Clovertail (Alt.Q) ~ Tweaked[]
That was too difficult to have been a tweak, but I'll call it that anyway. @.@ This alt happened when she was not pregnant or nursing, just staying in the nursery as a perma-queen. (ffff, hate perma-queens) Anyway, transferred Squirrelflight's lineart to this, minus the messed up ear and bushy tail. Comments? Shelly For a limited time only 15:11, February 13, 2012 (UTC)
It seems like the tip of her front paw farthest from us is cut off. And my comments on Squirrel's image apply here. Paleh Send help 15:22, February 13, 2012 (UTC)
Please see my counter-comments on Squirrel's image for why I'm not doing the second half of your request. Shelly For a limited time only 15:34, February 13, 2012 (UTC)
Re-uploaded. Shelly For a limited time only 21:37, February 14, 2012 (UTC)
Can you make the ear pink less orange? Silverhmm 22:28, February 14, 2012 (UTC)
Re-uploaded. Shelly For a limited time only 00:58, February 18, 2012 (UTC)
Can you define the earpink a little moar? o3o Rainlegs 01:52, February 18, 2012 (UTC)
Slightly lighten the tail shading to match the rest. ~DJCandyFun~ I do enjoy fun...8D01:58, Sat, Feb, 18, 2012
I can't. I didn't change it, and only Iceheart has the original file... Shelly For a limited time only 02:00, February 18, 2012 (UTC)
24 hours. —Jayce() 07:43, February 19, 2012 (UTC)
Graystripe (KP) ~ Redone[]
OA was Blackclaw. Needed to be redone for multiple reasons. Comments? —Jayce() 07:00, February 17, 2012 (UTC)
NOTE: Changes may or may not be showing. —Jayce() 07:05, February 17, 2012 (UTC)
Can you add the stripe to his head C: ʝΣηяѲ¢к The Aftermath Is Secondary 07:12, February 17, 2012 (UTC)
WTF. I KNOW I added that.... Odd... I'll go and see what's up.. GIMP's been spazzing recently. —Jayce() 07:13, February 17, 2012 (UTC)
Re-uploaded. —Jayce() 07:19, February 17, 2012 (UTC)
Blur the earpink. c: Sky Super pervetedness! 10:16, February 17, 2012 (UTC)
Define the shading on the collar? :3 Ivyheart =P 15:48, February 17, 2012 (UTC)
Re-uploaded. —Jayce() 17:33, February 17, 2012 (UTC)
Define the eyes. (You honeslty don't have to, but it would make the eyes pop out more.) Silverhmm 17:57, February 17, 2012 (UTC)
Nope. Colors come right from his apprentice image. —Jayce() 18:02, February 17, 2012 (UTC)
I don't mean that. I mean add values to the eyes. Silverhmm 18:04, February 17, 2012 (UTC)
You explain to me how I'm supposed to do that without changing the colors in his eyes. It's fine, imho. —Jayce() 18:07, February 17, 2012 (UTC)
If they are from the apprentice, then they are fine. But it looks like there is a pixel missing on the lineart of the right eye. ʝΣηяѲ¢к The Aftermath Is Secondary 20:23, February 17, 2012 (UTC)
That was my own stupid mistake. I moved the layer with the eyes and ear pink up one too many. Fixed it though. Re-uploaded. —Jayce() 20:32, February 17, 2012 (UTC)
Wait, I don't think he ever had a collar as a kittypet. Sky Super pervetedness! 01:03, February 18, 2012 (UTC)
Nope, no collar. I just checked. Re-uploaded and removed collar. The way his neck is comes right from Honeypaw's kittypet image, so I'm not changing that. —Jayce() 06:12, February 18, 2012 (UTC)
24 hours. —Jayce() 07:43, February 19, 2012 (UTC)
Billystorm (W) ~ Redone[]
Woo~ I got him. Needed to be redone 'couse the stripes were just squiggly lines. OA was Dawnleaf. Don't tell me to change the earpink, 'cause that's how it is on a ginger cat. Comments for improvement? Stoneclaw 02:25, February 17, 2012 (UTC)
<333 I love this! Lighten the white on the paws a little bit. RowanOnly One Can Judge... 02:26, February 17, 2012 (UTC)
Blur the earpink. I love you Stoney <33333333 ʝΣηяѲ¢к The Aftermath Is Secondary 02:27, February 17, 2012 (UTC)
Lovely. :) Can you make him look a bit more ginger than brown?? ☯ Mistypebble ☯ 02:28, February 17, 2012 (UTC)
I think the color is fine. The color ginger varies greatly. ʝΣηяѲ¢к The Aftermath Is Secondary 02:33, February 17, 2012 (UTC)
Reuploaded. Just to tell you, ginger isn't orange, it's orange-brownish. Please let changes show... Stoneclaw 03:09, February 17, 2012 (UTC)
This is amazing. Can you redden the earpink just a leeetle moar? :3 Rainlegs 03:40, February 17, 2012 (UTC)
Do ya mind lightening the image? I looks kinda dark, but I don't think it's the shading this time. Bloo!yo 05:23, February 17, 2012 (UTC)
I dunno if it's the shading or not, bur maybe try thinning the shading some? Sky Super pervetedness! 06:20, February 17, 2012 (UTC)
Can you make it a little more orange? Not a whole lot, but just so it doesn't look so brown. —Jayce() 18:09, February 17, 2012 (UTC)
Reuploaded. You might have to check the file history to see the changes. Stoneclaw 19:04, February 18, 2012 (UTC)
24 hours. Ivyheart =P 19:35, February 19, 2012 (UTC)
Ivytail (ShC) (W) - Redone[]
OA was Dawnleaf. Needed to match her queen. oblivionAudience? 04:36, February 18, 2012 (UTC)
This is...so amazing *o* Blur the earpink. ʝΣηяѲ¢к The Aftermath Is Secondary 04:45, February 18, 2012 (UTC)
Re-uploaded. Shut it, Mounty >.> oblivionAudience? 17:38, February 18, 2012 (UTC)
24 hours. Ivyheart =P 19:37, February 19, 2012 (UTC)
Darkstripe (Alt. W2) ~ Tweaked[]
OA was me, and I re-did the shading. —Jayce() 22:04, February 18, 2012 (UTC)
Looks great, Cloudy! Define the lower back, hauch, and rump shading. Stoneclaw 08:16, February 19, 2012 (UTC)
Re-uploaded. Better? —Jayce() 08:22, February 19, 2012 (UTC)
24 hours. —Jayce() 16:04, February 20, 2012 (UTC)
Dawnpelt (W) ~ Tweaked[]
Highlights needed to be blurred, but I re-did the shading. OA was Mousetalon with a redo by Oblivion and tweaks by Paleh, Scarlet and Icestorm. RowanOnly One Can Judge... 21:53, February 10, 2012 (UTC)
Waste inbetween the legs, m'dear, Fire. User:Twilightheart200/Sig 21:55, February 10, 2012 (UTC)
XD That always happens. Re-Uploaded. RowanOnly One Can Judge... 21:56, February 10, 2012 (UTC)
Define the shading. Sweetflower01:55 Sat Feb 11
Re-Uploaded. RowanOnly One Can Judge... 15:03, February 12, 2012 (UTC)
She's getting a bit gray from the shading. Could you saturate her more? Paleh Send help 16:24, February 13, 2012 (UTC)
Re-Uploaded. RowanOnly One Can Judge... 22:05, February 13, 2012 (UTC)
Her eyes look red? Maybe change it to a more orangy colour? Sky To Kill An Empire 02:47, February 14, 2012 (UTC)
XD I forgot about this. Re-Uploaded. RowanOnly One Can Judge... 22:54, February 14, 2012 (UTC)
Define the haunch and tail shading. Sky To Kill An Empire 00:54, February 15, 2012 (UTC)
Re-Uploaded. RowanOnly One Can Judge... 22:19, February 15, 2012 (UTC)
Make the shading consistant in shades. In some places it is dark, in some lighter, blend it all together. ~DJCandyFun~ I do enjoy fun...8D06:34, Thu, Feb, 16, 2012
'Re-Uploaded. I tried my best. :/ RowanOnly One Can Judge... 21:49, February 16, 2012 (UTC)
Waste between the leg and on her back. oblivionAudience? 00:50, February 17, 2012 (UTC)
Reuploaded. RowanOnly One Can Judge... 01:30, February 17, 2012 (UTC)
Can you blur the haunch shading a little more? This is pretty~ Rainlegs 01:53, February 18, 2012 (UTC)
Reuploaded - How's this? RowanOnly One Can Judge... 18:12, February 18, 2012 (UTC)
Lighten the haunch shading. Appledash the light of honor 18:40, February 18, 2012 (UTC)
Make her eyes more amber and less orange/red. --Leafstrike-- 23:13, February 18, 2012 (UTC)
Re-Uploaded. RowanOnly One Can Judge... 13:25, February 19, 2012 (UTC)
24 hours. —Jayce() 16:04, February 20, 2012 (UTC)
Minty (Q) - Tweaked[]
I tweaked the color shade to make it darker. Original Artist is Mumble I think, with a minor tweak by Ivy and a tweak/redo by Paleh. What do you think? ~DJCandyFun~ I do enjoy fun...8D23:12, Fri, Feb, 10, 2012
Purdy <3 Lighten the shading a tad. RowanOnly One Can Judge... 23:12, February 10, 2012 (UTC)
Looks great and all, but why'd it need to be darkened? She looked dark gray before, and she's not meant to be black.... Paleh Send help 04:30, February 11, 2012 (UTC)
Because the rogue and loner images didn't match. I added it to the tweak list. Check 'em out yourself. —Jayce() 04:37, February 11, 2012 (UTC)
EDIT: if anything, now it's too dark. Try taking the dodge tool over it once at about...20 %. —Jayce() 04:38, February 11, 2012 (UTC)
Reuploaded - Mmm... Not sure about this one. ~DJCandyFun~ I do enjoy fun...8D05:43, Mon, Feb, 13, 2012
I'm only gonna comment and say that the color matches now. Much better, DJ. —Jayce() 05:51, February 13, 2012 (UTC)
Define the tail and haunch shading. Sky To Kill An Empire 11:22, February 14, 2012 (UTC)
Blur the shading on the stomach. --Elork 13:58, February 14, 2012 (UTC)
Sorry to disagree Cloudy, but looking at them side by side, this is actually a bit light. Could you darken it, and darken the shading too? Paleh Send help 10:32, February 15, 2012 (UTC)
Reuploaded - Meh. ~DJCandyFun~ I do enjoy fun...8D06:17, Thu, Feb, 16, 2012
Define the shading. It seems a bit blotchy. :3 Atelda insert vague subtext here 04:59, February 17, 2012 (UTC)
REuploaded - ~DJCandyFun~ I do enjoy fun...8D02:02, Sat, Feb, 18, 2012
She looks a little brown, add more dark grey and less brown, if that makes any sense. --Leafstrike-- 20:11, February 18, 2012 (UTC)
Reuploaded - I think it's now too tinted blue/green. Should I change it back? ~DJCandyFun~ I do enjoy fun...8D03:26, Sun, Feb, 19, 2012
24 hours. —Jayce() 16:04, February 20, 2012 (UTC)
Tangle (E) ~ Redone[]
He was a triangular tabby. I wanted to try a classic tabby so until I get this one approved, I won'tt upload his rogue. OA was Night shine. Comments? Silverhmm 22:05, February 15, 2012 (UTC)
The stripes look blocky, he needs some stripes at the base of his tai;, on his arms, and on his face, and the color looks off *grumbles* This was gonna be my little secret lol Iveh Yo! 22:06, February 15, 2012 (UTC)
Reuploaded Sorry for stealing :P It's kinda hard to get the right color because the shading/highlights are super thick. Silverhmm 22:19, February 15, 2012 (UTC)
Can you make him more brown instead of golden, since that's the default tabby color? Paleh Send help 18:30, February 16, 2012 (UTC)
Reuploaded Silverhmm 23:40, February 16, 2012 (UTC)
Define the shading and blur the stripes a tad. ☯ Mistypebble ☯ 01:29, February 17, 2012 (UTC)
I think that a bit of smudging would fair better than blurring. Atelda insert vague subtext here 05:02, February 17, 2012 (UTC)
Reuploaded Wow...I atually like the smuding I did o3o. Silverhmm 17:56, February 17, 2012 (UTC)
This will be a little hard to explain, but the tail smudges look like they're only in the middle, could you add smudges near the tail lineart as well? I'm sorry if this is not a helpful explanation. --Leafstrike-- 20:26, February 17, 2012 (UTC)
Reuploaded That was perfectly understandable x3. Changes might not be showing yet. Silverhmm 12:25, February 18, 2012 (UTC)
Changes are showing. Silverhmm 18:36, February 18, 2012 (UTC)
Since the tail looks like it was smudged more than the rest of the body, smudge the body more? --Leafstrike-- 19:54, February 18, 2012 (UTC)
Would you ratehr have me do that, or remove a few smuge lines? I don't want to smudge it too much. Silverhmm 20:23, February 18, 2012 (UTC)
Do what Moon suggested. The smudges are fine in the center of the tail, but towards the lineart, it's not smudged at all. —Jayce() 20:50, February 18, 2012 (UTC)
Reuploaded Some of the smudges are hidden by the ruffled fur. Silverhmm 21:13, February 18, 2012 (UTC)
The tail looks more smudged than the body so smudge the body more. Blur the earpink too. Awesome job Silver ^^ ʝΣηяѲ¢к The Aftermath Is Secondary 21:48, February 18, 2012 (UTC)
Reuploaded Changes are not showing Silverhmm 22:06, February 18, 2012 (UTC)
24 hours. —Jayce() 16:04, February 20, 2012 (UTC)
Tawnypelt ~ (Alt.W2) ~ Tweaked[]
Highlights needed to be toned down. OA = Minstarr. RowanOnly One Can Judge... 02:21, February 17, 2012 (UTC)
Can you define the shading on the head? :3 ʝΣηяѲ¢к The Aftermath Is Secondary 02:22, February 17, 2012 (UTC)
Tone the highlights down a bit more ^^ ☯ Mistypebble ☯ 02:30, February 17, 2012 (UTC)
They're fine, actually, they should possibly be defined. Stoneclaw 02:31, February 17, 2012 (UTC)
Sorry, I didn't see the new verson. '-_- Can you define the shading? ☯ Mistypebble ☯ 22:12, February 17, 2012 (UTC)
Sorry I haven't worked on this. I'll do it now. RowanOnly One Can Judge... 18:14, February 18, 2012 (UTC)
Re-Uploaded. RowanOnly One Can Judge... 18:25, February 18, 2012 (UTC)
Define the shading some more. Stoneclaw 08:01, February 19, 2012 (UTC)
Re-Uploaded. RowanOnly One Can Judge... 13:28, February 19, 2012 (UTC)
24 hours. —Jayce() 16:04, February 20, 2012 (UTC)
Acorntail (D) - Redone[]
OA was Moonpelt. It was on the redo list. Comments? ~Scarletwind"Time to go home Flap." 23:52, February 17, 2012 (UTC)
Pretty Scarlet ^^ Define the tail shading. ʝΣηяѲ¢к The Aftermath Is Secondary 00:01, February 18, 2012 (UTC)
Re-uploaded ~Scarletwind"Time to go home Flap." 00:36, February 19, 2012 (UTC)
24 hours. —Jayce() 16:04, February 20, 2012 (UTC)
Yellowfang (W) - Tweaked[]
Just tweaked the muzzle and fixed the paw lineart (Mounty helped <3). OA's were Icestorm, Icy, and LeafstrikeAsakura. Comments? Twee♫ It's baaaackkk! ♫ 04:50, February 19, 2012 (UTC)
Can you fix the line on the muzzle so it doesn't go all the way across and looks more like her medicine cat image? ☯ Mistypebble ☯ 05:22, February 19, 2012 (UTC)
- Sorry, ignore that. xD ☯ Mistypebble ☯ 05:24, February 19, 2012 (UTC)
24 hours. —Jayce() 16:04, February 20, 2012 (UTC)
Mothwing (MC) ~ Redone[]
Look up a rippled tabby and this is what you get. Also, the previous version was just a modified triangle tabby. I picked the color off an image of gold, but I might be willing to darken it a bit. I got permission to redo, OA is Hiddensun with tweaks/redos by Mintstarr and Icestorm. Comments? Shelly For a limited time only 23:35, February 15, 2012 (UTC)
Blur the stripes. Nice. 8DDD Stoneclaw 00:13, February 16, 2012 (UTC)
Aww me wanted to do this :P Ah well, define the dapples and the earpink. ʝΣηяѲ¢к The Aftermath Is Secondary 00:14, February 16, 2012 (UTC)
So pretty. ^^ Define the shading. ☯ Mistypebble ☯ 01:27, February 17, 2012 (UTC)
Blur the haunch shading. She also looks a little green to me... --Leafstrike-- 20:24, February 17, 2012 (UTC)
Blur the earpink, and she does look a little green. WildfireMistystar's Omen! 00:43, February 18, 2012 (UTC)
Re-uploaded. I was a bit afraid of getting too close to ginger, but I think this works out. Shelly For a limited time only 00:58, February 18, 2012 (UTC)
Naaah, I think this looks perfectly golden. Could you blur the stripes just a tad though? They look very hard edged. Paleh Send help 12:23, February 18, 2012 (UTC)
Can you define the earpink? ☯ Mistypebble ☯ 14:23, February 18, 2012 (UTC)
Blur the shading Sky Super pervetedness! 14:39, February 18, 2012 (UTC)
Re-uploaded. Shelly For a limited time only 23:52, February 19, 2012 (UTC)
Could you lighten the colour a bit? Compared to her ginger alt, this isn't all that different. llwildheart™l00:09 Mon Feb 20
In that case it's the ginger alt that needs to be more ginger. This is gold. Sorry, Wildy. Shelly For a limited time only 00:39, February 20, 2012 (UTC)
24 hours. Beautiful <33 ʝΣηяѲ¢к The Aftermath Is Secondary 01:24, February 21, 2012 (UTC)
Yellowfang (MC) - Tweaked[]
OA was Shelly/Icestorm, and she needed her muzzle to match the apprentice charart. 8D Rainlegs 14:48, February 18, 2012 (UTC)
Make it looks more like her MC alt. Iveh Yo! 03:53, February 19, 2012 (UTC)
Reuploaded. Better? Rainlegs 18:11, February 19, 2012 (UTC)
24 Hours. ʝΣηяѲ¢к The Aftermath Is Secondary 02:32, February 21, 2012 (UTC)
Yellowfang (Ro) - Tweaked[]
Okay, I will admit, I like tweaking her face. :3 Anyway, OA's were: Grayravenpaw, Bramble added transparency, Ivy during a Tweak Week, and LeafstrikeAsakura redid it. I tweaked the muzzle and paw lineart....Comments? Twee♫ It's baaaackkk! ♫ 18:05, February 19, 2012 (UTC)
Lol no comments XD 24 hours. ʝΣηяѲ¢к The Aftermath Is Secondary 02:32, February 21, 2012 (UTC)
Ashfoot (D) ~ Redone[]
OA is probably Sandy...and it needed to be redone. See the tweak page for reasons. You may have to check the file history for the changes. —Jayce() 03:32, February 20, 2012 (UTC)
Define the haunch shading a tad. c: Sky Everyone likez teh cats 06:26, February 20, 2012 (UTC)
Re-uploaded. —Jayce() 06:28, February 20, 2012 (UTC)
There's waste around the tail tip, where the tail connects to the haunch, and then where the two back paws are. :3 Twee♫ It's baaaackkk! ♫ 06:49, February 20, 2012 (UTC)
Re-uploaded. I'd forgotten to clear the waste. xD —Jayce() 16:11, February 20, 2012 (UTC)
Still waste in between the paws. :3 User:Maplefern/Sig 17:48, February 20, 2012 (UTC)
Re-uploaded. —Jayce() 20:04, February 20, 2012 (UTC)
24 hours. ʝΣηяѲ¢к The Aftermath Is Secondary 00:25, February 22, 2012 (UTC)
Ashfoot (W) ~ Redone[]
OA is Darkhallows (I think), and it needs to match the deputy image. —Jayce() 16:19, February 20, 2012 (UTC)
Again, check the file history. =P —Jayce() 16:19, February 20, 2012 (UTC)
I luff this! <3 Define the haunch "highlight". Also, fixed the heading for you. XD RowanOnly One Can Judge... 17:04, February 20, 2012 (UTC)
Re-uploaded. Thanks, Rowan. I was in a hurry this morning. xD —Jayce() 20:04, February 20, 2012 (UTC)
24 hours. ʝΣηяѲ¢к The Aftermath Is Secondary 00:25, February 22, 2012 (UTC)
Ivytail (ShC) (A) - Redone[]
The last of her images 8D OA was Tawny, with a redo with the new blank by me. A bunch of people watched this on join.me also. Comments? oblivionAudience? 17:41, February 20, 2012 (UTC)
Lol no comments 24 hours <33 ʝΣηяѲ¢к The Aftermath Is Secondary 00:25, February 22, 2012 (UTC)
Petalfall (D) ~ Redone[]
Wee hee 8DD Before any one says anything about the style, hear me out. I looked up rose pink off the internet and used those colors. Then I looked up cream cats and tried to find cats of a similar color. The ones I found were tabby/spotted like this. OA was Bramble and was redone/tweaked by mintstarr. Comments? ʝΣηяѲ¢к The Aftermath Is Secondary 05:40, February 17, 2012 (UTC)
Sooooooooooo pretteh! Blur the edges of the shading a tad though. *steals* —Jayce() 05:44, February 17, 2012 (UTC)
Pretty! <3 Sorry...but I looked for rose-creamy colored cats on the internet, and I didn't find any spotted tabbies. Plus, that isn't a spotted tabby, those are just some markings. Unless you can give the link to where you found spotted tabby rose-cream colored cats, then I'd suggest removing the markings. Stoneclaw 05:51, February 17, 2012 (UTC)
Re-uploaded The one I went off of are here and here . ʝΣηяѲ¢к The Aftermath Is Secondary 06:31, February 17, 2012 (UTC)
Well in realistically all cream cats have tabby stripes I think, most are just really faint. Those ones are just more visible than most. So I don't think you really have to put them on. But if you do decide to keep them, blur them a bit. Paleh Send help 14:59, February 17, 2012 (UTC)
Re-uploaded It depends on the shade if they have stripes or not. And shade is artists choice. ʝΣηяѲ¢к The Aftermath Is Secondary 16:11, February 17, 2012 (UTC)
Lighten the shading tons, unless it's ment to be like that. <3333333 ~DJCandyFun~ I do enjoy fun...8D02:07, Sat, Feb, 18, 2012
Blur the shadin. c: Sky Super pervetedness! 04:13, February 18, 2012 (UTC)
Re-uploaded Gosh darnit Sky it was close to 24 hours XD ʝΣηяѲ¢к The Aftermath Is Secondary 04:54, February 18, 2012 (UTC)
Sorry, but this isn't a proper spotted tabby. You'll have to change that, because I can't tell if it's a tabby or not like this. Stoneclaw 03:25, February 19, 2012 (UTC)
Re-uploaded I re-did the pelt since the stripes and base had to be on the same layer. You might need to look in the file history. ʝΣηяѲ¢к The Aftermath Is Secondary 06:50, February 19, 2012 (UTC)
Heres a stupid suggestion I have! How about making the stripes kinda fade out in some places(like on the chest)? I dunno, maybe not, Im just throwing out ideas since in the pictures the stripes are really light and kinda faded. Uh, sorry if I can't explain it right. Bloo!yo 07:53, February 19, 2012 (UTC)
Thin out the haunch shading. Looks great, Mounty! Stoneclaw 09:09, February 19, 2012 (UTC)
Make the earpink a tad smaler. --Elork 17:07, February 19, 2012 (UTC)
Re-uploaded Thank you Stoney ^^ I gave her a cream chest, I think that's what you meant Bloo. ʝΣηяѲ¢к The Aftermath Is Secondary 17:11, February 19, 2012 (UTC)
Lighten the shading a bit ☾~Pouncey~☽
21:44, February 19, 2012 (UTC)
Re-uploaded ʝΣηяѲ¢к The Aftermath Is Secondary 22:13, February 19, 2012 (UTC)
I hate to archive my own image but it's been two days x.x ʝΣηяѲ¢к The Aftermath Is Secondary 02:57, February 22, 2012 (UTC)
Violet (R) ~ Redone[]
OA is Ashshadow, needed to match others. Comments? WildfireMistystar's Omen! 00:39, February 18, 2012 (UTC)
The stripes look less smudged on the other one. Also, it looks like something is running down from her ear. Twee♫ It's baaaackkk! ♫ 20:56, February 18, 2012 (UTC)
Reuploaded WildfireMistystar's Omen! 22:28, February 18, 2012 (UTC)
Define the stripes. Pretty! 8D Stoneclaw 09:12, February 19, 2012 (UTC)
How can I do that without redoing the stripes? WildfireMistystar's Omen! 16:09, February 20, 2012 (UTC)
I think lightening the base coat might make the stripes more visible. ʝΣηяѲ¢к The Aftermath Is Secondary 16:52, February 20, 2012 (UTC)
Reuploaded WildfireMistystar's Omen! 18:22, February 20, 2012 (UTC)
24hrs w/o comments WildfireMistystar's Omen! 01:44, February 22, 2012 (UTC)
Ah Whoops sorry XD ʝΣηяѲ¢к The Aftermath Is Secondary 02:57, February 22, 2012 (UTC)
Berrynose (W) ~ Tweaked[]
Well, I haven't done a tweak in a while, so I thought I would just do a basic one. ;P So his shading was blotchy and needed to be redone, and it needed to be darker. ☯ Mistypebble ☯ 04:26, February 19, 2012 (UTC)
Maybe darken the shading a tad? Twee♫ It's baaaackkk! ♫ 04:28, February 19, 2012 (UTC)
Who's the OA? -winkwinknudgenudge- oblivionAudience? 04:30, February 19, 2012 (UTC)
...you just ripped the ear. Enlarge the earpink. --Leafstrike-- 04:51, February 19, 2012 (UTC)
I'm sorry? Just because I ripped the ear doesn't mean I'm not entitled to some credit. And for the record, I also blurred the shading. Besides, I wasn't saying it just for myself, but for the actual OA of the image. oblivionAudience? 04:53, February 19, 2012 (UTC)
Reuploaded Anyways, darkened the shading and enlarged the earpink. OA was Sandstar12 with tweaks made by Bramble and Oblivion. ^^ ☯ Mistypebble ☯ 05:06, February 19, 2012 (UTC)
Define haunch shading? c: Sky Everyone likez teh cats 05:11, February 19, 2012 (UTC)
Reuploaded Defined the haunch shading. ☯ Mistypebble ☯ 20:42, February 19, 2012 (UTC)
24 hours. ʝΣηяѲ¢к The Aftermath Is Secondary 02:57, February 22, 2012 (UTC)
Mothwing (W) ~ Redone[]
Well, that was simple. It matches the MC image exactly, so... Shelly For a limited time only 02:01, February 21, 2012 (UTC)
24 hours. ʝΣηяѲ¢к The Aftermath Is Secondary 02:57, February 22, 2012 (UTC)
Brook (KM) ~ Redone[]
Well... I was the OA, and she needed to match her prey hunter. Comments? Rainlegs 04:21, February 17, 2012 (UTC)
-wait- She needs mud. I'll add that in. Rainlegs 04:21, February 17, 2012 (UTC)
And a torn ear. I fail. Rainlegs 04:23, February 17, 2012 (UTC)
Thin out the stripes a bit, Leggo. —Jayce() 19:22, February 17, 2012 (UTC)
They should be more pointy as well. And the stripes on her tail go all the way around. oblivionAudience? 20:20, February 17, 2012 (UTC)
Reuploaded. I just re-did her. I'm never making a charart at nine at night again. xD Rainlegs 16:15, February 18, 2012 (UTC)
Add some mud :3 ʝΣηяѲ¢к The Aftermath Is Secondary 16:22, February 18, 2012 (UTC)
Reuploaded. I hate mud. x.x Rainlegs 20:40, February 18, 2012 (UTC)
Make the mud a tad less greenish, 'cause it looks kinda green right now. Stoneclaw 09:06, February 19, 2012 (UTC)
Can you possibly define where the mud is? I don't know if it's just me but I can't really see it o3o User:.Moonehpaw/Sig 02:05, February 20, 2012 (UTC)
Enlarge the earpink a tad. Sky Everyone likez teh cats 02:33, February 20, 2012 (UTC)
Reuploaded. I basically just re-did the mud. x.x Rainlegs 04:57, February 21, 2012 (UTC)
24 hours. —Jayce() 06:09, February 22, 2012 (UTC)
Brightflower (Q) - Redone[]
Okay, this was on the redo list for the shading, blotchy highlights, and the patches could be more realistic. OA was Mousetalon. Comments? User:Twilightheart200/Sig 23:31, February 13, 2012 (UTC)
<3 this Twi! Just lighten up the white a little. RowanOnly One Can Judge... 23:40, February 13, 2012 (UTC)
Could you make the patches a little less wildly smeared? It looks a bit strange for a short furred cat. Shelly For a limited time only 23:42, February 13, 2012 (UTC)
Twi, are you still working on this? —Jayce() 19:21, February 17, 2012 (UTC)
Eh, can't. My computer's being stupid and it erased half of my files. Twee♫ It's baaaackkk! ♫ 04:59, February 18, 2012 (UTC)
I'll take over, then. --Leafstrike-- 17:02, February 18, 2012 (UTC)
Reuploaded I redid her again. --Leafstrike-- 17:33, February 18, 2012 (UTC)
Define the shading; she looks a bit flat. Silverhmm 21:09, February 18, 2012 (UTC)
Reuploaded --Leafstrike-- 22:54, February 18, 2012 (UTC)
Blur the belly shading a smidge. This is pretty<3 Rainlegs 22:47, February 19, 2012 (UTC)
Reuploaded :) --Leafstrike-- 18:03, February 21, 2012 (UTC)
24 hours ~Scarletwind"Time to go home Flap." 03:13, February 23, 2012 (UTC)
Littlecloud (MC) ~ Redone[]
Check the approved tweak page for the reasons as to why it needed to be done. I'm not sure who the OA was...but it was tweaked by Nightshine, Flamingomom3 and Icebrain. —Jayce() 03:16, February 22, 2012 (UTC)
24 hours. —Jayce() 17:31, February 23, 2012 (UTC)
Tangle (Ro) ~ Redone[]
I like the elder so much better >_> . OAs were Nightshine and Sandstar12. Comments? Silverhmm 19:36, February 20, 2012 (UTC)
Define the shading. ♫Purplemoon♪ I'm going skiing! In Colorado :3 19:54, February 20, 2012 (UTC)
Reuploaded Silverhmm 13:15, February 22, 2012 (UTC)
24 hours. —Jayce() 17:31, February 23, 2012 (UTC)
Ashfoot (Q) ~ Redone[]
This is the last of Ashfoot's images to be redone. The reasons are the same as the others. OA is Nightshine. —Jayce() 03:23, February 22, 2012 (UTC)
Blur the shading. c: Sky Promises, promises 13:46, February 22, 2012 (UTC)
Re-uploaded. —Jayce() 22:29, February 22, 2012 (UTC)
24 hours. —Jayce() 23:43, February 23, 2012 (UTC)
Mothwing (MCA) ~ Redone[]
Redone to match her new images. Comments? Shelly For a limited time only 02:32, February 21, 2012 (UTC)
Define the shiny part on the eyes <3 ʝΣηяѲ¢к The Aftermath Is Secondary 02:33, February 21, 2012 (UTC)
You re-uploaded but you never said you did XD and no one has critiqued so I'll archive now since it's been long past 24 hours. ʝΣηяѲ¢к The Aftermath Is Secondary 02:02, February 24, 2012 (UTC)
Frecklewish (A) - Redone[]
This is the exact same as the MCA except without the herbs. Not really anything to change.... *shrugs* OA was Scarlet.
Paleh
Send help 16:17, February 18, 2012 (UTC)
It's Frecklewish, not Fracklewish, so I fixed that for you. I agree, there's nothing else to change. --Leafstrike-- 17:05, February 18, 2012 (UTC)
Er...It's minor, but can you smudge the pelt into the earpink? Stoneclaw 06:12, February 20, 2012 (UTC)
Sorry, but I'd rather not. If it was fine on the MCA it should be fine on here. Sorry. Paleh Send help 20:09, February 22, 2012 (UTC)
24 hours. ʝΣηяѲ¢к The Aftermath Is Secondary 02:02, February 24, 2012 (UTC)
Littlecloud (W) ~ Redone[]
Same exact thing as the MC, so there shouldn't be any comments.... OA is Birchy. —Jayce() 17:35, February 23, 2012 (UTC)
24 hours. —Jayce() 18:57, February 24, 2012 (UTC)
Brokenstar (E) - Redone[]
OA was me, with tweaks by Moonflight and Sparklestream. Needed to match other charats. Comments? ~Scarletwind"Time to go home Flap." 01:30, February 21, 2012 (UTC)
Is he supposed to have torn ears? o3o Sky Everyone likez teh cats 05:04, February 21, 2012 (UTC)
Define the ear pink. Silverhmm 12:00, February 21, 2012 (UTC)
Re-uploaded Sorry for the lack of work, I was in a really bad mood yesterday, so I wanted to play it safe. ~Scarletwind"Time to go home Flap." 23:48, February 22, 2012 (UTC)
24 hours. —Jayce() 18:57, February 24, 2012 (UTC)
Tadpole (Ki) ~ Tweaked[]
Shading needed to be redone and I centered the earpink as best as I could. OA = Flaminingmom. RowanOnly One Can Judge... 18:48, February 20, 2012 (UTC)
Could you possibly add highlights? He's kinda dark. ʝΣηяѲ¢к The Aftermath Is Secondary 18:53, February 20, 2012 (UTC)
Re-Uploaded. -Fail- RowanOnly One Can Judge... 19:01, February 20, 2012 (UTC)
Define the earpink a tad. Also fixed the title for you ^^. Silverhmm 19:37, February 20, 2012 (UTC)
Thanks ^.^. Re-Uploaded. RowanOnly One Can Judge... 17:54, February 21, 2012 (UTC)
There's waste around the ears. C: Twee♫ It's baaaackkk! ♫ 22:04, February 22, 2012 (UTC)
XD -derp- Re-Uploaded. RowanOnly One Can Judge... 22:26, February 22, 2012 (UTC)
24 hours. —Jayce() 18:57, February 24, 2012 (UTC)
Littlecloud (A) ~ Redone[]
OA is Dazzle, and needed to be redone to match his other images. Eh.. I really dun like how this one came out. _-_;; —Jayce() 23:48, February 23, 2012 (UTC)
Oh hush this is lovely <3 smudge the pelt into the earpink a bit more and define the shoulder shading. ʝΣηяѲ¢к The Aftermath Is Secondary 23:50, February 23, 2012 (UTC)
What Mounty said<3 ^^ Tone down the earpink a tad. RowanOnly One Can Judge... 23:52, February 23, 2012 (UTC)
Re-uploaded. Rowan, I'm not touching the ear pink colour. It comes from his warrior/MC. —Jayce() 23:53, February 23, 2012 (UTC)
24 hours. —Jayce() 00:03, February 25, 2012 (UTC)
Sharpclaw (SkC) (KP) - Redone[]
Needed to match other images. No comment. x.x OA was Paleclaw, I believe. :3 Sky Remembering the 22nd of February 00:42, February 22, 2012 (UTC)
Could you fix his eyes, so he doesn't look like he's dizzy? --Leafstrike-- 02:47, February 22, 2012 (UTC)
Re-uploaded. Better? xD Sky Remembering the 22nd of February 02:52, February 22, 2012 (UTC)
Use more than two colours, pretty please, and spread out the shades so there's more depth than a line of very light and very dark green. oblivionAudience? 03:19, February 22, 2012 (UTC)
He's still a bit cock-eyed. Shelly For a limited time only 04:54, February 23, 2012 (UTC)
Re-uploaded. This is what happens when I try to copy stuff. x.x Sky Promises, promises 23:21, February 23, 2012 (UTC)
24 hours. Sky Promises, promises 03:53, February 25, 2012 (UTC)
Littlecloud (MCA) ~ Redone[]
OA is Misty, and it needed to be redone to match his other images. Again, eww image is eww. —Jayce() 19:05, February 24, 2012 (UTC)
24 hours. —Jayce() 19:51, February 25, 2012 (UTC)
Tawnypelt (Ki) ~ Redone[]
It needed to be redone to match the other images. OA was Mosspath. Torties x.x *dies* You might need to check file history. Comments? ʝΣηяѲ¢к The Aftermath Is Secondary 03:27, February 22, 2012 (UTC)
Define the earpink. Stoneclaw 04:56, February 23, 2012 (UTC)
Re-uploaded ʝΣηяѲ¢к The Aftermath Is Secondary 04:59, February 23, 2012 (UTC)
Although it's minor, shrink the earpink? ~DJCandyFun~ I do enjoy fun...8D 07:06, 23, 02, 2012
Re-uploaded ʝΣηяѲ¢к The Aftermath Is Secondary 23:42, February 23, 2012 (UTC)
Archiving. llwildheart™l05:51 Sun Feb 26
Blackstar (Alt. L) - Redone[]
In all technicality, I went through the tweaking process with this, but nothing was really left unchanged in the end, so this'll be called redone. XD OA was Moonflight and shading needed to be redone.
Paleh
Send help 16:17, February 18, 2012 (UTC)
Blur the --> leg and haunch shading. --Leafstrike-- 17:05, February 18, 2012 (UTC)
It may just be my computer, but, he looks tinted blue...o3o <3 Twee♫ It's baaaackkk! ♫ 19:02, February 18, 2012 (UTC)
Reuploaded - Blurred it to the max. And yeah, the highlights are tinted blue cause white highlights look awful on black cats in my opinion. Paleh Send help 19:07, February 18, 2012 (UTC)
Can you make him tinted a little less blue and more black? Sorry, but it looks kinda odd. He's smexy otherwise, though<3 —Jayce() 20:59, February 18, 2012 (UTC)
I think the shading as it is looks fine, but I do think you could smudge the earpink into the ear a bit more. llwildheart™l01:04 Sun Feb 19
It's not fine...he looks blue. Black and blue are two totally different colors. If anything, just make it so the highlighted areas don't look dark blue. =P —Jayce() 01:07, February 19, 2012 (UTC)
Honestly, I think Paleh can choose if she wants to change it, but in the defense of blue-tinted highlights, they do look much better, and more natural than white highlights. It's not like the picture is Bluestar's kind of blue :P llwildheart™l01:15 Sun Feb 19
Reuploaded - Well since I still don't wanna put white highlights on him, I desaturated them a bit, but they're still blue tinted. Is this better? Paleh Send help 03:36, February 19, 2012 (UTC)
Oh, much better. If he were any bluer, I'd have voted to have his name changed to Bluestar. XDDDD —Jayce() 03:38, February 19, 2012 (UTC)
Could you smudge the pelt more into the ear? llwildheart™l03:59 Sun Feb 19
Can you define the tail shading a bit moar C: ʝΣηяѲ¢к The Aftermath Is Secondary 16:55, February 20, 2012 (UTC)
Reuploaded - Done. Paleh Send help 19:03, February 24, 2012 (UTC)
Archiving. llwildheart™l06:03 Sun Feb 26
Brightsky (W) - Redone[]
Alright... original artist was Nightflower, with a couple of tweaks by Elorisa, and then Scarletwind taking over, and the stripes were unrealistic. Comments? --Leafstrike-- 18:40, February 21, 2012 (UTC)
Blur the neck shading. Sky Promises, promises 13:21, February 22, 2012 (UTC)
Blur the earpink, and can you change back the foot lineart? Elork 13:35, February 22, 2012 (UTC)
Reuploaded Is the paw lineart thick enough? --Leafstrike-- 18:33, February 22, 2012 (UTC)
It's not about it being thick, it's about it not being changed at all. Just paste the old lineart over it, unedited. And blur the ginger on the ear, and possibly get rid of the patch on the whiskers, or make it bigger. It seems a bit out of place since it's just inbetween the whiskers. Paleh Send help 20:06, February 22, 2012 (UTC)
It looks like part of the patch on the head (that goes over the eye) isn't smudged.. Can you fix that? ☯ Mistypebble ☯ 22:23, February 22, 2012 (UTC)
Reuploaded I utterly loathe the paw lineart. It looks too blocky. --Leafstrike-- 00:28, February 23, 2012 (UTC)
The ginger on the ear still seems a bit hard edged (it's probably just cause the earpink's over it, but it still needs to be fixed) and the paw lineart's not the same. While I agree it's a bit blocky, you can't just change it whenever you like. Suggest it to be tweaked if it bothers you that much, but you're not allowed to just change it on a whim. Please fix it. Paleh Send help 18:36, February 23, 2012 (UTC)
Reuploaded I believe it looked like this. --Leafstrike-- 21:18, February 23, 2012 (UTC)
Archiving. llwildheart™l06:07 Sun Feb 26
Lionheart (D) ~ Redone[]
OA was Icecloud33 and the amazing lineart was done by Loonie Triangle tabby and blotchy shading. Comments? ʝΣηяѲ¢к The Aftermath Is Secondary 02:49, February 24, 2012 (UTC)
Could you make the stripes on the ruff curve to add depth? Shelly For a limited time only 03:12, February 24, 2012 (UTC)
Re-uploaded ʝΣηяѲ¢к The Aftermath Is Secondary 03:31, February 24, 2012 (UTC)
Make him a bit browner and paler? c: Sky Promises, promises 04:51, February 24, 2012 (UTC)
Re-uploaded Well finally this thing re-uploads >.< *mountainranges* ʝΣηяѲ¢к The Aftermath Is Secondary 05:53, February 24, 2012 (UTC)
A stripe can be seen from underneath the ear, so fix that. ~DJCandyFun~ I do enjoy fun...8D 00:10, 25, 02, 2012
Re-uploaded ʝΣηяѲ¢к The Aftermath Is Secondary 00:21, February 25, 2012 (UTC)
Blur the shading a tad. >83 Sky Promises, promises 01:18, February 25, 2012 (UTC)
Re-uploaded ʝΣηяѲ¢к The Aftermath Is Secondary 01:31, February 25, 2012 (UTC)
24 hours Leafy ♫Absolute maniac♪ 20:46, February 26, 2012 (UTC)
Feathertail (W) - Tweaked[]
I blurred and thickened stripes, OA is Sandstar12, redo by Icestorm123. I like this one. Leafy ♫Absolute maniac♪,13:17,February 24,2012 (UTC)
Ahhh~! This is so pretty <3. Make the earpink more red and less gray. Elork 13:36, February 24, 2012 (UTC)
Reuploaded Leafy ♫Absolute maniac♪,15:44,February 24,2012 (UTC)
<3 Define the haunch shading. RowanOnly One Can Judge... 17:18, February 24, 2012 (UTC)
Reuploaded Leafy ♫Absolute maniac♪,10:26,February 25,2012 (UTC)
24 hours Leafy ♫Absolute maniac♪ 20:49, February 26, 2012 (UTC)
Sharpclaw (W) ~ Redone[]
Hope this is okay.. It was very fun making him. xD And thank you for Stoney who let me borrow the xcf. file ^^ Had to be redone to match deputy image, and since it was a triangular tabby. OA was Goldenpaw, I think... ☯ Mistypebble ☯ 20:28, February 19, 2012 (UTC)
Very pretty Misty ^^ Enlarge the earpink a little. ʝΣηяѲ¢к The Aftermath Is Secondary 20:29, February 19, 2012 (UTC)
Upload it under File:Sharpclaw (SkC).warrior.png Leafy ♫Absolute maniac♪,20:30,February 19,2012 (UTC)
Reuploaded Knew I got the file name wrong or something.. >.< Renamed it and enlarged the earpink. Thanks Mountain. ^^ ☯ Mistypebble ☯ 20:36, February 19, 2012 (UTC)
I think you should darken the shading, it looks a little light next to the deputy image. Sky Everyone likez teh cats 02:32, February 20, 2012 (UTC)
Reuploaded Sorry for such a late upload.. x.x Darkened the shading. ☯ Mistypebble ☯ 22:21, February 22, 2012 (UTC)
Slightly shrink the earpink. :3 ~DJCandyFun~ I do enjoy fun...8D 06:58, 23, 02, 2012
Reuploaded Sorry for the late upload, I was away... ☯ Mistypebble ☯ 20:56, February 25, 2012 (UTC)
Improvement made. Paleh Send help 23:22, February 26, 2012 (UTC)
Mothwing (A) ~ Redone[]
Had to be redone to match the other images. Comments? Shelly For a limited time only 14:14, February 22, 2012 (UTC)
This is beautiful Shelly. Define the depth in the eyes. RowanOnly One Can Judge... 14:38, February 22, 2012 (UTC)
Blur the shading on the haunch and the tail. Fenris They know what I am; let them come, if they have the courage.
16:39, February 25, 2012 (UTC)
Re-uploaded. Shelly For a limited time only 18:28, February 25, 2012 (UTC)
Improvement made. Paleh Send help 23:22, February 26, 2012 (UTC)
Shrewfoot (W) - Redone[]
Her shading and stuff was blotchy. OA was Mousetalon. oblivionAudience? 12:08, February 24, 2012 (UTC)
Darken the paws, they look grey instead of black. --Leafstrike-- 20:36, February 24, 2012 (UTC)
Blur dat shading. Fenris They know what I am; let them come, if they have the courage.
01:46, February 25, 2012 (UTC)
Re-uploaded. oblivionAudience? 17:27, February 25, 2012 (UTC)
Improvement made. Paleh Send help 23:22, February 26, 2012 (UTC)
Larksong (E) - Redone[]
As Shelly said, she looked like play-doh. OA was Echomist, with a tweak by Dapplecloud33. —Jayce() 02:46, February 25, 2012 (UTC)
Can you smudge the tail fur to go in the direction actual fur would go? *steals Larky* <3 Rainlegs 02:48, February 25, 2012 (UTC)
Re-uploaded. Better? —Jayce() 02:54, February 25, 2012 (UTC)
Make the earpink more red; also center and enlargen it. Fenris They know what I am; let them come, if they have the courage. 16:39, February 25, 2012 (UTC)
Personally, I think the color's fine. However, I did try and center it. Re-uploaded. —Jayce() 18:56, February 25, 2012 (UTC)
It looks alright to me too, but make it slightly bigger? c: Sky Promises, promises 22:16, February 25, 2012 (UTC)
Re-uploaded. Better? —Jayce() 22:22, February 25, 2012 (UTC)
Improvement made. Paleh Send help 23:22, February 26, 2012 (UTC)
Feathertail (A) - Tweaked[]
I edited stripes at same way as warriors. OA is Maplefern and Mountainheart redoned it. Leafy ♫Absolute maniac♪,16:26,February 25,2012 (UTC)
My first image *cries* just kidding XD Darken the shading a little. ʝΣηяѲ¢к The Aftermath Is Secondary 16:35, February 25, 2012 (UTC)
Define the stripes on the front leg and face, they get lots in the pelt color. Fenris They know what I am; let them come, if they have the courage.
16:37, February 25, 2012 (UTC)
Reuploaded. Leafy ♫Absolute maniac♪,20:11,February 25,2012 (UTC)
Improvement made. Paleh Send help 23:22, February 26, 2012 (UTC)
Shimmerpelt (W) ~ Tweaked[]
I swear to StarClan this is tweaked. It was a pain in the tush. Rainly can vouch for it, since she watched me on join.me. OA is Splook, and it needed the shading/highlights blended. —Jayce() 21:08, February 25, 2012 (UTC)
Wanna blur the tail shading/highlight/whatever? Sky Promises, promises 22:15, February 25, 2012 (UTC)
Re-uploaded. There's only so much I can do with this without re-doing it. xD —Jayce() 22:24, February 25, 2012 (UTC)
Improvement made. Paleh Send help 23:22, February 26, 2012 (UTC)
Percy (Ro) - Redone[]
OA was Cherryfur123. I reserved this before the tweak/redo nominations thing passed. I feel that the stripes looked kind of odd and the shading was weak, and I got permission, but if enough don't agree, then just decline this because I don't want people fighting. Image not showing. Pattern is based off my real cat so I'm not changing the pattern. Iveh Yo! 02:07, February 21, 2012 (UTC)
Hickory!!! <33 Can you make the earpink more red? :3 You're fine Ivy. ʝΣηяѲ¢к The Aftermath Is Secondary 02:09, February 21, 2012 (UTC)
Can you define the shading a little? Sky Remembering the 22nd of February 12:10, February 21, 2012 (UTC)
Reuploaded You got it right, that's who this is ^^ Iveh Yo! 05:08, February 23, 2012 (UTC)
Blur the earpink where it's smudged. ~DJCandyFun~ I do enjoy fun...8D 07:01, 23, 02, 2012
Hickory!! <3 You finally made him! ^^ Anyways, blur the earpink all around actually, and define the shading a bit. Paleh Send help 18:37, February 23, 2012 (UTC)
Reuploaded :) Iveh Yo! 23:55, February 23, 2012 (UTC)
Erase the waste :P gorgeous, Ivy. llwildheart™l01:54 Fri Feb 24
Reuploaded Iveh Yo! 15:49, February 25, 2012 (UTC)
I dunno if the changes aren't showing or what, but there's still waste under the belly and tail. llwildheart™l06:05 Sun Feb 26
I don't think changes are showing. I fixed it. Iveh Yo! 00:53, February 27, 2012 (UTC)