Talk: Charart/Tweaked 39

Brokenstar (A) - Redone

OA was Shimmerpool with a redo with the new blanks by our wonderful, talented, and epic Mountainheart. Needed to match other chararts. Comments? ~Scarletwind^{"Time to go home Flap."} 03:38, April 13, 2012 (UTC)

Thicken and smudge the stripes a bit, and add a back stripe. Though it's hard to see on his other images, it's there, and so it should be added. Paleh Send help 14:08, April 13, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. I don't think the changes yet ~Scarletwind^{"Time to go home Flap."} 03:50, April 15, 2012 (UTC)

24 hours. —Jayce(13:00,4/16/2012)

Tallstar (A) ~ Redone

Um OA was DJ. Comments?  ʝΣηяѲ¢к   The Aftermath Is Secondary 04:58 Sat Apr 14

I don't how dark the stomach looks. Could you maybe lighten it, but keep in in shade so the light source is consistent? If you'd rather keep it like that, then do. Breezewhisker 22:52, April 14, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded  ʝΣηяѲ¢к   The Aftermath Is Secondary 05:04 Sun Apr 15

24 hours. —Jayce(13:00,4/16/2012)

Redwillow (W) ~ Tweak

Haven't done a tweak/redo in a bit, so I though I would just do this. ono And plus I love Dark Forest cats cx Needed a torn ear. ☯ Mistypebble ☯ 00:57, April 13, 2012 (UTC)

Make it a bit shallower. If that much of his ear had been ripped in that direction, the entire top of his ear would likely be gone. Shelly _{For a limited time only} 01:45, April 13, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded Is this okay? ☯ Mistypebble ☯ 22:03, April 15, 2012 (UTC)

It's fine. Improvements made. —Jayce(13:20,4/16/2012)

Bramblestar (A) - Tweaked

Hey guys! I put a pale belly on him. 8D OA was BeautifulOblivion. Comments? Thistle ^{Oh, the implications.♥♥♥} 03:16, April 11, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded. Realized there was waste on muzzle. Thistle ^{Oh, the implications.♥♥♥} 03:22, April 11, 2012 (UTC)

He needs paleness on the underside of his tail. Skt ^{Here. Yes. Right here.} 03:31, April 11, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded. Thistle ^{Oh, the implications.♥♥♥} 04:22, April 11, 2012 (UTC)

Smudge it, please, and have it come further up his neck to match the other images. Shelly _{For a limited time only} 04:36, April 11, 2012 (UTC)

Also, it needs to be darker and under the stripes, not on top of them... are you the OA for this version of the image? Because I noted in my nomination that first dibs go to OAs that have the layered files. Shelly _{For a limited time only} 04:38, April 11, 2012 (UTC)

There's also some waste around his chin and chest. Dazzy 00:07, April 12, 2012 (UTC)

I don't have the Original file sooooo. I guess I'm giving this up. ono Thistle ^{Oh, the implications.♥♥♥} 03:26, April 12, 2012 (UTC)

Next time, please remember to change the heading. Anyone with a free project may take over. Iveh Yo! 19:35, April 12, 2012 (UTC)

No actually Ivy, they can't. XD The old OA of this has to take over. :P That's why Thistle withdrew it. XD Paleh Send help 22:57, April 14, 2012 (UTC)

All right, all right. I'll do it >.> Rowanclaw's getting neglected again... oblivion^Audience? 23:01, April 14, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. oblivion^Audience? 23:28, April 14, 2012 (UTC)

Smudge the muzzle and belly just a bit. Paleh Send help 04:48, April 15, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. ಠ_ಠ oblivion^Audience? 13:39, April 15, 2012 (UTC)

24 hours.  ʝΣηяѲ¢к   The Aftermath Is Secondary 13:50 Mon Apr 16

Spiderleg (Ki) ~ Tweaked

OA was Darkhallows, with a redo by me. It wasn't dark enough to be black. xD —Jayce(15:26,4/15/2012)

Make the chest less blurry; it's not even close to matching his warrior O-o oblivion^Audience? 15:44, April 15, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. I didn't even think to fix that..whoops. —Jayce(15:55,4/15/2012)

Improvements made, I'd think. —Jayce(13:58,4/16/2012)

Spiderleg (A) ~ Redone

OA was Ivyheart, and it should match the warrior, and no offense, the shading was a tad blotchy. —Jayce(15:26,4/15/2012)

24 hours. —Jayce(19:03,4/16/2012)

Flametail (MCA) - Redone

Everything's exactly the same as the apprentice, just added herbs. So the herbs are the only thing I'm touching. (yes I realize I forgot to change the eyes, I'm doing that right now). Comments? Paleh Send help 14:03, April 16, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded - Fixed the eyes. Oh and OAs were Miinowclaw, Insane, Mistystar, then Scarlet. Paleh Send help 14:06, April 16, 2012 (UTC)

Improvements made. —Jayce(20:00,4/16/2012)

Shrewtooth (W) - Redone

Comments? :3 OA was Dappleclaw. User:.Moonehpaw/Sig 14:12, April 7, 2012 (UTC)

Enlarge the earpink. ;3 Skt ^{Here. Yes. Right here.} 14:29, April 7, 2012 (UTC)

Define the 'highlights', darken the shading on the back, add depth to the eye (or define it), and to add on to what Skt said, make the earpink more triangular.  Stoneclaw    16:09, April 7, 2012 (UTC).

Re-uploaded. Changes may or may not be showing.User:.Moonehpaw/Sig 18:13, April 7, 2012 (UTC)

For some reason it's not reuploading and sparking Mooneh rage. >.> User:.Moonehpaw/Sig 18:15, April 7, 2012 (UTC)

I got it. Re-uploaded. User:.Moonehpaw/Sig 18:19, April 7, 2012 (UTC)

Move the ear pink more into the ear and lower the opacity a tiny bit.

F a l l o w *:･ﾟ✧

19:59, April 7, 2012 (UTC)

Blur the earpink a bit as well~ Dazzy 23:07, April 7, 2012 (UTC)

Blur the paw shading. ☯ Mistypebble ☯ 03:40, April 8, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. I had the black cat expert around me, and this happened. x3 User:.Moonehpaw/Sig 00:22, April 9, 2012 (UTC)

Define the shading

F a l l o w *:･ﾟ✧

00:50, April 9, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. User:.Moonehpaw/Sig 14:13, 04 09, 2012

Darken the whole image a bit? He looks dark gray now. Dazzy 07:29, April 10, 2012 (UTC)

The earpink looks a bit too red. Make a bit more pinkish? ☯ Mistypebble ☯ 21:10, April 10, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. User:.Moonehpaw/Sig 13:14, 04 11, 2012 13:14, April 11, 2012 (UTC)

Okay...now can you define the shading? x3 Dazzy 13:32, April 12, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. User:.Moonehpaw/Sig 14:07, 04 12, 2012

The earpink is too small, fix that. Also, darken the earpink to a more redder hue, but, as a dull red, and lighten up the whole image. I can hardly see the lineart.  Stoneclaw    01:48, April 13, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. ...I read your comment wrong. -goes to fix earpink again- Anyway, I'm not making it lighter because I was already asked to make it darker as it looked dark gray, so if I do...yeah. User:.Moonehpaw/Sig 04:43, 04 13, 2012

Oh, then can you lighten up the shading on the hindlegs and the top of the neck/head?  Stoneclaw    06:15, April 14, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. User:.Moonehpaw/Sig 20:29, 04 15, 2012

24 hours~ Twee♫ It's baaaackkk! ♫ 23:52, April 16, 2012 (UTC) (forgot to sign before)

Birchstar (RC) ~ Tweaked

Yay! I added shading to it. How's it look? OA was Spottedwing, with a tweak by Iceheart, and a redo (at least I think it's a redo, it looks like it) by Splashpelt. Comments? Thistle ^{Oh, the implications.♥♥♥} 05:33, April 15, 2012 (UTC)

...I thought I had dibs on this? Nevermind, then. Blur the shading a touch. :3 Maple^{On dA and Skye} 11:45, April 15, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded. DDDD: I'm so sorry! I thought I checked but didn't see anything... If you want this back, just ask. o///o Gah, I'm such a noob. Thistle ^{Oh, the implications.♥♥♥} 14:09, April 15, 2012 (UTC)

Either way, 24 hours... Twee♫ It's baaaackkk! ♫ 23:52, April 16, 2012 (UTC)

Runningwind (A) ~ Redone

Here it is. I tried really hard, so... Comments away! Oh, and OA was Leaf-storm.

Thistle ^{Oh, the implications.♥♥♥} 05:15, April 9, 2012 (UTC)

The color looks like it has a little more yellow in it than the warrior. Iveh Yo! 22:55, April 9, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded. Thistle ^{Oh, the implications.♥♥♥} 00:22, April 10, 2012 (UTC

Define the haunch/tail shading. My gosh, Thistle, this is so perrty~<3 Dazzy 09:12, April 10, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded. Thankies. :3 Thistle ^{Oh, the implications.♥♥♥} 23:04, April 10, 2012 (UTC)

Make the brown a tad duller. :3 Skt ^{Here. Yes. Right here.} 01:23, April 11, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded. Thistle ^{Oh, the implications.♥♥♥} 02:30, April 11, 2012 (UTC)

Make the stripes fade out just a bit. Paleh Send help 05:31, April 12, 2012 (UTC)

I'm not sure what you mean by 'fade out'. o3o Thistle ^{Oh, the implications.♥♥♥} 01:42, April 13, 2012 (UTC)

I think she's saying make the tips of the stripes fade instead of them being pointy...like the warrior, perhaps. User:.Moonehpaw/Sig 04:45, 04 13, 2012

Bah. I've tried every technique I know, and none of them make anything fade. Is it okay if it doesn't have faded stripes... I think it looks okay without the fade and I can not figure out how to make them fade. ;w; Thistle ^{Oh, the implications.♥♥♥} 04:39, April 15, 2012 (UTC)

Thistle, it has to match. I can't help you with this (I anyways made this image with PSE), sorry. But, it needs to match. Maybe try using pixlr's smudge tool.  Stoneclaw    04:52, April 15, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded. Phewph. I figured it out, guys! 8D (Thank youuuu, Ivyheart. <3) Thistle ^{Oh, the implications.♥♥♥} 00:42, April 16, 2012 (UTC)

24 hours. Shelly _{For a limited time only} 00:31, April 17, 2012 (UTC)

Tawnypelt (Q) ~ Redone

...Paleh watched me make this. I failed on her previous version. XD Rainlegs 00:43, April 14, 2012 (UTC)

Make the earpink a tad bigger? ^Sil_ver^hmm 14:26, April 14, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded. Rainlegs 14:35, April 14, 2012 (UTC)

Watched? XD I helped you make her. :P Blur the earpink a little dear. Paleh Send help 16:23, April 14, 2012 (UTC)

Darken and blur the face/neck shading a tiny bit. Dazzy 10:04, April 15, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded. Shhhh. XD Rainlegs 03:33, April 16, 2012 (UTC)

24 hours. ☯ Mistypebble ☯ 03:48, April 17, 2012 (UTC)

Blossomfall (Ki) ~ Redone

OA was the amazingly epic guild master. Comments?  ʝΣηяѲ¢к   The Aftermath Is Secondary 04:51 Mon Apr 16

The white part on the chest looks sort of slanted. Straighten it? :3 Dazzy 08:04, April 16, 2012 (UTC)

Define the tail shading. ^Sil_ver^hmm 11:09, April 16, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded It's supposed to be slanted like that.  ʝΣηяѲ¢к   The Aftermath Is Secondary 13:38 Mon Apr 16

24 hours. ☯ Mistypebble ☯ 14:58, April 17, 2012 (UTC)

Oakheart (W) - Redone

Oh god. I made it too red didn't I. ;-; OA is Hiddensun, and his colour had to match his apprentice/deputy image. Maple^{On dA and Skye}

00:35, April 10, 2012 (UTC)

OA and reason for redo? And yeah, I think you might have made it a bit too red, desaturate him a bit. ~DJCandyFun~ ^{I do enjoy fun...8D} 03:29, 10, 04, 2012

There's waste all around the image, Maple. Dazzy 05:58, April 10, 2012 (UTC)

The colors are off, and the highlights look a bit pink, could you fix that?  Stoneclaw    06:46, April 10, 2012 (UTC)

Okay. Waste removed, Highlights fixed, and less red. :D Next? Maple^{On dA and Skye} 21:07, April 10, 2012 (UTC)

The colors still don't match. :S  Stoneclaw    23:19, April 11, 2012 (UTC)

Still a bit of waste on the left border. Dazzy 07:31, April 12, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded. Colour taking isn't working. >.< So I redid it, cause the shading is bugging me. Maple^{On dA and Skye} 18:03, April 12, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded.' Wait, fixed colour. Thanks Cloudy. :3 Maple^{On dA and Skye} 11:17, April 13, 2012 (UTC)

There's a bit of waste aaround his muzzle. --Vitus _{Cheerful Murderer.} 13:02, April 13, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded. Maple^{On dA and Skye} 16:40, April 13, 2012 (UTC)

Can you just blur the shading more?  Stoneclaw    06:16, April 14, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded. Maple^{On dA and Skye} 16:32, April 14, 2012 (UTC)

Blur the neck shading a tad more. ^Sil_ver^hmm 19:12, April 14, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded. Maple^{On dA and Skye} 11:19, April 16, 2012 (UTC)

Improvement made. Paleh Send help 18:35, April 17, 2012 (UTC)

Buzzardstar (Le) ~ Redone

... :3 Comments? Shelly _{For a limited time only} 00:37, April 14, 2012 (UTC)

Something about the chest shading's funny. I'm not quite sure what it is, but it makes the chest look.... flat. Not sure what the problem is exactly, but could you try fixing it? Paleh Send help 16:21, April 14, 2012 (UTC)

Beautiful. Lighten the shading down the back a bit. And who was the OA? (Unless we don't have to put that anymore, I just got back here). User:Shadewing/Sig 19:03, April 14, 2012 (UTC) Shadewing

I think the chest shading looks fine. Since this is a short-haired cat, it shows the muscle structure of the shoulders well. 68.103.240.28 01:41, April 15, 2012 (UTC) (Whoops. That was me. Breezewhisker 01:44, April 15, 2012 (UTC))

Yeah, I did the shading like that since he's described as muscular. I'll lighten the shading, though. And I'm not naming OAs anymore, as I feel no need to do so. Shelly _{For a limited time only} 21:02, April 16, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. Not sure what I did, but this looks cool. *.* Shelly _{For a limited time only} 21:28, April 16, 2012 (UTC)

Define the tail shading. And Shelly, I'm pretty sure it's required you name the OA. I'd be all for getting rid of that rule for redoes, but you should propose it, not just stop doing it. Paleh Send help 04:07, April 17, 2012 (UTC)

I'm not. I haven't in months and I have my reasons. Or should I dig into the file's history and rub salt in the wounds of the OA by displaying their name for all to see when I've completely redone an image because the project deemed that their image wasn't good enough? I find the practice to be rude, at least when it comes to redos. I won't display the OA of an image that isn't even here. I did this image from scratch and the previous artist had nothing to do with it. I refuse to do a heartless thing like displaying their name on an image that is no longer their work. Shelly _{For a limited time only} 04:19, April 17, 2012 (UTC)

No, I'm not saying I want you to, I'm saying you should propose it insteading of just stopping. Paleh Send help 14:27, April 17, 2012 (UTC)

Improvement made. Paleh Send help 18:35, April 17, 2012 (UTC)

Hawkheart (Alt. MC) ~ Redone

OA was Moonpelt1786, and the image didn't even match the description... _-_ —Jayce(14:05,4/16/2012)

<333 Define the haunch shading a bit. RowanOnly One Can Judge... 14:55, April 16, 2012 (UTC)

And lighten the flank/neck shading please :3 ^Sil_ver^hmm 19:52, April 16, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. I defined the shading, but I'm not lightening it. —Jayce(19:58,4/16/2012)

Improvement made. Paleh Send help 18:35, April 17, 2012 (UTC)

Bumblestripe (A) - Redone

OAs were Featherwillow, Atelda, and Mountainheart, and I believe it needed redone for unrealistic stripes. Any comments for improvement? Iveh Yo! 22:07, April 15, 2012 (UTC)

Lol this image XD Darken the shading and make it slightly redish brownish tinted like the warrior.  ʝΣηяѲ¢к   The Aftermath Is Secondary 22:09 Sun Apr 15

Darken the stripes a tad. Lovely Ivy. owo Paleh Send help 14:05, April 16, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded Better? And sorry if some of the stripes' colors are off, I didn't put the stripes on another layer (stupid Ivy) Iveh Yo! 02:24, April 17, 2012 (UTC)

24 hours. Ivyheart ^=P 02:52, April 18, 2012 (UTC)

Nightstar (L) - Tweaked

Darkened the base coat and redid the shading (cause I hate it XD). OA was Flamingomom3, then me. Needed to match warrior. Comments? Paleh Send help 20:55, April 16, 2012 (UTC)

Blur the shading. ☯ Mistypebble ☯ 03:26, April 17, 2012 (UTC)

Define the shading on the tail. Ivyheart ^=P 04:58, April 17, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded - Done. Paleh Send help 14:55, April 17, 2012 (UTC)

There's waste between his paws, I think. ☯ Mistypebble ☯ 17:59, April 17, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded - Blasted waste.... Paleh Send help 21:43, April 17, 2012 (UTC)

24 hours since last constructive comment, since waste does not affect the quality of the image. —Jayce(15:00,4/18/2012)

Graypool (W) - Redone

Yay I figured out a new way of doing shading! *dances* Doesn't look different, but the process is, and it makes it blend at least a little better than before. XD OA was Shadewing, with tweaks by Teldy and Scarlet. Needed to match the elder. Comments? Paleh Send help 20:42, April 16, 2012 (UTC)

Define the shading? :3 ☯ Mistypebble ☯ 03:25, April 17, 2012 (UTC)

Enlarge the nose pink a bit. RowanOnly One Can Judge... 12:36, April 17, 2012 (UTC)

Uhh rowan? There's no nosepink, and even if there was, I couldn't englarge it.... Paleh Send help 13:59, April 17, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded - Well I defined the shading.... Paleh Send help 14:54, April 17, 2012 (UTC)

Sorry Dx For some reason I was htinking of noses :3 I meant earpink owo RowanOnly One Can Judge... 15:41, April 17, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded - Silly Rowan. XD Paleh Send help 18:01, April 17, 2012 (UTC)

Improvement made. Paleh Send help 20:46, April 18, 2012 (UTC)

Bouncefire (ki) ~ Redone

Comments? Shelly _{For a limited time only} 19:11, April 17, 2012 (UTC)

Define the shading a bit? Paleh Send help 19:17, April 17, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. How's that? Shelly _{For a limited time only} 19:20, April 17, 2012 (UTC)

Great. Improvements made :) Iveh Yo! 22:58, April 18, 2012 (UTC)

Hollyflower (W) ~ Redone

OA was Darkhallows. The smudges were blurred and looked like blobs, and the shading could have been defined a tad. To me she looks kind of bare now D: . ^Sil_ver^hmm 19:40, April 13, 2012 (UTC)

I love it<3 Blur the smudge on the haunch. RowanOnly One Can Judge... 21:18, April 13, 2012 (UTC)

Add more patches, this way it's unrealistic. I also suggest blurring the patches, since they look hard-edged, or, smudge it more dramaticly using a bigger brush like the pervious version. Define the earpink and enlarge it.  Stoneclaw    01:14, April 14, 2012 (UTC)

Define the shading some more. Good job Silver! ~DJCandyFun~ ^{I do enjoy fun...8D} 03:54, 14, 04, 2012

Reuploaded I killed it... D: ^Sil_ver^hmm 14:21, April 14, 2012 (UTC)

Pretty! Blur the patch on the haunch. User:Shadewing/Sig 19:04, April 14, 2012 (UTC) Shadewing

Which version are you looking at Shade? xD Sorry. The one with not many patches, or more patches? ^Sil_ver^hmm 19:08, April 14, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded ^Sil_ver^hmm 11:08, April 16, 2012 (UTC)

There's waste around the image. ☯ Mistypebble ☯ 03:27, April 17, 2012 (UTC)

Define and darken the shading. —Jayce(04:05,4/17/2012)

Reuploaded ^Sil_ver^hmm 22:50, April 17, 2012 (UTC)

Improvements made Iveh Yo! 23:01, April 18, 2012 (UTC)

Petalnose (KP) ~ Redone

OA was Nightfall101, shading needed to be redone. I think I should blur it more... Comments? And who likes the Wildy collar? Wildfire^{Mistystar's Omen!} 22:22, April 15, 2012 (UTC)

Nice collar x3 Blur the shading so that it blends more with the highlights/unshaded parts and define the earpink. ☯ Mistypebble ☯ 23:37, April 15, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded Wildfire^{Mistystar's Omen!} 22:13, April 16, 2012 (UTC)

blur the shading moar. Vitus _{Cheerful Murderer.} 05:51, April 17, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded Wildfire^{Mistystar's Omen!} 01:38, April 18, 2012 (UTC)

Improvement made. Paleh Send help 00:24, April 19, 2012 (UTC)

Cody (KP) ~ Redone

OA was Darkhallows with a tweak by Bloo. Comments? RowanOnly One Can Judge... 17:53, April 16, 2012 (UTC)

Don't kill me, but I'd honestly rather you use the old pattern. We decided that there was nothing wrong with it. Iveh Yo! 18:01, April 16, 2012 (UTC)

Yup, we already decided the pattern stays. Paleh Send help 19:01, April 16, 2012 (UTC)

Oh sorry ^^ Fail on my part. I tryed to match it as best as I could. Re-Uploaded. RowanOnly One Can Judge... 22:18, April 16, 2012 (UTC)

Hmmm lighten the base coat to match, and I think the eyes should be changed on both images. There's a difference between bright blue, and neon blue. The color's always bugged me. XD Paleh Send help 04:01, April 17, 2012 (UTC)

darken the nosepink? ^^ Vitus _{Cheerful Murderer.} 05:51, April 17, 2012 (UTC)

Re-Uploaded. RowanOnly One Can Judge... 13:40, April 17, 2012 (UTC)

Define the depth in the eyes. :P Paleh Send help 14:56, April 17, 2012 (UTC)

Re-Uploaded. RowanOnly One Can Judge... 16:49, April 17, 2012 (UTC)

Define the earpink a bit. Dazzy 11:47, April 18, 2012 (UTC)

Re-Uploaded. RowanOnly One Can Judge... 15:44, April 18, 2012 (UTC)

Improvement made. Paleh Send help 00:24, April 19, 2012 (UTC)

Dappletail (W) - Redone

OA was Insane with a redo by Maplepool. There were so many things wrong with this image, I'm not even going to name them. Comments? ~Scarletwind^{"Time to go home Flap."} 02:53, April 17, 2012 (UTC)

Yeah... xD Blur the neck shading? Nice job! Ivyheart ^=P 02:56, April 17, 2012 (UTC)

define the earpink a little bit? 8D Vitus _{Cheerful Murderer.} 03:04, April 17, 2012 (UTC)

And blur the haunch shading too. ^Sil_ver^hmm 11:01, April 17, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded ~Scarletwind^{"Time to go home Flap."} 02:39, April 18, 2012 (UTC)

Improvement made. Paleh Send help 00:24, April 19, 2012 (UTC)

Nightfur (E) ~ Redone

OA was Moonflight, and the shading and highlights needed to be redone. —Jayce(04:03,4/18/2012)

Enlargen the earpink. ^^ ☯ Mistypebble ☯ 17:25, April 18, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. I don't care for ear pink on elders...it annoys me. —Jayce(18:03,4/18/2012)

24 hours. —Jayce(19:00,4/19/2012)

Stoneteller (Alt. H) - Tweaked

Muuuuuuud 8D Just adding that. Rather not change anything else since this was already approved. OA was kittypet1 with a redo by me (so I had all the layers). Comments? Paleh Send help 00:21, April 19, 2012 (UTC)

Improvements made. —Jayce(19:00,4/19/2012)

Nightfur (W) ~ Redone

OA was Shaf Girl, and the shading and highlights needed to be redone. Changes may not be showing, and if they're not, you know where to look. —Jayce(04:03,4/18/2012)

<3 Enlarge the earpink. RowanOnly One Can Judge... 16:10, April 18, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded.—Jayce(18:04,4/18/2012)

Blur he neck shading C: Vitus _{Cheerful Murderer.} 04:24, April 19, 2012 (UTC)

Personally, I think it's fine. —Jayce(11:27,4/19/2012)

It's just sitting here, and aside from Elo's comment, it would have been 24 hours, so I'm just going to archive it. —Jayce(01:18,4/20/2012)

Thornclaw (Alt. Kit) ~ Redone

Redone because the stripes weren't realistic. I know the earpink is crazy, but I'm too tired for now owo RowanOnly One Can Judge... 01:48, April 18, 2012 (UTC)

Define the shading. Cute! >3< ☯ Mistypebble ☯ 02:09, April 18, 2012 (UTC)

darken the earpink and make it a little bit smaller C: Vitus _{Cheerful Murderer.} 02:29, April 18, 2012 (UTC)

Fabulous! <33 Blur the earpink just a tad. Ivyheart ^=P 02:50, April 18, 2012 (UTC)

Re-Uploaded RowanOnly One Can Judge... 16:04, April 18, 2012 (UTC)

24 hours. —Jayce(18:25,4/20/2012)

Ruby (KP) ~ Redone

OA was MosspathOfSkyClan, tweak by Ivystripe, and a redo from Leaf-storm. Comments, questions, concerns? :3? (If somebody reserved this, I'll be guilty and sad. ;w; Let's hope not.) Thistle ^{Oh, the implications.♥♥♥} 04:18, April 18, 2012 (UTC)

Blur the earpink, lighten the whole thing, and maybe make the collar red to match the kit, but you don't have to, as it's possible and actually likely that she had a collar change since then. Paleh Send help 06:08, April 18, 2012 (UTC)

Blur the shading and earpink a little bit. oops, Paleh already said that x3 Dazzy 06:15, April 18, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded. Oh and Paleh I'll take the collar change. x3 Thistle ^{Oh, the implications.♥♥♥} 10:20, April 18, 2012 (UTC)

This is beautiful, Thistle :3 Enlarge the earpink. RowanOnly One Can Judge... 16:09, April 18, 2012 (UTC)

Blur the shading? 8D Vitus _{Cheerful Murderer.} 04:22, April 19, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded. Thistle ^{Oh, the implications.♥♥♥} 10:27, April 19, 2012 (UTC)

24 hours. —Jayce(18:25,4/20/2012)

Adderfang ~ Tweak

Yay. Two in a row. XDD I made the shading purdy. :3 OA was Honeyfur, with a tweak/redo, not sure, by Maplepool, with a redo by Scarletwind. Comments, questions, concerns~? <3

Thistle ^{Oh, the implications.♥♥♥} 10:47, April 18, 2012 (UTC)

Enlarge the earpink a tad. ^Sil_ver^hmm 14:32, April 18, 2012 (UTC)

Blur the earpink and blur the haunch shading. ☯ Mistypebble ☯ 15:25, April 18, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded. Thistle ^{Oh, the implications.♥♥♥} 10:33, April 19, 2012 (UTC)

24 hours. —Jayce(18:25,4/20/2012)

Dustpelt (A) - Twaked

changes aren't showing. The color didn't match the warrior e.e. Comments? Eki _{A wonderful king ❤} 19:20, April 19, 2012 (UTC)

Improvements made. —Jayce(18:25,4/20/2012)

Stormfur (CG) - Tweaked

Redid the mud, and earpink (to match apprentice). OA was was Rainwhisper, and the mud didn't look like mud basically. Comments? Paleh Send help 19:47, April 19, 2012 (UTC)

Blur the mud patches a little more. Breezewhisker 23:20, April 19, 2012 (UTC)

Actually, nevermind. Looking at them again they look fine. Breezewhisker 23:21, April 19, 2012 (UTC)

Improvements made. —Jayce(18:25,4/20/2012)

Leopardfoot (W) ~ Redone

OA is Evanphoto, with a tweak (I think?) by Ivyheart. I took all colors from the apprentice image. —Jayce(20:22,4/19/2012)

24 hours. —Jayce(22:47,4/20/2012)