Firestar (Alt L) - Tweaked[]
OA is Burnt, and this was ten times harder than it needed to be. —Jayce(07:02, 1/15/2018)
Shouldn't he have a paler muzzle to match the other alts? 07:09, January 15, 2018 (UTC)
Yup, I eliminated it by accident not realizing he had a pale muzzle. Re-uploaded. —Jayce(07:13, 1/15/2018)
can you define the shading depth around the chest/neck area madie the wicked witch of the west
Re-uploaded. —Jayce(07:37, 1/15/2018)
Could you define the shading on the face a big? 19:19, January 15, 2018 (UTC)
Re-uploaded. —Jayce(03:15, 1/17/2018)
24 hours. —Jayce(11:20, 1/18/2018)
Sandynose (Alt. Ki) ~ Tweaked[]
Hope I did removing the texture right. 03:20, January 13, 2018 (UTC)
This one has eyebrows while the apprentice doesnt. (idk which one matches the manga, i don't think he had eyebrows but it could be the other way around) madie the wicked witch of the west
It was the way I shaded it last time, I can remove that. 03:53, January 13, 2018 (UTC)
The manga doesn't have the eyebrows, so remove it.Stealthf🔥re ❤Warriors Forever!❤ 00:36, January 14, 2018 (UTC)
Re-uploaded. 03:29, January 17, 2018 (UTC)
24 hours. —Jayce(11:20, 1/18/2018)
Bone (D) ~ Redone[]
OA by me. Redone for artist's choice. Comet ☄ Blazing Star 18:15, January 13, 2018 (UTC)
there should be a lot more black on the thigh and the body, and I think there's the black on the hind legs. david 🌈 18:18, January 13, 2018 (UTC)
Reups Comet ☄ Blazing Star 18:24, January 13, 2018 (UTC)
Define the shading on the furthest front leg and the back legs and the face a smidge? And smooth out the shading around the muzzle area? This is cute! 19:13, January 13, 2018 (UTC)
- Adding onto my comment- I don't know if it's me or the way the Black was place, but on the start of the tail(by the back bone), there's a place of the black that basically cuts off the tail coloring like a straight line.. if you know what I mean? Smooth it out to go with the flow of the coloring to the tail? 19:14, January 13, 2018 (UTC)
Wouldn't this have texture?—Broken_Foot⭐StarClan's Prophet⭐ 19:36, 1/13/2018
i dont see texture on the rogue david 🌈 19:46, January 13, 2018 (UTC)
I think the black is oversmudged, compared to the other images.Stealthf🔥re ❤Warriors Forever!❤ 00:07, January 15, 2018 (UTC)
The rogue image definitely doesn't have texture. Also, the smudging was good on this version of the deputy, for reference. —Jayce(05:15, 1/15/2018)
Reuploaded Ugh, sorry for this being so late I've been sick the past few days and have mostly been sleeping. Comet ☄ Blazing Star 19:19, January 16, 2018 (UTC)
It's alright, Pepper. ^^ I've been sick too, so I totally understand where you're coming from. Could you smooth out the shading on <-- front arm? —Jayce(05:02, 1/17/2018)
While you're at it, can you also smooth out the shading on the hind paw closest to us? ♥ Star red and black ♥<05:07, 1/17/2018>
Hopefully, the image is changing. GIMP hates me like that sometimes >o< Comet ☄ Blazing Star 16:39, January 17, 2018 (UTC)
also re-uploaded lmao Comet ☄ Blazing Star 16:40, January 17, 2018 (UTC)
24 hours.Stealthf🔥re ❤Warriors Forever!❤ 00:20, January 20, 2018 (UTC)
Mudfur (ki) - Tweaked[]
OA is A Beautiful Oblivion, tweaked to remove pale muzzle and chest. Accidentally uploaded it to the nominations page lol. —PatchfeatherHangar 18, I know too much 15:22, January 15, 2018 (UTC)
Can you define the earpink in --> ear and add some mottling to <-- side of the face? 19:18, January 15, 2018 (UTC)
Re-uploaded. —PatchfeatherHangar 18, I know too much 01:55, January 16, 2018 (UTC)
Add some more bottles in the middle of the face a big? 02:05, January 16, 2018 (UTC)
Re-uploaded. —PatchfeatherHangar 18, I know too much 15:25, January 16, 2018 (UTC)
Could you make the mottles look more like mottles? Right now, it seems more like a fur texture, or stripes in this case, and I know Applefur was recently tweaked for the same kind of thing. You also have my permission to redo this if you need to in order to get the colors to work right, provided they match the current image. —Jayce(03:31, 1/17/2018)
Re-uploaded. All right, I redid the pattern and shading, all the colors are from the original. —PatchfeatherHangar 18, I know too much 17:59, January 17, 2018 (UTC)
Because Star uploaded her's first, I think you'd need to match her design, unless she doesn't want that as her design. Can you also define the pale belly? 18:13, January 17, 2018 (UTC)
Re-uploaded. —PatchfeatherHangar 18, I know too much 20:22, January 18, 2018 (UTC)
I forgot to mention that Star said that you could use your old design, if you liked it better. I'm sorry for commenting late.. 21:01, January 18, 2018 (UTC)
Gonna keep it like this. —PatchfeatherHangar 18, I know too much 14:02, January 19, 2018 (UTC)
24 hours.Stealthf🔥re ❤Warriors Forever!❤ 00:20, January 20, 2018 (UTC)
Millie (W) ~ Tweaked[]
Tweaked for torn ear. OA was Bramblesnow. I also removed the eyelashes, if that was okay too. 04:12, January 17, 2018 (UTC)
24 hours.Stealthf🔥re ❤Warriors Forever!❤ 00:20, January 20, 2018 (UTC)
Whorlpaw (app) - Redone[]
—PatchfeatherHangar 18, I know too much 20:08, January 17, 2018 (UTC)
He looks more like a tabby than a gray-and-white cat. Cool design though!—Broken_Foot⭐StarClan's Prophet⭐ 09:08, 1/18/2018
I don't see the issue. Are you telling Patch to change the pattern...? Because it looks fine to me and I'd say it could pass for having streaks of white or gray throughout his fur. —Jayce(11:18, 1/18/2018)
streaks are fine. but hes looking like a tabby when he isnt. david 🌈 11:32, January 18, 2018 (UTC)
Re-uploaded. I tried to make him look less like a tabby. —PatchfeatherHangar 18, I know too much 16:08, January 18, 2018 (UTC)
24 hours.Stealthf🔥re ❤Warriors Forever!❤ 00:20, January 20, 2018 (UTC)
Bone (W) ~ Tweaked[]
Removed texture, and also fixed the shading. It was terrible.—Broken_Foot⭐StarClan's Prophet⭐ 00:36, 1/16/2018
I think there would be more black on the thigh area david 🌈 19:26, January 16, 2018 (UTC)
Re-uploaded. I hope the changes are showing.—Broken_Foot⭐StarClan's Prophet⭐ 22:26, 1/16/2018
Add some lighting to the back paws. 22:43, January 16, 2018 (UTC)
Add a bit of shading to those claws, please. There's enough space there for at least a little bit. —Jayce(03:32, 1/17/2018)
Re-uploaded.—Broken_Foot⭐StarClan's Prophet⭐ 05:08, 1/17/2018
I think the black could be smoothed out more everywhere overall. 15:47, January 17, 2018 (UTC)
Re-uploaded.—Broken_Foot⭐StarClan's Prophet⭐ 07:17, 1/19/2018
24 hours.Stealthf🔥re ❤Warriors Forever!❤ 00:56, January 23, 2018 (UTC)
Mudfur (MC) ~ Redone[]
Was tweaked first for removing pale muzzle and chest, but because of the mottles, it was allowed to be redone. 03:59, January 20, 2018 (UTC)
Re-uploaded. 04:36, January 20, 2018 (UTC)
I'll be tweaking the shading and the mottled pattern as I think I put too much spots. Same for the star. 06:32, January 20, 2018 (UTC)
Re-uploaded. 21:00, January 22, 2018 (UTC)
24 hours.Stealthf🔥re ❤Warriors Forever!❤ 09:14, January 25, 2018 (UTC)
Lilyheart (Alt Q) ~ Tweaked[]
was this what I was supposed to do? - Fox 僕たちはひとつの光 13:51,1/25/2018
You can really only see a small bit of white on the base and tip of the tail. I think the tortie pattern itself should be extended a bit more. —Jayce(14:16, 1/25/2018)
Re-uploaded is this what you meant? - Fox 僕たちはひとつの光 23:44,1/25/2018
24 hours.Stealthf🔥re ❤Warriors Forever!❤ 04:08, January 27, 2018 (UTC)
Mudfur (MCA) ~ Redone[]
OA was Stoneclaw33, tweaked by Dapplecloud33, redone by Snowdazzle, and tweaked again by Ivystripe. (I think . . . stuff can get confusing) Tweaked to remove pale muzzle and chest. ♥ Star red and black ♥<18:57, 1/15/2018>
Add some mottling where you removed the pale parts. 19:17, January 15, 2018 (UTC)
Could you make the mottles look more like mottles? Right now, it seems more like a fur texture, and I know Applefur was recently tweaked for the same kind of thing. —Jayce(03:31, 1/17/2018)
re-up may reupload cause this is ugly ♥ Star red and black ♥<04:56, 1/17/2018>
it's not ugly. It just blends in with the shading a bit. maybe try changing the layer settings? —Jayce(05:01, 1/17/2018)
re-up Still not satisfied; had to fiddle around with saturation and darkness and opacity (because if I set it on multiply it becomes dark chestnut) ♥ Star red and black ♥<05:06, 1/17/2018>
As I've said on the other images, if redoing this would be easier for you, you have my permission to do so. Trying to tweak this along with what I commented with would be fairly tricky, given how these images were shaded. You just have to keep the same colors and whatnot. —Jayce(05:12, 1/17/2018)
re-up Ahahaha what has school done to me ♥ Star red and black ♥<01:30, 1/24/2018>
Maybe expand the shading on the hindleg closest to us? And define it on both paws furthest. —PatchfeatherHangar 18, I know too much 01:46, January 24, 2018 (UTC)
I think you could smooth the mottles out a little. - Fox 僕たちはひとつの光 23:46,1/25/2018
re-up I don't care that he was once a warrior, I'm sticking with the part in YS that once upon a time he was a cute little mca bouncing off Brambleberry's walls like normal apprentices. That's final. also derpy me has forgotten to change heading oops XD ♥ Star red and black ♥<06:11, 1/26/2018>
24 hours.Stealthf🔥re ❤Warriors Forever!❤ 02:38, January 28, 2018 (UTC)
Mudfur (Star) ~ Redone[]
Same as above. 04:34, January 20, 2018 (UTC)
Try smudging the mottles a bit more to match the MC? (not sure if you have to do that though, but I think it might look better regardless) ~ Cheryl Champagne Problems 🍷 (06:09,1/22/2018)
Re-uploaded. 21:01, January 22, 2018 (UTC)
The mottles on the kit are a bit darker i believe, they are also a bit more spaced out than on this i think? not sure how to explain, same goes for above —PatchfeatherHangar 18, I know too much 01:50, January 24, 2018 (UTC)
Re-uploaded. 03:04, January 26, 2018 (UTC)
24 hours.Stealthf🔥re ❤Warriors Forever!❤ 02:38, January 28, 2018 (UTC)
Mudfur (A) ~ Redone[]
OA was Berry. Vec I am Iron Man! 👾 14:27, January 25, 2018 (UTC)
Define the shading everywhere and expand it slightly? Also maybe add some to the belly? 02:51, January 26, 2018 (UTC)
- Adding onto my comment- there is some waste by the tail tip. I also think the earpink on <-- ear is leaking into the brown fur color itself. 02:53, January 26, 2018 (UTC)
Reups I've used this shading placement prior twice with no shading on the belly, and there wasn't any earpink leaking on the brown fur, though I did go through it with an eraser just in case. ^^ Vec I am Iron Man! 👾 15:55, January 26, 2018 (UTC)
24 hours.Stealthf🔥re ❤Warriors Forever!❤ 02:38, January 28, 2018 (UTC)
Mudfur (W) ~ Redone[]
OA was Moonflight, then Snowed and Stoneclaw. Preettty sure I need to smooth out the patches. Or make them smaller. Vec I am Iron Man! 👾 14:27, January 25, 2018 (UTC)
Yeah, I think you should do those. You could also lighten them slightly - Fox 僕たちはひとつの光 23:45,1/25/2018
Reups Vec I am Iron Man! 👾 15:55, January 26, 2018 (UTC)
24 hours.Stealthf🔥re ❤Warriors Forever!❤ 02:38, January 28, 2018 (UTC)
Whorlpaw (ki) - Redone[]
—PatchfeatherHangar 18, I know too much 14:39, January 25, 2018 (UTC)
I love this design. Could you define the shading everywhere? 18:12, January 25, 2018 (UTC)
Re-uploaded. i honestly thought he should look more whorly :P shading gray and white cats is also really annoying. —PatchfeatherHangar 18, I know too much 16:01, January 27, 2018 (UTC)
24 hours.Stealthf🔥re ❤Warriors Forever!❤ 06:43, January 30, 2018 (UTC)
Mudfur (MC) ~ Redone[]
Jayce said I can repost this. It was approved before I could tweak it again. 04:17, January 26, 2018 (UTC)
Hmm...perhaps smudging the mottles a bit to make them a bit more irregular shaped? They seem pretty circular right now. (also lovely image btw) Vec I am Iron Man! 👾 15:57, January 26, 2018 (UTC)
There's waste on the tail, and around the image.—Broken_Foot⭐StarClan's Prophet⭐ 00:12, 1/28/2018
Will be late re-uploading. Out of town and family issues. Jayce gave it an okay to leave it up without it being declined. 23:03, January 28, 2018 (UTC)
24 hours.Stealthf🔥re ❤Warriors Forever!❤ 06:33, January 31, 2018 (UTC)
Whorlpaw (ro) - Redone[]
—PatchfeatherHangar 18, I know too much 01:22, January 30, 2018 (UTC)
I love this design so much! Define the shading on the legs? 01:43, January 30, 2018 (UTC)
Re-uploaded. —PatchfeatherHangar 18, I know too much 14:05, January 31, 2018 (UTC)
24 hours.Stealthf🔥re ❤Warriors Forever!❤ 06:49, February 2, 2018 (UTC)
Leaf (TC) (Alt ES) - Redone[]
a boy who looks a lot better than he did before madie the wicked witch of the west
Our better boy's white belly is looking extremely red. Mind toning it down? (leaf now has a heart <3) ♥ Star red and black ♥<01:31, 2/01/2018>
reups better boy's belly is now much less red and his heart shines brighter because of it :^) madie the wicked witch of the west
24 hours.Stealthf🔥re ❤Warriors Forever!❤ 06:49, February 2, 2018 (UTC)
Mudfur (MC) ~ Redone[]
It got deleted somehow, so I am re-uploading if that's okay. 03:29, February 1, 2018 (UTC)
It's all good. Just a really minor request, though. Could you please crop the image to the lineart? I see excess space around the image. —Jayce(05:43, 2/01/2018)
Re-uploaded. 03:12, February 3, 2018 (UTC)
Archiving. —Jayce(03:21, 2/03/2018)
Lilyheart (Alt W) ~ Tweaked[]
DO NOT get me started on how long it took me to get the shading right. Also OA was Bbun and this was tweaked to match tail to kit. ♥ Star red and black ♥<00:14, 2/02/2018>
As I said on the other images, the tortie part of the tail should cover more than what you have it as. it covers almost all of the tail on the other images. —Jayce(12:13, 2/02/2018) ( 12:13, 2/02/2018 )
re-up This good? ♥ Star red and black ♥<05:15, 2/05/2018>
Archiving. —Jayce(02:47, 2/09/2018)
Feathertail (Alt Star) ~ Tweaked[]
Tweaked to match the apprentice. OA was Scarletwind ❅ SNOWFALL ❅ (05:12, 2/03/2018 )