In her description it says that she has thick fur. Therefore, she has long fur. Ivyheart =P 22:36, October 7, 2011 (UTC)
Blur the tail shading. And yes, usually all WindClan cats are sleek and shorthaired. It's different if they were described as long furred. SplookSweet serendipity. 04:57, October 8, 2011 (UTC)
Thanks for the clarification :3. Blur the shading on the midriff a tad. Selene; She's got eyes of the bluest sky~ 14:52, October 8, 2011 (UTC)
Midriff? Sorry I dunno where that is xD Ivyheart =P 15:36, October 8, 2011 (UTC)
The shading on her belly and right infront of her haunch. Selene; She's got eyes of the bluest sky~ 16:50, October 8, 2011 (UTC)
Reuploaded. Ivyheart =P 04:50, October 9, 2011 (UTC)
Blur the neck shading. ☀Mint☀Disturbia, the darkness is the light. 20:09, October 10, 2011 (UTC)
Reuploaded. Ivyheart =P 14:07, October 11, 2011 (UTC)
Beautiful. Dull the shading. SenbonzakuraDance of the Cherry Blossoms... 01:07, October 12, 2011 (UTC) Shadewing
Reuploaded. Ivyheart =P 04:30, October 13, 2011 (UTC)
Lighten the shoulder highlight a bit, and this will be ready. ∗ Mistystar ∗ Trust the Fire Within... 21:28, October 13, 2011 (UTC)
Reuploaded. :) Ivyheart =P 00:37, October 14, 2011 (UTC)
Darken the shading on her belly, forelegs, and under her chin; it's looking a little flat. -Scarletwind✧Lisanna✧ 01:32, October 14, 2011 (UTC)
Reuploaded. Ivyheart =P 02:32, October 14, 2011 (UTC)
24 hours -Scarletwind✧Lisanna✧
Billystorm (KP) ~ Redone Edit
Alright, I don't want to hear the complaints about this being redone. Scarletwind stated herself that the warrior image need to be redone as well. The coloring was off between the two, and the shading was a little blotchy. Plus, I tried to add stripes but I really couldn't. OA was Darkhallows, added stripes. Comments? SplookSweet serendipity. 17:29, October 8, 2011 (UTC)
The white looks orange. Make it white. Lighten the shading, make the strpes thinner and add more. Define the ear pink and add depth to the eye. Define the white as well. ❄swagstorm❄ 17:30, October 8, 2011 (UTC)
Reuploaded. I've covered as much as I can with these stripes, and the artist who redoes the warrior can copy this style of stripes. Derp, I also noticed I forgot the collar. SplookSweet serendipity. 17:48, October 8, 2011 (UTC)
I never redid his warrior charart, but this is fine. Make the colors match his warrior charart a bit more and thin out the stripes a bit. -Scarletwind✧Lisanna✧ 20:18, October 8, 2011 (UTC)
Fixed the title. It was supposed to say Billystorm KP. Rainfacestar Ghost time! 20:27, October 8, 2011 (UTC)
THere seems to be a small speck of orange on the tip of the tail. That supposed to be there? —Garrus ღ 22:47, October 8, 2011 (UTC)
Reuploaded. If you still see the orange at the tail, the changes are in the file history.SplookSweet serendipity. 23:09, October 9, 2011 (UTC)
Splashy, plesae make the stripes thinner and add more. ❄swagstorm❄ 22:43, October 10, 2011 (UTC)
Reuploaded. SplookSweet serendipity. 00:07, October 12, 2011 (UTC)
Define the earpink, make it less red. ;3 SenbonzakuraDance of the Cherry Blossoms... 01:03, October 12, 2011 (UTC) Shadewing
Also, darken the shading. ☀SquirrelFlame29☀ Defying the Darkness 22:42, October 13, 2011 (UTC)
Reuploaded. He reminds me of a tater tot <3 SplookSweet serendipity. 19:47, October 14, 2011 (UTC)
A what? Anyways, define the earpink a little more. --Leafstrike-- 20:16, October 14, 2011 (UTC)
Reuploaded. You don't know what tater tots are? :o Anywho, I'm keeping this as pinkish. With it red it hardly shows up :P SplookSweet serendipity. 21:29, October 14, 2011 (UTC)
24 hours. -Scarletwind✧Lisanna✧ 00:49, October 15, 2011 (UTC)
Kestrelwing (Alt. MC) ~ TweakedEdit
Comments? OA was me :3 Shading was terrible. llwildheart™l00:16 Wed Oct 12
Blur the shading and ear pink. ❄swagstorm❄ 00:18, October 12, 2011 (UTC)
Reuploaded llwildheart™l00:43 Wed Oct 12
Define the ear-pink. -Scarletwind✧Lisanna✧ 01:00, October 12, 2011 (UTC)
Make the ear pink larger. Awesomeness STONEY Fantasticness 08:03, October 12, 2011 (UTC)
And blur the shading. (Or highlights?) Sky- Stealing all ur candy 22:31, October 12, 2011 (UTC)
Reuploaded llwildheart™l23:43 Wed Oct 12
Define the earpink. ∗ Mistystar ∗ Trust the Fire Within... 20:52, October 13, 2011 (UTC)
Earpink's fine. ❄swagstorm❄ 01:37, October 15, 2011 (UTC)
Leafpool (W) - RedoneEdit
I redid the stripes, but kept the pattern the same. It wasn't clear as to why the stripes needed to be change, but here's what I got. Comments? ☾Mint☽Luckily, there is a Family Guy. 21:15, October 5, 2011 (UTC)
Blur where the white and brown meet, and darken the shading. —Garrus ღ 21:17, October 5, 2011 (UTC)
Blur the earpink. And dull it a little bit. Nice job. SenbonzakuraDance of the Cherry Blossoms... 21:24, October 5, 2011 (UTC) Shadewing
Much better. Make the ear pink smaller, please. ❄swagstorm❄ 21:49, October 5, 2011 (UTC)
I was getting tired of the old image. xD Nice job, smudge the white into the pelt minorly. Ivyheart =P 00:03, October 6, 2011 (UTC)
Blur the stripes, and perhaps add a few more. It looks a little too spaced-out. —Leggo QuailXStoat 00:18, October 6, 2011 (UTC)
Reuploaded. ☾Mint☽Luckily, there is a Family Guy. 21:21, October 6, 2011 (UTC)
Make the earr pink smaller and redder. ❄swagstorm❄ 21:27, October 6, 2011 (UTC)
And more triangular. ∗ Mistystar ∗ Trust the Fire Within... 00:41, October 7, 2011 (UTC)
Reuploaded- text? ☾Mint☽Luckily, there is a Family Guy. 20:34, October 7, 2011 (UTC)
There's still problems with the ear pink. Center it, make it triangular, and redder. ❄swagstorm❄ 14:35, October 8, 2011 (UTC)
Reuploaded- better? ☾Mint☽Luckily, there is a Family Guy. 21:21, October 8, 2011 (UTC)
Define/darken the stripes on her tail and haunch. Center the ear-pink. -Scarletwind✧Lisanna✧ 23:15, October 8, 2011 (UTC)
The ear pink is way to bright and make it a little but darker and blur it. Make the stripes darker and maybe thicker. This is good! Squishee DONT EAT MY FOOD! 01:43, October 9, 2011 (UTC)
Reuploaded. ☀Mint☀Disturbia, the darkness is the light. 20:08, October 10, 2011 (UTC)
Enlarge the ear-pink and define the stripes on the face. -Scarletwind✧Lisanna✧ 01:44, October 11, 2011 (UTC)
Reuploaded. ☀Mint☀Disturbia, the darkness is the light. 20:33, October 11, 2011 (UTC)
Dull the earpink, enlarge it, and blur it a lot. llwildheart™l00:04 Wed Oct 12
Is it just me, or is the front leg's shading really dark? SenbonzakuraDance of the Cherry Blossoms... 01:10, October 12, 2011 (UTC) Shadewing
The earpink is way too red, and needs to be blurred, so make the earpink more pinkish gray. Awesomeness STONEY Fantasticness 14:34, October 12, 2011 (UTC)
Mint left the project, so someone can take over or it'll be declined. (Geez, I feel like a lead! x3) --SnowyXPerry = Serry! 22:25, October 12, 2011 (UTC)
Since Mint left, I'll take over. :3 —Leggo QuailXStoat 00:10, October 13, 2011 (UTC)
Okay, you can redo it again, or continue off of this one. ∗ Mistystar ∗ Trust the Fire Within... 20:29, October 13, 2011 (UTC)
Okay. I'm going to re-do it again, so I'll try my best to have it done either tonight or tomorrow morning. :3 —Leggo QuailXStoat 03:01, October 14, 2011 (UTC)
Reuploaded. I used all of the colors off of Mint's version, except for earpink. I also tried a new style of tabby.. comments? :3 —Leggo QuailXStoat 23:34, October 14, 2011 (UTC)
-Edit- I erased some shading on the bottom of the paw, and back of haunch, so it stood out drastically. I fixed it. :3 —Leggo QuailXStoat 23:39, October 14, 2011 (UTC)
You never fail to impress me, Rainlegs. Never, ever, ever. Blur the white chest and make it furry, and make the ear pink more pinkish. ❄swagstorm❄ 23:48, October 14, 2011 (UTC)
Define/darken the stripes on the tail and on the shoulders. -Scarletwind✧Lisanna✧ 02:29, October 15, 2011 (UTC)
Reuploaded. Thanks. :) —Leggo QuailXStoat 14:10, October 15, 2011 (UTC)
Blur the white more - the white bumps on the chest, maybe smooth that out. ❄swagstorm❄ 14:42, October 15, 2011 (UTC)
Reuploaded. I re-did the smudging, so I could fix the white.. I also smudged her white paws. —Leggo QuailXStoat 18:36, October 15, 2011 (UTC)
Lionstar (L) ~ RedoneEdit
OA was Sandwich989, and it needed stripes and the shading redone and since it only had one image, i redid it. Comments? -❄ſceheart ♥ Blah blah 19:29, October 10, 2011 (UTC)
Redden the earpink, it's very bright. The stripes a little awkward, they look orange and the fur is light ginger. May just be me, but desaturate them a tad. ☀Mint☀Disturbia, the darkness is the light. 20:16, October 10, 2011 (UTC)
I dont have a problem with the stripe colour. -❄ſceheart ♥ Blah blah 21:48, October 10, 2011 (UTC)
I don't either. I think it looks good. Add more depth to the eye and blur/smudge the left earpink. Ivyheart =P 00:30, October 11, 2011 (UTC)
Stripes look amazing, Iceheart, so don't change a thing. Lighten the shading a tad though. —Garrus ღ 06:22, October 11, 2011 (UTC)
Reuploaded- -❄ſceheart ♥ Blah blah 22:17, October 12, 2011 (UTC)
Can you dull the earpink a bit? Its too neon. ∗ Mistystar ∗ Trust the Fire Within... 20:56, October 13, 2011 (UTC)
Reuoloaded- Thats the last time im changing the ear pink. Its impossible on this coat colour and im not jumping through hoops over it. -❄ſceheart ♥ Blah blah 04:34, October 15, 2011 (UTC)
24 hours. -❄ſceheart ♥ Blah blah 11:10, October 16, 2011 (UTC)
Cinderheart (Ki) - Redone Edit
Ok, so don't comment on any of the colors, they were all taken from her warrior image directly from the .xcf file, so I'm not changing them. the shading needs to be darkened though, doesn't it? Originally by Sandstar I think, and the nose color was changed by Iceheart. ♔ⓅⓐⓁⓔⒸⓛⒶⓦ♕ ☆StarClan be with you★ 01:32, October 15, 2011 (UTC)
This is beautiful, Paleclaw. Excellent. Outstanding. Lovely. Amazing. Awesome. And all the synonyms of "amazing", "beautiful", "excellent", "outstanding", "lovely", and "awesome". Can you lighten the paws a bit? ❄swagstorm❄ 01:36, October 15, 2011 (UTC)
Thank you Icy! ^^ (though honestly I don't agree that this is very good, Splashy'd probably kill me if I said so..... oops. XD) And sorry, but no. I said this on the warrior version before it was archived, but the paws were made to be the same color as the stripes. And since the warrior version was approved now, it wouldn't match if I made them lighter. ♔ⓅⓐⓁⓔⒸⓛⒶⓦ♕ ☆StarClan be with you★ 01:57, October 15, 2011 (UTC)
Paleclaw. You shut your mouth. If you object your amazingly, epic charart skills, I will slap you through the internet. Yes, it's that serious. Define the shading along the back a little bit :3 <3 (it's so amazing btw. I died of awesomeness, I'm a ghost.) SplookSweet serendipity. 02:07, October 15, 2011 (UTC)
I'll BEAT her if she insults her skills again. I should decline this to teach you a lesson...but then, I'd haet myself forever for declining such a BEAUTIFUL piece of art. ❄swagstorm❄ 02:25, October 15, 2011 (UTC)
Reuploaded - O.O *gulps and hides* ♔ⓅⓐⓁⓔⒸⓛⒶⓦ♕ ☆StarClan be with you★ 02:49, October 15, 2011 (UTC)
24 hours. —Garrus ღ 18:26, October 16, 2011 (UTC)
Molewhisker (W) - Redone Edit
Finally! A free space! Original artist was Nightfall, and it needed to be longhaired, and the shading looked blotchy. --Leafstrike-- 01:24, October 15, 2011 (UTC)
Define the shading, and possibly highlights if you're using them. Ivyheart =P 14:33, October 15, 2011 (UTC)
Reuploaded Only defined it in a few places, I can't define it anymore without the shading looking blotchy. --Leafstrike-- 19:23, October 15, 2011 (UTC)
24 hours and I see nothing wrong with it. Approved. Iveh Yo! 00:30, October 17, 2011 (UTC)
Thornclaw (W) ~ RedoneEdit
Pine was approved, and well, i love Thorclaw, so when he needed to be tweaked, i was jumping :D Oa was Sandstar12, then Bramble, then Icestorm, his stripes didn't look real, so i tweaked them, comments? Maple♥poolMischief brewing 23:17, September 26, 2011 (UTC)
I love your tabbies ^^ Define the stripes on the tail. SnowyXPerry = Serry! 23:21, September 26, 2011 (UTC)
Thanks :) Practic makes perfect, no one is perfect, but my tabbies will bee soon ;) Reuploaded-comments?
Maple♥poolMischief brewing 23:28, September 26, 2011 (UTC)
Blur the stripes more. Iveh Yo! 00:22, September 27, 2011 (UTC)
When did I tweak him? There's a lack of shading. ❄swagstorm❄ 00:29, September 27, 2011 (UTC)
Idk, it just says your name so....Okay give me a min. Maple♥poolMischief brewing 00:33, September 27, 2011 (UTC)
Reuploaded. Maple♥poolMischief brewing 00:36, September 27, 2011 (UTC)
The stripes need to be blurred and shading neesd to be darkened. Yeha, I fixed the eye x3 ❄swagstorm❄ 21:56, September 27, 2011 (UTC)
Can you define the earpink? ∗ Mistystar ∗ Trust the Fire Within... 21:58, September 27, 2011 (UTC)
Yeah sure, give me a min. Maple♥poolMischief brewing 22:04, September 27, 2011 (UTC)
REuploaded. Maple♥poolMischief brewing 22:27, September 27, 2011 (UTC)
Now lighten it and add more shading all around. ❄swagstorm❄ 23:12, September 27, 2011 (UTC)
And blur the stripes some more as well as shading. —Leggo QuailXStoat 00:35, September 28, 2011 (UTC)
blur the shading and highlights tons and make the shading curve at the haunch --Bloo!yo
01:45, September 28, 2011 (UTC)
Is it a some sort of lighter color between the highlights and the shading? Is it the pelt color? If so, blend in the highlights with it, the highlights should not throw off the color of the pelt that much. SplookSweet serendipity. 01:23, September 29, 2011 (UTC)
I....have...no....idea what that was...Anyway, reuploaded.Maple♥poolMischief brewing 01:59, September 29, 2011 (UTC)
Lol, I'm sorry xD There's some sort of contrast between the highlights and the shading (which I believe was a streak of pelt color.) I just wanted you to blend it in more xD SplookSweet serendipity. 19:40, September 29, 2011 (UTC)
This might be just me but I think the shading doesn't fit with the muscles well. Ivyheart =P 20:47, September 29, 2011 (UTC)
It is how Ashfur has his shading, I'll leave it as it is. Maple♥poolMischief brewing 23:01, September 29, 2011 (UTC)
No, you won't. It's nothing how Ashfur has his shading. Change it. ❄swagstorm❄ 23:24, September 29, 2011 (UTC)
Fine, fine, i'll mess around with it. Maple♥poolMischief brewing 01:56, September 30, 2011 (UTC)
REuploaded-Sorry this took so long, I lost his shading layer, so i had to re-make his shading layer, and then, i rushed it, and got this....^^; Maple♥poolMischief brewing 14:55, October 2, 2011 (UTC)
Darken and blur the shading and blur the highlights. ❄swagstorm❄ 14:56, October 2, 2011 (UTC)
Reuploaded-Wow....that was fast ;D Maple♥poolMischief brewing 14:59, October 2, 2011 (UTC)
It still needs to be blurred more. ❄swagstorm❄ 15:04, October 2, 2011 (UTC)
Reuploaded-it has now been blurred to a max. Maple♥poolMischief brewing 15:10, October 2, 2011 (UTC)
Maple, it still needs to be blurred and blended a little more. —Garrus ღ 03:43, October 3, 2011 (UTC)
Reuploaded-I tried, had like 1% affect every here and there, but not much....Maple♥poolMischief brewing 14:26, October 3, 2011 (UTC)
Maple, I have some advice for you that helped me before I learned the other-worldly powers of the guassian blur tool. If you smudge the shading a lot with the second-to smallest or third-to smallest brush, then blur it on 100%, that actually helps to make the shading have a natural gradient. Autumnstar✦Triumph over tragedy✧ 00:47, October 4, 2011 (UTC)
.....What? I'm sorry, i'm diselxic.....Maple♥poolMischief brewing 12:37, October 4, 2011 (UTC)
What don't you understand? You use layers, yes? Autumnstar✦Triumph over tragedy✧ 21:38, October 4, 2011 (UTC)
He still seems kind of shiny. Maybe dull the highlights a tad? Sky- Killer of Daleks and Cybermen 22:18, October 4, 2011 (UTC)
@Ivy....I don't understand any of it, and No, i don't.....Maple♥poolMischief brewing 22:26, October 4, 2011 (UTC)
The shading. It needs to be blurred. ❄swagstorm❄ 22:57, October 4, 2011 (UTC)
sighs* Alright, let me try to rephrase it (it's going to be more difficult since you don't have layers) The smudge tool (which is a hand with the pointer finger sticking out) is what you need. Use it like you would normally do to something to smear it, make it go back and forth. Then, take your blur tool. There should be a setting somewhere that has a bar and some numbers, it should say "Rate", slide it to the right until it says 100%. It should really help smooth your shading out a lot. This should be much more informative, yes? Autumnstar✦Triumph over tragedy✧ 03:58, October 5, 2011 (UTC)
Thanks, i got it that time :) I'm sorry....I can understtand things that well, and then i get sonfuesed, and then i get mad, and then i kill a pillow.....DX Maple♥poolMischief brewing 22:37, October 5, 2011 (UTC)
Brighten the highlight on the shoulder, move it up a bit, darken the highlight on the haunch, and blur all the shading and highlights. llwildheart™l03:51 Thu Oct 6
Okay, give me some time, my laptop is being spazzy, so, let me get it squared away, or let me buy a new one, give me like two or three days, 'kay? Maple♥poolMischief brewing 00:12, October 7, 2011 (UTC)
Okay, my laptop is fixed now, give me sometime, all right? Maple♥poolMischief brewing 01:29, October 8, 2011 (UTC)
No. Maplepool, I'm sorry, but we can't wait forever. Either fix this or withdraw this. ❄swagstorm❄ 14:00, October 8, 2011 (UTC)
I fixed it, i was talking about giving me time to fix Thornclaw :P should have been more clear on that, sorry ^^; Maple♥poolMischief brewing 23:42, October 9, 2011 (UTC)
Well, that's what I was talking about. The shading still needs to be blurred. ❄swagstorm❄ 16:19, October 10, 2011 (UTC)
Add some depth to the eye. SnowyXPerry = Serry! 01:41, October 11, 2011 (UTC)
Maple, this hasn't been re-uploaded since the third. Please reupload soon or it will be declined. —Garrus ღ 03:27, October 11, 2011 (UTC)
If the leads wish it and Maple gives me permission, may I take over this once Brackenfur is completed? ❄swagstorm❄ 15:52, October 11, 2011 (UTC)
Yes, go ahead, if the other leads agree. Maplepool, please don't kill me with a blow torch, but this is taking you a VERY long time to do, and many other images are getting approved while yours isn't completed. Letting Icestorm do it will get it done much faster. Maybe you could try doing something easier for now? Bloodstripe Your demise comes ŧΦɲΪĢĦ†... 00:07, October 12, 2011 (UTC)
No problem here. Since Brackenfur was archived, you can take this one over. Sorry, Maple, but you can't spend forever and a day on an image. =/ —Garrus ღ 14:33, October 12, 2011 (UTC)
Re-Uploaded: Comments? ❄swagstorm❄ 22:14, October 12, 2011 (UTC)
Can you make him a tad bit more golden? Bloodstripe Your demise comes ŧΦɲΪĢĦ†... 22:20, October 12, 2011 (UTC)
Re-Uploaded': ❄swagstorm❄ 23:31, October 12, 2011 (UTC)
Ok, I understand it's your style to make the shading dark, but that doesn't mean it should always stay dark on every image. Is there any chance of you lightening it on this one? Or does what you said on some of your other images about not lightening the shading still apply? Personally, I think you should lighten it, I like dark shading too, but it's almost black in the darkest part. ♔ⓅⓐⓁⓔⒸⓛⒶⓦ♕ ☆StarClan be with you★ 06:58, October 13, 2011 (UTC)
Re-Uploaded: I'd rather appreciate it if I wasn't told to lighten the shading, because dark shading is my style and I imagine cats with dark shading. Sure, I'll lower the opacity, but still. I lightened the shading on this one. ❄swagstorm❄ 21:00, October 13, 2011 (UTC)
Define the stripes on the tail. ∗ Mistystar ∗ Trust the Fire Within... 21:01, October 13, 2011 (UTC)
Can you move the earpink a little more into the ear? ❊ Starrk ❊ I'm Not Alone 15:13, October 14, 2011 (UTC) Shadewing
Re-Uploaded: I didn't define the tail stripes, they're fine. They're three large stripes instead of tiny ones. ❄swagstorm❄ 01:28, October 15, 2011 (UTC)
Define the ear pink. -❄ſceheart ♥ Blah blah 18:26, October 15, 2011 (UTC)
@Ivy, I know, i know, and its cool, this looks way better, its just, life is getting to me, and with so many things going on, im not having as much time to lazy around as i would like to, im up to my eyes in homework(Thats what i get, for taking extra classes.) So, im not as free much.....i'm going to be inactive till December, so is flowerpatch, she's in the hosptial, her whole left side is broken, and she as put into a coma for medical needs. So....i've had like ) time to play on my laptop, i need to drop most of my extra classes *Latian, German, French, etc* So. I wont be on much, I'm sorry......Maple♥poolMischief brewing 21:04, October 15, 2011 (UTC)
It's alright. Iceheart, if I define the ear pink, it gets blotchy. ❄swagstorm❄ 22:33, October 15, 2011 (UTC)
Make the earpink smaller and fit more into the ear. llwildheart™l11:09 Sun Oct 16
Creekfeather (Ki) ~ TweakedEdit
Needed to match his warrior image. OA is Rainy. —Garrus ღ 03:31, October 15, 2011 (UTC)
Maybe connect some stripes. Also Yatz was the original artist actually.-Kittycat79aka Rowantail 07:20, October 15, 2011 (UTC)
Well, no, Yatz took over, but Rainy DID start this. XD But anyways, BEAUTIFUL! ^^ Maybe just define the earpink a tad. ♔ⓅⓐⓁⓔⒸⓛⒶⓦ♕ ☆StarClan be with you★ 07:53, October 15, 2011 (UTC)
I went by who was the first artist on the file. And I'm not connecting stripes. Kitty, if you would look at his warrior, you would see that they're straight lines, and not connecting. —Garrus ღ 13:33, October 15, 2011 (UTC)
God, I hated the original image... thankies for making it pretty again. :3 Anyway, smudge the stripes a tiny bit more. —Leggo QuailXStoat 13:52, October 15, 2011 (UTC)
The original image look like crap, Rainy, considering the lineart is so small and you can't fit a lot into it. I mean, that was what? Your first one or something? xD Re-uploaded. —Garrus ღ 15:35, October 15, 2011 (UTC)
Could you make the stripes a bit wavy? You don't have to. ❄swagstorm❄ 15:36, October 15, 2011 (UTC)
Look at the warrior image. They're not wavy, and it looks epic. xD —Garrus ღ 15:37, October 15, 2011 (UTC)
OHDERP. -waves hand across face- Blur the ear pink ❄swagstorm❄ 15:39, October 15, 2011 (UTC)
Re-uploaded. Also, looking at the file, all Yatz really did was fix ear pink issues. I consider the OA to be Rainy, since she did most (if not all) of the work. XD —Garrus ღ 15:42, October 15, 2011 (UTC)
There's some waste all around the image. Mainly by the feet, but I think there's some pretty much all around it. ♔ⓅⓐⓁⓔⒸⓛⒶⓦ♕ ☆StarClan be with you★ 19:15, October 15, 2011 (UTC)
Re-uploaded. —Garrus ღ 03:22, October 16, 2011 (UTC)
Smudge the stripes a tad so they match the warrior ones. llwildheart™l11:01 Sun Oct 16
They are smudged...? Re-uploaded. —Garrus ღ 14:37, October 16, 2011 (UTC)
Mosskit (Ki) ~ TweakedEdit
I just realized how fun tweaking an image can be. Anyways, I fixed the eyes, earpink, and blurred lineart, and added in shading. I think I've defined it enough for this style, but if someone tells me to define, I can. Comments? Ivyheart =P 13:57, October 15, 2011 (UTC)
Much better :) Define the ear pink. ❄swagstorm❄ 14:19, October 15, 2011 (UTC)
Reuploaded. Thanks. :3 Ivyheart =P 14:32, October 15, 2011 (UTC)
Make the ear pink more pink. Also, who was the OA? —Garrus ღ 15:43, October 15, 2011 (UTC)
Pffsh, sorry. xD The OA is Sandstar12. Ivyheart =P 03:18, October 16, 2011 (UTC)
Reuploaded. Ivyheart =P 03:20, October 16, 2011 (UTC)
Seedpelt (D) - TweakedEdit
Added in ze flecks, which probably makes it look mottled. xD Sky- Stealing all ur candy 14:10, October 15, 2011 (UTC)
Oh, zis is epic, Sky. As always. Anyway, while you're at this tweak, can you possibly change the eye to make it have a pupil? Ivyheart =P 14:13, October 15, 2011 (UTC)
Make the ear pink darker and smaller, and blur and darken the shasding. ❄swagstorm❄ 14:18, October 15, 2011 (UTC)
Re-uploaded. Sky- Stealing all ur candy 15:59, October 15, 2011 (UTC)
Blur the earpink. ❊ Starrk ❊ I'm Not Alone 18:33, October 15, 2011 (UTC) Shadewing
The tip of the earpink. I think the earpink should be a bit higher into the ear, and maybe blur the flecks a tad. Only the ones on the torso and neck. The front leg, tail, and forehead flecks look blurred enough. More than the ones on the torso & neck. This is pretty!-Kittycat79aka Rowantail 09:22, October 16, 2011 (UTC)
Ahhhhh. Speckles. Are. So. Beautiful. Dull the earpink a tad. llwildheart™l11:00 Sun Oct 16
Re-uploaded. How I love flecked cats already. :D Though not the evil ear pink. Sky- Stealing all ur candy 11:31, October 16, 2011 (UTC)
Make the earpink a tad smaller and blur it. Ugh, I KNOW. Earpink is always awful; you can never quite get it perfect XD llwildheart™l11:39 Sun Oct 16
Re-uploaded. Take 5232, action! xD Sky- Stealing all ur candy 12:00, October 16, 2011 (UTC)
Mosspelt (Q)~ TweakedEdit
OA was me and she needed white. -❄ſceheart ♥ Blah blah 11:13, October 16, 2011 (UTC)
Brighten the white...I can't even tell where it is. ❄swagstorm❄ 13:51, October 16, 2011 (UTC)
The OA of the original file was Nightfall, not you. However, you made the current file. —Garrus ღ 14:34, October 16, 2011 (UTC)
Icestorm, white is very bright, but changes arent showing :-) Leaf-storm,15:04,October 16,2011 (UTC)
Define the ear-pink a bit more. -Scarletwind✧Lisanna✧ 02:15, October 17, 2011 (UTC)
The earpink isnt my problem. 24 hours without comment. -❄ſceheart ♥ Blah blah 20:38, October 17, 2011 (UTC)
Cloudtail (W) ~ TweakedEdit
Needed his shading re-done, and while I was at it, I tweaked the ear pink. I <3 Cloudtail, so I tried to make him, like, perfect. —Garrus ღ 02:10, October 17, 2011 (UTC)
He looks so handsome! There is a pure white pixil on his forehead, I think, and extend the shading to the underside of his tail as it appears lighter. Iveh Yo! 02:13, October 17, 2011 (UTC)
It's not pure white, Ivy, but a shade darker. Re-uploaded. —Garrus ღ 02:22, October 17, 2011 (UTC)
He twill soon be perfect...>:D I think the earpink needs to be bigger. Sky- Stealing all ur candy 06:11, October 17, 2011 (UTC)
Re-uploaded. Yes, yes he shall. —Garrus ღ 14:57, October 17, 2011 (UTC)
There is some waste behind the tail. Good job. Ivyheart =P 15:33, October 17, 2011 (UTC)
Thanks. Re-uploaded. —Garrus ღ 15:39, October 17, 2011 (UTC)
Thin and lighten the shading. ❄swagstorm❄ 20:42, October 17, 2011 (UTC)
Re-uploaded. —Garrus ღ 20:58, October 17, 2011 (UTC)
Amberclaw (W) ~ TweakedEdit
Okay, so the original artist was Honeyfur, then Riverpelt, and Mintstarr then tweaked it. I toned down the opacity, thickened the stripes, and thickened the shading. Atelda 03:13, October 15, 2011 (UTC)
Lovely, Atelda! Darken the ear-pink and make it a bit smaller. Darken the shading on the back and around the head and define the stripes on the tail. -Scarletwind✧Lisanna✧ 03:20, October 15, 2011 (UTC)
Reuploaded. Thank you. Atelda 03:49, October 15, 2011 (UTC)
Could you possibly make the stripes into thinner lines, instead of Y stripes? ❄swagstorm❄ 12:44, October 15, 2011 (UTC)
Define the ear-pink, please! I love it! Leaf-storm,09:25,October 15,2011 (UTC)
Reuploaded. I really hope this is what you mean Icy. Thanks Leaf-storm. Atelda 22:29, October 15, 2011 (UTC)
I like these stripes :3 Define them a bit? Looks bootiful! llwildheart™l05:23 Sun Oct 16
I think the stripes are fine, but that's just my opinion.-Kittycat79aka Rowantail 09:26, October 16, 2011 (UTC)
Also I made the "Amberclaw" part of the heading into a link to his page. I reckon brighten the highlights on his shoulder and haunch to match the other highlights.-Kittycat79aka Rowantail 09:28, October 16, 2011 (UTC)
Well, Kittycat79, the highligths need to be DULLED and TWEAKED. So she doesn't have to match the other highlights. ❄swagstorm❄ 14:02, October 16, 2011 (UTC)
Blur the shading. —Garrus ღ 18:25, October 16, 2011 (UTC)
Reuploaded. Ok, I define the stripes kind of...And the shading is blurred to the max. Atelda 19:41, October 16, 2011 (UTC)
24 hours. Wonderful image, Atelda. —Garrus ღ 21:09, October 17, 2011 (UTC)
Reedwhisker (W) - RedoneEdit
ugh... why did I even make this? I suck at black cats! Anyway, OA was Spottedwing and then it was tweaked by Rainwhisper and Bramble. Redone as a longhair. Comments? -Scarletwind✧Lisanna✧ 00:31, October 15, 2011 (UTC)
Lighten the entire pelt color, darken the highlights, lighten the shading, blur the highlights, make the ear pink smaller and redder. ❄swagstorm❄ 01:29, October 15, 2011 (UTC)
Re-uploaded. -Scarletwind✧Lisanna✧ 01:40, October 15, 2011 (UTC)
Re-uploaded. Fixed the shading, it was really bothering me, took all the colors from Darkflower's queen charart. -Scarletwind✧Lisanna✧ 03:19, October 15, 2011 (UTC)
Blur the highlights and make the ear pink smaller. ❄swagstorm❄ 12:44, October 15, 2011 (UTC)
Re-uploaded. -Scarletwind✧Lisanna✧ 03:13, October 16, 2011 (UTC)
Define the ear pink. —Garrus ღ 18:43, October 16, 2011 (UTC)
Blur the shading a bit. llwildheart™l00:07 Mon Oct 17
Would it be possible to shrink the ears a tiny bit to match his description? I don't think it's needed, but if we're going for complete accuracy it might be a nice touch. Shelly For a limited time only 01:24, October 17, 2011 (UTC)
Re-uploaded. @Shelly, I had a look at his redone deputy and I think the ears are the same size. For now I'm gonna keep them the same size, but I'm gonna play around with the lineart. -Scarletwind✧Lisanna✧ 21:12, October 16, 2011 (UTC)
I think there's some waste underneath the chin. Specklestream Let it Snow! 15:31, October 17, 2011 (UTC)
Re-uploaded Since the comment was just on waste and nothing really about the charart, I'm gonna go ahead and approve this. -Scarletwind✧Lisanna✧ 22:50, October 17, 2011 (UTC)
Leafpool (MC) - RedoneEdit
OA may have been Nightshine, but I believe she may have just renamed the file.. anyway, it needed to match her warrior image (Stripes re-done). Comments? —Leggo QuailXStoat 23:36, October 15, 2011 (UTC)
Add some highlights to her front left paw, it looks weird when all the other paws have highlights when that single paw doesn't. --Leafstrike-- 03:00, October 16, 2011 (UTC)
Brighten the earpink a tad. THIS IS BOOTIFUl <3 llwildheart™l10:56 Sun Oct 16
CHOO....*grumbles at awesomeness* Maybe define the stripes at the bottom of her tail? They seem sorta hard to see...or maybe it's my horrendous vision....Sky- Stealing all ur candy 13:06, October 16, 2011 (UTC)
It needs to match her warrior image, which it does. In fact, when comparing the two, I can see nothing wrong. Excellent job in matching it, Rainy. =) —Garrus ღ 18:38, October 16, 2011 (UTC)
24 hours. —Garrus ღ 22:54, October 17, 2011 (UTC)
Kestrelflight (MC) - Redone Edit
OA was Maplefern. It was down for tweaking but there was numerous problems with it, and I got the OK from Iceheart to redo it. His splotches needed to look like ketrel feathers, coloring needed tweaked, needed to be mottled, and the shading was non-existant in some places. I kept the herbs and eyes the same though. Coments for approval? Iveh Yo! 00:33, October 17, 2011 (UTC)
Simply gawd-jus, dahling. Tone down the middle herb's colour a bit so it's less neon-green XD llwildheart™l00:34 Mon Oct 17
Reuploaded Sank yoo =) Iveh Yo! 00:37, October 17, 2011 (UTC)
you just won a free internet. smudge some of thw white splotches cuz some have harder edges -Bloo!yo
Reuploaded Hehe =) Also, I almost forgot, if anyone wanted to know what kestrel I used to model the splotches after, here you go http://www.stanford.edu/group/stanfordbirds/other/gallery/image/American_Kestrel_detail.jpeg Iveh Yo! 00:48, October 17, 2011 (UTC)
...beautiful. JJust beautiful. ❄swagstorm❄ 00:52, October 17, 2011 (UTC)
Wow! I love the hard edge look to it! Smudge the spots on the tail just a little to match the hard edge smudge on the body spots. That's all I see wrong with this, it's simply beautiful! --SplookSweet serendipity. 01:35, October 17, 2011 (UTC)
Reuploaded Lol I can't say thanks enough, so this is a thanks to all those I've received and to all the future ones I get =D Iveh Yo! 01:40, October 17, 2011 (UTC)
I see nothing wrong with this, and I should approve it, but it's been up too early xD ❄swagstorm❄ 01:43, October 17, 2011 (UTC)
This is amazing! All I can see is that the earpink is, well, hard to see.. could you define it a tad? :3 —Leggo QuailXStoat 02:06, October 17, 2011 (UTC)
Reuploaded Iveh Yo! 02:09, October 17, 2011 (UTC)
This is beautiful, Ivy! Make the ear-pink a bit paler/define it. -Scarletwind✧Lisanna✧ 02:16, October 17, 2011 (UTC)
Reuploaded hehe I just realized how furry the mottles make him look :3 Iveh Yo! 02:20, October 17, 2011 (UTC)
o.0 I am so jealous. Perhaps blur the highlights a tad? Sky- Stealing all ur candy 08:11, October 17, 2011 (UTC)
Reuploaded Iveh Yo! 13:22, October 17, 2011 (UTC)
I refuse to let such a beautiful image sit here any longer. This is...wonderful. It really is. =) —Garrus ღ 14:07, October 18, 2011 (UTC)
Crookedstar (D) - RedoneEdit
- Don't ask me to change the stripes. He looks like a PICKUP TRUCK. A rusty, brown, old pick up truck. And I don't like this all that much - the colors clash x_____x Comments? ❄swagstorm❄ 01:43, October 17, 2011 (UTC)
Sorry, but Bloo's was posted before your's and this is over the limit. Please repost this when there are less than 15 images. Iveh Yo! 01:48, October 17, 2011 (UTC)
This isn't over the limit...it was posted first. Why is it above Foxheart's, then? ❄swagstorm❄ 01:52, October 17, 2011 (UTC) Derp. It was first in recent changes. Sorry. x3 ❄swagstorm❄ 01:54, October 17, 2011 (UTC)
I don't know, things like this happen sometimes, but I could have sworn Foxheart's was there first. I'll check in the history but I think Foxheart's was here first. If I'm wrong then I'll admit my mistake. Iveh Yo! 01:54, October 17, 2011 (UTC)
It's fine now. Changing the heading. —Garrus ღ 01:58, October 17, 2011 (UTC)
I knew I told y'all not to tell me to change the stripes...I changed the stripes. 8D ❄swagstorm❄ 02:00, October 17, 2011 (UTC)
Ok problem solved then :3 Define the M stripe on his forehead. Unless changes aren't showingIveh Yo! 02:14, October 17, 2011 (UTC)
Re-Uploaded: This okay? ❄swagstorm❄ 21:07, October 17, 2011 (UTC)
24 hours. ❄swagstorm❄ 21:53, October 18, 2011 (UTC)
Dawnflower (W) - RedoneEdit
I redid her apprentice, so I did this too. She needed to be longhaired, and the original artist was Sandwich989. ✿Dapplecloud✿A pang in the heart... 22:04, October 13, 2011 (UTC)
Enlarge the ear-pink and redden it a tad and darken the shading. -Scarletwind✧Lisanna✧ 01:30, October 14, 2011 (UTC)
Blur the shading a lot. llwildheart™l00:07 Mon Oct 17
Are you still working on this, Dapple? -Scarletwind✧Lisanna✧ 02:13, October 17, 2011 (UTC)
Yup; Re-Uploaded. ✿Dapplecloud✿A pang in the heart... 21:51, October 17, 2011 (UTC)
Brighten the earpink. llwildheart™l23:46 Mon Oct 17
I took the earpink color off of her apprentice version/queen version, so I can't change it or else it will look different. ✿Dapplecloud✿A pang in the heart... 22:20, October 18, 2011 (UTC)
24 hours without a comment. ∗ Mistystar ∗ Trust the Fire Within... 22:24, October 18, 2011 (UTC)
Thrushpelt (WC) (Mc) - RedoneEdit
Redone as a short hair. :3 Sky- Stealing all ur candy 08:00, October 17, 2011 (UTC)
Make the flecks look more more dark brown. Iveh Yo! 13:20, October 17, 2011 (UTC)
Color in the eyes. XD This is gorgeous! ♔ⓅⓐⓁⓔⒸⓛⒶⓦ♕ ☆StarClan be with you★ 14:13, October 17, 2011 (UTC)
I was going to do this one, and decided against it. I'm glad I did. Blur teh ear pink. —Garrus ღ 14:54, October 17, 2011 (UTC)
Maybe add more brown flecks? --Leafstrike-- 21:43, October 17, 2011 (UTC)
Re-uploaded. I did fll in the eyes before, but they was too dark. xD And it's alright. No more, no less. :P (The OA was Nightfall101, btw.) Sky- Stealing all ur candy 23:59, October 17, 2011 (UTC)
24 hours. ∗ Mistystar ∗ Trust the Fire Within... 22:30, October 18, 2011 (UTC)
