Talk: Charart/Tweaked 5

Jayfeather (MC) - Redone[]

Ok, I see that there's some gray I missed on this one too. xD Original artist was Bluestar1776 and he need to be short-haired, given a shorter tail, given mottles, and a scar. R o o ^Hawkfrost ^lover♥ 19:10, July 7, 2011 (UTC)

Fix the excess gray and darken his feet at the bottom. Lighten his eyes a bit, as well. ~Shellheart

Reuploaded. R o o ^Hawkfrost ^lover♥ 19:35, July 7, 2011 (UTC)

I love the tabby style. :] Make the mottles more noticeable and make the scar brighter. ☄ℱrost h e art ϡ Hexakosioi hexekontahexaphobia 19:39, July 7, 2011 (UTC)

blur the earpink a littleOh no! emergency!C^an^yoⁿs^on^gCandypaw to the rescue!

Reuploaded. R o o ^Hawkfrost ^lover♥ 20:07, July 7, 2011 (UTC)

There's still a little gray above the tip of his tail. Shellheart 20:25, July 7, 2011 (UTC)

Lighten the earpink a bit. Great work! ∗ Mistystar ∗ ^{Trust the Fire Within...} 20:38, July 7, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded. I didn't lighten the earpink because I think it looks better like this. R o o ^Hawkfrost ^lover♥ 21:55, July 7, 2011 (UTC)

Make the ear pink BIGGAH --Bloo!^yo

i can barely see the scar, and the herbs look too gray Bluestar11796 22:33, July 7, 2011 (UTC)

Blur the shading a bit. :] This looks epic, I love the stripes, it's so much better than his old one. XP Maybe make his tail a bit longer too, a shorter tail doesn't mean really short . . . his tail was never cut off or anything so there probably wouldn't be much of a difference. M o ss y ♫^{go away.} 02:28, July 8, 2011 (UTC)

Define the scar a bit, the stuff is really dark and smudgy at the base of his tail(lighten and define it a tad), and stripe up the ear furthest from us. Blur the shading(not the overdone stuff on the base of the tail).-Kittycat79 ^{Kitties Rule!} 07:39, July 8, 2011 (UTC)

Erase the waste under his tail --Leaf strike -- 17:08, July 8, 2011 (UTC)

Define the scar. ∗ Mistystar ∗ ^{Trust the Fire Within...} 17:52, July 8, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded. I don't think the earpink needs to be bigger, so I didn't make it bigger. R o o ^Hawkfrost ^lover♥ 18:25, July 8, 2011 (UTC)

Changes made. Approved. Apple dash ^the ^light ^of ^honor 18:37, July 8, 2011 (UTC)

Ivypool (A) - Redone[]

I just realized there's gray around her... xD I'll fix that in the next reupload. Original arist was Darkhallows, and she needed to be redone to match her other images. :3 R o o ^Hawkfrost ^lover♥ 19:03, July 7, 2011 (UTC)

Awesome job. ^.^ Add some stripes on the tail? ☄ℱrost h e art ϡ Hexakosioi hexekontahexaphobia 19:05, July 7, 2011 (UTC)

The white fur is much darker than her warrior image. Lighten it a bit. Nice job, otherwise. :) ☾Moon flight ☽ 19:09, July 7, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded. I couldn't lighten it anymore than this, but if it needs to be lightened anymore I could try lightening the shading. Oh and there were stripe son the tail, they just were hard to see, I defined them though. R o o ^Hawkfrost ^lover♥ 19:35, July 7, 2011 (UTC)

It looks fine now. :) ☾Moon flight ☽ 19:38, July 7, 2011 (UTC)

Its great, but the earpink is a little too light and hard to see. ∗ Mistystar ∗ ^{Trust the Fire Within...} 15:45, July 8, 2011 (UTC)

Blur the patches --Leaf strike -- 17:08, July 8, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded. The patches couldn't really be blurred anymore. R o o ^Hawkfrost ^lover♥ 18:24, July 8, 2011 (UTC)

Changes made. Approved. --Apple dash ^the ^light ^of ^honor 18:37, July 8, 2011 (UTC)

Bumblestripe (W) ~ Tweaked[]

Tore his ear. Rain legs 03:27, July 8, 2011 (UTC)

Thicken the lineart on the torn ear. --Leaf strike -- 15:17, July 8, 2011 (UTC)

State the original artist. And; define the earpink next to the tear. ∗ Mistystar ∗ ^{Trust the Fire Within...} 15:52, July 8, 2011 (UTC)

Yeah, once you've done that I think it should be ready! Iveh Yo ! 21:09, July 8, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded. The original artist was Nightshine. Rain legs 00:13, July 9, 2011 (UTC)

Improvements made. ☄ℱrost h e art ϡ Hexakosioi hexekontahexaphobia 00:19, July 9, 2011 (UTC)

Longtail (W) ~ Tweaked[]

Just de-saturated him. Anything else? Rain legs 03:11, July 8, 2011 (UTC)

Original artist? :P And; the earpink looks blotchy. Blur it to smoothen it out. ∗ Mistystar ∗ ^{Trust the Fire Within...} 15:50, July 8, 2011 (UTC)

Thicken the lineart on the torn ear. --Leaf strike -- 17:10, July 8, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded. The original artist was Insaneular. :P Rain legs 00:12, July 9, 2011 (UTC)

Improvements made. ☄ℱrost h e art ϡ Hexakosioi hexekontahexaphobia 00:19, July 9, 2011 (UTC)

Snowfur (A) - Redone[]

I'm pretty proud of this. ☾Moon flight ☽ 18:39, July 7, 2011 (UTC)

Re-uploaded: In regards to the comment below. ☾Moon flight ☽ 19:02, July 7, 2011 (UTC)

Oh yeah. Original artist was Spottedwing. ☾Moon flight ☽ 19:12, July 7, 2011 (UTC)

Oh, and I had to fix the shading and darken the ears. Don't kill me, Iceheart. ☾Moon flight ☽ 19:36, July 7, 2011 (UTC)

This looks awesome. :3 Blur the highlights a tad more and it should be ready. ☄ℱrost h e art ϡ Hexakosioi hexekontahexaphobia 16:47, July 8, 2011 (UTC)

Lighten the eartips a bit --Leaf strike -- 17:06, July 8, 2011 (UTC)

Lighten the eartips, blur the highlights, and make the shoulder highlight a bit larger. Great job! ∗ Mistystar ∗ ^{Trust the Fire Within...} 17:44, July 8, 2011 (UTC)

Re-uploaded: I didn't add hightlights. ☾Moon flight ☽ 17:45, July 8, 2011 (UTC)

Define the gray tips and it should be ready. >:3 ☄ℱrost h e art ϡ Hexakosioi hexekontahexaphobia 20:53, July 8, 2011 (UTC)

Re-uploaded: How's this, hun? 83 ☾Moon flight ☽ 21:14, July 8, 2011 (UTC)

This looks good to me. Iveh Yo ! 21:35, July 8, 2011 (UTC)

Improvements made. ☄ℱrost h e art ϡ Hexakosioi hexekontahexaphobia 00:28, July 9, 2011 (UTC)

Echosong (MC) - Redone[]

Dear Y Striped Tabbi, I will kill you. D:< Anyways, comments? xD ☄ℱrost h e art ϡ Hexakosioi hexekontahexaphobia 05:29, July 7, 2011 (UTC) Edit: Redone as longhair, and it needed a white chest. Original artist is Bramble, I believe.. o.o ☄ℱrost h e art ϡ Hexakosioi hexekontahexaphobia 17:02, July 7, 2011 (UTC)

Blur the shading, blur the transitions between the dark gray and silver, move the ear pink up in her ear. M o ss y ♫^{go away.} 05:34, July 7, 2011 (UTC)

Reploaded. ☄ℱrost h e art ϡ Hexakosioi hexekontahexaphobia 05:40, July 7, 2011 (UTC)

Smudge the white chest. ♥ Paleclaw ^{May StarClan be with you ♥} 08:45, July 7, 2011 (UTC)

Ooh, I like this! Blur the shading. ☆ Snowdazzle ☆ ^{I hate that llama} 11:03, July 7, 2011 (UTC)

Darken the earpink a tad. Maple♥pool^{^{School? Pfft. SUMMERTIME!}} 14:40, July 7, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded. ☄ℱrost h e art ϡ Hexakosioi hexekontahexaphobia 15:13, July 7, 2011 (UTC)

Maybe blur more of the shading on the chest. Sa lc ie 15:24, July 7, 2011 (UTC)

I don't think the shading needs to be blurred more on the chest. ☄ℱrost h e art ϡ Hexakosioi hexekontahexaphobia 17:12, July 7, 2011 (UTC)

Can you maybe lighten the chest shading so it looks more white? And make the earpink a little bigger. Looks great! :3 R o o ^Hawkfrost ^lover♥ 17:41, July 7, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded. ☄ℱrost h e art ϡ Hexakosioi hexekontahexaphobia 17:50, July 7, 2011 (UTC)

The chest marking looks a little too circular, could you smudge it or blur it a little? Overall, though, you did a really nice job :D Darkhallows ^{Enter the cave?} 17:55, July 7, 2011 (UTC)

Yeah, I agree with Darkhallows, smudge it some :3 Maybe make the earpink a tad more triangular as well? Splook ^sweet ^{^creature} 18:01, July 7, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded. Not sure if the changse showed. ;3 ☄ℱrost h e art ϡ Hexakosioi hexekontahexaphobia 18:25, July 7, 2011 (UTC)

The white on the chest, its just un-natural. I'd smudge it and blur it, alot. Paulmer 19:10, July 7, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded. I redid the chest, but I'm pretty sure the changes aren't showing, so don't comment about the chest, please. ☄ℱrost h e art ϡ Hexakosioi hexekontahexaphobia 19:45, July 7, 2011 (UTC)

Add highlights to the front legs & pawz --Bloo!^yo

Reuploaded. ☄ℱrost h e art ϡ Hexakosioi hexekontahexaphobia 22:01, July 7, 2011 (UTC)

Shading needs to be blurred more and the eye looks weird. Wild fire 04:35, July 8, 2011 (UTC)

I don't really think the shading should be blurred more, but I might blur it later. xD And the eye is a style of doing..an..eye. xD ☄ℱrost h e art ϡ Hexakosioi hexekontahexaphobia 04:53, July 8, 2011 (UTC)

Define the earpink --Leaf strike -- 17:04, July 8, 2011 (UTC)

Good work! Blur the part where the white meets the gray more. ∗ Mistystar ∗ ^{Trust the Fire Within...} 17:34, July 8, 2011 (UTC)

Very good. Do the above and I believe it will be ready for approval --Apple dash ^the ^light ^of ^honor 18:31, July 8, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded. ☄ℱrost h e art ϡ Hexakosioi hexekontahexaphobia 18:47, July 8, 2011 (UTC)

Blur the white chest a bit more. --Apple dash ^the ^light ^of ^honor 18:58, July 8, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded. I'm not blurring it anymore than that. ;P ☄ℱrost h e art ϡ Hexakosioi hexekontahexaphobia 19:12, July 8, 2011 (UTC)

Beautiful! Define the earpink a tad. Iveh Yo ! 20:11, July 8, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded. ☄ℱrost h e art ϡ Hexakosioi hexekontahexaphobia 01:15, July 9, 2011 (UTC)

Changes made. Approved. --Apple dash ^the ^light ^of ^honor 14:53, July 9, 2011 (UTC)

Webfoot (W) ~ Tweaked[]

Original artist was Nightshine. All I did was tear the other ear. Anything else? Rain legs 04:36, July 9, 2011 (UTC)

Nope; Improvment completed. -❄ſce h e a r t ♥ ^{Blah blah} 17:40, July 9, 2011 (UTC)

Mistystar (K) ~ Redone[]

Original artist:Brightfrost; Redone:blue-gray, fixed lineart, redid highlights. ∗ Mistystar ∗ ^{Trust the Fire Within...} 20:38, July 7, 2011 (UTC)

Define the shading &&& Add highlights on the front paws --Bloo!^yo

Re-Uploaded. ∗ Mistystar ∗ ^{Trust the Fire Within...} 23:08, July 7, 2011 (UTC)

Blur the earpink. ♥ Paleclaw ^{May StarClan be with you ♥} 23:16, July 7, 2011 (UTC)

Re-Uploaded. I can't blur it anymore. ∗ Mistystar ∗ ^{Trust the Fire Within...} 15:47, July 8, 2011 (UTC)

Darken the tail highlight, it looks too bright compared to the rest of the highlights --Leaf strike -- 17:09, July 8, 2011 (UTC)

Re-Uploaded. ∗ Mistystar ∗ ^{Trust the Fire Within...} 18:01, July 8, 2011 (UTC)

Move the earpink up a bit in her ears. Looks good. :3 R o o ^Hawkfrost ^lover♥ 18:26, July 8, 2011 (UTC)

Re-Uploaded. ∗ Mistystar ∗ ^{Trust the Fire Within...} 18:34, July 8, 2011 (UTC)

Define the shading a little. Iveh Yo ! 20:14, July 8, 2011 (UTC)

Re-Uploaded. ∗ Mistystar ∗ ^{Trust the Fire Within...} 20:17, July 8, 2011 (UTC)

Make the earpink just a little bigger. R o o ^Hawkfrost ^lover♥ 01:56, July 10, 2011 (UTC)

Well, it says in the guidelines that once there are no comments for 24 hours it is approved, and its already been 24 hours, so isn't it done? :P Besides, if I made the earpink any larger it would fill the entire ear. ∗ Mistystar ∗ ^{Trust the Fire Within...} 02:09, July 10, 2011 (UTC)

Improvement completed. -❄ſce h e a r t ♥ ^{Blah blah} 20:02, July 10, 2011 (UTC)

Jayfeather (A) - Redone[]

Mkay, I uploaded it but for me, it's showing a flat version of the original picture. xD So um, yeah. This ish bad. :3 Comments? ☄ℱrost h e art ϡ Hexakosioi hexekontahexaphobia 16:15, July 9, 2011 (UTC)

His eye looks white. Wild breath 16:20, July 9, 2011 (UTC)

I got the colours from his medicine cat image. ☄ℱrost h e art ϡ Hexakosioi hexekontahexaphobia 16:30, July 9, 2011 (UTC)

The earpink looks blotchy. ✿Dapplecloud ✿^{A pang in the heart...} 02:36, July 10, 2011 (UTC)

Enlarge the earpink a bit, make it more triangular, blur the shading and highlights on the tail, and the eyes look appropriate for a blind cat.-Kittycat79 ^{Kitties Rule!} 02:53, July 10, 2011 (UTC)

The fur color on the body looks a bit blue, but the tail looks gray. They don't match that well...and redden the earpink, too. ∗ Mistystar ∗ ^{Trust the Fire Within...} 06:12, July 10, 2011 (UTC)

She said she took the pelt colors from the medicine cat image, so it should be fine. R o o ^Hawkfrost ^lover♥ 15:26, July 10, 2011 (UTC)

Okay, then blur the shoulder highlight a bit more. ∗ Mistystar ∗ ^{Trust the Fire Within...} 15:33, July 10, 2011 (UTC)

Darken the haunch highlight, please. Lawliet ^Talk 21:43, July 10, 2011 (UTC)

I think you guys are seeing the wrnog file...the highlights barely show in the file I see. ☄ℱrost h e art ϡ Hexakosioi hexekontahexaphobia 00:34, July 11, 2011 (UTC)

Uploading issues again? Which file is it? ∗ Mistystar ∗ ^{Trust the Fire Within...} 00:50, July 11, 2011 (UTC)

Go to the image's details, I'm pretty sure you'll see the updated one. It'd be kinda small, though. Whenever I expand it, it shows the old version. xD ☄ℱrost h e art ϡ Hexakosioi hexekontahexaphobia 01:46, July 11, 2011 (UTC)

Looks GREAT, but to make the eyes look blind, maybe instead of just making the eye color really light, you could make the pupil a little lighter and make it blend into the eye color more. Here's a picture, I'm horrible at explaining. XD File:Jay Eye.png. Like that. To make it look kinda cloudy. You don't have to of course. XD ♥ Paleclaw ^{May StarClan be with you ♥} 07:26, July 11, 2011 (UTC)

Since he was born blind, his eyes wouldn't look any different from a normal cats'. --Gοlden pelt 07:39, July 11, 2011 (UTC)

Hmmmmm I guess. But that's getting kinda technical. I guess if we're gonna go by what would happen scientifically, the eyes should just be brightened then. *shrugs* As far as I kow, we've never really gone by that kind of stuff and neither has Erin Hunter. ♥ Paleclaw ^{May StarClan be with you ♥} 10:10, July 11, 2011 (UTC)

Agreed. =) Just make the eye regular. ∗ Mistystar ∗ ^{Trust the Fire Within...} 15:53, July 11, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded. I took the colours from the medicine cat again and darkened it. xD ☄ℱrost h e art ϡ Hexakosioi hexekontahexaphobia 17:44, July 11, 2011 (UTC)

Improvements made. Approved. --Apple dash ^the ^light ^of ^honor 21:46, July 12, 2011 (UTC)

Adderfang (W) - Redone[]

I had a hard time findin' the right colour for shading. xD Comments? ☄ℱrost h e art ϡ Hexakosioi hexekontahexaphobia 05:00, July 7, 2011 (UTC) Edit: Honeyfur was the original artist; needed it to match the deputy picture. ☄ℱrost h e art ϡ Hexakosioi hexekontahexaphobia 17:01, July 7, 2011 (UTC)

<-- Change some of the stripes to spots. --Gοlden pelt 05:42, July 7, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded, not sure if the changes showed. xD ☄ℱrost h e art ϡ Hexakosioi hexekontahexaphobia 05:47, July 7, 2011 (UTC)

You were supposed to state the original artist and what needed to be done tsk tsk. You might want to check out the rules again;). -❄ſce h e a r t ♥ ^{Blah blah} 16:54, July 7, 2011 (UTC)

Well, I've always been quite the rule breaker. ;D ☄ℱrost h e art ϡ Hexakosioi hexekontahexaphobia 17:01, July 7, 2011 (UTC)

Lighten the whole thing up a bit. --Leaf strike -- 17:04, July 8, 2011 (UTC)

Add highlights to the front paw. Great work! ∗ Mistystar ∗ ^{Trust the Fire Within...} 17:29, July 8, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded. ☄ℱrost h e art ϡ Hexakosioi hexekontahexaphobia 18:46, July 8, 2011 (UTC)

The tail shading is awfully dark. You should lighten it a bit. ☾Moon flight ☽ 19:21, July 8, 2011 (UTC)

I think the shading is fine. ☄ℱrost h e art ϡ Hexakosioi hexekontahexaphobia 19:34, July 8, 2011 (UTC)

Shouldn't this get highlights since his other pixil has them? Also, can't we just integrate most of the deputy version into this and just tweak the body parts that are different? Iveh Yo ! 20:10, July 8, 2011 (UTC)

This does has highlights, and it just has to have the same markings as the deputy. It doesn't need to have same shading, highlights, etc. ☄ℱrost h e art ϡ Hexakosioi hexekontahexaphobia 20:12, July 8, 2011 (UTC)

The highlights of his body are lighter than his head highlights. Lighten the head highlight. ∗ Mistystar ∗ ^{Trust the Fire Within...} 02:26, July 10, 2011 (UTC)

I, personally, think the highlights look fine. Highlights don't need to be the same tone, I suppose. Splook ^sweet ^{^creature} 03:51, July 10, 2011 (UTC)

It would match better that way... ∗ Mistystar ∗ ^{Trust the Fire Within...} 15:14, July 10, 2011 (UTC)

Well I don't know then, It's the artist's choice. Splook ^sweet ^{^creature} 16:40, July 10, 2011 (UTC)

Okay, I guess so. ∗ Mistystar ∗ ^{Trust the Fire Within...} 16:49, July 10, 2011 (UTC)

Darken the ear pink. Looks good, Froo :3 ⚛Ni gh tfl ow er⚛^{^{☣Absol invasion☣}} 21:40, July 10, 2011 (UTC)

Looks amazing, Frostheart. Can you lighten up the shading just a tad though? Lawliet ^Talk 21:48, July 10, 2011 (UTC)

The ear pink is to sharp and piontey and more highlights on the chest area Squishee DONT EAT MY FOOD! 01:05, July 11, 2011 (UTC)

I did all of the above, but @Sandstorm, I blurred the ear pink a tad, but if I added more highlights, it'd be too much, and it'd look like..funkeh. xD ☄ℱrost h e art ϡ Hexakosioi hexekontahexaphobia 01:13, July 11, 2011 (UTC)

Changes made. Approved. --Apple dash ^the ^light ^of ^honor 21:50, July 12, 2011 (UTC)

Lionblaze (A) - Redone[]

I just noticed some extra gray on both of my chararts so I'll fix that in the next upload. :P Original artist was Moonpelt1786. I just made him long-haired. R o o ^Hawkfrost ^lover♥ 22:14, July 8, 2011 (UTC)

Nice job! Darken the shading a bit, and blur the white chest where it meets the tortie marks. ∗ Mistystar ∗ ^{Trust the Fire Within...} 22:14, July 8, 2011 (UTC)

Eh, Misty, didn't you meant that for Spottedleaf's charart^^? x) --Bloo!^yo

Yes, I did. :P I'll change it. And for this one, redden the earpink. ∗ Mistystar ∗ ^{Trust the Fire Within...} 22:23, July 8, 2011 (UTC)

I thinks so. It probbaly just appeared on here because I posted Lionblaze right before she posted that comment on Spottedleaf, so Lionblaze went first. x3 R o o ^Hawkfrost ^lover♥ 22:24, July 8, 2011 (UTC)

Blur or smudge the markings more. Iveh Yo ! 22:33, July 8, 2011 (UTC)

Did you get the colors off of his original warrior version? I got my colors off of it, but yours looks lighter and browner than mine... ∗ Mistystar ∗ ^{Trust the Fire Within...} 22:43, July 8, 2011 (UTC)

This is Hollowpaw's apprentice image. ??100 ways to die no. 9: Being ^ugly 02:56, July 9, 2011 (UTC)

I'm confused. . . Lionblaze is golden? M o ss y ♫^{go away.} 04:17, July 9, 2011 (UTC)

Someone probably accidentally posted the image here in place of Roo's. I fixed it. xD ☄ℱrost h e art ϡ Hexakosioi hexekontahexaphobia 04:28, July 9, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded. R o o ^Hawkfrost ^lover♥ 15:23, July 9, 2011 (UTC)

There's some loose shading above his back left foot, between it and the front legs. Shellheart 15:54, July 9, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded. R o o ^Hawkfrost ^lover♥ 21:52, July 9, 2011 (UTC)

He needs a torn ear. Wild fire 22:46, July 9, 2011 (UTC)

Also, this looks waaaay too dark. Lighten up a bit, will you? (I kid, I kid) But really, it's too dark in my opinion. Shelly_{For a limited time only} 22:50, July 9, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded. I got the colors from his original warrior image like Mistystar, so I'm not going to lighten it. R o o ^Hawkfrost ^lover♥ 23:23, July 9, 2011 (UTC)

No, I meant that the shading was too heavy, not that the color was wrong. Sorry, I should've specified. Shelly_{For a limited time only} 23:24, July 9, 2011 (UTC)

If I lighten it it'll look a bit flat, so I won't change it unless others agree. R o o ^Hawkfrost ^lover♥ 01:58, July 10, 2011 (UTC)

Make the lineart thicker at the torn ear. ∗ Mistystar ∗ ^{Trust the Fire Within...} 02:44, July 10, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded. R o o ^Hawkfrost ^lover♥ 15:25, July 10, 2011 (UTC)

Make the lineart thicker still at the ear. Why not try setting the pencil tool at one, and try it once more? Lawliet ^Talk 21:45, July 10, 2011 (UTC)

That's how I did do it. It's just that when I made it thicker, it would look too fat. I'll try it anyway, though... :P R o o ^Hawkfrost ^lover♥ 22:32, July 10, 2011 (UTC)

I don't know if its showing the current version, but tthe ear isn't torn anymore. ∗ Mistystar ∗ ^{Trust the Fire Within...} 23:14, July 10, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded. R o o ^Hawkfrost ^lover♥ 02:47, July 11, 2011 (UTC)

Define the shading and other than that, it looks good. ✿Dapplecloud ✿^{A pang in the heart...} 15:37, July 11, 2011 (UTC)

I think the shading is defined enough... x3 R o o ^Hawkfrost ^lover♥ 17:33, July 11, 2011 (UTC)

Nice job. Approved. --Apple dash ^the ^light ^of ^honor 21:55, July 12, 2011 (UTC)

Lionblaze (W) ~ Redone[]

Original artist:Bramble; Redone:Longhaired. The tail stripes suck. Comments? ∗ Mistystar ∗ ^{Trust the Fire Within...} 19:37, July 8, 2011 (UTC)

Add a nicked ear. And I don't see why he should be longhaired, was he ever described as that? --Leaf strike -- 20:12, July 8, 2011 (UTC)

I still don't think we need to redo these for pelt lengths, it's easy to just add the long hair, but whatever. Add shading to the back of his front leg/arm, blur shading on tail Iveh Yo ! 20:17, July 8, 2011 (UTC)

Re-Uploaded. He was described with long or fluffy fur or something. ∗ Mistystar ∗ ^{Trust the Fire Within...} 20:19, July 8, 2011 (UTC)

They're no mention of it on his page. --Gοlden pelt 20:35, July 8, 2011 (UTC)

There isn't? Its on the list of images that need to be redone. See Forum:Tweak Week 2 Nominations. ∗ Mistystar ∗ ^{Trust the Fire Within...} 20:38, July 8, 2011 (UTC)

There's a tiny white pixel on the chest fur. Snowdazzle¹²³^{Lets count numbers!} 21:24, July 8, 2011 (UTC)

Oops. I'll fix that. xD ∗ Mistystar ∗ ^{Trust the Fire Within...} 21:47, July 8, 2011 (UTC)

Re-Uploaded. ∗ Mistystar ∗ ^{Trust the Fire Within...} 21:50, July 8, 2011 (UTC)

Darken the shading and blur it, blur the stripes, and blur the earpink. R o o ^Hawkfrost ^lover♥ 21:56, July 8, 2011 (UTC)

Re-Uploaded. Darkened the shading a lot, blurred it as much as possible, blurred stripes, fixed the earpink. ∗ Mistystar ∗ ^{Trust the Fire Within...} 22:22, July 8, 2011 (UTC)

Oops, just noticed that I named the file wrong. I'll change it. ∗ Mistystar ∗ ^{Trust the Fire Within...} 22:49, July 8, 2011 (UTC)

There! Renamed. ∗ Mistystar ∗ ^{Trust the Fire Within...} 22:55, July 8, 2011 (UTC)

The stripes look really odd, they're just big triangles and they're uber pixelly. M o ss y ♫^{go away.} 04:22, July 9, 2011 (UTC)

You should give him forehead stripes to match his kit art. Otherwise, I think it looks great. ^^ Shelly_{For a limited time only} 22:48, July 9, 2011 (UTC)

You should use the same stripe pattern Wild fire 22:53, July 9, 2011 (UTC)

Blur the shading. It's turning out nice! ✿Dapplecloud ✿^{A pang in the heart...} 00:51, July 10, 2011 (UTC)

Darken the shading more or brighten the highlights. R o o ^Hawkfrost ^lover♥ 01:14, July 10, 2011 (UTC)

No, his kit art is going to be redone, so there's no point in matching it. I'll fix the shading. ∗ Mistystar ∗ ^{Trust the Fire Within...} 01:26, July 10, 2011 (UTC)

Re-Uploaded ∗ Mistystar ∗ ^{Trust the Fire Within...} 01:35, July 10, 2011 (UTC)

How come when I look at the image, it's a stretched out version of his old warrior charart?100 ways to die no. 9: Being ^ugly 01:19, July 11, 2011 (UTC)

Uploading problems. Its the second file on the File page. ∗ Mistystar ∗ ^{Trust the Fire Within...} 01:43, July 11, 2011 (UTC)

Lol. Its already been 24 hours with no comments to improve it...so its approved. See the guidelines, of course. xD ∗ Mistystar ∗ ^{Trust the Fire Within...} 01:45, July 11, 2011 (UTC)

There's still no mention of it on his page. :/ --Gοlden pelt 07:41, July 11, 2011 (UTC)

Oh, I remember now! In one of the om books, he was called thick furred...I think. But its technically approved, so I'm not changing it to shorthair. ∗ Mistystar ∗ ^{Trust the Fire Within...} 08:16, July 11, 2011 (UTC)

The shading's too dark Squishee DONT EAT MY FOOD! 15:40, July 11, 2011 (UTC)

No its not. I was repeatedly told to darken the shading, and besides, since this passed through 24 hours with no comments, its done. ∗ Mistystar ∗ ^{Trust the Fire Within...} 15:51, July 11, 2011 (UTC)

I'm just saying, I don't think it should be approved until there's a citation for it on his page. --Gοlden pelt 17:34, July 11, 2011 (UTC)

Well, it is approved already, I'm just waiting for it to be archived. I'll look for a citation, though. ∗ Mistystar ∗ ^{Trust the Fire Within...} 17:36, July 11, 2011 (UTC)

I have the Citation, Page 170 or page 173, after the battle with the dog Toadstep says "Wow, your so good at fighting, you don't even have a wound on you!" Lionblaze replays "It must just my long fur." looking in the brambles he was just in he adds "But I think most of it came off in the brambles!" they then head back to camp. That a good enough Cite for you, Goldenpelt? :P Maple♥pool^{^{School? Pfft. SUMMERTIME!}} 02:04, July 12, 2011 (UTC)

Yes so this will be approved. -❄ſce h e a r t ♥ ^{Blah blah} 00:38, July 13, 2011 (UTC)

Owlstar (SotC) (L) - Tweaked[]

So, I tweaked it, but I still don't think it looks right. Suggestions, anyone? And Editing Warriors Wiki talk:Charart/Tweaked 5 (section) - Warrior Cats Wiki - Erin Hunter, Night Whispers, Omen of the Starsyes, I am aware of the gray around Owlstar, I'll take care of that later on - I just wanted opinions on how it looks otherwise. Lawliet ^Talk 18:58, July 7, 2011 (UTC)

Blur the shading. ☄ℱrost h e art ϡ Hexakosioi hexekontahexaphobia 19:06, July 7, 2011 (UTC)

Make the nose gray. -❄ſce h e a r t ♥ ^{Blah blah} 19:08, July 7, 2011 (UTC)

You know, his description says that he has large eyes. Would it be possible for the leader art to reflect this? ~Shellheart
:Probably not. Please sign with ~~~~ ☾Moon flight ☽ 19:34, July 7, 2011 (UTC)
:Ah well, it was worth a shot. Shellheart 20:26, July 7, 2011 (UTC)
Blurr, blurr, blurr ALL AROUND x) Especially the
haunch & the tail --Bloo!^yo

Oh, yeah, I know. I did it on a laptop, so, it's kinda hard to do it correctly. I'll be fixing this up and re-uploading within the next few days. I'll be getting internet access on my new laptop hopefully by Monday, so, please don't clutter up the section - I'll take care of it. Lawliet ^Talk 21:45, July 7, 2011 (UTC)

Oh, okay x) --Bloo!^yo

Erase the waste around him, unless that's how you shade --Leaf strike -- 17:07, July 8, 2011 (UTC)

Make the nose gray, and smudge the earpink into the ear a bit. Nice job! ∗ Mistystar ∗ ^{Trust the Fire Within...} 17:49, July 8, 2011 (UTC)

Blur the shading a lot, and erase the waste as previously said. Iveh Yo ! 20:14, July 8, 2011 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. So, does this look better? Lawliet ^Talk 02:15, July 9, 2011 (UTC)

Blur the shading a ton more. ☄ℱrost h e art ϡ Hexakosioi hexekontahexaphobia 03:34, July 9, 2011 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. I sat her

e and blurred for at least an hour, and I still don't think it looks okay. It looking fine on GIMP, but when you upload it, it looks darker. I use Google Chrome, so I don't know if that has anything to do with it... Lawliet ^Talk 13:35, July 9, 2011 (UTC)

There's still loose gray around his right ear, above his right haunch, above his right and left back feet, between his tail and haunch, on his left shoulder and on the tip of his tail. I advise just zooming in as close as you can and using the smallest eraser size in gimp. Shellheart 14:08, July 9, 2011 (UTC)

Shellheart, you're amazing. Thanks for pointing that out. My eyes don't react well to bright light, so the brightness on the comp

uter is low, and that's why I didn't see it. Lawliet ^Talk 14:30, July 9, 2011 (UTC)

Re-Uploaded. I tried my best, and also moved the ear pink...well...back up into his ear. It was bleeding down onto the head, from what it looked like. Lawliet ^Talk 14:45, July 9, 2011 (UTC)

File:Owlstar (SotC).leader circled.pngHere, I circled wherever I saw some shading leaking out. I'd fix it myself, but as I'm still a kit I can't. Shellheart 15:52, July 9, 2011 (UTC)

Sorry about that. I'm still getting used to the project. Shellheart 16:05, July 9, 2011 (UTC)

Darken the nose and get rid of the 'glow' look Wild fire 22:57, July 9, 2011 (UTC)
:Please don't repeat what has already been said. Cloudskye is fully aware that she needs to remove the waste surrounding the image. There is absolutely no need to repeat what's already been said. If that's not what you mean, you really need to elaborate because if we can't understand it, there's no way Cloudskye can. ☾Moon flight ☽ 23:53, July 9, 2011 (UTC)
:

I said sorry because I accidentally let the image slip into the slot below this one. And I repeated what I said earlier because she said she was having a hard time seeing what had leaked out, and had re-uploaded thinking she'd gotten all of the waste off. I'm only trying to help here, not bully anyone. You'll note above that she actually thanked me for my help. I may be new to the project, but I do know how things work here, and when to and not to say something, thanks. Shelly_{For a limited time only} 01:11, July 10, 2011 (UTC)
:Smudge the earpink into the ear more. ∗ Mistystar ∗ ^{Trust the Fire Within...} 02:18, July 10, 2011 (UTC)
:

There's a place on the left side of the face that's light black, kind of gray. Make it match the rest of the face's colour. ✿Dapplecloud ✿^{A pang in the heart...} 02:31, July 10, 2011 (UTC)

Moonflight, Shellheart. Please calm down. Moonflight, I'm grateful for Shellheart's help. My eyes are acting up, and it's really hard for me to see certain things. Shellheart, I understand you're new to the project, and don't worry. Their bark is worse then their bite. I'll be fixing the all the problems now, and re-uploading in a few. Lawliet ^Talk 15:08, July 10, 2011 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. Okay. Let's see here... I fixed the ear pink, darkened the nose and hopefully got all of the gray area. Lawliet ^Talk 20:38, July 10, 2011 (UTC)

Moonflight, if you were talking to me, sorry I didn't see those comments you're talking about. Cloudskye, blur the haunch shading a little bit. Wild fire 21:25, July 10, 2011 (UTC)

Make the nose more gray. ∗ Mistystar ∗ ^{Trust the Fire Within...} 21:26, July 10, 2011 (UTC)

Oh, and I still see some gray around the charart. ∗ Mistystar ∗ ^{Trust the Fire Within...} 21:30, July 10, 2011 (UTC)

Thanks, Misty. I must have missed some. Re-Uploaded. Shading blurred, nose darkened and gray eliminated. Lawliet ^Talk 21:37, July 10, 2011 (UTC).

Brighten the tail highlight. Snowdazzle¹²³^{Lets count numbers!} 21:58, July 10, 2011 (UTC)

Yup, you got everything! Awesome. I just wanted to help because my eyes are photophobic, too. I know how to work around it, though. Good job! Shelly_{For a limited time only} 22:05, July 10, 2011 (UTC)

Thank you a ton. And re-uploaded. Snowdazzle, does that work for you? Lawliet ^Talk 22:09, July 10, 2011 (UTC)

It looks kinda thin....... Snowdazzle¹²³^{Lets count numbers!} 22:43, July 10, 2011 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. *singsong voice* Cloudy says this looks like crap, doo-dah, doo-dah. Cloudy says this looks like crap, oh yes it does. */end singsong voice* (xD) Lawliet ^Talk 22:57, July 10, 2011 (UTC)

It doesn't look like crap! The shading's pretty good, its just that there's still some gray around the charart on the left. ∗ Mistystar ∗ ^{Trust the Fire Within...} 23:12, July 10, 2011 (UTC)

Re-uploaded....*grumbles* This is killing my eyes.... >.> Lawliet ^Talk 23:32, July 10, 2011 (UTC)

Well, the gray might be gone, and the changes just might not be showing... ∗ Mistystar ∗ ^{Trust the Fire Within...} 23:42, July 10, 2011 (UTC)L

Looks great! Blur the shading on the tail. User:XXXSpecklestreamXXX/Sig 08:34, July 11, 2011 (UTC)

It is looking good! Blur the right haunch leg needs to have it's shading blurred a bit.

That was just me...forgot my sigge. ✿Dapplecloud ✿^{A pang in the heart...} 15:28, July 11, 2011 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. Better? And don't worry. We all forget to sign once in a while. I know I do. =) Lawliet ^Light 01:21, July 13, 2011 (UTC)

Better. Improvment made. -❄ſce h e a r t ♥ ^{Blah blah} 02:06, July 13, 2011 (UTC)

Tigerheart (W) ~ Tweaked[]

I tore the ear, but the changes aren't showing, so you'll have to go to his history page to see the changes. Original Artist was Bramble. Oh, and comments? ❋Rai ney 08:49, July 11, 2011 (UTC)

Looks awesome! I changed the title for you to Tigerheart (W) ~ Tweaked. xD ∗ Mistystar ∗ ^{Trust the Fire Within...} 08:52, July 11, 2011 (UTC)

Oh thanks! =D ❋Rai ney 08:53, July 11, 2011 (UTC)

There's a little waste above his torn ear. Otherwise it looks great! Shelly_{For a limited time only} 14:58, July 11, 2011 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. Okay, I removed the waste, I think. Anything else? ❋Rai ney 02:12, July 12, 2011 (UTC)

Define the shading on the front leg (arm) closest to us a little. Iveh Yo ! 20:23, July 12, 2011 (UTC)

I don't think the front leg shading needs to be defined. The tweak week list only said that Tigerheart needed a torn ear. ❋Rai ney 03:25, July 13, 2011 (UTC)

Not needed, just the ear needed tweaking. Archiving. -❄ſce h e a r t ♥ ^{Blah blah} 03:27, July 13, 2011 (UTC)

Hollyleaf (MCA) - Redone[]

Like her warrior, she needed to be long haired. ♥ Paleclaw ^{May StarClan be with you ♥} 05:57, July 7, 2011 (UTC)

The earpink extends to the top of her ear a little too much. Darkhallows ^{Enter the cave?} 17:57, July 7, 2011 (UTC)

Darken the shading on the tail. Good job! ∗ Mistystar ∗ ^{Trust the Fire Within...} 19:31, July 7, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded - I fixed the earpink and made the shading more visible on the tail. I forgot to mention that the original artist on this was Mapelfern. ♥ Paleclaw ^{May StarClan be with you ♥} 23:14, July 7, 2011 (UTC)

I see nothing wrong with this. --Leaf strike -- 17:06, July 8, 2011 (UTC)

It looks fantastic! Could you lighten the highlight on the tail a little more so that it looks as light as her other highlights? If you can't, then this is perfect. :D ∗ Mistystar ∗ ^{Trust the Fire Within...} 17:37, July 8, 2011 (UTC)

Define the tail shading. ✿Dapplecloud ✿^{A pang in the heart...} 01:12, July 10, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded - Done. And I also reuploaded over the old file and I'm putting a delete tag on the new one. I didn't know that it was case sensitive when it came to file names. I figured it'd just upload over the original file. It's not showing up right now though, it's just a stretched version of the shorthaired one. ♥ Paleclaw ^{May StarClan be with you ♥} 07:05, July 11, 2011 (UTC)

I checked, and its not uploaded over the original file. ∗ Mistystar ∗ ^{Trust the Fire Within...} 08:27, July 11, 2011 (UTC)

Yes it is. This is her MEDICINE CAT apprentice, not her plain apprentice. XD ♥ Paleclaw ^{May StarClan be with you ♥} 10:02, July 11, 2011 (UTC)

lol. I can't tell the difference xD I deleted the old file now. It looks wonderful, but why are all the herbs the same shade of green? ∗ Mistystar ∗ ^{Trust the Fire Within...} 15:25, July 11, 2011 (UTC)

Thanks! ^^ I don't know, I just personally think they look better like that. They don't have to be, but it's just my preference. XD ♥ Paleclaw ^{May StarClan be with you ♥} 07:17, July 12, 2011 (UTC)

Changes made, improvment complete. Darkhallows ^{Enter the cave?} 03:36, July 13, 2011 (UTC)

Redtail (D)~ Redone[]

Needed to be redone as a long hair. Original artist is PockyStar. Comments? -❄ſce h e a r t ♥ ^{Blah blah} 04:22, July 7, 2011 (UTC)

It did not need to be redone. All we would have to do is change the tail. That was totally unnecessary. The images were completely fine, it just needed to be long-haired. Please just take the old one and make it long-haired instead of making a new one, same goes for the warrior. Posting a totally new one would mean an entire approval process, which we simply do not have time for. The old images were already approved and looked fine, it was just the tail. Having the images redone is far more time consuming. M o ss y ♫^{go away.} 04:27, July 7, 2011 (UTC)

It needs to be redone, and if you had an issue with it you should have brought it up on the forum. No one else disagreed. -❄ſce h e a r t ♥ ^{Blah blah} 04:32, July 7, 2011 (UTC)

Where was it said that it needed to be redone...Ugh. Can you please give me a link to the forum where it was said that he needed to be redone? Anyways, take off the brown, as tortoiseshell cats cannot possibly have brown markings, and the smudging is really wonky. A cat's fur goes in one direction, and smudging creates a furry texture. The smudging shouldn't go out every which way. Move the ear pink up in his ear, darken/desturate it and darken the shading. Remove the mottled spots on his tail. M o ss y ♫^{go away.} 05:04, July 7, 2011 (UTC)

Oh and remove the random little white spots. That is also not possible on a cat and it just looks strange anyways. M o ss y ♫^{go away.} 05:05, July 7, 2011 (UTC)

I think ALL the white should be removed. It says on his page he's a DARK tortoiseshell, like Tawnypelt, not a tortoiseshell and white. And he does need to be redone. He needs to be dappled, given feathered ears (he still needs those BTW), made a DARK tortoiseshell plus he needs to be long haired. This is absolutely GORGEOUS though. ♥ Paleclaw ^{May StarClan be with you ♥} 08:48, July 7, 2011 (UTC)

RE-uploaded- Thats a realistic dark tortie. I dont care for it. -❄ſce h e a r t ♥ ^{Blah blah} 21:08, July 7, 2011 (UTC)

You need to get rid of the patterns on his tail, and his markings look like smudged orange stripes, they should be more like patches (but still smudged of course). M o ss y ♫^{go away.} 21:10, July 7, 2011 (UTC)

Look at a reallt dark tortie and it does lok like stripes, and the tail is supposed to be dappled. -❄ſce h e a r t ♥ ^{Blah blah} 21:13, July 7, 2011 (UTC)

See my comment on his warrior image below v v --Bloo!^yo

Redid it again because i really didnt like the old way. -❄ſce h e a r t ♥ ^{Blah blah} 00:14, July 8, 2011 (UTC)

Make the smudging smoother, again. ;3 Like the one below. ☄ℱrost h e art ϡ Hexakosioi hexekontahexaphobia 00:47, July 8, 2011 (UTC)

Its really good! Make the earpink smoother and less blotchy. ∗ Mistystar ∗ ^{Trust the Fire Within...} 16:27, July 8, 2011 (UTC)

Darken the shading. --Leaf strike -- 16:52, July 8, 2011 (UTC)

REuploaded. -❄ſce h e a r t ♥ ^{Blah blah} 19:23, July 8, 2011 (UTC)

It says in his description that he has feathered ears...shouldn't the ends of his ears be fuzzy? Blur the earpink a tad bit more. Iveh Yo ! 20:08, July 8, 2011 (UTC)

Re-uploaded- -❄ſce h e a r t ♥ ^{Blah blah} 01:11, July 9, 2011 (UTC)

Re-uploaded- -❄ſce h e a r t ♥ ^{Blah blah} 17:36, July 9, 2011 (UTC)

The eye lineart is a little lighter, Great job :D Splook ^sweet ^{^creature} 03:39, July 10, 2011 (UTC)

Awesome job! Just fix the comment above, and it should be good... ∗ Mistystar ∗ ^{Trust the Fire Within...} 15:17, July 10, 2011 (UTC)

It looks great, just that the earpink doesn't look like an earpink...it's a bit light. ✿Dapplecloud ✿^{A pang in the heart...} 15:21, July 10, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded- -❄ſce h e a r t ♥ ^{Blah blah} 19:44, July 10, 2011 (UTC)

The ear pink looks like it's blending into the red part of his fur on his neck. Can this be fixed? Lawliet ^Talk 21:49, July 10, 2011 (UTC)

Add a patch to her front leg, it's kinda empty. ☄ℱrost h e art ϡ Hexakosioi hexekontahexaphobia 01:50, July 11, 2011 (UTC)

It looks really good! ✿Dapplecloud ✿^{A pang in the heart...} 15:16, July 11, 2011 (UTC)

Re-uploaded- -❄ſce h e a r t ♥ ^{Blah blah} 00:32, July 13, 2011 (UTC)

Its been 24 hours without a comment, this should be archived anyway. -❄ſce h e a r t ♥ ^{Blah blah} 00:42, July 14, 2011 (UTC)

Redtail (W)~ Redone[]

Needed to be redone as a long hair. Original artist is Insanular. Comments? -❄ſce h e a r t ♥ ^{Blah blah} 04:22, July 7, 2011 (UTC)

He is a DARK tortie, get rid of ALL the white, and give him dapples, and see if you can fiugre out how to 'feather' his ears. other than that, very nice. Maple♥pool^{^{School? Pfft. SUMMERTIME!}} 14:37, July 7, 2011 (UTC).

Make the smudging smoother. Nice job. :] ☄ℱrost h e art ϡ Hexakosioi hexekontahexaphobia 15:14, July 7, 2011 (UTC)

RE-uploaded- -❄ſce h e a r t ♥ ^{Blah blah} 21:09, July 7, 2011 (UTC)

Wow, huge change. Maybe make his tail a bit more distinctively ginger, it doesn't stand out much in this case. Dark torties do have brighter patches: See from this one. You should've just kept the old design sans the white patches in my opinion. And someone needs to re-do the kit and apprentice art as well to match. Shellheart 21:18, July 7, 2011 (UTC)

^^Yea, Shellheart's righ 8\ Make the tail a brighter to make it stand out like the description says OH, and darken the ear pink A TAD --Bloo!^yo

Reuploaded. -❄ſce h e a r t ♥ ^{Blah blah} 00:15, July 8, 2011 (UTC)

Perfect! Very nice, I love it. Shellheart 01:23, July 8, 2011 (UTC)

In my opinion its ready, but we'll see for others' opinions. ;D ∗ Mistystar ∗ ^{Trust the Fire Within...} 16:54, July 8, 2011 (UTC)

Darken the shading. --Leaf strike -- 17:04, July 8, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded- -❄ſce h e a r t ♥ ^{Blah blah} 19:24, July 8, 2011 (UTC)

Darken the shading a bit, make his tail a tad more ginger, change the colour of the red pixel in his eye, and blur where the black meets the red on the ear furthest from us.-Kittycat79 ^{Kitties Rule!} 00:59, July 9, 2011 (UTC)

Re-uploaded- -❄ſce h e a r t ♥ ^{Blah blah} 01:12, July 9, 2011 (UTC)

Those ears look so strange. They look more tangled and broken than feathered. His other Charart had normal ears.-Kittycat79 ^{Kitties Rule!} 01:17, July 9, 2011 (UTC)

Thats why theyre being tweaked. I got the lineart from tawnyspots, who also has tuffed ears. -❄ſce h e a r t ♥ ^{Blah blah} 01:27, July 9, 2011 (UTC)

The orange needs to be desaturated, a cat would never have such vibrant colours, it should be a soft, low-saturation, diluted shade of orange (aside from the tail, its colour is fine). And make the orange patches smaller but have more of them if you know what I mean. Maybe make the tufts a wee bit smaller. This is looking nice! :3 M o ss y ♫^{go away.} 04:19, July 9, 2011 (UTC)

Re-uploaded- -❄ſce h e a r t ♥ ^{Blah blah} 17:37, July 9, 2011 (UTC)

Great work! darken the tail shading a bit. ∗ Mistystar ∗ ^{Trust the Fire Within...} 02:29, July 10, 2011 (UTC)

Blur the tail shading a bit. ✿Dapplecloud ✿^{A pang in the heart...} 15:26, July 10, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded- -❄ſce h e a r t ♥ ^{Blah blah} 19:44, July 10, 2011 (UTC)

The bottom tuft on the ear showing (vague...sigh) try making it more..pointy, it's kinda like a straight line right now. :3 Darken the shading. ☄ℱrost h e art ϡ Hexakosioi hexekontahexaphobia 01:50, July 11, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded- -❄ſce h e a r t ♥ ^{Blah blah} 00:33, July 13, 2011 (UTC)

Its been 24 hours. -❄ſce h e a r t ♥ ^{Blah blah} 00:44, July 14, 2011 (UTC)

Cora (R) ~ Tweaked[]

I tore the ear. Original Artist was Icethroat21. ❋Rai ney 13:16, July 13, 2011 (UTC)

It looks like you only made it smaller, make it look like a tear. Iveh Yo ! 14:03, July 13, 2011 (UTC)

Make the lineart a bit thicker. ∗ Mistystar ∗ ^{Trust the Fire Within...} 16:23, July 13, 2011 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. Ivystripe, I've asked some users how the tore ear looks, and they said it was perfectly fine, so I'm not changing it unless several other people agree with you. ❋Rai ney 08:55, July 14, 2011 (UTC)

Improvment made. -❄ſce h e a r t ♥ ^{Blah blah} 17:13, July 14, 2011 (UTC)

Icewing (W) ~ Redone[]

Original artist: Bracken-; Redone: Lineart blurred, blotchy shading. The changes weren't showing, so I uploaded it as a new file. I'll delete it once it starts showing. ∗ Mistystar ∗ ^{Trust the Fire Within...} 23:26, July 10, 2011 (UTC)

Is there shading? I really can't see any... Good job! Lawliet ^Talk 23:36, July 10, 2011 (UTC)

Yes, there is shading, and I've darkened it a lot. Its just really blurred, and white. Thanks! ∗ Mistystar ∗ ^{Trust the Fire Within...} 23:45, July 10, 2011 (UTC)

Ugh....I can't see good without my glasses. Darken the shading on the chest. Snowdazzle¹²³^{Lets count numbers!} 00:01, July 11, 2011 (UTC)

Lol...am I the only person who can see it? :P ∗ Mistystar ∗ ^{Trust the Fire Within...} 00:28, July 11, 2011 (UTC)

The shading is really blotchy. ☄ℱrost h e art ϡ Hexakosioi hexekontahexaphobia 00:33, July 11, 2011 (UTC)

It is? I can't tell. I'll just blur it more. ∗ Mistystar ∗ ^{Trust the Fire Within...} 00:40, July 11, 2011 (UTC)

Re-Uploaded. I blurred it as much as possible, and I don't think its blotcy anymore. ∗ Mistystar ∗ ^{Trust the Fire Within...} 00:46, July 11, 2011 (UTC)

Nuuuuu, 'tis still blotchy. :3. I looked at the picture's details, and I'm pretty sure this is the updated one. But I could be wrong. Anyways, make the earpink colour lighter. ☄ℱrost h e art ϡ Hexakosioi hexekontahexaphobia 01:45, July 11, 2011 (UTC)

Maybe darken the base coat a tad. It's REALLY light, even for a white cat. It looks almost pure white. ♥ Paleclaw ^{May StarClan be with you ♥} 07:10, July 11, 2011 (UTC)

Nah, look at her description. It says, "pure white she-cat with blue eyes". The more I darken it, the blotchier it gets. ∗ Mistystar ∗ ^{Trust the Fire Within...} 07:31, July 11, 2011 (UTC)

Re-Uploaded. I remade the whole thing because it kept on getting blotchier and blotchier. Comments? ∗ Mistystar ∗ ^{Trust the Fire Within...} 07:59, July 11, 2011 (UTC)

Grr. I deleted the file, then re-uploaded it, but its still not showing. Oh well. The file is the one in the file page. xD ∗ Mistystar ∗ ^{Trust the Fire Within...} 08:09, July 11, 2011 (UTC)

Lighten the earpink and blur it. ☄ℱrost h e art ϡ Hexakosioi hexekontahexaphobia 17:36, July 11, 2011 (UTC)

Blur the shading a bit. --Leaf strike -- 20:39, July 11, 2011 (UTC)

Done, Re-Uploaded. ∗ Mistystar ∗ ^{Trust the Fire Within...} 02:12, July 13, 2011 (UTC)

Make the ear pink bigger and blur it :3 ⚛Ni gh tfl ow er⚛^{^{☣Absol invasion☣}} 02:28, July 13, 2011 (UTC)

Re-Uploaded but changes aren't showing. its on the file page. ∗ Mistystar ∗ ^{Trust the Fire Within...} 16:10, July 13, 2011 (UTC)

Yeah, fixed earpink. And the shading is blurred as much as possible. ∗ Mistystar ∗ ^{Trust the Fire Within...} 17:21, July 13, 2011 (UTC)

YUS. With 24 hours without comments; this is approved! ∗ Mistystar ∗ ^{Trust the Fire Within...} 17:41, July 14, 2011 (UTC)

Can a lead archive this? :3 ∗ Mistystar ∗ ^{Trust the Fire Within...} 18:29, July 14, 2011 (UTC)

Yup -❄ſce h e a r t ♥ ^{Blah blah} 19:01, July 14, 2011 (UTC)

Buzzardstar (L)~ Tweaked[]

I just burned in some stripes. The original artist was Shimmerpool. -❄ſce h e a r t ♥ ^{Blah blah} 17:09, July 14, 2011 (UTC)

As usual, great work! I think the middle stripe on the face is a bit too dark and big. Undefine it a bit. xD ∗ Mistystar ∗ ^{Trust the Fire Within...} 17:22, July 14, 2011 (UTC)

The earpink looks unnatural(too pink). Good work! Mintstar This time for Africa! 02:09, July 15, 2011 (UTC)

Re-uploaded- All i was supposed to do was the stripes. You might want to look over the commenting guidelines again Mintstar. -❄ſce h e a r t ♥ ^{Blah blah} 02:32, July 15, 2011 (UTC)

I understand the rules. But I've been getting comments on earpink and shading/highlights on the main body when all I was supposed to do was make the tail white. Mintstar This time for Africa! 15:56, July 16, 2011 (UTC)

Well maybe you should bring that up under your image, this has gone 24 hours without a comment so its time to be archived. -❄ſce h e a r t ♥ ^{Blah blah} 18:16, July 16, 2011 (UTC)

Hollyleaf (W) - Redone[]

Comments? ♥ Paleclaw ^{May StarClan be with you ♥} 05:57, July 7, 2011 (UTC)

Blur the shading a lot. M o ss y ♫^{go away.} 07:24, July 7, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded - Done. ♥ Paleclaw ^{May StarClan be with you ♥} 07:30, July 7, 2011 (UTC)

You were supposed to state the original artist and what needed tweaking, and you might want to check out the rules for posting again. Blur the shading a bit more. -❄ſce h e a r t ♥ ^{Blah blah} 16:56, July 7, 2011 (UTC)

I don't think there was an original artist for this one, it's just a whole new piece. You made her into a long-haired female in lieu of a short haired, right?

Ya but it should be reuploaded right over the old image so there is an older one that somebody made. -❄ſce h e a r t ♥ ^{Blah blah} 18:38, July 7, 2011 (UTC)

Oh! I completely forgot about the original artist! *facepalm* I'll go post that on both of my pics. And I thought it WOULD have gone over the original image. I thought it was named the same thing..... ♥ Paleclaw ^{May StarClan be with you ♥} 23:00, July 7, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded - The shading's now blurred as much as it possible can be. And I can't figure out the original artist on this one. D: But yes, she needed to be long haired (and blur the highlights were a bit blotchy on this one, but that wasn't listed on the page) ♥ Paleclaw ^{May StarClan be with you ♥} 23:12, July 7, 2011 (UTC)

Great job! Lighten t he highlight on the tail so it matches with the body highlights. ∗ Mistystar ∗ ^{Trust the Fire Within...} 15:42, July 8, 2011 (UTC)

Add shading to the front left (her left) leg --Leaf strike -- 17:05, July 8, 2011 (UTC)

Man, I'm horrible at critiquing black cats -_-...umm...define the light parts a little. Iveh Yo ! 20:45, July 8, 2011 (UTC)

Moonleaf, there IS shading on that leg, so I'm assuming you mean make it more visible? And by define, do you mean unblur Ivystripe? Cause I was told TWICE already to blur, so I don't think I should... ♥ Paleclaw ^{May StarClan be with you ♥} 00:34, July 9, 2011 (UTC)

I think it's fine. Define the shading on the chest a bit more, blur it, and it should be ready. ☄ℱrost h e art ϡ Hexakosioi hexekontahexaphobia 05:26, July 9, 2011 (UTC)

Looks great, but shouldn't it be up as hollyleaf.warrior.png so it replaces the old image? The short-haired version is still on her page. Shellheart 16:10, July 9, 2011 (UTC)

Shellheart is right. Just make the W in warrior lowercase. ☾Moon flight ☽ 17:59, July 9, 2011 (UTC)

Define the shading. ✿Dapplecloud ✿^{A pang in the heart...} 01:11, July 10, 2011 (UTC)

Change the image name. ∗ Mistystar ∗ ^{Trust the Fire Within...} 02:32, July 10, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded - Done. ♥ Paleclaw ^{May StarClan be with you ♥} 07:08, July 11, 2011 (UTC)

Bleh, its still not showing. I went to the file page, so, blur the earpink more. And, I'll delete the old file. ∗ Mistystar ∗ ^{Trust the Fire Within...} 08:24, July 11, 2011 (UTC)

Yeah, why is it doing that? also, Reuploaded ♥ Paleclaw ^{May StarClan be with you ♥} 10:05, July 11, 2011 (UTC)

Its doing that because there is excessive uploading of images onto the wiki by newer users who don't follow the rules. I'm still deleting a lot, but there's too many. If you can, put the delete tag on images so that they can be deleted. I think its showing now. Lighten the tail highlight a bit, and thats all, I think. :D ∗ Mistystar ∗ ^{Trust the Fire Within...} 15:48, July 11, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded - Done. :) And alright. ^^ ♥ Paleclaw ^{May StarClan be with you ♥} 22:16, July 13, 2011 (UTC)

Make the ear pink smaller and this will be ready. Apple dash ^the ^light ^of ^honor 01:40, July 14, 2011 (UTC)

Blur the tail shading a little, too. ∗ Mistystar ∗ ^{Trust the Fire Within...} 17:40, July 14, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded - Done and done. ♥ Paleclaw ^{May StarClan be with you ♥} 08:34, July 16, 2011 (UTC)

Beautiful! I see nothing wrong. Snowdazzle¹²³^{Lets count numbers!} 11:32, July 16, 2011 (UTC)

Improvement made. -❄ſce h e a r t ♥ ^{Blah blah} 18:24, July 16, 2011 (UTC)

Hollyleaf (Ki) - Redone[]

Original artist was Icethroat. Needed to be done as a long haired cat. So? What do you think? Lawliet ^Talk 02:26, July 9, 2011 (UTC)

Despite the excess, assuming you'll fix that later, darken the nose nad define the ear-pink. ☄ℱrost h e art ϡ Hexakosioi hexekontahexaphobia 02:27, July 9, 2011 (UTC)

Frostheart, the ear pink is directly from the other image. I cut the ears and pasted them on, because I didn't want to ruin them. I'll fix the excess and the nose. Lawliet ^Talk 02:30, July 9, 2011 (UTC)

Define the light and dark parts slightly, although, since I can't see it on any black cat, it may be fine. Iveh Yo ! 03:07, July 9, 2011 (UTC)

Re-Uploaded. Okay, I think I got all of the gray area. Lawliet ^Talk No I still see some. x3 I still see some near the bottom of her tail, the bottom of her feet, and along the edges of the fur on the right (our right) side. Also, blur the chest highlight and maybe add a highlight to her tail? R o o ^Hawkfrost ^lover♥ 15:56, July 9, 2011 (UTC)

File:Hollyleafedit.kit.pngErm, nope. Look, here's what I do. Make a new layer behind the image of the cat, and make it white. That will make the slip-ups stand out more.

Sorry, didn't mean for it to leak down. Shellheart 16:05, July 9, 2011 (UTC)

Blur the chest highlight. ✿Dapplecloud ✿^{A pang in the heart...} 01:26, July 10, 2011 (UTC)

Hmm, there's still some faint waste by her tail, feet, and left side. Her left, not yours. It's really faint, but it's there. Shelly_{For a limited time only} 22:12, July 10, 2011 (UTC)

And define the tail highlight. ∗ Mistystar ∗ ^{Trust the Fire Within...} 06:17, July 10, 2011 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. I didn't have a tail highlight, so I added one. I still think I suck at chararts. And thanks again, Shellheart, for the redlines, they help a lot. Lawliet ^Talk 20:59, July 10, 2011 (UTC)

Re-uploaded for the heck of it. I discovered that if I tilt my laptop screen, I can see the gray that I missed. There was quite a bit. Lawliet ^Talk 22:35, July 10, 2011 (UTC)

lol. When I delete gray parts, I just color the whole background, then use the eraser tool at 100% and erase it all. :P Darken the tail shading. ∗ Mistystar ∗ ^{Trust the Fire Within...} 23:17, July 10, 2011 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. Better? Lawliet ^Talk 23:35, July 10, 2011 (UTC)

Yup! It looks awesome! Maybe lighten the tail highlight a bit? Its still kind of hard to see, though it might just be the computer. ∗ Mistystar ∗ ^{Trust the Fire Within...} 23:52, July 10, 2011 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. Eh. Lawliet ^Talk 00:09, July 11, 2011 (UTC)

Yup, all the gray is gone. It looks great! Shelly_{For a limited time only} 01:10, July 11, 2011 (UTC)

Yeah, no more gray! Is the nose supposed to be pink? ∗ Mistystar ∗ ^{Trust the Fire Within...} 15:32, July 11, 2011 (UTC)

Gray/black cats have gray noses. ☾Moon flight ☽ 17:01, July 11, 2011 (UTC)

No, a lot of gray cats have pink noses. I guess black cats are different, then. ∗ Mistystar ∗ ^{Trust the Fire Within...} 02:15, July 13, 2011 (UTC)

Improvement made. -❄ſce h e a r t ♥ ^{Blah blah} 18:24, July 16, 2011 (UTC)

Fawnstep (MC) - Tweaked[]

Original artist was Hiddensun. All I did was add white paws, but they aren't showing yet. R o o ^Hawkfrost ^lover♥ 22:20, July 12, 2011 (UTC)

Where does it say she has white paws? Iveh Yo ! 22:58, July 12, 2011 (UTC)

Oh. xD Hmm, that's a good question. I just saw it on the list of images needed to be tweaked, but I never bothered to check to see if she had a cite for it. I guess I'll try and look for one, and if not, she can be taken down. R o o ^Hawkfrost ^lover♥ 00:17, July 13, 2011 (UTC)

I can't find it x-x But I probably just missed it if there is one. So I guess I'll just withdraw this? R o o ^Hawkfrost ^lover♥ 02:40, July 13, 2011 (UTC)

I remember her having white paws. I just don't remember what book. I think it might have been either Battles of the Clans or Secrets of the Clans. Ivy heart ^=P 16:05, July 15, 2011 (UTC)

Don't withdraw this! It says it, in Firestar's Quest, page 497! She does have white paws! Ivy heart ^=P 16:20, July 15, 2011 (UTC)

Oh. xD Well I already have two chararts up, so I wouldn't be able to work on this anyway. R o o ^Hawkfrost ^lover♥ 23:40, July 15, 2011 (UTC)

We can still put this one up though, right? it looks fine too me XD Ivy heart ^=P 03:10, July 16, 2011 (UTC)

This looks great. =D ❋Rai ney 13:49, July 16, 2011 (UTC)

Can you just reupload it one more time so the changes show? Then i can archive this. -❄ſce h e a r t ♥ ^{Blah blah} 18:20, July 16, 2011 (UTC)

The changes are showing for me, but I'll try. :3 R o o ^Hawkfrost ^lover♥ 18:31, July 16, 2011 (UTC)

Whitewing (Q) ~Tweaked[]

I just tweaked the shading and darkened the base color. Original artist was Darkmoon25. Comments? Splook ^sweet ^{^creature} 15:36, July 8, 2011 (UTC)

Blur the transition from the shading to base a bit. :3 ☄ℱrost h e art ϡ Hexakosioi hexekontahexaphobia 16:03, July 8, 2011 (UTC)

Do that ^, and erase the pink streaks coming from the earpink --Leaf strike -- 17:10, July 8, 2011 (UTC)

The earpink is fine. It's just the style she made the earpink. ☾Moon flight ☽ 18:27, July 8, 2011 (UTC)

Darken the shading a bit, overall it's great! --Apple dash ^the ^light ^of ^honor 18:31, July 8, 2011 (UTC)

Awesome! Darken the shading, and define the tail shading. ∗ Mistystar ∗ ^{Trust the Fire Within...} 18:37, July 8, 2011 (UTC)

Add light parts to the front leg/arm. Iveh Yo ! 20:16, July 8, 2011 (UTC)

Darken the shading and brighten the highlights, desaturate the eye colour a lot. M o ss y ♫^{go away.} 04:21, July 9, 2011 (UTC)

Make it look more white than pale gray. Wild breath 14:06, July 9, 2011 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. The shading makes me scream. Seriously, It's horrible. Splook ^sweet ^{^creature} 20:45, July 9, 2011 (UTC)

Blur the tail shading. ✿Dapplecloud ✿^{A pang in the heart...} 00:48, July 10, 2011 (UTC)

And the front paw shading. ∗ Mistystar ∗ ^{Trust the Fire Within...} 02:19, July 10, 2011 (UTC)

Sorry for the delay, I've been quite busy so far this week ^^' I'll have it up by tonight! Splook ^sweet ^{^creature} 20:04, July 11, 2011 (UTC)

Enlarge the earpink, and the shading is blotchy. Great job! Mintstar This time for Africa! 00:19, July 12, 2011 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. I'm going to re-do this, the shading is just too crappy. I'll fix the earpink when I do that, because I thought fixing the shading was going to be a waste of time anyways xD But thanks anyway :D Splook ^sweet ^{^creature} 02:49, July 12, 2011 (UTC)

The shading's not crappy! Did you upload the new version yet? ∗ Mistystar ∗ ^{Trust the Fire Within...} 02:04, July 13, 2011 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. Mistystar convinced me to pull through this xD Still have that little voice telling me to re-do this... Anyways, if anyone is willing to pitch in and help me blur this some, It'd be welcome :) xD Splook ^sweet ^{^creature} 05:30, July 13, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded- Glad to help! You'll probably have to blur the shading, but it's not so blotchy anymore. Mintstar This time for Africa! 02:00, July 15, 2011 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. I blurred it some, sorry my internet had been acting up this morning. Thanks Mintstar! =D Splook ^sweet ^{^creature} 21:43, July 15, 2011 (UTC)

Looking great! I think it is blurred enough now. Are white cats your specialty or something? XD Ivy heart ^=P 21:57, July 15, 2011 (UTC)

The tail still needs to be blurred. -❄ſce h e a r t ♥ ^{Blah blah} 18:18, July 16, 2011 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. Changes may or may not be showing. Splook ^sweet ^{^creature} 19:16, July 16, 2011 (UTC)

Changes made. Approved. --R o o ^Hawkfrost ^lover♥ 21:50, July 17, 2011 (UTC)

Hazeltail (W) - Redone[]

I don't like it. I'm waiting for the changes to show up...Apple dash ^the ^light ^of ^honor 02:31, July 13, 2011 (UTC)

Define shading, make earpink bigger (if this is the version that I'm sure is the one you did) Iveh Yo ! 02:38, July 13, 2011 (UTC)

Yeah, define shading, make the ear pink more triangle-ish, and darken the shading on the right paws --Bloo!^yo

The image is huge and awkwardly squished. Anyway, define the earpink, make it more triangular, smudge the patches(the edges are too thin ans smooth), and the shading is real blotchy on the front leg closest to us.-Kittycat79 ^{Kitties Rule!} 06:09, July 13, 2011 (UTC)

It says she a PALE gray and white, ligten the gray a bit. Maple♥pool^{^{School? Pfft. SUMMERTIME!}} 14:23, July 13, 2011 (UTC)

Lighten the whole thing a bit. ∗ Mistystar ∗ ^{Trust the Fire Within...} 17:06, July 13, 2011 (UTC)

I re-did the whole thing. Apple dash ^the ^light ^of ^honor 23:37, July 13, 2011 (UTC)

Darken the shading or lighten the highlights. ∗ Mistystar ∗ ^{Trust the Fire Within...} 17:08, July 14, 2011 (UTC)

The highlights could be lightened a bit. Also, the earpink is like a little dot, maybe make it a little bigger and more triangular shaped. Ivy heart ^=P 17:09, July 14, 2011 (UTC)

Re-Uploaded: I made the ear pink more triangular shaped and lightened the highlights. Apple dash ^the ^light ^of ^honor 19:54, July 15, 2011 (UTC)

Blur the patches. Chell; Aperture Science Test Subject. 19:58, July 15, 2011 (UTC)

The patches are already blurred. I don't think you need to blur them more, they look fine. Anyway, great job! ^_^ Ivy heart ^=P 22:04, July 15, 2011 (UTC)

Ivyheart is correct, they are already blurred. And thanks so much :) Apple dash ^the ^light ^of ^honor 02:20, July 16, 2011 (UTC)

Blur the highlights. -❄ſce h e a r t ♥ ^{Blah blah} 18:21, July 16, 2011 (UTC)

Well...they aren't even visible. Apple dash ^the ^light ^of ^honor 19:54, July 16, 2011 (UTC)

Changes made, so this is approved. --R o o ^Hawkfrost ^lover♥ 21:55, July 17, 2011 (UTC)

Echosong (KP) - Redone[]

Original artist was Hiddensun. She needed to be long-haired. I took all of the colors from her warrior image, so comments? R o o ^Hawkfrost ^lover♥ 02:46, July 13, 2011 (UTC)

The stripes get lost in the shading, so define them some. Iveh Yo ! 02:47, July 13, 2011 (UTC)

Blur the highlights. Mintstar This time for Africa! 02:52, July 13, 2011 (UTC)

Darken the highlight on the face, please. Lawliet ^Light 03:18, July 13, 2011 (UTC)

Define the triangular-ment of the earpink :) Splook ^sweet ^{^creature} 05:22, July 13, 2011 (UTC)

This outline is short haired. Silversong 16:25, July 13, 2011 (UTC)Silversong

Darken the stripes to match the MC version, define the earpink, and lighten the white on the face. ∗ Mistystar ∗ ^{Trust the Fire Within...} 16:51, July 13, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded. R o o ^Hawkfrost ^lover♥ 18:05, July 14, 2011 (UTC)

Blur the earpink a bit. ∗ Mistystar ∗ ^{Trust the Fire Within...} 01:21, July 15, 2011 (UTC)

Blur the stripes. Chell; Aperture Science Test Subject. 19:39, July 15, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded. R o o ^Hawkfrost ^lover♥ 20:15, July 15, 2011 (UTC)

Beautiful! Lighten the shading on the legs (or paws). Snowdazzle¹²³^{Lets count numbers!} 21:30, July 15, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded. R o o ^Hawkfrost ^lover♥ 18:25, July 16, 2011 (UTC)

Beautiful, Roo. Like always. Improvements made, and it's approved. Apple dash ^the ^light ^of ^honor 22:04, July 17, 2011 (UTC)

Redtail (Ki) - Redone[]

Changes may or may not be showing yet. He needed to be long haired and needed to match his warrior and deputy chararts. Originally by Nightfall101 I think. ♥ Paleclaw ^{May StarClan be with you ♥} 22:09, July 13, 2011 (UTC)

Make the ear tufts look more feathery and thin, they look like triangles. --Leaf strike -- 01:05, July 14, 2011 (UTC)

Blur the shading. Nice job! Mintstar This time for Africa! 02:07, July 15, 2011 (UTC)

Agreed. Blur it more. ∗ Mistystar ∗ ^{Trust the Fire Within...} 02:07, July 16, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded - Done. :) ♥ Paleclaw ^{May StarClan be with you ♥} 08:33, July 16, 2011 (UTC)

Ugh, changes were showing, then they stopped. -.- You can't even see them in the file history. D: Hopefully that will change soon. ♥ Paleclaw ^{May StarClan be with you ♥} 08:37, July 16, 2011 (UTC)

It looks great, Paleclaw. it's been 24 hours so this is approved. :3 --R o o ^Hawkfrost ^lover♥ 22:08, July 17, 2011 (UTC)

Foxleap (W) - Redone[]

Original arist was MosspathOfSkyClan. He needed to be long-haired. Comments? R o o ^Hawkfrost ^lover♥ 19:48, July 14, 2011 (UTC)

lol. I found the citation. Blur the shading more. ∗ Mistystar ∗ ^{Trust the Fire Within...} 01:05, July 15, 2011 (UTC)

Make him a little more red, good work! Mintstar This time for Africa! 02:10, July 15, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded. R o o ^Hawkfrost ^lover♥ 20:12, July 15, 2011 (UTC)

Hm... lighten the tail shading. I like this :) Snowdazzle¹²³^{Lets count numbers!} 21:32, July 15, 2011 (UTC)

The tail looks fine to me. However, from where you have you light source, I think there needs to be a light spot on the front legs/arms. I could be wrong, though. Iveh Yo ! 23:57, July 15, 2011 (UTC)

Stoopid me, I meant blur the tail shading. Snowdazzle¹²³^{Lets count numbers!} 11:29, July 16, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded. R o o ^Hawkfrost ^lover♥ 18:21, July 16, 2011 (UTC)

Get rid of the glow outside the lineart Dovey ^Newbie! 19:50, July 16, 2011 (UTC)

Define the stripes a bit, overall it's really good Apple dash ^the ^light ^of ^honor 19:53, July 16, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded. R o o ^Hawkfrost ^lover♥ 20:02, July 16, 2011 (UTC)

It's been 24 hours, so this will be approved. --R o o ^Hawkfrost ^lover♥ 22:08, July 17, 2011 (UTC)

Willowbreeze (A) ~ Redone[]

I redid it as a tabby, but changes aren't showing. Its on the file page, though. I know it looks like crap, so don't state the obvious. Original artist was Scarletwind. ∗ Mistystar ∗ ^{Trust the Fire Within...} 19:26, July 13, 2011 (UTC)

Blur the stripes. --Leaf strike -- 01:07, July 14, 2011 (UTC)

Make the stripes on the tail bigger. Looks great Mistystar! =D ❋Rai ney 08:56, July 14, 2011 (UTC)

The earpink is a little hard to see, so it could be a little brighter. Ivy heart ^=P 17:10, July 14, 2011 (UTC)

I know very well that it looks horrible, I'm have re-done it. ∗ Mistystar ∗ ^{Trust the Fire Within...} 17:48, July 14, 2011 (UTC)

Lighten the image, she's a pale tabby. Nice work! 02:06, July 15, 2011 (UTC)

Oh, that was me! Mintstar This time for Africa! 02:08, July 15, 2011 (UTC)

Re-Uploaded. Its still a bit dark because of shading. ∗ Mistystar ∗ ^{Trust the Fire Within...} 02:48, July 15, 2011 (UTC)

Darken the shading a little on the right back leg. It looks great! Ivy heart ^=P 18:42, July 15, 2011 (UTC)

Blur the stripes and blur the shading. R o o ^Hawkfrost ^lover♥ 20:02, July 15, 2011 (UTC)

I don't know if you'd be willing to do this or not...but when Crookedstar looked at Silverkit after her death, he remarked that Silverkit's tabby stripes looked much like her mother's...so maybe you could tweak the stripes some so that some look like her daughters? Like I said, it's only a suggestion. Iveh Yo ! 23:55, July 15, 2011 (UTC)

No, it only said that Silverkit's head tabby stripes looked like her mother's, so it does. Blurred/rE-uploaded.. ∗ Mistystar ∗ ^{Trust the Fire Within...} 02:03, July 16, 2011 (UTC)

Oh, ok, sorry. See, you're paying more attention than me! Iveh Yo ! 02:26, July 16, 2011 (UTC)

It's been 24 hours without comments to fix anything. ∗ Mistystar ∗ ^{Trust the Fire Within...} 03:03, July 17, 2011 (UTC)

Perhaps lighten the shading on the back a tad? Dovey ^Newbie! 07:46, July 17, 2011 (UTC)

Blur the shading a lot and redden the earpink and maybe darken it? R o o ^Hawkfrost ^lover♥ 17:25, July 17, 2011 (UTC)

Nuuuuu its already gone through 24 hours without comments, so its approved. Now a lead can archive it. ∗ Mistystar ∗ ^{Trust the Fire Within...} 01:53, July 18, 2011 (UTC)

Since this is technically approved as of July 16-17th after an upload w/o comments, may I start my next one? ∗ Mistystar ∗ ^{Trust the Fire Within...} 21:41, July 18, 2011 (UTC)

It shouldn't be "Approved" until a lead says so. My image had no comments for a week but it wasn't approved. Splook ^sweet ^{^creature} 15:51, July 19, 2011 (UTC)

Well, the rules say that if an image hasn't been commented on after an upload for 24 hours or more, it is approved no matter what. If your image had no comments for a week, then you should tell a lead, and they should archive it. Check the rules again if you don't believe me. ∗ Mistystar ∗ ^{Trust the Fire Within...} 16:22, July 19, 2011 (UTC)

She's right splashpelt. Go back and reread the guidelines if you still dont believe. -❄ſce h e a r t ♥ ^{Blah blah} 16:37, July 19, 2011 (UTC)

Scorchfur (W) ~ Tweaked[]

Added a torn ear. Comments? Splook ^sweet ^{^creature} 18:37, July 18, 2011 (UTC)

Always forget the original artist. T'was Nightfall101, I think. Splook ^sweet ^{^creature} 18:40, July 18, 2011 (UTC)

I'm not sure if its just this computer, but it looks like there's waste righ next to the ear. ∗ Mistystar ∗ ^{Trust the Fire Within...} 19:04, July 18, 2011 (UTC)

I don't think there's any waste. Good job, Splashpelt. :3 R o o ^Hawkfrost ^lover♥ 19:07, July 18, 2011 (UTC)

Well, if there isn't waste, then, looks good! ∗ Mistystar ∗ ^{Trust the Fire Within...} 19:55, July 18, 2011 (UTC)

Improvment made. -❄ſce h e a r t ♥ ^{Blah blah} 19:21, July 19, 2011 (UTC)

Dappletail (A)~ Tweaked[]

Original artist was Nightshine, and all I did was add some white. -❄ſce h e a r t ♥ ^{Blah blah} 20:23, July 14, 2011 (UTC) Make it smoother, the white is just bugling out randomly. Apple dash ^the ^light ^of ^honor 21:40, July 14, 2011 (UTC) Re-uploaded- -❄ſce h e a r t ♥ ^{Blah blah} 02:32, July 15, 2011 (UTC) One of the white parts near below the muzzle looks like it's sticking out a bit. Otherwise, it looks really natural. Good work. Ivy heart ^=P 18:45, July 15, 2011 (UTC) Also, do you think you blend it in even more? Iveh Yo ! 20:16, July 15, 2011 (UTC) There's a few random streaks of white towards the pelt. If that made sense...xD ☄ℱrost h e art ϡ Hexakosioi hexekontahexaphobia 15:27, July 16, 2011 (UTC) Re-uploaded- -❄ſce h e a r t ♥ ^{Blah blah} 23:56, July 17, 2011 (UTC) The earpink looks a bit blotchy. ✿Dapplecloud ✿^{A pang in the heart...} 02:07, July 18, 2011 (UTC) The ear pink isnt my problem, just the white patches. -❄ſce h e a r t ♥ ^{Blah blah} 02:26, July 18, 2011 (UTC) Blur the white on the face. ∗ Mistystar ∗ ^{Trust the Fire Within...} 18:36, July 18, 2011 (UTC) Re-uploaded- -❄ſce h e a r t ♥ ^{Blah blah} 19:17, July 19, 2011 (UTC)

Its been 24 hours. -❄ſce h e a r t ♥ ^{Blah blah} 19:33, July 20, 2011 (UTC)

Fallen Leaves (SP)~ Redone[]

File:Fallen Leaves.tb.pngOriginal artist is Sandstar12 and it needed to be a tabby and the shading needed fixing. -❄ſce h e a r t ♥ ^{Blah blah} 18:49, July 16, 2011 (UTC) I think this looks really good! Maybe darken the tail shading in the middle and towards the end to kind of match the shading at the very beginning of the tail, if that makes sense at all. Ivy heart ^=P 19:41, July 16, 2011 (UTC) Beautiful! I'd say maybe define the earpink a tad, and make the eyes a more noticeable shade of green. This is nearly perfect, I love it! Iveh Yo ! 20:18, July 16, 2011 (UTC) Blur the white on the hind leg nearest to us a tad. Looks great :D Splook ^sweet ^{^creature} 22:58, July 16, 2011 (UTC) Darken the shading a tad. ☄ℱrost h e art ϡ Hexakosioi hexekontahexaphobia 00:42, July 17, 2011 (UTC) Make the earpink more pink, and less purple.-Kittycat79 ^{Kitties Rule!} 10:24, July 17, 2011 (UTC) Re-uplaoded- -❄ſce h e a r t ♥ ^{Blah blah} 01:03, July 18, 2011 (UTC) Pretty! Blur the bottom of the earpink a bit. ∗ Mistystar ∗ ^{Trust the Fire Within...} 01:55, July 18, 2011 (UTC) It looks really nice! Maybe you can blur where the white meets with the stripes a bit on the legs. ✿Dapplecloud ✿^{A pang in the heart...} 02:09, July 18, 2011 (UTC) Re-uploaded- -❄ſce h e a r t ♥ ^{Blah blah} 19:18, July 19, 2011 (UTC)

Its been 24 hours. -❄ſce h e a r t ♥ ^{Blah blah} 19:33, July 20, 2011 (UTC)

Mapleshade (W) - Tweaked[]

The tail needed to be white. Orignal artist was Nightflower or Mossy. Hopefully, Pixlr didn't make the shading blotchy. Mintstar [[User Talk:Mintstarr| Looks good. However, can you lighten up the tail shading? It's making it look too gray. Lawliet ^Light 02:58, July 13, 2011 (UTC) Reuploaded- changes aren't showing. Mintstar This time for Africa! 03:14, July 13, 2011 (UTC) The front leg/arm shading needs fixed, the side closest to the back legs need to be dark and the front needs to be light, not a white part in the middle. Iveh Yo ! 03:16, July 13, 2011 (UTC) Yeah, they are. Looks much better, Mintstarr. Lawliet ^Light 03:17, July 13, 2011 (UTC) Rename this 'Mapleshade.warrior.png' so it over writers the current file, 'kay? Maple♥pool^{^{School? Pfft. SUMMERTIME!}} 03:33, July 13, 2011 (UTC) Reuploaded- I shaded out the highlight. Mintstar This time for Africa! 15:25, July 13, 2011 (UTC) - - Oh, the original artist was Mossy, not me :3 ⚛Ni gh tfl ow er⚛^{^{☣Absol invasion☣}} 03:40, July 13, 2011 (UTC) - - Since you just tweaked the image, it shouldn't really count as redone. xD ∗ Mistystar ∗ ^{Trust the Fire Within...} 16:03, July 13, 2011 (UTC) Well, everyone was just used to saying "Redone" because a lot of images needed redoing x). Blur the tail shading, it looks a little blotchy. --Leaf strike -- 01:13, July 14, 2011 (UTC) Reuploaded- How's that? Mintstar This time for Africa! 16:44, July 14, 2011 (UTC) Better, can you lighten the highlight a little bit? ∗ Mistystar ∗ ^{Trust the Fire Within...} 16:47, July 14, 2011 (UTC) Reuploaded- didn't catch the little! Maybe it's not too bright. Mintstar This time for Africa! 01:26, July 15, 2011 (UTC) Lighten up the ear colour CloverBlondestar Reuploaded- I think the earpink was fine, but, whatever. Mintstar This time for Africa! 00:32, July 16, 2011 (UTC) I just think it's a teensy bit too big in the ear; I think you need to make it a tad smaller. Iveh Yo ! 00:41, July 16, 2011 (UTC) It looks great! Purplebuneary 04:13, July 16, 2011 (UTC)Mudkit Purplebuneary 04:13, July 16, 2011 (UTC) Maybe add some white on the part of the haunch near her tail? It looks kind of awkward having ginger and then suddenly a white tail. --Gοlden pelt 19:41, July 16, 2011 (UTC) I agree with Goldenpaw, and the ear pink looks too purpleish; make it ligthter and more pink. Oh, and Purplebuneary, you dont really need to comment saying anything if you see nothing wrong with it x] --Bloo!^yo 03:44, July 17, 2011 (UTC) I dunno about this one. Reuploaded. Mintstar This time for Africa! 00:39, July 18, 2011 (UTC) The earpink is too big now... ∗ Mistystar ∗ ^{Trust the Fire Within...} 22:48, July 18, 2011 (UTC) Reuploaded- I think it looked fine the way it was from the beginning (the earpink.) Mintstar This time for Africa! 01:06, July 19, 2011 (UTC) Yeah, the earpink was fine, and you technically didn't need to do anything with the earpink, since this was only tweaked to fix the tail... ∗ Mistystar ∗ ^{Trust the Fire Within...} 16:09, July 19, 2011 (UTC)

Improvement made. -❄ſce h e a r t ♥ ^{Blah blah} 19:33, July 20, 2011 (UTC)

Stonefur (W) - Redone[]

Original artist was MosspathOfSkyClan and he needed to be long-haired. It isn't showing my version yet. R o o ^Hawkfrost ^lover♥ 01:00, July 18, 2011 (UTC) Oh wait, now it is. :3 R o o ^Hawkfrost ^lover♥ 01:01, July 18, 2011 (UTC) It needs to be lighter and more blue-gray in coloration. Also, define the scars a bitIveh Yo ! 01:55, July 18, 2011 (UTC) The earpink is hard to see. And, darken the shading, and thicken the lineart for the ears. ∗ Mistystar ∗ ^{Trust the Fire Within...} 01:58, July 18, 2011 (UTC) Reuploaded. R o o ^Hawkfrost ^lover♥ 19:36, July 18, 2011 (UTC) The shading on the tail is hard to see. Define it. ∗ Mistystar ∗ ^{Trust the Fire Within...} 19:43, July 18, 2011 (UTC) Reuploaded. R o o ^Hawkfrost ^lover♥ 02:43, July 19, 2011 (UTC) Define the earpink. The highlights look good though. ✿Dapplecloud ✿^{A pang in the heart...} 01:11, July 20, 2011 (UTC) Reuploaded. R o o ^Hawkfrost ^lover♥ 13:47, July 20, 2011 (UTC)

It's been 24 hours. :3 R o o ^Hawkfrost ^lover♥ 14:37, July 21, 2011 (UTC)

Thunder (L) - Redone[]

Original artist was Minnowclaw. He needed to be a tabby and the shading needed fixing too. R o o ^Hawkfrost ^lover♥ 01:12, July 18, 2011 (UTC) Cool! Just get rid of the waste around it. Shelly_{For a limited time only} 01:27, July 18, 2011 (UTC) Define the highlights and smudge ze ear pink some more. Lovely. ;3 ☄ℱrost h e art ϡ Hexakosioi hexekontahexaphobia 01:31, July 18, 2011 (UTC) The back leg's paw looks kind of cream. Iveh Yo ! 01:52, July 18, 2011 (UTC) Creamish-gray. Make it more white. ∗ Mistystar ∗ ^{Trust the Fire Within...} 02:01, July 18, 2011 (UTC) It says his eyes are amber. They kinda look brown... --Bloo!^yo Good job! Darken the stripes a bit. Apple dash ^the ^light ^of ^honor 12:30, July 18, 2011 (UTC) Reuploaded. R o o ^Hawkfrost ^lover♥ 20:00, July 18, 2011 (UTC) The back paw still looks a bit too cream-gray. Lighten it more. ∗ Mistystar ∗ ^{Trust the Fire Within...} 20:56, July 18, 2011 (UTC) It isn't cream at all; it's almost white. R o o ^Hawkfrost ^lover♥ 21:19, July 18, 2011 (UTC) Then the changes are probably not showing. Its the file at the top, right? ∗ Mistystar ∗ ^{Trust the Fire Within...} 21:38, July 18, 2011 (UTC) No they're showing. I'll see if I can make it different, I guess. :P R o o ^Hawkfrost ^lover♥ 21:47, July 18, 2011 (UTC) There's something by his right (<-- ) ear. Wild fire 02:42, July 19, 2011 (UTC) Reuploaded. Wildfire, I couldn't see anything. x3 R o o ^Hawkfrost ^lover♥ 02:47, July 19, 2011 (UTC) I saw it before, but it might be gone. It was a clump of gray-ish pixels. ∗ Mistystar ∗ ^{Trust the Fire Within...} 17:20, July 19, 2011 (UTC) Blur the highlights a bit. ✿Dapplecloud ✿^{A pang in the heart...} 01:09, July 20, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded. R o o ^Hawkfrost ^lover♥ 13:46, July 20, 2011 (UTC) It's been 24 hours. :3 --R o o ^Hawkfrost ^lover♥ 14:37, July 21, 2011 (UTC)

Quince (KP) ~ Tweaked[]

Shading was blotchy. There was also some blurred lineart that I fixed up. Original artist t'was Moonflight. Comments? —Jayce() 19:16, July 18, 2011 (UTC) It looks....good, but boring. Darken the shading and add highlights. Make the eyes have more depth and lighten them a bit. Make it look as realistic as possible. :) HAWKFIRE98 19:30, July 18, 2011 (UTC) Hawkey, I'm only supposed to fix the shading. That's what it said on the nomination page. If they wanted everything else fixed, they would have added it. —Jayce() 19:31, July 18, 2011 (UTC) Blur the shading on the head. ∗ Mistystar ∗ ^{Trust the Fire Within...} 20:43, July 18, 2011 (UTC) Re-uploaded. —Jayce() 21:16, July 18, 2011 (UTC) Make the earpink larger. Snowdazzle¹²³^{Lets count numbers!} 21:55, July 18, 2011 (UTC) Listen to me. I am not fixing anything other then the shading. That is what was on the tweak week nomination page, therfore, that's what I'm fixing. Nothing more, nothing less. —Jayce() 21:56, July 18, 2011 (UTC) Then, are you allowed to define the shading on the tail? :P ∗ Mistystar ∗ ^{Trust the Fire Within...} 22:42, July 18, 2011 (UTC) That I will do. ~~Pff. You have to be a smart alec about it, don't you?~~ —Jayce() 22:45, July 18, 2011 (UTC) Re-Uploaded. —Jayce() 22:49, July 18, 2011 (UTC) Blur the shading. And I think there's some misplaced or blurred lineart around the haunch/shoulder area. Probably not. ;3 ☄ℱrost h e art ϡ Hexakosioi hexekontahexaphobia 15:38, July 19, 2011 (UTC) Re-uploaded. —Jayce() 21:02, July 19, 2011 (UTC) Improvements made. --R o o ^Hawkfrost ^lover♥ 14:37, July 21, 2011 (UTC)