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Tigerheart (Alt. W) ~ Redone
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Needed to be redone because of unrealistic stripes. Changes are not showing. OA = The wonderful Paleh. RowanOnly One Can Judge... 21:37, March 1, 2012 (UTC)
Doesn't this need to match the alt apprentice? If so, the color's off, and some of the stripes don't match. —Garrus ღ 21:42, March 1, 2012 (UTC)
Since his stripe pattern is directly specified in the books, the stripes on the alts should match in my opinion. Please try to copy those. Also, the ear pink is way too red and the shading is blotchy and oddly placed... sorry. Shelly For a limited time only 22:03, March 1, 2012 (UTC)
Sorry guys, I have to withdraw this, I have to find out some personal things, and I will probably have smaller time to be online. RowanOnly One Can Judge... 02:48, March 4, 2012 (UTC)
I can take over C: Weylon Distinctly Unique. 21:26, March 4, 2012 (UTC)
I attempted to match it to the warrior image's pattern. Don't look at it, it's ugly D: Weylon Distinctly Unique. 22:01, March 4, 2012 (UTC)
Lighten the shading. <3 Lovely Elo MΘυητɣ Sucks to your Ass-mar 22:03 Sun Mar 4
Blur it, too. —Garrus ღ 22:32, March 5, 2012 (UTC)
The stripes don't really match all that well. It seems like the alt apprentice's stripes were based off the normal warrior image, so using that as a ref on what it'd look like from this angle might help. Paleggy Ship it 15:27, March 7, 2012 (UTC)
I tried to match the warrior; I didn't suceed. Withdrawing because I don't want to get frustrated Dx Weylon Distinctly Unique. 20:59, March 7, 2012 (UTC)
I'll take over. Awesomeness STONEY Fantasticness 00:54, March 8, 2012 (UTC)
Reuploaded. Awesomeness STONEY Fantasticness 19:06, March 10, 2012 (UTC)
Smudge the stripes, and make him more golden, less pale yellow. WildfireMistystar's Omen! 00:09, March 12, 2012 (UTC)
What do you mean, 'smudge the stripes'? I can't 'cause I'm taking the stripes of the apprentice image, and not all tabby stripes need smudging. Also, I took the color from the apprentice, but I'll try to change it. Awesomeness STONEY Fantasticness 00:13, March 12, 2012 (UTC)
I think the colour is fine, but blur the tail shading and make the earpink a bit paler. <3 Sky Molto bene 00:25, March 12, 2012 (UTC)
Oh sorry didn't know this was off of another image, but I think the pelt should be a little darker. WildfireMistystar's Omen! 00:36, March 12, 2012 (UTC)
The pelt color's fine, Wild. Blur the rest of the shading, along with what Trolly said. —Garrus ღ 00:39, March 12, 2012 (UTC)
Maybe make the stripes more golden? Dazzle~♪ 07:57, March 12, 2012 (UTC)
Reuploaded. Blurred the shading. Look, I'm not changing the color of anything because I got it from the apprentice. Awesomeness STONEY Fantasticness 18:58, March 13, 2012 (UTC)
Pretty ;3 Can you fix the light source on the tail so that it matches the body? Just ignore if wrong xD 99.63.189.210 22:56, March 13, 2012 (UTC)
- Mistypebble ^ (not signed in -.-)
It does match...? Correct me if I'm wrong. Awesomeness STONEY Fantasticness 01:45, March 15, 2012 (UTC)
24 hours. --Awesomeness STONEY Fantasticness 04:29, March 16, 2012 (UTC)
Cloudberry (Q) - Redone Edit
Redone to match warrior image. OA was Echomist with (minor) tweaks by Bramble and Ivy. ~DJCandyFun~ I do enjoy fun...8D 00:56, 11, 03, 2012
Blur the flank shading and enlarge the earpink a tad. MΘυητɣ Sucks to your Ass-mar 00:58 Sun Mar 11
Blur the tail shadin~ Sky Molto bene 02:25, March 11, 2012 (UTC)
Make the earpink a tad more desturated? Dazzle~♪ 06:11, March 11, 2012 (UTC)
Reuploaded - ~DJCandyFun~ I do enjoy fun...8D 01:19, 12, 03, 2012
Blur the belly shading just a tad. ☯ Mistypebble ☯ 19:39, March 12, 2012 (UTC)
Reuploaded - ~DJCandyFun~ I do enjoy fun...8D 06:19, 15, 03, 2012
24 hours. —Garrus ღ 04:39, March 16, 2012 (UTC)
Redclaw (W) - Redone Edit
OA was Leafstrike, and the stripes looked painted on. No offense, Leaf. =/ —Garrus ღ 19:28, March 15, 2012 (UTC)
I wouldn't take offense, that was quite old anyways, from my whiny days. Define the earpink. --Leafstrike-- 19:42, March 15, 2012 (UTC)
Re-uploaded. —Garrus ღ 19:53, March 15, 2012 (UTC)
24 hours. —Garrus ღ 21:14, March 16, 2012 (UTC)
Mintfur (RC) (W) ~ RedoneEdit
OA was Sandstar and was tweaked by Leafstrike. Comments? MΘυητɣ Sucks to your Ass-mar 23:47 Tue Mar 13
Blur dat earpink a tad. Finally realised he's s tom? *innocent face* Sky Exterminate! 00:11, March 14, 2012 (UTC)
Re-uploaded Shut it >.< MΘυητɣ Sucks to your Ass-mar 00:17 Wed Mar 14
He's originaly a gray tabby, and he looks like a silver tabby right now...so...I suggest lightening the stripes a tad or darkening the main pelt color, and also, try having the opacity of the white chest a tad lower. <333 Awesomeness STONEY Fantasticness 05:21, March 14, 2012 (UTC)
Re-uploaded MΘυητɣ Sucks to your Ass-mar 05:28 Wed Mar 14
Blur those stripes a tiny bit? xD That gray part on his eye makes him look female. <3 Dazzle~♪ 08:38, March 14, 2012 (UTC)
Message from Mounty since she can's get on currently: The stripes look fine. Awesomeness STONEY Fantasticness 23:22, March 15, 2012 (UTC)
24 hours. Awesomeness STONEY Fantasticness 21:37, March 16, 2012 (UTC)
Tigerheart (A) - Tweaked Edit
Tweaked the stripes to make them darker, so they could match the warrior/kit image. OA= Bramble, redone with the new blanks by me. Comments? ~DJCandyFun~ I do enjoy fun...8D 06:18, 15, 03, 2012
Way past 24 hours. MΘυητɣ Sucks to your Ass-mar 19:01 Sat Mar 17
Mudpuddle (D) ~ RedoneEdit
OA is Echomist, and it looked a little off. Go check the archives if you really wanna know. —Garrus ღ 18:03, March 16, 2012 (UTC)
Enlarge the earpink. This is EPIC. *o* Awesomeness STONEY Fantasticness 22:21, March 16, 2012 (UTC)
Re-uploaded. Thanks~ —Garrus ღ 22:25, March 16, 2012 (UTC)
24 hours. —Garrus ღ 22:38, March 17, 2012 (UTC)
Rubblepaw (A) ~ Tweaked Edit
OA was Moonleaf, and needed to be darkened, for he's actually black. =3 I'm not changing anything except the darkness of the pelt. Comments? Awesomeness STONEY Fantasticness 17:41, March 11, 2012 (UTC)
Define the lighter parts to make them more distinct :3 This is adorable~ Dazzle~♪ 07:53, March 12, 2012 (UTC)
What do you mean...? I just tweaked the image by brushing the burn tool over it, and I'm only changing that, as I've said above.^^ Awesomeness STONEY Fantasticness 19:03, March 13, 2012 (UTC)
Ugh, I fail; I meant the hind leg shading, not lighter part >.< *goes to hide in a corner* Dazzle~♪ 08:47, March 14, 2012 (UTC)
Reuploaded. Awesomeness STONEY Fantasticness 01:44, March 15, 2012 (UTC)
I think you should change the eye colour, black cats very rarely actually have blue eyes. --Leafstrike-- 19:39, March 15, 2012 (UTC)
Reuploaded. Awesomeness STONEY Fantasticness 21:23, March 16, 2012 (UTC)
24 hours. Awesomeness STONEY Fantasticness 22:51, March 17, 2012 (UTC)
Lionblaze (Ki) - TweakedEdit
Needed lighter paws xP OA was Sparrowsong with a redo and tweak by Mistystar and a redo from Stoneclaw. ☯ Mistypebble ☯ 19:36, March 15, 2012 (UTC)
Make the earpink stand out more from the pelt. :3 ~DJCandyFun~ I do enjoy fun...8D 02:10, 17, 03, 2012
I was only told to make the paws lighter, but I'll change the earpink if anyone else agrees. ^^ ☯ Mistypebble ☯ 15:38, March 17, 2012 (UTC)
24 hours. Awesomeness STONEY Fantasticness 22:51, March 17, 2012 (UTC)
Tawnyfur (W) ~ Redone Edit
OA was Sandy with a redo by me, and well...the shading was...flat and odd, plus the image wasn't actually golden-brown. File changes aren't showing yet. Comments? Awesomeness STONEY Fantasticness 04:38, March 16, 2012 (UTC)
Blur the neck shading just a tad. As I've said before, these colors flow a lot better than the other ones did. —Garrus ღ 04:46, March 16, 2012 (UTC)
Reuploaded. Yush, Cloudy. 8D --Awesomeness STONEY Fantasticness 17:29, March 16, 2012 (UTC)
24 hours. Awesomeness STONEY Fantasticness 22:51, March 17, 2012 (UTC)
Seville (KP) ~ RedoneEdit
Woo, the paw print is back~ Comments? Shelly For a limited time only 03:59, March 16, 2012 (UTC)
lol. Define the ear pink, please. —Garrus ღ 04:46, March 16, 2012 (UTC)
Return of the paw print~ Blur the stripes a little bit. Dazzle~♪
I love the paw print. Blur the ear pink a little. ♫Purplemoon♪ Happy St. Patricks Day! Good luck! 10:50, March 16, 2012 (UTC)
Re-uploaded. Because Mounty. Shelly For a limited time only 01:24, March 17, 2012 (UTC)
24 hours. MΘυητɣ Sucks to your Ass-mar 02:23 Sun Mar 18
Violet (KP) ~ RedoneEdit
Tonka!! <33 My kitty I love her so much 8DD OA was Nightfall with a twaek by Twi. Comments? MΘυητɣ Sucks to your Ass-mar 23:19 Mon Mar 12
Gaaah I forgot the stripes are supposed to be thin D8 *fixing that* MΘυητɣ Sucks to your Ass-mar 23:25 Mon Mar 12
Make her paws more white and less creamish. --Leafstrike-- 23:27, March 12, 2012 (UTC)
Re-uploaded MΘυητɣ Sucks to your Ass-mar 23:55 Mon Mar 12
I don't have any of the Ravenpaw's Path manga so I can't check, but was she shown with a collar? Paleggy Ship it 05:19, March 13, 2012 (UTC)
I don't know. Maybe she got a collar from her owners. MΘυητɣ Sucks to your Ass-mar 05:31 Tue Mar 13
I think the collar can stay. Make the paws a bit more white. Awesome as always, Mounty <3 Dazzle~♪ 08:26, March 13, 2012 (UTC)
Re-uploaded Thank you 8DD MΘυητɣ Sucks to your Ass-mar 20:52 Tue Mar 13
Kittypet gets a collar. I just checked. You're all good, Mountain. —Garrus ღ 00:14, March 14, 2012 (UTC)
Her left (our right) ear looks kinda... empty. Can you add a stripe or two to it? And the highlight on her left (our right) eye is hard to see. ♡Pouncey!♡ 23:29, March 14, 2012 (UTC)
Re-uploaded MΘυητɣ Sucks to your Ass-mar 02:12 Sat Mar 17
24 hours. MΘυητɣ Sucks to your Ass-mar 02:23 Sun Mar 18
Featherwhisker - TweakedEdit
He needed his whiskers longer. OA was Dawnfeather with a redo by Paleclaw. (I think it was a redo. And I hope no one had dibs on this.) Sky Exterminate! 06:36, March 17, 2012 (UTC)
There's waste at the far ear lol XP MΘυητɣ Sucks to your Ass-mar 06:38 Sat Mar 17
Re-uploaded. How the frik did that get there? o.o Sky Exterminate! 06:44, March 17, 2012 (UTC)
Make the bottom one droop a little more. WildfireMistystar's Omen! 01:00, March 18, 2012 (UTC)
I copied these off Sagewhisker, albeit a pixel or two longer. I'd rather not, unless someone else be agreeing. Sky Exterminate! 06:15, March 18, 2012 (UTC)
I think they look fine. MΘυητɣ Sucks to your Ass-mar 06:16 Sun Mar 18
24 hours. MΘυητɣ Sucks to your Ass-mar 16:49 Sun Mar 18
Leopardstar (L) ~ RedoneEdit
Ehehehehe. OA was Minnowclaw an was tweaked/redone by Mintstarr. Comments? MΘυητɣ Sucks to your Ass-mar 00:20 Sat Mar 17
Seriously, this is awesome! Smudge the earpink. WildfireMistystar's Omen! 00:22, March 17, 2012 (UTC)
Mounty...How do you expect me to match this awesome image? *o* Maybe add a patch or two to the forelegs or necks. Awesomeness STONEY Fantasticness 00:26, March 17, 2012 (UTC)
'kay, let's try this again, since my last comment killed the page. XD
Darken the shading just a teeny bit. This is epic. —Garrus ღ 00:29, March 17, 2012 (UTC)
Could you add some varied colors in the patches? Also, when I saw this, I did indeed spout some explicit language that I cannot repeat here. So... yeah. Good job. XD Shelly For a limited time only 00:46, March 17, 2012 (UTC)
Re-uploaded 8DDD Thank you all so much <333 @Shelly XDDDDD MΘυητɣ Sucks to your Ass-mar 01:20 Sat Mar 17
Ohmy. *dies* I think the nose could be more pinkish. *still dead* Dazzle~♪ 11:42, March 17, 2012 (UTC)
Honestly, I think it's fine. It seems to match pretty well. Awesomeness STONEY Fantasticness 16:03, March 17, 2012 (UTC)
Eh... Sorry, but Leopardstar doesn't have a pale chest :x ♡Pouncey!♡ 17:30, March 17, 2012 (UTC)
It's fine, Fallow. It gives her some variety. Plus, don't most tabbies have some form of a pale chest? —Garrus ღ 17:31, March 17, 2012 (UTC)
The pale chest is artist's choice. MΘυητɣ Sucks to your Ass-mar 17:32 Sat Mar 17
Mmhm. Blur the tail shading a bit. Sky Exterminate! 20:47, March 17, 2012 (UTC)
Re-uploaded This is as blurred as it will go. MΘυητɣ Sucks to your Ass-mar 21:05 Sat Mar 17
24 hours. Winning. MΘυητɣ Sucks to your Ass-mar 20:32 Sun Mar 18
Firekit (Ki) - Redone Edit
The original artist was Silvereye, and the colour, stripes, and earpink were off. Comments? --Leafstrike-- 03:14, March 17, 2012 (UTC)
Cute~ Could you make her a tad bit more orange? —Garrus ღ 03:21, March 17, 2012 (UTC)
Define the earpink as well, please. Shelly For a limited time only 03:35, March 17, 2012 (UTC)
Reuploaded --Leafstrike-- 04:02, March 17, 2012 (UTC)
Can you define the tail shading? <3 Awesomeness STONEY Fantasticness 06:50, March 17, 2012 (UTC)'
Blur the paw shading. Looks better than before :3. SilverThe Glee Project 10:41, March 17, 2012 (UTC)
Adorable <3 Can you define the shading in all? ☯ Mistypebble ☯ 15:22, March 17, 2012 (UTC)
Reuploaded --Leafstrike-- 19:28, March 17, 2012 (UTC)
24 hours. MΘυητɣ Sucks to your Ass-mar 22:52 Sun Mar 18
Ice (Alt Lo) - Tweaked Edit
OA was Leafstrike, he needed an underbite. I'm not sure if I should make his teeth longer or not or to define his jaw line some. That's what you critiquers are for :P Because something just doesn't look right. Iveh Yo! 02:43, March 14, 2012 (UTC)
Smooth out the chin lineart. Awesomeness STONEY Fantasticness 05:18, March 14, 2012 (UTC)
Also, it's your choice, but maybe make the white part of the eye smaller.WildfireMistystar's Omen! 15:34, March 14, 2012 (UTC)
Eye style is artist's choice, Wild. —Garrus ღ 06:20, March 15, 2012 (UTC)
Add shading to the ears. SilverThe Glee Project 10:47, March 15, 2012 (UTC)
Maybe sharpen the teeth? Dazzle~♪ 12:42, March 15, 2012 (UTC)
@Cloudy I know read the 2nd-4th words. Make the chin more rounded WildfireMistystar's Omen! 15:59, March 15, 2012 (UTC)
You have the teeth coming out of his nose... move them down to where the mouth would be, please. Shelly For a limited time only 16:17, March 17, 2012 (UTC)
Reuploaded Actually they were more down, Shelly. I fiddled around with the nose so you could see it better, though. Iveh Yo! 22:59, March 17, 2012 (UTC)
24 hours. MΘυητɣ Sucks to your Ass-mar 22:53 Sun Mar 18
Hollyleaf (Ki) ~ RedoneEdit
OA was me, and the shading was bad. I couldn't find the .xcf, so I had to redo it. —Garrus ღ 22:46, March 16, 2012 (UTC)
Lighten up the shading on the paws. <3 Awesomeness STONEY Fantasticness 23:39, March 16, 2012 (UTC)
Re-uploaded. —Garrus ღ 23:41, March 16, 2012 (UTC)
Blur and center the earpink? ☯ Mistypebble ☯ 15:40, March 17, 2012 (UTC)
Re-uploaded. The ear pink is centered, Misty. XD —Garrus ღ 15:44, March 17, 2012 (UTC)
Derp me and my poor eyesight xD Blur the chest shading x3 ☯ Mistypebble ☯ 21:11, March 17, 2012 (UTC)
Re-uploaded. —Garrus ღ 22:36, March 17, 2012 (UTC)
24 hours. MΘυητɣ Sucks to your Ass-mar 22:55 Sun Mar 18
Heavystep (A) ~ Redone Edit
Redone to match his new warrior and elder. I think this is the last one. OTL Breezewhisker 18:00, March 16, 2012 (UTC)
Define the pale underparts if you can, and define the earpink. Looks great, Breezy! *steals* Awesomeness STONEY Fantasticness 19:37, March 16, 2012 (UTC)
Reuploaded. Also lightened the shading a little make them more visible. Breezewhisker 23:37, March 17, 2012 (UTC)
24 hours, and Heavystep the undying has yet again, another matching image. XD —Garrus ღ 04:40, March 19, 2012 (UTC)
Billystorm (KP) ~ Redone Edit
Redone to match his warrior image. Why yes, that is a paw on the collar. Why? Because I take it to the next level. Comments? Shelly For a limited time only 02:05, March 12, 2012 (UTC)
Define the earpink? The paw is a neat little touch. <3 Sky Molto bene 02:10, March 12, 2012 (UTC)
The white on the tail looks pure white. Even if it is not, could you add a little shading to the furry part on the bottom? Iveh Yo! 02:41, March 12, 2012 (UTC)
As much as I love the adorable little white paw on it, his collar needs to be removed. He was shown without one, and as far as I know, was never mentioned with one. I don't see anything else wrong though, lovely job. <3 Paleggy Ship it 05:42, March 12, 2012 (UTC)
- I'd really rather keep the collar. It's possible he did what Cody did: slipped out of his collar whenever he went out. Shelly For a limited time only 05:44, March 12, 2012 (UTC)
And put it on again everytime he went back? I seriously doubt that. I'm sorry, but since we have proof he wasn't wearing a collar, I really do think it should be removed. Did it ever mention him with a collar anywhere? If not, it should be removed. Not all kittypets have to wear collars.... Paleggy Ship it 06:19, March 12, 2012 (UTC)
He was never specifically mentioned without one at his house, either. And yes, cats can put collars back on. I've seen it myself. I'm keeping it. Shelly For a limited time only 06:21, March 12, 2012 (UTC)
We have no proof of that though. However, we have proof of him not wearing a collar every single time we've seen him. Remove it please. Paleggy Ship it 06:25, March 12, 2012 (UTC)
Well, he was shown without it in both the graphic novel in the back of SD, as well as the SkyClan set...and in SD, he was shown coming right from his twoleg nest. Wouldn't that count for something? —Garrus ღ 06:27, March 12, 2012 (UTC)
Personally I think all kittypets should have collars even if they weren't shown with one on. It shows rank, not all bloodclan cats had teeth and claws yet they are shown with them. So I think the collar should be left on. WildfireMistystar's Omen! 16:12, March 12, 2012 (UTC)
Also lighten the shading. WildfireMistystar's Omen! 17:15, March 12, 2012 (UTC)
Since when did all BloodClan cats get collars and claws added to them? They never did, only if they're shown. There's very few BloodClan cats who have images with collars. And why should kittypets (not saying specifically Billystorm, just responding to wildfire) have collars if they are shown without them? That makes no sense. The blank shows the rank just fine without a collar. Paleggy Ship it 17:32, March 12, 2012 (UTC)
(sigh) Fine. Removed it. Re-uploaded. Shelly For a limited time only 18:14, March 12, 2012 (UTC)
In the guidelines it says, "All BloodClan cats are depicted with modified rogue blanks, with toothed collars and dog's teeth sheathed on their claws." So they all should have collars. Also he should have one on warrior image to show he's a daylight warrior.WildfireMistystar's Omen! 18:44, March 12, 2012 (UTC)
Wildfire, this isn't the place to be having this conversation. Take it elsewhere. Shelly For a limited time only 18:47, March 12, 2012 (UTC)
Awesome Billystorm is awesome~<3 Blur the highlight/nonshaded part on his shoulder, and make that---> side of his neck curve inward a bit like a this> ( ♡Pouncey!♡ 19:10, March 12, 2012 (UTC)
It might just be my moniter, but he looks too brown, make him more ginger-y. ❄ Sunnyfrost ❄ 23:14, March 13, 2012 (UTC)
It's the shading, Sunny. He's ginger. —Garrus ღ 23:15, March 13, 2012 (UTC)
Re-uploaded. Shelly For a limited time only 23:49, March 13, 2012 (UTC)
HE's actually more ginger than his warrior. XD It's fine. But can you blur the earpink and define it (in color)? Paleggy Ship it 03:32, March 14, 2012 (UTC)
If I blue it more it mostly becomes a weird looking blob, and the color matches the warrior. However, if anyone else wants me to, I'll change the color. Shelly For a limited time only 06:04, March 14, 2012 (UTC)
Just blur it the tiniest bit? On a very low setting. It looks very hard edged right now.... I know what a pain getting it not to overblur is though. x.x Paleggy Ship it 09:32, March 14, 2012 (UTC)
Shelly? You still working on this? —Garrus ღ 11:11, March 18, 2012 (UTC)
Yeah yeah. (yawns) Re-uploaded. Shelly For a limited time only 15:07, March 18, 2012 (UTC)
24 hours. —Garrus ღ 17:58, March 19, 2012 (UTC)
Violet (Ki) ~ RedoneEdit
OA was Rainwhisper. Comments? MΘυητɣ Sucks to your Ass-mar 02:29 Sun Mar 18
Define the neck shading. Dazzle~♪ 14:09, March 18, 2012 (UTC)
Re-uploaded MΘυητɣ Sucks to your Ass-mar 15:13 Sun Mar 18
24 hours. MΘυητɣ Sucks to your Ass-mar 19:10 Mon Mar 19
Rabbitleap (W) - Redone Edit
OA was Sunleap, and it needed to be redone for multiple reasons. I'm not matching any of his other images, since they're being redone too. —Garrus ღ 02:28, March 18, 2012 (UTC)
Define the tail shading a bit? (you made a typo on your reservation :3) Dazzle~♪ 14:02, March 18, 2012 (UTC)
I know I did. I do that all the time. Thanks for fixing it. I'll fix and re-upload when I'm more awake. —Garrus ღ 14:05, March 18, 2012 (UTC)
Re-uploaded. —Garrus ღ 23:38, March 18, 2012 (UTC)
24 hours. MΘυητɣ Sucks to your Ass-mar 22:34 Mon Mar 19
Leopardstar (W) ~ RedoneEdit
Mmmmhmmm. OA was Mumble and was redone by Mintstarr. Comments? MΘυητɣ Sucks to your Ass-mar 20:35 Sun Mar 18
Define the depth in the eye. <3 Awesomeness STONEY Fantasticness 00:49, March 19, 2012 (UTC)
Eh the eyes are the same as the leader o3o MΘυητɣ Sucks to your Ass-mar 00:51 Mon Mar 19
Oh, I didn't notice that. x3 Sorry, ignore my comment up there. Awesomeness STONEY Fantasticness 01:08, March 19, 2012 (UTC)
W00t 24 hours. MΘυητɣ Sucks to your Ass-mar 22:36 Mon Mar 19
Fallen Leaves (TB) ~ TweakedEdit
He needed patches, OA is Sandstar12 with redo by Iceheart22. I just tweaked the pelt and made the patches off of this, to be realistic, I'll change it if someone wants me to. WildfireMistystar's Omen! 19:32, March 16, 2012 (UTC)
Darken the shading, and there's waste near the forehead. Awesomeness STONEY Fantasticness 19:35, March 16, 2012 (UTC)
Reuploaded WildfireMistystar's Omen! 19:45, March 16, 2012 (UTC)
Can you tone down the highlights a bit? ☯ Mistypebble ☯ 21:09, March 16, 2012 (UTC)
Blur the patches. --Leafstrike-- 21:46, March 16, 2012 (UTC)
Define the shading. Dazzle~♪ 23:35, March 16, 2012 (UTC)
Um It doesn't have highlights... Which part of the patches? The part with the stripes or the outside part? I can't blur the stripes anymore or it'll look messed up. WildfireMistystar's Omen! 23:51, March 16, 2012 (UTC)
Reuploaded I tried. WildfireMistystar's Omen! 23:58, March 16, 2012 (UTC)
Define the tail shading. Awesomeness STONEY Fantasticness 08:07, March 18, 2012 (UTC)
Reuploaded WildfireMistystar's Omen! 21:31, March 18, 2012 (UTC)
Well over 24 hours. —Garrus ღ 19:00, March 20, 2012 (UTC)
Willowshine (MCA) ~ TweakedEdit
Tiny tweak. Made her dark grey to match her description. Shelly For a limited time only 18:06, March 19, 2012 (UTC)
24 hours. —Garrus ღ 19:00, March 20, 2012 (UTC)
Rabbitleap (A) ~ RedoneEdit
OA was Rowan. Check the tweak pages as to why it was redone, 'cause I'm too tired to explain. —Garrus ღ 23:40, March 18, 2012 (UTC)
Define the shading ^o^ ♡Pouncey!♡ 22:23, March 19, 2012 (UTC)
Personally, I think the shading's fine, Fallow. —Garrus ღ 22:40, March 19, 2012 (UTC)
Over 24 hours sinc whe last upload. MΘυητɣ Sucks to your Ass-mar 19:05 Tue Mar 20
Leopardstar (Ki) ~ RedoneEdit
OA was OwlGlitter. Comments? MΘυητɣ Sucks to your Ass-mar 22:50 Mon Mar 19
Woohoo no comments. 24 hours. MΘυητɣ Sucks to your Ass-mar 03:41 Wed Mar 21
Raggedstar (D) ~ TweakedEdit
OA was me, and all I did was redo the stripes and shading. —Garrus ღ 19:10, March 20, 2012 (UTC)
24 hours. —Garrus ღ 22:27, March 21, 2012 (UTC)
Nightstar (W) ~ RedoneEdit
Paleh gave me permission to redo him. Blurred lineart, out of whack shading and highlights...and he wasn't black. Paleh's gonna tweak the leader to match. —Garrus ღ 23:43, March 19, 2012 (UTC)
Can you define the tail shading? <33 Awesomeness STONEY Fantasticness 06:30, March 20, 2012 (UTC)
Re-uploaded. Tail shading on short-hairs = most annoying thing ever. —Garrus ღ 06:35, March 20, 2012 (UTC)
He might be a little too dark. I can't really see the line art. Can you lighten him a bit? Breezewhisker 14:43, March 20, 2012 (UTC)
Re-uploaded. —Garrus ღ 17:46, March 20, 2012 (UTC)
24 hours. —Garrus ღ 22:27, March 21, 2012 (UTC)
Shredtail (W) - RedoneEdit
OA was Night Shine with a tweak by me. The fur on the tail look all choppy, the scars looked paint brushed on, and he was a modified triangle tabby. I hate to have to redo one of Night Shine's fantastic chararts, but for the sake of realism... Comments? ScarletwindWibbly Wobbly Timey Wimey stuff… 23:37, March 11, 2012 (UTC)
P.S. I forgot to add ragged fur, I'll do that when I reupload. ScarletwindWibbly Wobbly Timey Wimey stuff… 23:39, March 11, 2012 (UTC)
Shouldn't the tail tip be rounded a bit? To quote myself on chat: "Holy sh**." —Garrus ღ 23:41, March 11, 2012 (UTC)
Re-uploaded Haha luff ya, Cloudy! :) ScarletwindWibbly Wobbly Timey Wimey stuff… 23:55, March 11, 2012 (UTC)
Even out the lineart on the naked part of his tail. Weylon Distinctly Unique. 02:40, March 12, 2012 (UTC)
The scars on his tail look off. They go onto parts of his tail that would be fur, not skin. To fix this, either add bare patches where you know the tail would be, or remove the scars in their entirety. Also, can you take the smudge tool and make the scars taper in a more natural fashion? Iveh Yo! 02:43, March 12, 2012 (UTC)
Re-uploaded. ScarletwindWibbly Wobbly Timey Wimey stuff… 01:14, March 14, 2012 (UTC)
You don't have to, but I think that you could add a furry tone to the stripes :3 *steals* Dazzle~♪ 08:44, March 14, 2012 (UTC)
Define the shading. This is awesome. =3 *steals* Awesomeness STONEY Fantasticness 18:45, March 16, 2012 (UTC)
Re-uploaded. ScarletwindWibbly Wobbly Timey Wimey stuff… 23:49, March 19, 2012 (UTC)
24 hours. —Garrus ღ 23:20, March 21, 2012 (UTC)
Pinefur (W) - Redone Edit
Totally forgot to check if the nomination was approved.... XD I had so much fun with this it's ridiculous. <3 Anyways, stripes were unrealistic, and in my opinion shading was eh, but others might have disagreed. I'm so glad I can finally redo this. XD OA was Sandstar with a redo by me. Comments?
Paleggy
Ship it 15:56, March 15, 2012 (UTC)
Blur the haunch shading? Wonderful, Paleh! ☯ Mistypebble ☯ 21:13, March 15, 2012 (UTC)
Blur the neck shading. *Steals kitty and pats* Sky Exterminate! 00:13, March 16, 2012 (UTC)
Blur the ear pink, too. Me luffs this. —Garrus ღ 04:47, March 16, 2012 (UTC)
Paleh, you still working on this? —Garrus ღ 18:56, March 20, 2012 (UTC)
Reuploaded - Yup, sorry, being a lazy bum. Paleggy Ship it 20:53, March 20, 2012 (UTC)
24 hours. —Garrus ღ 23:20, March 21, 2012 (UTC)
Sweetpaw (A) - Redone Edit
Not sure how I feel about this one..... Anyways, redone cause it didn't look like tortie patches. OA was Sandstar then the wonderful Leggy. Comments?
Paleggy
Ship it 22:35, March 16, 2012 (UTC)
8DDD Lovely!~ Can you just smudge the pelt into the earpink? Awesomeness STONEY Fantasticness 22:39, March 16, 2012 (UTC)
I am jealous of you Paleh x3. Smudge that little white pixel on her tail. SilverThe Glee Project 23:49, March 16, 2012 (UTC)
The Wonderful Leggy? I like that title. 8D Anyway, can you darken or desaturate the nose, so it isn't so neon? —Leggo QuailXStoat 23:57, March 16, 2012 (UTC)
Ish so purdy *u* Define the earpink. MΘυητɣ Sucks to your Ass-mar 19:31 Sat Mar 17
Gorgeous. Maybe define the tail shading a little? Breezewhisker 23:24, March 17, 2012 (UTC)
Reuploaded - Gah, procrastination. Paleggy Ship it 20:49, March 20, 2012 (UTC)
24 hours. —Garrus ღ 23:20, March 21, 2012 (UTC)
Amberclaw (W) - Redone Edit
Well, this is a strange looking classic tabby... Original artist was Honeyfur, with a redo by Riverpelt, a tweak by Mintstar, and a redo by Atelda. Comments? --Leafstrike-- 23:25, March 17, 2012 (UTC)
Define the shading. —Garrus ღ 23:28, March 17, 2012 (UTC)
Can you blur the paler parts? Breezewhisker 23:29, March 17, 2012 (UTC)
I never knew there was an Amberclaw xD, blur the stripes a tiny bit. WildfireMistystar's Omen! 00:55, March 18, 2012 (UTC)
Can you make him a tad more ginger-y? Right now he looks light-brown. It's looking good! —Preceding unsigned comment added by Ivystripe (talk • contribs)
Reuploaded --Leafstrike-- 04:36, March 18, 2012 (UTC)
How can you call this a strange classic tabby? It's epic! xD Just define the earpink a tad. Awesomeness STONEY Fantasticness 08:00, March 18, 2012 (UTC)
Define the shading. I like this! ♫Purplemoon♪ Happy St. Patricks Day! Good luck! 13:19, March 18, 2012 (UTC)
Reuploaded --Leafstrike-- 20:31, March 19, 2012 (UTC)
Darken and blur the shading a bit more and brighten the highlights~ I love the pattern~<3 ♡Pouncey!♡ 22:06, March 19, 2012 (UTC)
Define the shading on the haunch and tail. Soo nice~ Sky Exterminate! 10:05, March 20, 2012 (UTC)
Reuploaded --Leafstrike-- 17:12, March 20, 2012 (UTC)
24 hours. —Garrus ღ 23:20, March 21, 2012 (UTC)
Cherrytail (A) - Redone Edit
OA was Mistypebble with the new blanks. She needed to look more like her warrior image, and all colors were taken from her warrior image. I got to try a few new texture techniques with this :3 Any comments for improvement? Iveh Yo! 00:05, March 18, 2012 (UTC)
Define the haunch shading. Awesomeness STONEY Fantasticness 18:02, March 18, 2012 (UTC)
Lighten up the closest side of the face? Right now, it kinda looks indistinguishable from the neck. Breezewhisker 14:49, March 20, 2012 (UTC)
Reuploaded Iveh Yo! 19:38, March 20, 2012 (UTC)
24 hours. —Garrus ღ 23:20, March 21, 2012 (UTC)
Raggedstar (W) ~ TweakEdit
OA was me, and I re-did the stripes and shading. —Garrus ღ 23:26, March 21, 2012 (UTC)
24 hours. —Garrus ღ 00:27, March 23, 2012 (UTC)
Oakheart (D) ~ Redone Edit
OA was Echomist, and reason for redo was because the shading and lighting was very blotchy. File changes might not be showing yet. Also, Cloudy sent me the apprentice's .xcf file, so I got the colors exactly from that, and I'm not changing them. Comments? Awesomeness STONEY Fantasticness 23:02, March 17, 2012 (UTC)
Blur the ear pink and make it smaller. —Garrus ღ 23:07, March 17, 2012 (UTC)
I'm sorry, but to be honest the earpink on the apprentice is really neon, could you fix that on here then we can just do a minor tweak on the apprentice? Having a minor tweak is better than having 5 chararts having neon earpink. Paleggy Ship it 01:38, March 18, 2012 (UTC)
That's fine. Tweak the ear pink... I'll fix it on the apprentice and re-upload it or something. —Garrus ღ 06:57, March 18, 2012 (UTC)
Okay, I'll get to that. =) Awesomeness STONEY Fantasticness 07:17, March 18, 2012 (UTC)
There's a pixel of waste between the 3rd and 4th tuft of fur on the chest. --Cinder Real or Not Real? 17:26, March 18, 2012 (UTC)
Still working on this, Stone? —Garrus ღ 23:18, March 21, 2012 (UTC)
Reuploaded. Earpink~ Dx Awesomeness STONEY Fantasticness 05:22, March 22, 2012 (UTC)
24 hours. —Garrus ღ 09:17, March 23, 2012 (UTC)
Rock (Healer) (H) ~ TweakedEdit
Ohgawdclaws... (dies) Took me days to get the claws right, and then gimp decided to suddenly close on me, forcing me to start over. I'm not sure about the fur. Frankly, the fur clumps shouldn't have been there in the first place. His description has fur along his spine, not his side. Shall I remove it completely? Shelly For a limited time only 02:44, March 22, 2012 (UTC)
Maybe make the fur less concentrated for a lack of a better word. And possibly add some smaller patches to his haunch and forelegs. And maybe add some lines around his eyes to make them more bulgy. MΘυητɣ Sucks to your Ass-mar 02:48 Thu Mar 22
I don't mind the eyes, but his description specifically says that he only has patches on his spine. I want to remove it completely. Shelly For a limited time only 02:51, March 22, 2012 (UTC)
I'd rather you remove them. oblivionAudience? 02:52, March 22, 2012 (UTC)
Whoops that slipped my mind XD remove them if you want to. The claws look great :D MΘυητɣ Sucks to your Ass-mar 02:54 Thu Mar 22
Re-uploaded. Enjoy that. It sees your soul. Shelly For a limited time only 05:13, March 22, 2012 (UTC)
O.O You succeeded in giving me nightmares for the rest of the month with his eyes~ x3 Can you make all of the claws more like the claw on the middle toe of his left arm? I apologize if that made no sense c: ♡Pouncey!♡ 20:05, March 22, 2012 (UTC)
Sorry Pouncey, but when I looked up what long twisted claws look like, this is what I got. Over grown, randomly sized, painful to look at... yeah. Shelly For a limited time only 20:10, March 22, 2012 (UTC)
Improvement made. Paleggy Ship it 17:47, March 23, 2012 (UTC)
Shellheart (E) ~ TweakedEdit
Oh, the nostalgia... anyway, added dat floof. Comments? Shelly For a limited time only 03:08, March 22, 2012 (UTC)
I love the floof! <3 Just an opinion, but maybe add some to the back of the head? ScarletwindWibbly Wobbly Timey Wimey stuff… 20:30, March 22, 2012 (UTC)
Your first charart <3 Sorry Scarlet, but I think it kinda looks cute with it just on the side. :3 Just my opinion as well, though. Ivyheart =P 23:39, March 22, 2012 (UTC)
I'll have to agree with Ivy, sorry. ^^; The floof on a cat doesn't usually inhabit the tops or backs of their heads. Shelly For a limited time only 23:48, March 22, 2012 (UTC)
Improvement made. Paleggy Ship it 17:47, March 23, 2012 (UTC)
Raggedstar (L) ~ TweakedEdit
If you don't know the OA, you're blind. I must say... I am insanely proud. Again, shading and stripe re-do. I also thickened some of the lineart. —Garrus ღ 12:16, March 22, 2012 (UTC)
Blure the earpink a tad. Lovely <3
Sorry, Elo. I quite like the ear pink how it is. —Garrus ღ 00:38, March 23, 2012 (UTC)
Can you make the nose-pink a little less pink and a bit more like the color of his skin-patches? ♡Pouncey!♡ 03:30, March 23, 2012 (UTC)
No...the last time I tried to make the patches and ear pink match, I got told to change it. I said I was only re-doing the stripes and the shading. Everything else is fine.... —Garrus ღ 03:31, March 23, 2012 (UTC)
Improvement made. Paleggy Ship it 17:47, March 23, 2012 (UTC)
