Talk: Charart/Tweaked 42

Birchfall (Alt. Ki) ~ Redone

OA was Mistfire, and it needed to be redone to match the alt apprentice. —Jayce(02:54,5/1/2012)

Lighten him up a bit. Cute! ~DJCandyFun~ ^{I do enjoy fun...8D} 06:29, 01, 05, 2012

Blur the shading on his chest/belly. cutee. --Eki _{A wonderful king ❤} 12:51, May 1, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. The colors itself are fine...it's the shading that was too dark. And I'm not changing the colors, since they came right from the alt apprentice. —Jayce(17:13,5/1/2012)

>>.<< -dies- Oh yes, you're right. o3o In that case lighten up the shading some. ~DJCandyFun~ ^{I do enjoy fun...8D} 10:39, 02, 05, 2012

Blur the head and neck shading. oblivion^Audience? 11:24, May 2, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. —Jayce(19:27,5/2/2012)

24 hours. —Jayce(19:31,5/3/2012)

Socks (Ki) ~ Redone

OA was Mumble785, and needed to be redone to match the loner/kittypet images. I'm not smudging the paws (or extending the white, for that matter) anymore then they are, since the lineart //is// smaller..... —Jayce(21:47,5/2/2012)

Define the darpink. :3 Skt ^{Like a baws} 21:55, May 2, 2012 (UTC)

Define the shading, too~ Dazzy 22:07, May 2, 2012 (UTC)

Can you blur the smudges on the muzzle just a smidge? ^Sil_ver^hmm 22:08, May 2, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. —Jayce(22:45,5/2/2012)

24 hours. —Jayce(22:58,5/3/2012)

Minnowtail (Alt. Ki) ~ Redone

Shading issues. First and only OA was Mistfire. Changes are probably not showing. ^Sil_ver^hmm 22:04, April 26, 2012 (UTC)

Define the shading, and if needed maybe lighten up the base color a tad? :/ ~DJCandyFun~ ^{I do enjoy fun...8D} 06:51, 27, 04, 2012

Define the eye depth. Dazzy 07:27, April 27, 2012 (UTC)

Define the earpink. Skt ^{Knock knock} 12:36, April 27, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded Sorry if the first image looked dark. I had no idea where the base color was on her old image @_@ . ^Sil_ver^hmm 23:05, April 27, 2012 (UTC)

Enlarge the earpink. RowanOnly One Can Judge... 15:34, April 28, 2012 (UTC)

Blur the shading and make the earpink more pink and the nose black/dark gray. ☯ Mistypebble ☯ 18:09, April 28, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded The nose looks black, but it's a very dark gray. ^Sil_ver^hmm 22:45, April 28, 2012 (UTC)

It's very very hard to see the earpink on the right ear (our right). Define it some. ❄ Sunnyfrost ❄ 00:12, April 29, 2012 (UTC)

She looks more black than dark gray, in my opinion. Lighten her up. ☯ Mistypebble ☯ 13:58, April 29, 2012 (UTC)

Uh..she's supposed to be black. This is her alt kit. Skt ^{Knock knock} 03:44, April 30, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded ^Sil_ver^hmm 11:14, May 1, 2012 (UTC)

Define the tail shading. Dazzy 02:55, May 2, 2012 (UTC)

'Reuploaded ^Sil_ver^hmm 20:47, May 2, 2012 (UTC)

24 hours. —Jayce(22:58,5/3/2012)

Sagepaw (Ki) ~ Redone

The shading and earpink needed to be redone. I know that the pelt color is darker. I'll fix it in the next upload. OA was Sandstar12. Comments? RowanOnly One Can Judge... 20:12, April 28, 2012 (UTC)

Blur the shading and is the nose supposed to be dark gray? Can't remember if that goes with gray cats >.< ☯ Mistypebble ☯ 22:31, April 28, 2012 (UTC)

It should be grey regardless, his apprentice has a grey one. Skt ^{Knock knock} 23:02, April 28, 2012 (UTC)

Define the earpink. :3 ~DJCandyFun~ ^{I do enjoy fun...8D} 00:51, 29, 04, 2012

Re-Ups^ :S —Preceding unsigned comment added by Rowanflight (talk • contribs)

Define the neck shading a little?  ʝΣηяѲ¢к   The Aftermath Is Secondary 20:17 Sun Apr 29

Define the tail shading. :3 Thistle ^{Oh, the implications.♥♥♥} 01:32, May 2, 2012 (UTC)

Blur ---> the shading on that side of the cat some. ~DJCandyFun~ ^{I do enjoy fun...8D} 10:42, 02, 05, 2012

Um... This is way too dark. Lighten him up a lot. oblivion^Audience? 11:24, May 2, 2012 (UTC)

Re-Ups^. RowanOnly One Can Judge... 20:44, May 2, 2012 (UTC)

24 hours. —Jayce(22:58,5/3/2012)

Swiftpaw (A) - Redone

OA was Dawnfeather with a redo by Splook with the new blanks. He looked more mottled/spotted rather then actually black and white and the shading needed to be darkened. I'm rusty on my black and white cats... Comments? ~Scarletwind^{"Time to go home Flap."} 03:07, April 30, 2012 (UTC)

Could you get rid of the dorsal whiteness (meaning the white on his back)? Shelly _{For a limited time only} 03:41, April 30, 2012 (UTC)

Also, I found out black cats with white-tipped tails are actually not as common as you'd think. You don't have to get rid of it, but it'd be nice to see the percentage of black cats with white tipped tails to go down to coincide with how commonly it's seen. Wonderful btw <3 Iveh Yo! 21:40, April 30, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. I kinda want to keep the white tail-tip. ~Scarletwind^{"Time to go home Flap."} 22:50, April 30, 2012 (UTC)

Define the shading, but blur it on the haunch. Breezewhisker 04:32, May 1, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. Sorry for the delay, life's been kicking my butt lately ~Scarletwind^{"Time to go home Flap."} 22:43, May 3, 2012 (UTC)

24 Hours ~Scarletwind^{"Time to go home Flap."} 23:12, May 4, 2012 (UTC)

Swiftpaw (Ki) - Redone

OA was Bramble with a redo by DJ. Had to match apprentice. ~Scarletwind^{"Time to go home Flap."} 22:49, May 3, 2012 (UTC)

24 hours ~Scarletwind^{"Time to go home Flap."} 23:12, May 4, 2012 (UTC)

Mothpelt (W) ~ Redone

Redone for the same reasons as the leader. OA is Insaneular. Skt ^{Knock knock} 03:55, April 28, 2012 (UTC)

I defined the sahding, cause i hated it. Skt ^{Knock knock} 03:57, April 28, 2012 (UTC)

Lighten the shading on the muzzle. ^Sil_ver^hmm 17:08, April 28, 2012 (UTC)

Define the earpink. ❄ Sunnyfrost ❄ 00:14, April 29, 2012 (UTC)

The earpink's fine. Paleh Send help 03:59, April 29, 2012 (UTC)

I personally think the muzzle shading is fine, but if anyone else wants me to, I'll do it. Skt ^{Knock knock} 00:06, April 30, 2012 (UTC)

I think you should lighten it a little. RowanOnly One Can Judge... 21:49, April 30, 2012 (UTC)

Define the haunch shading a bit? This is awesome. <3 Thistle ^{Oh, the implications.♥♥♥} 01:30, May 2, 2012 (UTC)

And define that tail shading~ Dazzy 11:41, May 2, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. Skt ^{Like a baws} 01:09, May 4, 2012 (UTC)

24 hours. Skt ^{Like a baws} 03:08, May 5, 2012 (UTC)

Runningwind (Ki) ~ Redone

The changes aren't showing possibly... >.< Yayyy. I did his apprentice, so I did his kit too. The reason for the redo is to make him look like his warrior. Shaf Girl was the OA. I used all the original colours of the stripes, base, and eyes, so don't ask me to change the colour. Comments, questions, concerns? Thistle ^{Oh, the implications.♥♥♥} 05:58, May 3, 2012 (UTC)

Earpink? ~DJCandyFun~ ^{I do enjoy fun...8D} 07:01, 03, 05, 2012

Oh wow. I'm a dork. Reuploaded. Thistle ^{Oh, the implications.♥♥♥} 07:15, May 3, 2012 (UTC)

Blur the ear pink a bit, lighten and blur the shading, define the tail shading. Also, the ear pink is the same shade in both ears, so im guessing its not under the shading layer. Fix that? o3o Also, the stripes don't really match his other images. Make them thinner and un-smudge them.

F a l l o w *:･ﾟ✧

20:58, May 3, 2012 (UTC)

I think that the shading is fine (but yeah, define the tail shading), and it's artist's choice if the earpink layer is under or over the shading/highlights layer, as I've always done my earpink above the shading.  Stoneclaw    23:08, May 3, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded. Thistle ^{Oh, the implications.♥♥♥} 03:03, May 4, 2012 (UTC)

24 hours~ Twee♫ It's baaaackkk! ♫ 03:11, May 5, 2012 (UTC)

Silverstream (Ki) ~ Redone

Kit spree~! 8D I did her queen, so I had all the colours... just like Runningwind. So don't ask me to change the colour of the stripes, base, or eyes. Love you guys. <3 OA was Twi. Reason is to make her like her warrior.~ Comments, questions, concerns? Thistle ^{Oh, the implications.♥♥♥} 07:39, May 3, 2012 (UTC)

Blur and center the earpink. ☯ Mistypebble ☯ 19:47, May 3, 2012 (UTC)

Round out the ear pink as well, and define the tail shading. Also, can you thickening out some of the stripes to match her other images? o3o

F a l l o w *:･ﾟ✧

20:26, May 3, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded. Thistle ^{Oh, the implications.♥♥♥} 03:03, May 4, 2012 (UTC)

24 hours~ Twee♫ It's baaaackkk! ♫ 03:12, May 5, 2012 (UTC)

Owlstar (D) ~ Tweaked

Tweaked to have larger eyes, and that's all I'm fixing. Comments? RowanOnly One Can Judge... 23:28, May 3, 2012 (UTC)

24 hours~ Twee♫ It's baaaackkk! ♫ 03:13, May 5, 2012 (UTC)

Spottedpelt (Ki) ~ Tweaked

Just changed the color. OA was Mistystar. Comments?  ʝΣηяѲ¢к   The Aftermath Is Secondary 22:50 Fri May 4

24 hours. Skt ^{Like a baws} 14:57, May 5, 2012 (UTC)

Yellowfang (Ki) ~ Tweaked

It's. So. Creepy. BAHAHAHAAHHA!! *mad scientist laugh*  ʝΣηяѲ¢к   The Aftermath Is Secondary 23:05 Fri May 4

24 hours. Skt ^{Like a baws} 14:57, May 5, 2012 (UTC)

Ivypool (W) - Tweaked

OA was me, and she needed sliced ears. I know, this would make her ears kinda...spaghetti-like, but this is how I imagined it in my mind how Hawkfrost would have ripped them. I added scars to her hears but they're kinda hard to see. Iveh Yo! 19:41, May 3, 2012 (UTC)

I think that the ear that is closest to us would have just been sliced off if it actually looked like that... Can you tone it down a tad? ☯ Mistypebble ☯ 19:46, May 3, 2012 (UTC)

Painful ears look painful o.o Can you erase some of the lineart heading into the slices so it isn't just a drop off from thick to thin lineart?

F a l l o w *:･ﾟ✧

20:30, May 3, 2012 (UTC)

While we have Ivypool out, she also needs a silver tail, white face, and white paws. ~Scarletwind^{"Time to go home Flap."} 23:57, May 3, 2012 (UTC)

She has all those things though..... maybe get rid of the white tail tip, but otherwise I think it fits description well enough... Paleh Send help 01:31, May 4, 2012 (UTC)

I think the pattern is fine; as (if memory serves) it never stated how much white paws she had, or how much white on her face. :/ Skt ^{Like a baws} 12:05, May 4, 2012 (UTC)

I agree. The pattern is fine the way it is. It was never revealed exactly how much silver/white she had. —Jayce(16:02,5/4/2012)

24 hours. —Jayce(21:22,5/5/2012)

Daisy (Alt. Q) ~ Redone

Shading needed to be redone. OA was Nightshine. —Jayce(20:08,5/3/2012)

Lower the opacity on the shading and make the ear pink more pink-ish

F a l l o w *:･ﾟ✧

20:45, May 3, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. —Jayce(21:16,5/3/2012)

blur the shading on her tail and belly --Eki _{A wonderful king ❤} 22:48, May 3, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. —Jayce(22:59,5/3/2012)

That belly's really... bright. o.o Blur it a little so it isn't so focused on one area. Thistle ^{Oh, the implications.♥♥♥} 04:08, May 4, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. —Jayce(16:10,5/4/2012)

Make shading on the tail curve with the tail a bit more. Skt ^{Like a baws} 14:36, May 5, 2012 (UTC)

<sigh> It //does// curve with the tail. It's fine. —Jayce(17:11,5/5/2012)

24 hours since last upload. —Jayce(21:22,5/5/2012)

Cinderpelt (Alt.MC) ~ Redone

Ima try this, trolololol Skt ^{Like a baws} 00:47, May 2, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. Skt ^{Like a baws} 00:41, May 2, 2012 (UTC)

Stunningly awesome <3 8DD Blur the leg shading and shoulder shading and blur the pale chest :3

F a l l o w *:･ﾟ✧

00:59, May 2, 2012 (UTC)

Define the earpink, lovely shield brother 8D --Eki _{A wonderful king ❤} 02:04, May 2, 2012 (UTC)

Blue the stripes a bit 8D RowanOnly One Can Judge... 22:38, May 3, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. I didn't blur the stripes cause it made it look stupid, but i smudged them more. And the pale chest is blurred, even if it don't look it. >.> Skt ^{Like a baws} 00:55, May 4, 2012 (UTC)

Blur the shading's edges a bit.<3 ~DJCandyFun~ ^{I do enjoy fun...8D} 11:26, 04, 05, 2012

If I blur it anymore it basically disappears. o3o Skt ^{Like a baws} 23:36, May 4, 2012 (UTC)

24 hours.. Skt ^{Like a baws} 01:00, May 6, 2012 (UTC)

Splashnose (Q) ~ Tweaked

All I did was tweak the pelt color and ear pink o3o I'd rather not change anything else... OAs were me and Echomist. Changes not showing I think.

F a l l o w *:･ﾟ✧

02:58, May 6, 2012 (UTC)

Define the earpink a bit~ Dazzy 11:21, May 6, 2012 (UTC)

Question, is there earpink on <--- this side? If there is, remove it. (Looks like there's earpink there.) ^Sil_ver^hmm 12:12, May 6, 2012 (UTC)

I've seen a couple with earpink like that, it's just about perspective, so it's fine. o3o Skt ^{Like a baws} 13:10, May 6, 2012 (UTC)

Improvements made. —Jayce(16:49,5/6/2012)

Smokefoot (W) ~ Tweaked

Changes not showing I think. Tweaked to be flooooffyyy ouo OAs were Cloudeh, Bramble annd Twanypeltlover (?) So yah.... ouo Comments?

F a l l o w *:･ﾟ✧

03:04, May 6, 2012 (UTC)

Can you make the ragged fur more "ragged" if that makes sence. OwO ~DJCandyFun~ ^{I do enjoy fun...8D} 03:56, 06, 05, 2012

I think it's fine. It look really ragged to me. o3o

F a l l o w *:･ﾟ✧

08:32, May 6, 2012 (UTC)

Improvements made. —Jayce(16:49,5/6/2012)

Bramblestar (Ki) ~ Tweaked

Tweaked to have a pale belly. Comments?  ʝΣηяѲ¢к   The Aftermath Is Secondary 22:39 Sat May 5

Improvements made. —Jayce(16:49,5/6/2012)

Scourge (Ki) ~ Redone

OA is Mosswhisker and Steathfire, with a tweak by Leafstorm.. I think. I dunno. I can't tell. Needed to be redone for multiple reasons. Yay, demon kit with a purple collar. <3 —Jayce(23:22,5/4/2012)

blur the earpink a tad Eki _{A wonderful king ❤} 01:29, May 5, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. —Jayce(03:56,5/5/2012)

Blur and lighten the shading a tiny bit :3

F a l l o w *:･ﾟ✧

21:54, May 5, 2012 (UTC)

I took the shading from Socks' image, so it's fine. —Jayce(22:42,5/5/2012)

Well over 24 hours since last upload. —Jayce(20:32,5/6/2012)

Logfur (W) ~ Redone

OA was Shruggy. Needed to be redone 'cause of shading issues. So, yeah. Me likie. <3 —Jayce(00:45,5/6/2012)

define the stripes on his midriff, they get lost in the shading. Jack _{never let go, loonie ❤} 01:58, May 6, 2012 (UTC)

I can't define them anymore than what they already are, honestly. —Jayce(02:02,5/6/2012)

Re-uploaded. Layers are amazing. —Jayce(02:08,5/6/2012)

Blur the pale markings a little. Breezewhisker 02:16, May 6, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. —Jayce(02:21,5/6/2012)

Beautiful ;;u;; Define the tail shading~

F a l l o w *:･ﾟ✧

02:26, May 7, 2012 (UTC)

The tail shading is fine. —Jayce(02:27,5/7/2012)

Improvement made. Paleh Send help 02:31, May 7, 2012 (UTC)

Cedarheart (E) - Redone

Not completely sure who the OA on this one was.... Wildfire I think. But it needed to match the apprentice, so here we go. Comments? Paleh Send help 19:22, May 3, 2012 (UTC)

<3 Purdy, blur the earpink. RowanOnly One Can Judge... 22:30, May 3, 2012 (UTC)

blur the shading on the tail --Eki _{A wonderful king ❤} 00:57, May 6, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded Paleh Send help 05:41, May 6, 2012 (UTC)

24 hours. ~DJCandyFun~ ^{I do enjoy fun...8D} 06:51, 07, 05, 2012

Feathertail (Ki) ~ Redone

Feathertail <333 Redone to match the warrior and to have a floofly tail. Comments?  ʝΣηяѲ¢к   The Aftermath Is Secondary 22:30 Sat May 5

Wasn't this supposed to be tweaked? o.o  Stoneclaw    02:18, May 6, 2012 (UTC)

It was on the list. I have no idea where it went but it's in the approved archives. I just checked.  ʝΣηяѲ¢к   The Aftermath Is Secondary 02:32 Sun May 6

Ah. Odd things happen. xDDD Sorry for that. :P  Stoneclaw    02:35, May 6, 2012 (UTC)

Ugh, if I see one more thing archived that's not on the list, or something that's forgotten to be archived, I'm gonna rage bigtime. >.> The tail's plumy, not fluffy, so make it a bit more round like the warrior. Paleh Send help 06:20, May 6, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded o.o  ʝΣηяѲ¢к   The Aftermath Is Secondary 06:25 Sun May 6

That was my bad. It was on the list, and I accidentally remove it. No harm, no foul. Calm down. —Jayce(16:47,5/6/2012)

24 hours. ~DJCandyFun~ ^{I do enjoy fun...8D} 06:51, 07, 05, 2012

Snake (Ro) - Redone

Needed to match his loner. OA was Mounty (?) oblivion^Audience? 22:33, May 5, 2012 (UTC)

Blur the shading a bit. RowanOnly One Can Judge... 22:46, May 5, 2012 (UTC)

I disagree. In fact, I think the shading looks perfect (if I may say so myself). oblivion^Audience? 02:19, May 6, 2012 (UTC)

Lighten up the shading on the white on the body and tail a tad. Skt ^{Like a baws} 07:21, May 6, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. oblivion^Audience? 15:59, May 6, 2012 (UTC)

24 hours~ Twee♫ It's baaaackkk! ♫ 18:52, May 7, 2012 (UTC)

Owl Feather (Q) ~ Tweaked

Just added the stripes. OA was Iceheart I think. I can't remember. Comments?  ʝΣηяѲ¢к   The Aftermath Is Secondary 17:06 Sun May 6

blur the stipes a little bit to match the sharpclaw. --jack _{never let go, loonie ❤} 18:40, May 6, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded  ʝΣηяѲ¢к   The Aftermath Is Secondary 18:47 Sun May 6

24 hours~ Twee♫ It's baaaackkk! ♫ 18:53, May 7, 2012 (UTC)

Longtail (E) - Redone

Misty's reservation expired. Copied the stripes from the old image exactly. Shading was blotchy. OA was Mosswhisker&Stealthfire, and Sandstar. Colors are from the apprentice .xcf. Comments? Paleh Send help 19:20, May 3, 2012 (UTC)

owo Define the shading a bit

F a l l o w *:･ﾟ✧

20:50, May 3, 2012 (UTC)

<3 Blur the scar on the eye a bit. RowanOnly One Can Judge... 20:37, May 4, 2012 (UTC)

Darken the shading a tad? Breezewhisker 02:18, May 6, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded - Done. Paleh Send help 05:40, May 6, 2012 (UTC)

Looks wonderful! :3 Maybe blur the stripes a bit? --Raven^Beeeeeees 05:46, May 7, 2012 (UTC)

Nope, they need to match the other images. Paleh Send help 08:17, May 7, 2012 (UTC)

Over 24 hours.  ʝΣηяѲ¢к   The Aftermath Is Secondary 03:42 Tue May 8

One-eye (E) ~ Redone

I love her so much <33333 I feel really lazy for just copying and pasting Windflight's shading on here lol. OA was Mintstar. Comments?  ʝΣηяѲ¢к   The Aftermath Is Secondary 13:28 Mon May 7

Blur the face shading and lighten it a tiny bit xux;;

F a l l o w *:･ﾟ✧

00:16, May 8, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded  ʝΣηяѲ¢к   The Aftermath Is Secondary 01:25 Tue May 8

Lighten the earpink to match her other images~

F a l l o w *:･ﾟ✧

02:19, May 8, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded  ʝΣηяѲ¢к   The Aftermath Is Secondary 02:36 Tue May 8

Lighten it a little more

F a l l o w *:･ﾟ✧

01:29, May 9, 2012 (UTC) Gahh, ignore me. I was looking at the wrong version x.x

F a l l o w *:･ﾟ✧

24 hours. ~DJCandyFun~ ^{I do enjoy fun...8D} 09:28, 09, 05, 2012

Flametail (Ki) ~ Redone

<sigh> This was on the tweak page and never redone. Paleh told me I could work on him a while ago, and I never got around to it. OA was Bramble, with redos by Moonflight, Shelly and Leafstorm, I believe. This is ugly. x.x;; All colors are directly from Paleh, including the ear pink, which I am NOT changing, so don't ask. —Jayce(19:18,5/7/2012)

Define the shading. ^Sil_ver^hmm 19:55, May 7, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. Eww. I can't really //define// it without it looking redder than it should... —Jayce(19:59,5/7/2012)

I think it's better being redder than it should than being flat. Could you darken it some? Paleh Send help 20:59, May 7, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. —Jayce(01:01,5/8/2012)

Can you make the stripes match the other images a bit more? They look a bit too thick and blurred. ☯ Mistypebble ☯ 21:56, May 8, 2012 (UTC)

No, not really. The kit blank is small and harder to work with, and the stripes on the MCA image aren't exactly the easiest to match. x.x —Jayce(23:56,5/8/2012)

Time done. ~DJCandyFun~ ^{I do enjoy fun...8D} 09:28, 09, 05, 2012

Jayfeather (Ki) - Redone

OA was Appledash and a number of other users. If you really want to know, you can look them up. Anyway, here's probably my last piece before I leave (though I'm kind of feeling guilty not helping out with the tweak page with volunteering to do one more) but he needed to match his other images, changes not showing. Iveh Yo! 03:01, May 8, 2012 (UTC)

None, 24 hours. ~DJCandyFun~ ^{I do enjoy fun...8D} 09:28, 09, 05, 2012

Patchfoot (W) ~ Redone

I love black and white cats. <3 Redone to match his rogue charart. Breezewhisker 02:15, May 6, 2012 (UTC)

Make the black less gray and more black. o3o Dazzy 05:10, May 6, 2012 (UTC)

Define the eye values. ^Sil_ver^hmm 12:09, May 6, 2012 (UTC)

Define the earpink a bit and blur it. RowanOnly One Can Judge... 18:06, May 6, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded. Breezewhisker 02:47, May 7, 2012 (UTC)

Blur the earpink :3 This is lovely~

F a l l o w *:･ﾟ✧

21:06, May 7, 2012 (UTC)

I love this so much ;.; Lighten the earpink a little?  ʝΣηяѲ¢к   The Aftermath Is Secondary 13:52 Tue May 8

Reuploaded. Breezewhisker 00:33, May 9, 2012 (UTC)

24 hours. Skt ^{Like a baws} 00:37, May 10, 2012 (UTC)

Bramblestar (W) ~ Tweaked

Woohoo! OA was a very smexy person trololol Comments?  ʝΣηяѲ¢к   The Aftermath Is Secondary 00:04 Wed May 9

Blur the pale chest/neck~

F a l l o w *:･ﾟ✧

00:15, May 9, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded  ʝΣηяѲ¢к   The Aftermath Is Secondary 00:23 Wed May 9

Extend the pale chest more to match the deputy

F a l l o w *:･ﾟ✧

01:36, May 9, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded  ʝΣηяѲ¢к   The Aftermath Is Secondary 01:42 Wed May 9

24 hours. ~DJCandyFun~ ^{I do enjoy fun...8D} 09:04, 10, 05, 2012

Graystripe (D) - Redone

There were shading issues. OA was Evanphoto, with a redo by Icey and a tweak by DJ. oblivion^Audience? 20:48, May 5, 2012 (UTC)

Blur and lighten the shading a tad c:

F a l l o w *:･ﾟ✧

21:49, May 5, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. oblivion^Audience? 21:51, May 5, 2012 (UTC)

Could you lighten the neck shading a bit? Dazzy 11:28, May 6, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. oblivion^Audience? 15:56, May 6, 2012 (UTC)

blur the highlight/lighter part on his shoulder. jack _{never let go, loonie ❤} 18:42, May 6, 2012 (UTC)

Define the other shading a bit. Breezewhisker 00:52, May 9, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. oblivion^Audience? 01:28, May 9, 2012 (UTC)

24 hours. —Jayce(16:36,5/10/2012)

One-eye (Q) ~ Redone

OA was Nightfall, with a redos by Mintstarr and DJ. (Lemme know if I missed anyone). I'm not changing any of the colors, as they come right from the xcf, which I got from Paleh. —Jayce(00:07,5/7/2012)

Blur the flank shading a bit. RowanOnly One Can Judge... 00:11, May 7, 2012 (UTC)

Blur the tail shading, too.

F a l l o w *:･ﾟ✧

01:20, May 7, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. —Jayce(01:29,5/7/2012)

Small detail, but make the nose pink. Gray cats can have pink noses, and since the apprentice has one already, it should match. Paleh Send help 08:21, May 7, 2012 (UTC)

Blur the belly shading a bit more :3

F a l l o w *:･ﾟ✧

15:09, May 7, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. Shading's fine, imho. —Jayce(16:50,5/7/2012)

Define/enlarge the ear pink a tiny bit~

F a l l o w *:･ﾟ✧

00:21, May 8, 2012 (UTC)

The ear pink matches the alt queen, which is fine. —Jayce(00:59,5/8/2012)

Actually cloudy, I um *cough* had to change the alt queen earpink. Changes aren't showing though. I'll send you the file... Paleh Send help 06:26, May 8, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. —Jayce(17:17,5/9/2012)

24 hours. —Jayce(16:36,5/10/2012)

Snowy (Q) ~ Tweaked

Snowy! I pretty much needed to add shading to it...Comments? Changes may not be showing.  Stoneclaw    00:09, May 9, 2012 (UTC)

Lighten the shading

F a l l o w *:･ﾟ✧

00:13, May 9, 2012 (UTC)

I've said many times; I use dark shading, and I prefer it because it gives images a better sense of depth...I think it's artist's choice...So I'm not changing it.  Stoneclaw    00:27, May 9, 2012 (UTC)

You might extend the highlights, since she looks kinda grey. Or you can tint shading blue or something. Breezewhisker 00:43, May 9, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded.  Stoneclaw    19:48, May 9, 2012 (UTC)

24 hours. Skt ^{Like a baws} 10:23, May 11, 2012 (UTC)

Larchkit (Ki) ~ Tweaked

Changes may not be showing. OA was Blackclaw09 with a redo by me. —Jayce(22:28,5/9/2012)

If I'm looking at the right image, define the stripes a tad. Cute! ~DJCandyFun~ ^{I do enjoy fun...8D} 08:59, 10, 05, 2012

I think the stripes are fine, imho. However, if others want me to fix them, I will. —Jayce(16:31,5/10/2012)

24 hours. —Jayce(17:20,5/11/2012)

Sharpclaw (KP) ~ Tweaked

I wanted him to match better lol. I think the OA was Paleh (not sure xP) and then a redo by me. Skt ^{Like a baws} 02:06, May 8, 2012 (UTC)

Define the shading ouo

F a l l o w *:･ﾟ✧

02:18, May 8, 2012 (UTC) I think I was looking at the wrong version x.e Make his eyes look less derpy, and possibly add more then three shades of green? :3 Also, can you add a highlight/shine to his tag? ^~^

F a l l o w *:･ﾟ✧

02:33, May 8, 2012 (UTC)

Yeah, OA was me. XD Blur the stripes eeever so slightly. Paleh Send help 09:21, May 10, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. Skt ^{Like a baws} 00:55, May 11, 2012 (UTC)

24 hours~ Skt ^{Like a baws} 01:35, May 12, 2012 (UTC)

Stumpytail (W) - Redone

I personally like this version better. OA was me, at least the latest one was, and I didnt like the stripes, and it just overall looked bad...Comments?<333 Twee♫ It's baaaackkk! ♫ 01:33, May 1, 2012 (UTC)

Blur/smudge the stripes just a bit. Nice job Twee~ Dazzy 09:48, May 1, 2012 (UTC)

make the earpink a bit smaller. --Eki _{A wonderful king ❤} 12:39, May 2, 2012 (UTC)

Define the tail shading. Purty.~ Thistle ^{Oh, the implications.♥♥♥} 15:11, May 3, 2012 (UTC)

I'm giving a bit of a warning, right now...I'm grounded until Wednesday Saturday, so I'll have it up then...just warning... {steps away} Twee♫ It's baaaackkk! ♫ 23:51, May 3, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded - Eh... e3e Twee♫ It's baaaackkk! ♫ 17:09, May 5, 2012 (UTC)

Make the earpink a bit larger lol Skt ^{Like a baws} 08:35, May 6, 2012 (UTC)

Lower the opacity on the ear pink a tiny bit and blur the pale belly? xux;;

F a l l o w *:･ﾟ✧

02:23, May 7, 2012 (UTC)

Looks wonderful! Could be my computers lighting but maybe lighten the shading Just a bit? --Raven^Beeeeeees 07:41, May 7, 2012 (UTC)

It's probably your computer. It looks fine to me.

F a l l o w *:･ﾟ✧

21:02, May 7, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded Twee♫ It's baaaackkk! ♫ 02:41, May 10, 2012 (UTC)

There's waste under the tail. oblivion^Audience? 22:05, May 10, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded Twee♫ It's baaaackkk! ♫ 22:10, May 11, 2012 (UTC)

24 hours~ Twee♫ It's baaaackkk! ♫ 23:49, May 12, 2012 (UTC)