Stick (R) ~ Tweaked[]
Needed a torn ear. Original artist is Icethroat21. —Jayce() 02:17, August 5, 2011 (UTC)
I see a stray pixel that looks gray on the corner of his ear.-- ♩ Shimmerpool ♪ Never B ♭ ♫ Sometimes B ♯ ♬ But Always B ♮ 04:11, August 5, 2011 (UTC)
Re-uploaded'. Pixel has been killed. XD —Jayce() 04:18, August 5, 2011 (UTC)
Thicken the shading. Appledash the light of honor 21:11, August 5, 2011 (UTC)
Not my problem. Icey, you should know that. I only needed to add a torn ear... —Jayce() 21:13, August 5, 2011 (UTC)
Hm, alright. It looks ready, but I'll wait a couple hours for comments before it gets approved. Appledash the light of honor 21:15, August 5, 2011 (UTC)
know you said it only needed torn ears, but the shading needs to be blurred more. It...bothers me. Iveh Yo! 03:41, August 6, 2011 (UTC)
*facepalm* You happy now? *grumbles* re-uploaded. —Jayce() 04:30, August 6, 2011 (UTC)
I'm sorry, I didn't mean to make you upset. I was only trying to be helpful :( Iveh Yo! 04:36, August 6, 2011 (UTC)
No worries. Lack of sleep makes Cloudy grumpy. Sorry if I seemed rude. —Jayce() 04:38, August 6, 2011 (UTC)
Oh, look. More then 24 hours have passed. =) *friendly reminder* —Jayce() 00:29, August 9, 2011 (UTC)
24 hours without comments. ♌The Star that cannot Return to the Heavens♌ 02:29, August 9, 2011 (UTC)
Mousefur (W) ~ Tweaked[]
Atelda insert vague subtext here 23:28, July 31, 2011 (UTC)
Darken the ear-pink and thicken and blur the shading. ♌The Star that cannot Return to the Heavens♌ 23:33, July 31, 2011 (UTC)
Reuploaded ~ woops xD Atelda insert vague subtext here 00:11, August 1, 2011 (UTC)
I like this. Darken the ear pink a bit moer and also blur the shading a bit more. Appledash the light of honor 15:02, August 1, 2011 (UTC)
Original artist?? What needed to be tweaked? Make the ear pink more triangular x) --Bloo!yo
I know I put it up, hmmm *muses* Anyways it was Bramble and Sandy, and the shading needed to be fixed. Atelda insert vague subtext here 03:01, August 2, 2011 (UTC)
Wow, Atelda, this is beautiful! ;) But there's a thin sliver on the chest that looks out of place. Could you fix it? User:Rainshine/Sig 21:35, August 2, 2011 (UTC)
Reuploaded ~ Thanks, ok I blurred shading as much as I could, thin sliver of silver gone, and earpink darkened. ;) Atelda insert vague subtext here 00:17, August 5, 2011 (UTC)
Actually, can you lighten the ear pink OR the shading? I'm having some trouble seeing the ear pink... —Jayce() 05:41, August 5, 2011 (UTC)
Remove the color in between the front and hind legs. ☾Moonflight☽ 23:30, August 5, 2011 (UTC)
Reuploaded ~ Over shoot it with the earpink xD and completly oblivious. Atelda insert vague subtext here 00:39, August 6, 2011 (UTC)
24 hours without comments. ♌The Star that cannot Return to the Heavens♌ 02:37, August 9, 2011 (UTC)
Clawface (R) - Tweaked[]
Original artist was Shaf Girl, and he needed scars. I blurred the shading too. Mintclaw I may be bad, but I'm good at it! 15:04, August 2, 2011 (UTC)
Lighten and blurt he shading. Something's wrong with the lineart, it's too thick or it's blurred, you might want to fix that. Appledash the light of honor 15:06, August 2, 2011 (UTC)
Reuploaded- I redid the shading. Mintclaw I may be bad, but I'm good at it! 16:07, August 2, 2011 (UTC)
Better. I see nothing wrong with it. Appledash the light of honor 17:22, August 2, 2011 (UTC)
There's some waste above the back, and one pixel below the feet. --Leafstrike-- 18:49, August 2, 2011 (UTC)
Reuploaded- If there's waste above the tail, changes aren't showing. Sorry I didn't withdraw this, I didn't expect anyone to comment on one of my other images after 24 hours. Mintclaw I may be bad, but I'm good at it! 15:09, August 3, 2011 (UTC)
Blur the scars ever so slightly. Try setting the blur tool on, like, ten percent and do it. Although, I don't think you have to do this, since it's been 24 hours. =) —Jayce() 05:38, August 5, 2011 (UTC)
Reuploaded. No problem, but I don't see why this hasn't been archived yet. ;) Mintclaw I may be bad, but I'm good at it! 17:07, August 5, 2011 (UTC)
Leads are probably busy. And thanks, Mintstarr, it looks much better! Now they don't stand out at much! —Jayce() 17:39, August 5, 2011 (UTC)
Sorry about the wait. 24 hours without comments. ♌The Star that cannot Return to the Heavens♌ 02:37, August 9, 2011 (UTC)
Antpelt (W) - Tweaked[]
Original artist was Bramble and it needed thicker shading and scars. If there's waste above the tail, changes aren't showing. Mintclaw I may be bad, but I'm good at it! 16:41, August 4, 2011 (UTC)
Lighten up the shading, please. It's too dark. —Jayce() 05:33, August 5, 2011 (UTC)
Define the scars --Bloo!yo 05:42, August 5, 2011 (UTC)
Make the earpink a bit more triangular. Splook sweet creature 20:17, August 5, 2011 (UTC)
The scars would look more natural if they were done with the pen tool and slightly blurred into the pelt. Iveh Yo! 21:40, August 5, 2011 (UTC)
Reuploaded- I thinned them out and reddened them. Mintclaw I may be bad, but I'm good at it! 14:44, August 6, 2011 (UTC)
24 hours without comments. ♌The Star that cannot Return to the Heavens♌ 02:37, August 9, 2011 (UTC)
Raggedstar (W) ~ Tweaked (Redone)[]
Original artist was Hollytail. It needed thicker, darker shading. ♌The Star that cannot Return to the Heavens♌ 23:55, August 4, 2011 (UTC)
Define the shading tons and make ear pink bigger --Bloo!yo 05:44, August 5, 2011 (UTC)
Define the stripes, too. And there's a few stray pixels between the back and tail, and behind the tail. --Leafstrike-- 15:08, August 5, 2011 (UTC)
Re-uploaded. I ended up redoing the charart to make it easier to work with. Changes aren't showing up yet. ♌The Star that cannot Return to the Heavens♌ 05:29, August 8, 2011 (UTC)
Changes are showing up, comments? ♌The Star that cannot Return to the Heavens♌ 23:50, August 8, 2011 (UTC)
There is a lot of waste around the image that needs cleaning up. Shelly For a limited time only 00:48, August 9, 2011 (UTC)
Re-uploaded. I think I got it all, but due to having lousy eye-sight, i might've missed some. ♌The Star that cannot Return to the Heavens♌ 01:49, August 9, 2011 (UTC)
24 hours without comment ♌The Star that cannot Return to the Heavens♌ 02:44, August 10, 2011 (UTC)
Thistleclaw (W) - Tweaked(Redone)[]
Yuck. The mottles look messy to me, and I didn't want to overblur them. I couldn't work with the original image, so I made a new one. He needed mottles and his original artist was Bramble, I believe. Mintstar I may be bad, but I'm good at it! 19:12, July 24, 2011 (UTC)
I don't like the mottle closest to his face. XD Make them smaller and smudge them into his pelt to give them a furry texture. Make his spiky fur outside the lineart, if you know what I mean. Erase the lineart and add spikes of fur then close it together? HAWKFIRE98 19:27, July 24, 2011 (UTC)
Yeah, mottles are supposed to be smaller than that. It's a bunch of little spots of darker and lighter color. Also, I was just about the suggest the spiky fur outside the lineart xD But if you need an example, you could check out Kinkfur's warrior charart. Iveh Yo! 19:46, July 24, 2011 (UTC)
Blur the mottles a little, at least. If you're worried about messing up his fur, then add the two details on separate layers to they don't affect eachother. Shelly For a limited time only 00:48, July 25, 2011 (UTC)
I think you need to make the fur look more spiky and sticky-out. Dovey Newbie! 20:17, July 26, 2011 (UTC)
Reuploaded- I got the lineart from Kinkfur's(credit to who made that.) Mintstar I may be bad, but I'm good at it! 19:42, July 25, 2011 (UTC)
I think you should make the base pelt color mottled, and then add darker mottled patches like his description says. Also, why is the tail like a brown-gray color? Make it the same color as his pelt. Oh and blur the mottles a lot. Roo Hawkfrost lover♥ 20:20, July 25, 2011 (UTC)
Erm, I think this looks more bushy than spiky. Maybe have all of the fur sticking out face the same direction? You may have to do some lineart editing, but it would help. Also, keep the original spikes that were on his sides, otherwise he looks flat. Shelly For a limited time only 20:22, July 25, 2011 (UTC)
Someone else can work on it, I'm taking over Mistystar. And the spiky fur is fine as it is. Mintclaw I may be bad, but I'm good at it! 23:02, July 25, 2011 (UTC)
I'll take over ;3 So uh Reuploaded And before you tell me to change it to a .png, I can't because my computer doesn't let me upload .png files :P ⚛Nightflower⚛☣Absol invasion☣ 15:49, July 26, 2011 (UTC)
Add some more mottles. :3 The white face is a bit too dark, so brighten that up. ☄ℱrostheartϡ Hexakosioihexekontahexaphobia 15:51, July 26, 2011 (UTC)
Thanks for taking my suggestion. :D I think it looks much better now. Shelly For a limited time only 17:38, July 26, 2011 (UTC)
Change the file name to Thistleclaw.warrior.png so it replaces the old one. Shelly For a limited time only 17:48, July 26, 2011 (UTC)
Shellheart, I've said this before; I can't make it a .png because my computer won't upload it. ⚛Nightflower⚛☣Absol invasion☣ 23:29, July 26, 2011 (UTC)
You want me to re-upload it for you under the proper file name? —Jayce() 14:02, July 27, 2011 (UTC)
I reuploaded it under the .png filename, but the changes aren't showing... They should eventually, because when you upload a different one, the file changes show. So, give it some time to catch up. for crying out loud, this image thing gives me a headache. Anyways, second one down has the right image.>.> —Jayce() 14:12, July 27, 2011 (UTC)
Lighten the muzzle/face part. ;3 --Roo Hawkfrost lover♥ 16:04, July 27, 2011 (UTC)
He needs White shoulders(Gosh, it may look weird....)
The ear pink is blotchy and it's to light. Maybe darken it? Squishee DONT EAT MY FOOD! 00:07, July 30, 2011 (UTC)
Add some fur sticking out towards the bottom of his tail. Iveh Yo! 02:24, July 30, 2011 (UTC)
I fixed Thistleclaw's page so it's showing your work. :3 All I can say it there's a line of gray going through the ear pink that needs to be fixed. Shelly For a limited time only 15:26, July 30, 2011 (UTC) Reuploaded - I'm not sure how to do the white shoulders, so can anyone shed some light on how to? x3 ⚛Nightflower⚛☣Absol invasion☣ 23:45, August 1, 2011 (UTC) For the white shoulders, I'd either add in a really pale gray or brighten it with the doge tool. Same with the face. There's a spike on the underside of the tail that looks a bit clumped rather than spiky, could you fix that too so it looks like the others? This is looking good. ♌The Star that cannot Return to the Heavens♌ 03:00, August 2, 2011 (UTC)
It looks like there is one little smudge in the ear, or a gray line. Ivyheart =P 16:40, August 3, 2011 (UTC)
That's the way she does earpink ;3 Looks great Nighty, I would say thicken the spiked lineart on the right side of the tail, towards the tip ;3 Splook sweet creature 20:21, August 5, 2011 (UTC)
Looks great. Just brighten the highlights Squishee DONT EAT MY FOOD! 19:15, August 6, 2011 (UTC)
It's looking great! I love the smudges near the highlights. Ivyheart =P 03:48, August 8, 2011 (UTC)
Blur the shading. ∗ Mistystar ∗ Trust the Fire Within... 16:17, August 8, 2011 (UTC)
Reuploaded - Bleh, I think I ruined it xD I darkened it to match Rainwhisper's image, but I think I did it a wee bit too much x3 I might revert it and start again later. ⚛Nightflower⚛☣Absol invasion☣ 00:13, August 9, 2011 (UTC)
24 hours without comments. ♌The Star that cannot Return to the Heavens♌ 03:24, August 10, 2011 (UTC)
Yellowfang (MC) ~ Tweaked[]
Needed torn ears. Original artist is Darkhallows. —Jayce() 02:18, August 5, 2011 (UTC)
Make the tears look more natural aaaand maybe thin out the outline a bit -Bloo!yo 05:46, August 5, 2011 (UTC)
Both ears? Well, okay. I'll get to it in the morning. Thanks. I thought they looked a little weird. XD —Jayce() 05:56, August 5, 2011 (UTC)
Give her a flat muzzle(THAT is will be hard, with the herbs...) Maple♥poolSchool? Pfft. SUMMERTIME! 14:28, August 5, 2011 (UTC)
The shorten muzzle isnt that hard. Just move the muzzle lineart three or four pixels into teh face using the float tool. Copy the lineart for the ears from the warrior image. -❄ſceheart ♥ Blah blah 16:34, August 5, 2011 (UTC)
The float tool? The ears, you should make it more of a V-shape, kinda like Tigerstar. Appledash the light of honor 23:40, August 5, 2011 (UTC)
I'll fix the ears, but Iceheart, could you explain what the float tool is? Can I do that in GIMP? —Jayce() 23:52, August 5, 2011 (UTC)
Re-uploaded. I tried. Looks like crap though. —Jayce() 04:29, August 6, 2011 (UTC)
This is good, but it looks really awkward with the rest of the body. Darken the earpink as well. ♔Sunspirit♔Back in... uh, yellow? 10:11, August 6, 2011 (UTC)
I knew someone was going to say that. The ear pink is directly off of the warrior image. =P —Jayce() 17:16, August 6, 2011 (UTC)
Orginal artist was me, Sandy just changed the file name ;P. The earpink looks a little odd along the bottom tear, like the pink extends a pixel too far or something. Darkhallows Enter the cave? 11:42, August 9, 2011 (UTC)
Oops. Sorry 'bout that. I'll change it now. I'll fix the ear pink now then, if you really want me to. —Jayce() 18:20, August 9, 2011 (UTC)
Re-uploaded. Look better? —Jayce() 21:57, August 9, 2011 (UTC)
24 Hours without comments. ♌The Star that cannot Return to the Heavens♌ 03:29, August 10, 2011 (UTC)
Leafstorm (D) - Tweaked[]
Re-did shading, added stripes, and brightened highlights. Comments? Appledash the light of honor 19:46, August 8, 2011 (UTC)
Darken the highlights and darken the shading also Squishee DONT EAT MY FOOD! 20:36, August 8, 2011 (UTC)
In my opinion, the highlights give the stripes...life....xD You can see the shading perfectly. Appledash the light of honor 21:21, August 8, 2011 (UTC)
Yeah...the shading looks fine to me. Darken the earpink a tad though ;3 Splook sweet creature 21:30, August 8, 2011 (UTC)
Make it a tad more gingery :3 Pianokey; Frédéric François Chopin. 21:32, August 8, 2011 (UTC)
Re-Uploaded: Elorisa, this is her deputy image. It's the same color. I darkened the ear-pink though. Appledash the light of honor 21:34, August 8, 2011 (UTC)
I made her deputy image, I know what it looks like. This isn't the same color. It's too brown/yellow. Pianokey;Frédéric François Chopin. 21:36, August 8, 2011 (UTC)
I stated it above, I re-did the shading. The shading is probably what's causing it to be brown. Appledash the light of honor 21:37, August 8, 2011 (UTC)
Re-Uploaded: Ah, whatever...I brightened the shading a tad. Appledash the light of honor 21:40, August 8, 2011 (UTC)
24 Hours without comments. ♌The Star that cannot Return to the Heavens♌ 03:32, August 10, 2011 (UTC)
Molepelt (MC) - Tweaked[]
Re-did shading and brightened highlights. Comments? Appledash the light of honor 19:46, August 8, 2011 (UTC)
Lovely, brighten the highlights a tad more and I know this isn't in the image criteria. but brighten the ear-pink too. ♌The Star that cannot Return to the Heavens♌ 02:00, August 9, 2011 (UTC)
Re-Uploaded: My highlights cannot be brightened, as when I brightened them, I used the color white. White cannot be lightened. I brightened the ear-pink though. Appledash the light of honor 02:07, August 9, 2011 (UTC)
24 hours without comments. ♌The Star that cannot Return to the Heavens♌ 03:34, August 10, 2011 (UTC)
Shy Fawn (Q)- Tweaked[]
All I did was change her shade of brown. The original artist was Nightshine. Rainlegs 02:52, August 8, 2011 (UTC)
I thought it was the Sharpclaw that needed to be tweaked? Iveh Yo! 02:55, August 8, 2011 (UTC)
On the list it said her queen needed to be tweaked, but on her queen's original approval section-thingy, it said they were going to re-do her sharp claw... I'm willing to tweak the other, if you all want. Rainlegs 03:04, August 8, 2011 (UTC)
I don't think it really matters, so long as in the end, they match. Lighten the brown a bit more and sorta add a tone of yellow to it so it looks like her SC color.
♌The Star that cannot Return to the Heavens♌ 05:31, August 8, 2011 (UTC)
I agree. And lighten the ear pink. Squishee DONT EAT MY FOOD! 20:33, August 8, 2011 (UTC)
Reuploaded. I didn't lighten the earpink, since it was the same shade as her sharp-claw's. Rainlegs 02:25, August 9, 2011 (UTC)
24 hours without comments. ♌The Star that cannot Return to the Heavens♌ 03:35, August 10, 2011 (UTC)
Blackstar (D)~ Tweaked[]
Needed black ears. Oringinal artist was Bramble. All i changed/will change is the farthest ear. -❄ſceheart ♥ Blah blah 15:55, August 1, 2011 (UTC) Shading looks blotchy(Spelling?) Maple♥poolSchool? Pfft. SUMMERTIME! 16:54, August 1, 2011 (UTC)
As i stated directly above this, only changing the ear. -❄ſceheart ♥ Blah blah 16:16, August 2, 2011 (UTC)
Re-upload it again to get the changes to show up. It worked for Brokenstar's. ♌The Star that cannot Return to the Heavens♌ 17:14, August 2, 2011 (UTC)
You pretty much have to change. It's called constructive criticism. This wasn't just posted to change the ears, you're supposed to change the shading too. If you aren't gonna change anything, why did you even upload it and put it on the talk? Appledash the light of honor 14:16, August 3, 2011 (UTC)
Both of his ears need to be black/darker, not one. Mintclaw I may be bad, but I'm good at it! 15:11, August 3, 2011 (UTC)
I agree with Mintclaw. Also, I thought he had black lined ears. Othe than that, it's okay. Moonstream 03:59, August 5, 2011 (UTC)
Re-uploaded- This is how the rogue charart is, and if i put black around the other ear it just looks like blurred lineart. And the rogue isnt being tweaked, so they need to match. -❄ſceheart ♥ Blah blah 16:20, August 5, 2011 (UTC)
Then the rogue needs to be tweaked next time, because the description says both ears are darker. I was able to make it look natural (leader image) so it's not too hard. Mintclaw I may be bad, but I'm good at it! 17:05, August 5, 2011 (UTC)
To me, the ear looks pure black and I can't see the lineart, but then again I have difficulty with black cats in the first place, so if you can see it then I'm sorry and disregard my comment. Iveh Yo! 03:34, August 6, 2011 (UTC)
It doesn't look like lineart to me. Mintclaw I may be bad, but I'm good at it! 14:40, August 6, 2011 (UTC)
On the thing, it says 'Blackstar's deputy image needs black EARS' so can you mae the other ear black? Maple♥poolSchool? Pfft. SUMMERTIME! 14:54, August 6, 2011 (UTC)
What did it say in the books? If it did say ears, then make both ears black. ∗ Mistystar ∗ Trust the Fire Within... 17:45, August 8, 2011 (UTC)
Re-uploaded- Looks bad now. And now we have even more work with another blank to change. I liked it way more the way it was before. -❄ſceheart ♥ Blah blah 19:32, August 8, 2011 (UTC)
Look. Because of the pickiness of our users, there's never going to be a time when there won't be an image to tweak. It doesn't look bad, okay? If you left one ear normal, we'd still have to change the leader image... ☾Moonflight☽ 20:16, August 8, 2011 (UTC)
The earpink's too pink. Try making the pink darker. Moonstream 18:37, August 9, 2011 (UTC)
The ear pink is the same as the other images. Its been 24 hours without useful comment, so im archiving this. -❄ſceheart ♥ Blah blah 19:00, August 10, 2011 (UTC)
Mothflight (MC) - Redone[]
Originally by either Icethroat21 or Bramble. The shading needed to be blurred and the earpink needed to be fixed. I ended up just pretty much redoing the whole thing. I wanted to get this, and Pinefur up before Tweak Week was over, but I actually won't be able to work on it at all this week. I'm going camping. So please don't decline this or Pinefur, I'll be back by next monday. Maybe even this saturday. ♥ Paleclaw May StarClan be with you ♥ 00:31, July 26, 2011 (UTC)
This looks good, but maybe you should lightne the shading just a little. Silverhmm 13:55, July 26, 2011 (UTC)
I agree, the shading is way too strong. Also, add a light part to the ear furthest away. Iveh Yo! 02:22, July 30, 2011 (UTC)
Darken the area between her haunches and front legs. And the shading is a little darker than it should be. Fawngaze 20:07, July 30, 2011 (UTC)
Reuploaded - I'm back! Changes aren't showing yet. ♥ Paleclaw May StarClan be with you ♥ 02:50, August 1, 2011 (UTC)
Blur the shading a bit more on the shoulder and haunch. Maybe add a highlight to the fronts of her forelegs? This is looking good! ♌The Star that cannot Return to the Heavens♌ 14:22, August 2, 2011 (UTC)
Technically the 24 hours were finished before you made that comment. And plus I don't have access to the computer with the .xcf file right now (it has a virus). Do I really have to do that? If yes, Ok. I'll find some way to do it with the .png file. ♥ Paleclaw May StarClan be with you ♥ 18:02, August 2, 2011 (UTC)
Reuploaded - Nevermind, my mom managed to fix my computer! ^^ ♥ Paleclaw May StarClan be with you ♥ 05:38, August 5, 2011 (UTC)
Lighten her up a bit, right now she's gray rather than white. Darkhallows Enter the cave? 00:51, August 6, 2011 (UTC)
Reuploaded - She's almost pure white now. I can't lighten her much more. I'd lighten the shading, but if I do you can't really see it then. So this is probably as light as it will be able to get. ♥ Paleclaw May StarClan be with you ♥ 18:03, August 6, 2011 (UTC)
Looks great, but the bottom of the tail's shading is blotchy, and unblurred. Ivyheart =P 03:51, August 8, 2011 (UTC)
Blur the bottom of the tail shading. ∗ Mistystar ∗ Trust the Fire Within... 16:38, August 8, 2011 (UTC)
Reuploaded - I missed a spot when blurring! XD ♥ Paleclaw May StarClan be with you ♥ 22:28, August 9, 2011 (UTC)
24 hours without comment. ♌The Star that cannot Return to the Heavens♌ 01:33, August 11, 2011 (UTC)
Snowtuft (W) - Tweaked[]
Bluestar and Clawface should be archived, since both have gone 24 hours without comments, so I posted this. Original artist was Insaneular and it needed a "snaking" scar. Mintclaw I may be bad, but I'm good at it! 00:19, August 6, 2011 (UTC)
Maybe darken the scar a bit and add shading to it. ♥ Paleclaw May StarClan be with you ♥ 01:10, August 6, 2011 (UTC)
Is it possible to start the scar after the ear-pink stops? Appledash the light of honor 01:17, August 6, 2011 (UTC)
Make the scar a darker.lighter color, it looks like something went wrong with the ear-pink...O.o Maple♥poolSchool? Pfft. SUMMERTIME! 01:45, August 6, 2011 (UTC)
Just define it where it enters into the earpink somehow, unless it's the wrong color I don't necessarily think you'd need to change the whole color of the scar. Iveh Yo! 03:45, August 6, 2011 (UTC)
Darken the earpink, Define the scar and make it look more natural. At the moment it looks like the the scar is connected to the earpink ^.^; ♔Sunspirit♔Back in... uh, yellow? 10:02, August 6, 2011 (UTC)
Maybe spot some very pale gray around the edges of the scar to make it look aged? idk. ♌The Star that cannot Return to the Heavens♌ 14:37, August 6, 2011 (UTC)
Reuploaded- I smudged the earpink and didn't make the scar go all the way into the earpink. Mintclaw I may be bad, but I'm good at it! 14:49, August 6, 2011 (UTC)
Hm. Does it ever say it goes into his inner ear? Cause I reckon you could make it curve up the neck behind the ear.I'm hungry, Phil. FEED ME! 16:41, August 6, 2011 (UTC)
The scar goes from his belly to his ear, as said in his description. Mintclaw I may be bad, but I'm good at it! 20:52, August 7, 2011 (UTC)
Why does the scar start on his haunch? ∗ Mistystar ∗ Trust the Fire Within... 17:22, August 8, 2011 (UTC)
It doesn't...it ends on his haunch. xD Appledash the light of honor 18:33, August 8, 2011 (UTC)
But it needs to be darkened a tad, so it doesn't look like the same color of the ear pink. Squishee DONT EAT MY FOOD! 20:32, August 8, 2011 (UTC)
It supposed to end on his underbelly, I didn't want it to go on the area under the chest because I thought it'd look awkward. Mint Why did I pull the trigger? 22:56, August 8, 2011 (UTC)
Try making it go from the back to the belly, instead of from the neck to the belly. It doesn't look right with the earpink :| Ginger Heat wave + Power outage = Unhappy Ginger 12:51, August 9, 2011 (UTC)
Again, the scar goes from the belly to the ear. I won't change that, it won't be accurate if I do. Mint Why did I pull the trigger? 14:23, August 9, 2011 (UTC)
It's fine to me. Don't change it. Darken the highlights a tad. Appledash the light of honor 17:21, August 9, 2011 (UTC)
Reuploaded. Mint Why did I pull the trigger? 00:31, August 10, 2011 (UTC)
Looks good! ∗ Mistystar ∗ Trust the Fire Within... 19:08, August 10, 2011 (UTC)
24 hours without comment. ♌The Star that cannot Return to the Heavens♌ 01:36, August 11, 2011 (UTC)
Lionblaze (K) ~ Redone[]
Original artist was Sparrowsong; redone as longhair. Comments? I got all the colors off his original warrior charart, just as his warrior and apprentices' colors came from. ∗ Mistystar ∗ Trust the Fire Within... 17:01, August 8, 2011 (UTC)
Oh, and its the second one on the uploading list; I think. ∗ Mistystar ∗ Trust the Fire Within... 17:05, August 8, 2011 (UTC)
Right now it shows me the original version and its like a distorted thumbnail. Wildbreath 17:18, August 8, 2011 (UTC)
I know. Thats why you have to go to the uploading list to see it. ∗ Mistystar ∗ Trust the Fire Within... 18:27, August 8, 2011 (UTC)
His stripes need to be a little lighter to match the others. Iveh Yo! 18:54, August 8, 2011 (UTC)
The stripes need to be shorter, and more added. Darkhallows Enter the cave? 06:26, August 10, 2011 (UTC)
Try to copy the stripe style from his apprentice, or warrior image Maple♥poolSchool? Pfft. SUMMERTIME! 14:55, August 10, 2011 (UTC)
Redone...again. xD This time I'm sure its the same color as the other ones, and the stripes match, too. So, comments? ∗ Mistystar ∗ Trust the Fire Within... 17:32, August 10, 2011 (UTC)
No they don't, on his warrior and apprentice images, the stripes are darker gold, these look....a tad green....Maple♥poolSchool? Pfft. SUMMERTIME! 17:36, August 10, 2011 (UTC)
Well, I took the colors exactly off the other one, so it should match. Go to his page and look at his gallery. They do have the same colors, its just a bit different because of shading. Do his apprentice and warrior look the same? They have the same colors, but the shading is different. ∗ Mistystar ∗ Trust the Fire Within... 17:42, August 10, 2011 (UTC)
Its passed 24 hours without comments, so its approved. ∗ Mistystar ∗ Trust the Fire Within... 18:03, August 11, 2011 (UTC)
Yup. -❄ſceheart ♥ Blah blah 19:09, August 11, 2011 (UTC)
Mousefang (W) - Redone[]
Shading fail. Anyways, Here's Mousefang. I redid the shading, but I don't think I like the pattern. Might choose another pattern for this one. Anyways, comments? Splook sweet creature 05:18, July 13, 2011 (UTC) Oh! And I believe the original artist was Shaf Girl :) Splook sweet creature 05:20, July 13, 2011 (UTC)
All I can say is define the shading alittle and make the earpink fill in the ear correctly--Bloo!yo
The eye is misshapen, blur shading on the chest, thicken shading on the haunch a tad, make the earpink proper, and I'm pretty sure you're supposed to shade/highlight the tail the other way.-Kittycat79Kitties Rule! 06:05, July 13, 2011 (UTC)<
Plus, the erpink looks a little missapen at the bottom, and the chest shading needs to go on the chin as well. The eye color is too neon. Iveh Yo! 14:02, July 13, 2011 (UTC)
Define the earpink, and blur teh shading on the chest. ∗ Mistystar ∗ Trust the Fire Within... 16:49, July 13, 2011 (UTC)
Re-uploaded. I blurred as much as I could, darkened eye, fixed eye, darkened earpink, lightened shading at some parts, fixed tail shading, added chin shading, fixed anglement of the earpink...and... yeah. xD Splook sweet creature 17:35, July 13, 2011 (UTC)
Define the earpink a bit more. :P ∗ Mistystar ∗ Trust the Fire Within... 19:29, July 13, 2011 (UTC)
Blur the shading. --Leafstrike-- 23:42, July 13, 2011 (UTC)
Changes were showing, but not anymore. It stopped showing the changed before those two past comments, but it wouldn't let me edit xD Splook sweet creature 00:03, July 14, 2011 (UTC)
Alright, changes are showing again. Sorry I was at the beach all day, re-comments? Splook sweet creature 01:57, July 15, 2011 (UTC)
The shading is blotchy. Would you like me to help as I did with Whitewing, or can you do it? Mintstar This time for Africa! 02:05, July 15, 2011 (UTC)
Blur the shading on her neck. Looks great otherwise~ Chell; Aperture Science Test Subject. 19:37, July 15, 2011 (UTC)
Re-uploaded. I blurred as much as I could. Mintstar: I'm sorry that you're doing all this for me ^^' You don't have to blur it though, but thanks anyways :D Getting a new computer soon, it will be great starting from scratch.. Splook sweet creature 19:09, July 16, 2011 (UTC)
Looks great, just blue the earpink a tad more~ Chell; Aperture Science Test Subject. 20:41, July 16, 2011 (UTC)
Re-uploaded. Thanks :D Splook sweet creature 00:54, July 17, 2011 (UTC)
Ear pink still looks kinda crooked --Bloo!yo
Re-uploaded. Splook sweet creature 03:21, July 18, 2011 (UTC)
Darken the neck shading under the ear and the stomach shading where the haunch meets the upper body, close to the back. -❄ſceheart ♥ Blah blah 03:22, July 18, 2011 (UTC)
Re-uploaded. Splook sweet creature 18:23, July 18, 2011 (UTC)
Blur the neck shading. ∗ Mistystar ∗ Trust the Fire Within... 21:53, July 18, 2011 (UTC)
Re-uploaded. Splook sweet creature 17:27, July 19, 2011 (UTC)
I think the shading looks a little too concentrated, if you know what I mean. Maybe it's just me ♔Sunspirit♔Back in... uh, yellow? 07:56, July 20, 2011 (UTC)
I'll fix it. Just letting everyone know that the changes are no longer showing. Splook sweet creature 16:00, July 21, 2011 (UTC)
The shading is blotchy, and I don't think blurring it will help. Try redoing it? Mintstar I may be bad, but I'm good at it! 22:48, July 21, 2011 (UTC)
I'm working on this, just trying to do it all on GIMP. GIMP is new to me so it might take a day or so. It'll be up by tomorrow. Sorry. Splook sweet creature 17:24, July 23, 2011 (UTC)
Alright, Re-uploaded. I know the shading needs to be blurred some, but here is my GIMP version ^^' Never to use Pixlr again...hopefully :3 Thanks to Frostheart who gave me her GIMP tutoiral on Teamviewer...lol. Splook sweet creature 18:26, July 23, 2011 (UTC)
Add/darken shading on the haunch. Lovely! Snowdazzle¹²³Lets count numbers! 18:32, July 23, 2011 (UTC)
Re-uploaded. I'll fix that little strange line next reupload. Do you think I should darken the legs? :P And thanks Snowdazzle :D Splook sweet creature 01:20, July 24, 2011 (UTC)
File:Mousefang.warrioredit.png Blur the ear-pink, highlights and shading, lighten the higlights and they're are pink blots in the background, I'm not sure if you'd notice it, so I made a picture. Also, shorten the neck shading. ♔Sunspirit♔Back in... uh, yellow? 11:30, July 24, 2011 (UTC)
The highlights are fine. I'm proud of you Splashpelt XD, but do redden the earpink, and I know it's hard to find the right color for the ear on these colored cats. Mintstar I may be bad, but I'm good at it! 23:15, July 24, 2011 (UTC)
Blur the highlights with the shading more. ✿Dapplecloud✿A pang in the heart... 16:02, July 25, 2011 (UTC)
Pull the earpink down- so that the bottom most tip of the earpink is a little bit closer to the bottom most tip of the ear itself. Also blur the shading and highlights more. Sorry, forgot to sign above. Salcie 21:04, July 25, 2011 (UTC)
Erase the waste around the charart (e.g. above the ear, beside the muzzle, under the tail, etc) --Leafstrike-- 14:12, July 26, 2011 (UTC)
Re-uploaded. I hate this image so much. Rainwhisper helped me out some because I've worked so hard on the shading xP Splook sweet creature 15:38, July 26, 2011 (UTC)
The original artist was Bramble. Now, this might sound stupid, but I think the colour is all wrong now. She looks more ginger than sandy brown... might I suggest going back to the original approved version (before previous Tweak Weeks) and editing that one to improve the shading, whilst keeping the gorgeous colour the original image had? Just my two cents. --SandyTalk 21:01, July 26, 2011 (UTC)
The image at the top of this section is half-covered in a light, yellowish mist thing. It looks weird, and the yellow mist lightens the lineart to a grayish-yellow in some places.-Kittycat79Kitties Rule! 06:18, July 27, 2011 (UTC)
I'm sorry guys, but I've fiddled with this too much. I can never make it look suitable no matter how much time I put into this. I'm withdrawing this for now, someone else is free to take over. Sorry D: Splook sweet creature 01:15, July 31, 2011 (UTC)
May I take over? I'm not doing any chararts, currently. ∗ Mistystar ∗ Trust the Fire Within... 01:15, August 2, 2011 (UTC)
That's fine, Misty. Go right ahead. Redden the ear-pink, define and darken the shading on the the top of the shoulders, and add highlights to the fronts of the forelegs and drag the shading towards the backs, if that makes any sense xP ♌The Star that cannot Return to the Heavens♌ 03:05, August 2, 2011 (UTC)
Okay, but I think I'll just re-do it. xD ∗ Mistystar ∗ Trust the Fire Within... 09:48, August 3, 2011 (UTC)
Re-Uploaded. Comments? ∗ Mistystar ∗ Trust the Fire Within... 18:48, August 4, 2011 (UTC)
Darken, or desaturate the earpink, looks a bit...vivid. Nice work. (hope no one minds me deleting the extra coding) Atelda insert vague subtext here 01:25, August 5, 2011 (UTC)
Looks great ^.^ Fix the miscolored lineart on the head and eye :3 Also, move the earpink up some. Splook sweet creature 01:33, August 5, 2011 (UTC)
Blur the highlights Appledash the light of honor 01:47, August 6, 2011 (UTC)
Since this is being worked on, the heading should be changed ^^; The earpink is a bit neon as well. Iveh Yo! 03:28, August 6, 2011 (UTC)
Delete the white section left to the haunch and right to the leg closest to us. It isn't transparent. Also, The face highlight is coming into her face, so it is blurring the lineart all around it. May I suggest getting the warrior lineart and deleting the all the white inside it and then copying it over the image? Sorry if that was confusing. Make the earpink smaller and move it further up the ear. ♔Sunspirit♔Back in... uh, yellow? 10:08, August 6, 2011 (UTC)
Wait, I'm redoing the shading again. xD ∗ Mistystar ∗ Trust the Fire Within... 15:47, August 8, 2011 (UTC)
Re-Uploaded. Better now? Remember, this is to redo the shading, so I'm not changing earpink, eyes, etc. :P ∗ Mistystar ∗ Trust the Fire Within... 15:55, August 8, 2011 (UTC)
Sorry, changes still aren't showing. ∗ Mistystar ∗ Trust the Fire Within... 16:03, August 8, 2011 (UTC)
The shading seems a bit inconsistent. Like near the shoulder it's darker, but by the haunch it's lighter. Also I think if people say there's something wrong with the eyes, earpink, etc. then you should do it because this is redone and Tweak Week is supposed to make things look better.Roo Hawkfrost lover♥ 17:29, August 9, 2011 (UTC)
Looks good! But the ear pink can be a little smaller.Leaf-storm,13:42,august 10,2011 (UTC)
@Rainy; It does make sense to fix the eyes and earpink, too, anyway, if I had to. xD but the shading on the current file, which has started to show up, has consistent shading, and the shoulder isn't darker than the haunch. I think you saw the wrong file upload. Also, you commented after 25 hours after the last upload... ∗ Mistystar ∗ Trust the Fire Within... 15:43, August 10, 2011 (UTC)
So, can a lead archive this? ∗ Mistystar ∗ Trust the Fire Within... 16:54, August 11, 2011 (UTC)
Patience, Mistystar. >.> I'll archive this now. Roo Hawkfrost lover♥ 23:01, August 11, 2011 (UTC)
Bluestar (D) - Tweaked[]
Original artist was Mumble785, and she needed to be darkend, white muzzle removed, and the earpink was inconsistent. Mintclaw I may be bad, but I'm good at it! 00:58, August 2, 2011 (UTC)
Too much contrast between the highlights and the shading.. x( make them blend into eachother more and blurr it --Bloo!yo 01:26, August 2, 2011 (UTC)
Reuploaded- The earpink was bugging me. Mintclaw I may be bad, but I'm good at it! 15:37, August 2, 2011 (UTC)
Now give the tail more highlight --Bloo!yo 17:19, August 3, 2011 (UTC)
The tail highlight looks fine to me, and that was past 24 hours. Mintclaw I may be bad, but I'm good at it! 19:45, August 3, 2011 (UTC)
I don't really see anything wrong with this.. Great job! Ivyheart =P 03:55, August 8, 2011 (UTC)
There is some highlights on the foot and tail, it looks a bit weird and out of place. Looks great! Atelda insert vague subtext here 00:45, August 9, 2011 (UTC)
It's supposed to be like that :D. Mint Why did I pull the trigger? 13:53, August 9, 2011 (UTC)
Doesn't she still need silver around her muzzle to match her leader image? Iveh Yo! 22:53, August 9, 2011 (UTC)
No, she didn't have any as a deputy. She wasn't old. Mint Why did I pull the trigger? 00:21, August 10, 2011 (UTC)
Oh, I just thought that was always a part of her look. Iveh Yo! 14:51, August 10, 2011 (UTC)
Since the upload had gone through 24 hours of no comments, this is approved. Now a lead can archive it. ∗ Mistystar ∗ Trust the Fire Within... 17:27, August 11, 2011 (UTC)
Yes. We know, Mistystar. o3o Archiving now. Roo Hawkfrost lover♥ 23:07, August 11, 2011 (UTC)
Cedarheart (W) ~ Tweaked[]
It needed to be darkened to match his other images. Original artist is Ashshadow. Atelda insert vague subtext here 18:46, August 9, 2011 (UTC)
Looks great ^.^ Blur the neck shading some. Splook sweet creature 19:08, August 9, 2011 (UTC)
Reuploaded ~ :) Thanks, and blurred! Atelda insert vague subtext here 19:43, August 9, 2011 (UTC)
The lineart on the eye is faded. Fix it, please. =) —Jayce() 21:51, August 9, 2011 (UTC)
The way it looks now, his front paw closest to us makes him look like he has a lighter paw, blend it in much more or shade that part so it doesn't give that impression (unless he DOES have a lighter paw- then it needs to be in his discription). Iveh Yo! 21:59, August 9, 2011 (UTC)
Reuploaded ~ Atelda insert vague subtext here 22:45, August 9, 2011 (UTC)
Could you change the eye? :3 Appledash the light of honor 14:39, August 10, 2011 (UTC)
Can you lighten the earpink a bit? ∗ Mistystar ∗ Trust the Fire Within... 15:55, August 10, 2011 (UTC)
Reuploaded ~ Mmm, ok. Atelda insert vague subtext here 19:10, August 10, 2011 (UTC)
I think this should be approved since it has went 24 hours with no comments. It looks marvelous to me. Iveh Yo! 22:22, August 11, 2011 (UTC)
Yes, us leads will get to it when we get to it. I'll archive this. Roo Hawkfrost lover♥ 23:14, August 11, 2011 (UTC)
Sagepaw (A) ~ Tweaked[]
Color needed to be lightened to match his other images, original artist is Night shine. Atelda insert vague subtext here 18:46, August 9, 2011 (UTC)
Can you make the earpink bigger or define it? Also, since his name was revealed, change it to Sagefur.apprentice.png :) Iveh Yo! 19:44, August 9, 2011 (UTC)
Reuploaded ~ Okay! Atelda insert vague subtext here
Redden the earpink; great work!∗ Mistystar ∗ Trust the Fire Within... 15:56, August 10, 2011 (UTC)
Reuploaded. Atelda insert vague subtext here 19:17, August 10, 2011 (UTC)
24 hours without comments. ♌The Star that cannot Return to the Heavens♌ 00:15, August 12, 2011 (UTC)
Stormfur (Ki) - Tweaked[]
Original artist was Flamingmom3, and it needed thicker/blurred shading. Mint Why did I pull the trigger? 00:36, August 9, 2011 (UTC)
Looks great! Lighten or blur the shading just a teeny tiny bit. (I may be wrong) SnowdazzleSeverusSnape. 01:10, August 9, 2011 (UTC)
Reuploaded. Mint Why did I pull the trigger? 14:25, August 9, 2011 (UTC)
Is it possible to darken the side of the head a little more? Atelda insert vague subtext here 19:09, August 9, 2011 (UTC)
Reuploaded- good? Mint Why did I pull the trigger? 00:32, August 10, 2011 (UTC)
Blur the right ear's earpink a bit. ∗ Mistystar ∗ Trust the Fire Within... 16:47, August 10, 2011 (UTC)
Lighten the shading a bit. --Leafstrike-- 22:42, August 10, 2011 (UTC)
Reuploaded. Mint Why did I pull the trigger? 02:43, August 11, 2011 (UTC)
24 hours without comment. ♌The Star that cannot Return to the Heavens♌ 18:18, August 12, 2011 (UTC)
Oscar (KP) ~ Tweaked[]
Shading needed to be blurred, original artist is Ashshadow. Atelda insert vague subtext here 18:46, August 9, 2011 (UTC)
Give him a black nose. Looks good. -❄ſceheart ♥ Blah blah 19:53, August 9, 2011 (UTC)
Reuploaded Atelda insert vague subtext here 20:58, August 9, 2011 (UTC)
Lighten up the shading and blur the back highlight. Mint Why did I pull the trigger? 21:22, August 9, 2011 (UTC)
Reuploaded Atelda insert vague subtext here 21:32, August 9, 2011 (UTC)
Where's the black nose? Are the changes not showing? —Jayce() 21:51, August 9, 2011 (UTC)
I see a version with a black nose in the history, that one might be it. The pupils look a little green, I know it's artistic effect, but could you try making them a tad bit darker? Iveh Yo! 22:29, August 9, 2011 (UTC)
Reuploaded ~ That was odd...Anyways, done. Atelda insert vague subtext here 22:34, August 9, 2011 (UTC)
There's waste above the head and ear. Mint Why did I pull the trigger? 00:23, August 10, 2011 (UTC)
Blur the shading on the haunch a bit more. ∗ Mistystar ∗ Trust the Fire Within... 15:51, August 10, 2011 (UTC)
Reuploaded. I don't see any waste. Atelda insert vague subtext here 19:14, August 10, 2011 (UTC)
Blur the highlights on his back with the surrounding black. I see that they kind of stand out. It looks good. Fallenstars 20:13, August 10, 2011 (UTC)
Reuploaded. I don't see anything wrong with the highlights, but I blurred the shading a bit. Atelda insert vague subtext here 00:39, August 11, 2011 (UTC)
There is waste above the head and ears. Mint Why did I pull the trigger? 02:44, August 11, 2011 (UTC)
This looks great, but I agree with Fallenstars. The highlights do stand out. Try blurring them. ShadewingMischief Managed... 15:05, August 11, 2011 (UTC) Shadewing
Reuploaded. I suppose the only thing that I can say is .... Anyways, it's blurred to the max on my program, and if there was any waste, it should be gone now. Atelda insert vague subtext here 15:08, August 11, 2011 (UTC)
There's just a dot of it left above the head. And also, blur the shading. Mint Why did I pull the trigger? 23:01, August 11, 2011 (UTC)
Reuploaded. Ok, so I've blurred it as much as possible on my computer. I hope I got the dot too. Atelda insert vague subtext here 01:10, August 12, 2011 (UTC)
24 Hours without comment. ♌The Star that cannot Return to the Heavens♌ 01:20, August 13, 2011 (UTC)
Cinderfur (D) ~ Tweaked[]
Oi. There is gray, I know. All I gotta say, is you have NO idea how long I've been sitting here filling the lineart back in, pixel by pixel. Also, I redid the eyes, since they looked weird, and re-did the shading. Original artist was Shaf Girl, I do believe. —Jayce() 04:02, August 10, 2011 (UTC)
Remove all the waste from around the charart and maybe add some shading around the jaw to bring out the shape of the head. ♌The Star that cannot Return to the Heavens♌ 04:14, August 10, 2011 (UTC)
There's no need to be redundant. I already said I knew about the gray. Re-uploaded. —Jayce() 04:26, August 10, 2011 (UTC)
Oh, sorry, Cloudy. I must've missed that. ♌The Star that cannot Return to the Heavens♌ 04:58, August 10, 2011 (UTC)
Add shading to the tail. ∗ Mistystar ∗ Trust the Fire Within... 18:25, August 10, 2011 (UTC)
There is shading on the tail...? —Jayce() 18:29, August 10, 2011 (UTC)
Oops, I meant highlighting. You don't have to, but it would look a bit better that way. ∗ Mistystar ∗ Trust the Fire Within... 18:58, August 10, 2011 (UTC)
Haha. Re-uploaded. Does that suit your fancy? I don't usually work with highlights... —Jayce() 22:31, August 10, 2011 (UTC)
Looks great! ∗ Mistystar ∗ Trust the Fire Within... 18:28, August 11, 2011 (UTC)
I know it's past 24 hours, but the shading looks darker in some places. Did you do that intentionally? Mint Why did I pull the trigger? 23:03, August 11, 2011 (UTC)
Actually, no I didn't. Whoops. xD Re-uploaded. —Jayce() 23:49, August 11, 2011 (UTC)
24 hours without comment. ♌The Star that cannot Return to the Heavens♌ 01:21, August 13, 2011 (UTC)
Jayfeather (MCA) ~ Redone[]
Here he is. Jayfeather's mca redone. Changes aren't showing up yet. ♌The Star that cannot Return to the Heavens♌ 04:11, August 4, 2011 (UTC)
Make the stripes thinner, like on his MC image, and then blur them his tailtip is a darker color than his stripes. Maple♥poolSchool? Pfft. SUMMERTIME! 15:19, August 4, 2011 (UTC)
Re-uploaded. ♌The Star that cannot Return to the Heavens♌ 22:21, August 4, 2011 (UTC)
There's some stray lines hanging out around the base of his tail. Erase them.-- ♩ Shimmerpool ♪ Never B ♭ ♫ Sometimes B ♯ ♬ But Always B ♮ 04:12, August 5, 2011 (UTC)
Re-uploaded. ♌The Star that cannot Return to the Heavens♌ 04:38, August 5, 2011 (UTC)
Blur the highlights on the haunch WildfireHazelxThorn! 16:09, August 5, 2011 (UTC)
There's still some waste by his tail. Iveh Yo! 21:41, August 5, 2011 (UTC)
Blur the shading and the stripes. Also, the stripes get lost in the shading. Mintclaw I may be bad, but I'm good at it! 23:00, August 5, 2011 (UTC)
Make it more like his kit + apprentice + medicine cat blanks. The stripes look nothing like the stripes on his other images. Appledash the light of honor 15:02, August 6, 2011 (UTC)
Take the color from his MCA image, or WA image maybe? Maple♥poolSchool? Pfft. SUMMERTIME! 23:07, August 8, 2011 (UTC)
Re-uploaded. Okay, I completely redid the stripes, and changes to color to those from his apprentice charart. I can only hope that I didn't make it worse... xP I kinda picked a bad time to try a different type of tabby I've never worked with before. heheheh... Anyway, comments? ♌The Star that cannot Return to the Heavens♌ 23:48, August 8, 2011 (UTC)
Better, there is some waste under his tail, and there is a line coming out of his paws, blur the mottled paws, give him a shorter tail too. Maple♥poolSchool? Pfft. SUMMERTIME! 15:59, August 9, 2011 (UTC)
Re-uploaded. ♌The Star that cannot Return to the Heavens♌ 21:33, August 9, 2011 (UTC)
It looks a bit flat. So define some of the shading and possibly darken the eye color. Looks great! Atelda insert vague subtext here 21:52, August 9, 2011 (UTC)
Still waste under the tail. Maple♥poolSchool? Pfft. SUMMERTIME! 22:43, August 9, 2011 (UTC)
Re-uploaded. @Atelda, I was keeping his eye color really pale since he is blind and I used the same colors from the eye-color in his MC charart. ♌The Star that cannot Return to the Heavens♌ 22:54, August 9, 2011 (UTC)
Blur the stripes more. ∗ Mistystar ∗ Trust the Fire Within... 19:14, August 10, 2011 (UTC)
Re-uploaded. ♌The Star that cannot Return to the Heavens♌ 20:05, August 10, 2011 (UTC)
Oh, and blur the shoulder highlight, too. Besides that, looks good. ∗ Mistystar ∗ Trust the Fire Within... 17:46, August 11, 2011 (UTC)
Re-uploaded. ♌The Star that cannot Return to the Heavens♌ 17:58, August 11, 2011 (UTC)
Can you make the stripes more like his other images? And there's also some blurred lineart, lol. xD ☄ℱrostheartϡ Hexakosioihexekontahexaphobia 00:33, August 12, 2011 (UTC)
Re-uploaded. I think I made it worse those... -.- ♌The Star that cannot Return to the Heavens♌ 01:44, August 12, 2011 (UTC)
24 hours without comment. ♌The Star that cannot Return to the Heavens♌ 02:06, August 13, 2011 (UTC)
Billystorm (W) ~ Tweaked[]
I just added stripes. Original artist was Dawnleaf. Comments? ♌The Star that cannot Return to the Heavens♌ 04:58, August 10, 2011 (UTC)
This looks good! Define the stripes on his front leg. Iveh Yo! 14:12, August 10, 2011 (UTC)
Add some more stripes and darke them. Also, I know this is none of your business, but is it possible to smudge the white a bit more? Appledash the light of honor 14:36, August 10, 2011 (UTC)
Add a few stripes to his front leg and hte top of his head. If you want, define the earpink, but you don't have to since this is only for adding stripes. ∗ Mistystar ∗ Trust the Fire Within... 18:57, August 10, 2011 (UTC)
Re-uploaded. Completely redid the stripe patter. Since he's depicted as really fluffy looking in the manga, I smudged his white chest and tail like that. Also reddened the ear-pink. ♌The Star that cannot Return to the Heavens♌ 20:07, August 10, 2011 (UTC)
Looks great! Maybe blend them in a little, though. Shelly For a limited time only 20:13, August 10, 2011 (UTC)
Re-uploaded. ♌The Star that cannot Return to the Heavens♌ 20:24, August 10, 2011 (UTC)
Wow, it looks so much better! Blur the white paws more. ∗ Mistystar ∗ Trust the Fire Within... 18:29, August 11, 2011 (UTC)
Re-uploaded. I don't think changes are showing up yet. ♌The Star that cannot Return to the Heavens♌ 23:17, August 11, 2011 (UTC)
There is blurred lineart and colour outside of the image. The smudging of the chest looks kinda messy. :3 ☄ℱrostheartϡ Hexakosioihexekontahexaphobia 00:30, August 12, 2011 (UTC)
Re-uploaded.@Frosty. Checked over the charart, but I didn't see any blurred lineart. Can you tell me where you see it? ♌The Star that cannot Return to the Heavens♌ 01:46, August 12, 2011 (UTC)
24 hours without comment. ♌The Star that cannot Return to the Heavens♌ 02:06, August 13, 2011 (UTC)
Thistleclaw (A) - Redone[]
Original artist was Sandstar12/Goldenpaw. He had to be mottled and given spiky fur- basically he had to match his description. The changes aren't showing yet. Roo Hawkfrost lover♥ 16:08, July 27, 2011 (UTC)
The shading is good, but you might want to blur/ smooth out the lines/spikes that you put in the main fur. Salcie 20:19, July 27, 2011 (UTC)
Your seeing the version that was before the one I made, so if you go to his file page and look at the second image in the image history you'll see what he's supposed to look like. x3 Roo Hawkfrost lover♥ 21:08, July 27, 2011 (UTC)
Add some more shading to the spiked part of the fur on the body (yes, I'm looking at your newest version...nice!)Iveh Yo! 22:41, July 27, 2011 (UTC)
Mkay the changes are showing now. ;3 I didn't add spiky fur to his body, only to the lineart. There's mottled on the body though. Roo Hawkfrost lover♥ 23:41, July 27, 2011 (UTC)
Give him white shoulders, like it is in his descpitoion. Maple♥poolSchool? Pfft. SUMMERTIME! 19:13, July 28, 2011 (UTC)
Reuploaded. Roo Hawkfrost lover♥ 20:45, July 28, 2011 (UTC)
The white shoulder looks weird from a side-view...I think you should remove it, and just put a dab of white on the shoulder. Appledash the light of honor 21:19, July 28, 2011 (UTC)
Well it is in his desc...but I agree it looks WERID.....Maple♥poolSchool? Pfft. SUMMERTIME! 21:39, July 28, 2011 (UTC)
Maybe blend the white a bit more so it looks less shocking? Shelly For a limited time only 23:26, July 28, 2011 (UTC)
I agree about just bledning the white in more. I also think you should dark the leg closest to us since he's sitting and therefore keeping it in the shade. Fawngaze 20:19, July 30, 2011 (UTC)
Oh woops, forgot to say Reuploaded. I don't think the changes are showing yet though xP. Roo Hawkfrost lover♥ 01:45, August 1, 2011 (UTC)
Lighten the gray a bit or smooth the transition from gray to white, it looks a bit sharp. Define the ear-pink and brighten it a tad. ♌The Star that cannot Return to the Heavens♌ 04:00, August 1, 2011 (UTC)
Reuploaded. But Scarletwind I don't think the changes were showing when you commented, so I didn't blend it anymore. If you saw the changes though, then just tell me. Roo Hawkfrost lover♥ 18:04, August 1, 2011 (UTC)
Inside the white patch on his shoulder, there looks like there's a patch of really saturated white. Can you blur that? It just looks a bit unnatural. Otherwise, this looks beautiful. ♌The Star that cannot Return to the Heavens♌ 02:57, August 2, 2011 (UTC)
Reuploaded. Roo Hawkfrost lover♥ 20:04, August 2, 2011 (UTC)
I think that the transition from the shoulder highlight to the front leg could be smoother. But this looks superb! :) User:Rainshine/Sig 21:28, August 2, 2011 (UTC)
I think you might be talking about the white patch on his shoulder. It's supposed to be like that. :3 Roo Hawkfrost lover♥ 01:20, August 3, 2011 (UTC)
It didn't say JUST his shoulders were white right? It'd look more..... realistic I guess if the white was like this File:Thistleclaw.apprentice.redline.png. That's just my opinion though, you don't HAVE to make it like that. ♥ Paleclaw May StarClan be with you ♥ 05:26, August 5, 2011 (UTC)
It looks pretty good like that, but you can keep it this way; darken the tail shading. ∗ Mistystar ∗ Trust the Fire Within... 16:51, August 8, 2011 (UTC)
Reuploaded. Guh. I had to use Pixlr since I don't have GIMP anymore. ;-; Roo Hawkfrost lover♥ 23:48, August 10, 2011 (UTC)
I always use Pixlr. xD Blur the top part of the earpink. `∗ Mistystar ∗ Trust the Fire Within...
It looks fine, But yeah, Gimp is better, blur the shoulder a tad. Maple♥poolMischief brewing 00:59, August 13, 2011 (UTC)
Reuploaded, but I don't know if the changes are showing or not. xP Roo Hawkfrost lover♥ 13:34, August 13, 2011 (UTC)
This is fine. Approving. Appledash the light of honor 13:37, August 13, 2011 (UTC)
Starlingpaw (A) - Tweaked[]
The original artist was myself. It has been requested that he needs tabby stripes. I've also blended the shading more thoroughly as it wasn't brilliant. --SandyTalk 11:49, July 27, 2011 (UTC)
Maybe blur the shading just a little bit more? :3 Silverhmm 12:17, July 27, 2011 (UTC)
I can't see the tabby stripes, darken them a bit more. Appledash the light of honor 13:43, July 27, 2011 (UTC) Beautiful! Lakewillow 22 16:24, July 27, 2011 (UTC)Lakewillow 22
- Finally the changes are showing up. Silvereye, I'm not sure I can blur the shading any more withou blurring the stripes, but I'll give it a go. Icestorm, can you see them now that the file has updated, or do they still need to be darker? I'm trying to find a middle ground between having the stripes and making sure they're not too dark as he is a ginger cat rather than a ginger tabby as such. Just let me know. --SandyTalk 22:32, July 27, 2011 (UTC) :Yes, I can see him. Good job! You might want to darkent he shading a bit more. Appledash the light of honor 23:30, July 27, 2011 (UTC) ::Reuploaded --SandyTalk 07:15, July 28, 2011 (UTC)
Add a little shading to the left ear --Bloo!yo 07:22, July 28, 2011 (UTC)
- The left ear is highlighted due to the direction of the light source coming from the left hand side of the image. There is shading to the right of the image, and highlights along the back and back of the ear. For this reason, the right ear is not highlighted as it would not fall directly into the light, where as the back of the ears would, hence the left ear is highlighted rather than shaded. Hope that makes sense (: --SandyTalk 07:33, July 28, 2011 (UTC)
Define the stripes on his tail (if possible, since the tail is skinny.) Mintclaw I may be bad, but I'm good at it! 15:33, July 28, 2011 (UTC)
- Reuploaded --SandyTalk 21:33, July 28, 2011 (UTC) :Fix the lineart on his chest. Appledash the light of honor 21:54, July 30, 2011 (UTC)
- I can't see where it's broken, and quite honestly need to sleep right now as it's nearly midnight. I'll be gone for a week, so if someone would like to fix whichever pixel my tired eyes can't spot, that would be much appreciated. Alternatively, just point it out a little more specifically and I can fix it when I return. Sorry. --SandyTalk 22:40, July 30, 2011 (UTC)
Define the tail stripes a bit, looks great! ∗ Mistystar ∗ Trust the Fire Within... 16:49, August 8, 2011 (UTC)
Looks great, and it's been 24 hours, so this is approved. :3 --Roo Hawkfrost lover♥ 14:35, August 13, 2011 (UTC)
Yellowfang (MCA)~ Tweaked[]
I added a torn ear, and shortened the muzzle. I cant shorten it any more without removing the whiskers. Comments? Original artist was Scaletwind. -❄ſceheart ♥ Blah blah 16:32, August5, 2011 (UTC)
Lighten the shading, it's way too dark. I know you it isn't your problem, but you still should. Make the nicked ear lineart thicker, and if possible make it deeper. Appledash the light of honor 21:29, August 5, 2011 (UTC)
Blur the jagged shading into her pelt more so it will look more natural. Iveh Yo! 21:31, August 5, 2011 (UTC)
Make the torn ear a bit more noticable. ∗ Mistystar ∗ Trust the Fire Within... 17:26, August 8, 2011 (UTC)
Make both of her ears torn, like in her other images. Maple♥poolSchool? Pfft. SUMMERTIME! 23:02, August 8, 2011 (UTC)
Re-uploaded- -❄ſceheart ♥ Blah blah 18:58, August 10, 2011 (UTC)
The torn ear in front could be thickened a bit, and a bit deeper. ∗ Mistystar ∗ Trust the Fire Within... 19:09, August 10, 2011 (UTC)
It looks like the scar that is on the bottom is just a pixil, make it the same or nearly the same length as the others, otherwise it looks kinda weird. Also, I think you forgot to color in the pixil of the herb where she's holding on to it, but I can't really tell. If you have, darken it (I know, picky picky D: )Iveh Yo! 21:38, August 10, 2011 (UTC)
Re-uploaded- Changes arent showing, and Ivystripe, im sorry but i have no idea what youre talking about XP. -❄ſceheart ♥ Blah blah 19:20, August 11, 2011 (UTC)
Sorry xD It looks like you got it, regardless! Iveh Yo! 21:09, August 11, 2011 (UTC)
Just stating the obvious, but I think this should be approved. Iveh Yo! 19:00, August 12, 2011 (UTC)
Approving. Roo Hawkfrost lover♥ 14:40, August 13, 2011 (UTC)
Yellowfang (R) - Tweaked[]
I think this would make exactly 35 images, if I'm not mistaken. Original artist was Grayravenpaw. She needed torn ears, and I shortened her muzzle, made her earpink match, made her scars match, fixed some waste, and smudged her shading. Comments? Iveh Yo! 21:51, August 11, 2011 (UTC)
Blur the highlights a tad, and you are mistaken, once Lionblaze's kit image and Mousefang's warrior image is Archvired, Pinestar will be number 35 Maple♥poolMischief brewing 22:00, August 11, 2011 (UTC)
The changes aren't showing, did you look at the one I uploaded? Need to make sure. And Bluestar's deputy will make this #35. Iveh Yo! 22:14, August 11, 2011 (UTC)
Blur the scars. And also, I know you didn't work with the earpink, but can you redden it. It looks whiteish. And blur the shading, nice job. Mint Why did I pull the trigger? 23:06, August 11, 2011 (UTC)
Actually, I took the earpink from the approved images ^^; And ok, I'll do that, thank you! Iveh Yo! 23:42, August 11, 2011 (UTC)
I know this might be a bit of extra work for you, but I would honestly redo the shading. Nothing you wouldn't be able to handle after 35 images though ;) Atelda insert vague subtext here 01:33, August 12, 2011 (UTC)
That's ok, I can handle it! Iveh Yo! 02:23, August 12, 2011 (UTC)
Reuploaded and I don't think changes are showing. I went back to the old earpink, and I had to change it since her blank depicted her as a male xD Iveh Yo! 04:24, August 12, 2011 (UTC)
She still needs torn ears, maybe re-upload it again? ♌The Star that cannot Return to the Heavens♌ 18:17, August 12, 2011 (UTC)
Ugh it's still not showing ._. It should be the one with this earpink and torn ears Iveh Yo! 18:37, August 12, 2011 (UTC)
Ok they are showing :D Iveh Yo! 22:57, August 12, 2011 (UTC)
Comments? If not, shouldn't get approved since it's been 24 hours? Iveh Yo! 01:46, August 13, 2011 (UTC)
Approving. Roo Hawkfrost lover♥ 14:40, August 13, 2011 (UTC)
Ravenpaw (A) - Tweaked[]
This isn't over the limit since Bluestar's deputy just got approved. Original artist was Sandwich989. He needed his shading fixed, as well as his earpink. I also fixed some messed-up lineart and the waste. Iveh Yo! 18:36, August 11, 2011 (UTC)
Blur the shading on the haunch. ∗ Mistystar ∗ Trust the Fire Within... 18:59, August 11, 2011 (UTC)
Make the dask more white.Maple♥poolMischief brewing 20:11, August 11, 2011 (UTC)
Reuploaded and I realized that after I uploaded it, actually! Iveh Yo! 21:01, August 11, 2011 (UTC)
And I don't think the changes are showing Iveh Yo! 21:04, August 11, 2011 (UTC)
Ok I think they are now Iveh Yo! 21:26, August 11, 2011 (UTC)
Redden the ear-pink a bit more. ♌The Star that cannot Return to the Heavens♌ 18:13, August 12, 2011 (UTC)
Reuploaded and as always, changes aren't showing Iveh Yo! 18:40, August 12, 2011 (UTC)
If there are no more comments, this should be approved. Iveh Yo! 18:40, August 13, 2011 (UTC)
Ok, ok, I'm approving it. Roo Hawkfrost lover♥ 19:53, August 13, 2011 (UTC)
Russetfur (D) - Redone[]
Russetfur's deputy charart. She needed stripes, so I redid her overall. Original artist was Echomist. Anyways, comments? Splook sweet creature 01:58, July 27, 2011 (UTC)
Changes aren't showing...but who knows about these things xD Splook sweet creature 01:59, July 27, 2011 (UTC) (re-uploaded the image :3)
Darken the shading and make the stripes more like her other image. :3 ☄ℱrostheartϡ Hexakosioihexekontahexaphobia 02:10, July 27, 2011 (UTC)
Re-uploaded. Splook sweet creature 02:26, July 27, 2011 (UTC)
Changes won't show >.< (Edit: I renamed the file, I got it to show :3)Splook sweet creature 02:28, July 27, 2011 (UTC)
Make her look more dark ginger, she looks brown. Mintclaw I may be bad, but I'm good at it! 03:16, July 27, 2011 (UTC)
Mintclaw, I thought the same thing when I first looked at the pic. It's pretty, though. I haven't even figured out how to work with Adobe Illustrator or Adobe Photoshop.
Re-uploaded. Changes may or may not be showing, but the changed one is darker all together xD And to who ever signed above, remember to sign with four ~'s and refrain from repeating comments ;3 Splook sweet creature 20:40, July 27, 2011 (UTC)
It still needs to be a little more ginger, because the stripes appear brown. But I could be wrong, after all I'm still an apprentice. Iveh Yo! 22:47, July 27, 2011 (UTC)
Re-uploaded. Ivystripe, it doesn't matter if you were an apprentice or not, you were right xD Splook sweet creature 01:47, July 28, 2011 (UTC)
Blur the shading a ton. Looks good either way. =) —Jayce() 22:10, July 28, 2011 (UTC)
Echomist...oh god, I miss her. Um, blur the shading more as Skye stated, make the stripes more...gingerish xD, and blur the ear pink. Appledash the light of honor 00:29, July 29, 2011 (UTC)
You and Nightflower will have to converse, as the pelt markings don't look the same. One of you guys are gonna have to tweak the stripes. Iveh Yo! 20:49, July 29, 2011 (UTC)
Re-uploaded. I redid the color all together. I'll talk to Nightflower on skype, we'll both upload our images together, probably on Teamviewer or something. Splook sweet creature 01:01, July 31, 2011 (UTC)
Since my image hasn't had any comments for three days, and Nightflower still has comments to take care of, should she copy my stripe pattern? Sorry if I have to make Nightflower redo her beautiful image, but I haven't had any comments. If Nightflower refuses to redo her's, I'll try to make my pattern exactly like her's. Splook sweet creature 18:54, August 3, 2011 (UTC)
Is the stripes on Russetfur (D) the same as Russetfur (W)? User:OwlXGlitter4EVER/Siggy19:16, August 4, 2011 (UTC)
No, that's the thing. Should Nightflower copy my stripes, or me copy hers? My point is written out in my previous comment :P Splook sweet creature 01:35, August 5, 2011 (UTC)
I'd say you should talk it over with her and see what she wants to do. ☾Moonflight☽ 23:35, August 5, 2011 (UTC)
Re-uploaded. I copied everything from what Nightflower has done. Splook sweet creature 03:33, August 8, 2011 (UTC)
Changes won't show. Splook sweet creature 03:35, August 8, 2011 (UTC)
Define the tail stripes. ∗ Mistystar ∗ Trust the Fire Within... 16:47, August 8, 2011 (UTC)
Just to let everyone know, the revised version is the second one one on the history. Splook sweet creature 17:41, August 8, 2011 (UTC)
Try re-uploading it again. It worked with me for Raggedstar, Jayfeather, and Mistystar. ♌The Star that cannot Return to the Heavens♌ 02:31, August 9, 2011 (UTC)
Can you define the stripes on her tail? They are not really showing.Fallenstars 04:35, August 10, 2011 (UTC)
Re-uploaded. Go to the details to see the revised version, it's the one with the darker tail stripes. Splook sweet creature 21:47, August 10, 2011 (UTC)
Guh, I'm getting so sick of this -.- It's not in the details page, so don't bother looking there. Splook sweet creature 21:49, August 10, 2011 (UTC)
Can you possibly blend the neck shading in with the rest of it? It still stands out a tad. Other then that, this looks amazing! —Jayce() 01:58, August 11, 2011 (UTC)
Re-uploaded. If the changes still aren't showing from my last revision, I know they're not for this either. -.- Splook sweet creature 05:06, August 11, 2011 (UTC)
Really? They are now? This is confusing me so much. Splook sweet creature 05:07, August 11, 2011 (UTC)
Lighten the tail shading a bit. This looks great! Squishee DONT EAT MY FOOD! 20:05, August 11, 2011 (UTC)
If you can, could you make her a little more ginger, she looks brown to me. Mint Why did I pull the trigger? 22:44, August 11, 2011 (UTC)
It looks about the same color her preveious image was. Maple♥poolMischief brewing 17:03, August 12, 2011 (UTC)
She took the color from the previous image. Appledash the light of honor 20:21, August 12, 2011 (UTC)
Re-uploaded. The changes are there somewhere. Splook sweet creature 02:31, August 13, 2011 (UTC)
Looks good. Approving. --Roo Hawkfrost lover♥ 00:23, August 14, 2011 (UTC)
Mistyfoot (D) ~ Redone[]
Original artist was Sandstar12. Comments? ♌The Star that cannot Return to the Heavens♌ 02:10, August 2, 2011 (UTC)
Blur the shading tons. The earpink needs to be smaller. The shading also needs to be thinner. Mintclaw I may be bad, but I'm good at it! 02:26, August 2, 2011 (UTC)
And rename this 'Mistystar.deputy', so it replaces the original image. Rainlegs 03:24, August 2, 2011 (UTC) Blur the ear pink. Appledash the light of honor 14:22, August 2, 2011 (UTC) There's some waste around the head. Splook sweet creature 16:08, August 2, 2011 (UTC)
Blur the shading or redo it, it's very blotchy. --Leafstrike-- 18:43, August 2, 2011 (UTC)
It's so odd... Whenever I try to re-upload over the old Misystar Deputy file, it gives me a permission error and doesn't work. So, that's why I haven't updated this yet. Has this happened to anyone else or does it only happen to this file? ♌The Star that cannot Return to the Heavens♌ 00:09, August 3, 2011 (UTC)
- Icestorm has also told me that she can't upload over her deputy file, so for now, I'm going to withdraw this until we can get these problems figured out. ♌The Star that cannot Return to the Heavens♌ 19:49, August 3, 2011 (UTC)
- Nevermind. Mistystar's working with to try and get this to work. So, I take that back. xP ♌The Star that cannot Return to the Heavens♌ 21:19, August 3, 2011 (UTC)
- Uploading over Mistystar's deputy file still isn't working so, I'm going to keep uploading over the old Mistyfoot file for now. ♌The Star that cannot Return to the Heavens♌ 13:13, August 4, 2011 (UTC) : Have you blurred the shading on 100% with the biggest brush you could? That usually blurs it very well. (sorry if I'm telling you something you already know ^^; )Iveh Yo! 03:39, August 6, 2011 (UTC)
- Re-uploaded. Don't think changes are showing up yet. ♌The Star that cannot Return to the Heavens♌ 03:12, August 8, 2011 (UTC)
- Changes are showing up. ♌The Star that cannot Return to the Heavens♌ 01:56, August 9, 2011 (UTC)
To me, her shading makes her look dappled, I don't know if you were going for that though. --Iveh Yo! 02:20, August 9, 2011 (UTC)
Re-uploaded. ♌The Star that cannot Return to the Heavens♌ 03:23, August 9, 2011 (UTC)
Darken and blur the shading, also, make the earpink smaller. Mint Why did I pull the trigger? 21:18, August 9, 2011 (UTC)
There is alot of waste under her chest, under her haunch, under he forearm, under her tail, under her chin Maple♥poolSchool? Pfft. SUMMERTIME! 22:46, August 9, 2011 (UTC)
Re-uploaded. ♌The Star that cannot Return to the Heavens♌ 20:04, August 10, 2011 (UTC)
Lighten the middle highlight. ∗ Mistystar ∗ Trust the Fire Within... 17:28, August 11, 2011 (UTC)
Re-uploaded. ♌The Star that cannot Return to the Heavens♌ 17:45, August 11, 2011 (UTC)
The ear pink is to small and blotchy. And I don't like the color. but that's just me ;) Squishee DONT EAT MY FOOD! 20:07, August 11, 2011 (UTC)
Re-uploaded. Changed the color, size is fine. ♌The Star that cannot Return to the Heavens♌ 23:18, August 11, 2011 (UTC)
Blur the shading and the highlights. Appledash the light of honor 20:24, August 12, 2011 (UTC)
Re-uploaded. I'm not sure if the changes are showing, 'cause they weren't with brightheart. ♌The Star that cannot Return to the Heavens♌ 03:16, August 13, 2011 (UTC)
24 hours without comment. ♌The Star that cannot Return to the Heavens♌ 03:16, August 14, 2011 (UTC)
Brokenstar (W) - Tweaked[]
Added torn ears. Original artist was moi~ ;3 Pianokey; Frédéric François Chopin. 02:28, August 1, 2011 (UTC)
The changes still aren't showing, maybe try to re-upload it again. ♌The Star that cannot Return to the Heavens♌ 17:03, August 2, 2011 (UTC)
They're showing now :3 Pianokey; Frédéric François Chopin. 17:10, August 2, 2011 (UTC)
Lovely. Redden the ear-pink and darken the shading. ♌The Star that cannot Return to the Heavens♌ 17:12, August 2, 2011 (UTC)
I have this reserved... and you don't. But you can have it. Just please, reserve things next time. ☾Moonflight☽ 21:50, August 2, 2011 (UTC)
Oh, I'm sorry 3:. I didn't check the reservations table... Pianokey; Frédéric François Chopin. 22:04, August 2, 2011 (UTC)
Elorisa, are you still working on this? ♌The Star that cannot Return to the Heavens♌ 03:27, August 10, 2011 (UTC)
Yeah, I just haven't gotten to reuploading it. It'll be reuploaded at the end of the day, hopefully ^^ Pianokey; Frédéric François Chopin. 15:46, August 11, 2011 (UTC)
Define the earpink. ∗ Mistystar ∗ Trust the Fire Within... 17:22, August 11, 2011 (UTC)
Reuploaded. Vega; Beauty is absoulute.File:V.jpg 14:24, August 13, 2011 (UTC)
It's been 24 hours. --Roo Hawkfrost lover♥ 15:08, August 14, 2011 (UTC)
Copperpaw (A) - Tweaked (Redone)[]
The original artist was Sandstar12 and then tweaked by GroceryBag. I added stripes, and added more shading because it wasn't too visible. I don't know if this would be considered tweaked or redone, because I did this all on the original image, but it looks kind of like it was redone. xD So, comments? Roo Hawkfrost lover♥ 20:00, August 2, 2011 (UTC)
Amazing job, Roo. I see nothing wrong with it, really. Appledash the light of honor 21:39, August 2, 2011 (UTC)
lighten the shading on the top haunch (Sorta on the back) --Bloo!yo 23:34, August 2, 2011 (UTC)
Distinguish the stripes on the legs. ☄ℱrostheartϡ Hexakosioihexekontahexaphobia 15:29, August 3, 2011 (UTC)
Add shading to the tail. ∗ Mistystar ∗ Trust the Fire Within... 17:35, August 8, 2011 (UTC)
Reuploaded. Changes aren't showing. Roo Hawkfrost lover♥ 00:02, August 11, 2011 (UTC)
Better. define hte earpink. ∗ Mistystar ∗ Trust the Fire Within... 17:54, August 11, 2011 (UTC)
I think it's fine. Define the stripes on the tail and legs a bit more. :3 ☄ℱrostheartϡ Hexakosioihexekontahexaphobia 23:09, August 11, 2011 (UTC)
Reuploaded. Roo Hawkfrost lover♥ 13:41, August 13, 2011 (UTC)
It's been 24 hours. Roo Hawkfrost lover♥ 15:08, August 14, 2011 (UTC)
Mothwing (MC) - Tweaked[]
I think I've got mottles down now. The original artist was Hiddensun, and it needed mottles. I think they mostly got lost in the stripes. Mintclaw I may be bad, but I'm good at it! 16:03, August 4, 2011 (UTC)
I don't see shading. Is this how the image is supposed to be? —Jayce() 05:34, August 5, 2011 (UTC)
Reuploaded- I don't really like this. Mintclaw I may be bad, but I'm good at it! 17:09, August 5, 2011 (UTC)
Can you add more mottles/stripes? Other than, looking good! ❋Snowpuff❃You make me feel... 21:20, August 5, 2011 (UTC)
It doesn't really need any more mottles, I just think she needs a defineable stripe on her face and a larger one on her tail. Iveh Yo! 21:24, August 5, 2011 (UTC)
Reuploaded. I hadn't realized that I left one of the dapples unblurred. These are dapples, not mottles, sorry for the mistake. Mintclaw I may be bad, but I'm good at it! 23:01, August 5, 2011 (UTC)
The stripes are really awkward. I hate to say this, but I honestly think they need to be redone. Darkhallows Enter the cave? 01:22, August 6, 2011 (UTC)
Could you explain what you mean by "awkward?" Mintclaw I may be bad, but I'm good at it! 14:42, August 6, 2011 (UTC)
I second your opinion, Darkhallows. I think she meant they were awkward because they went at different angles and there isn't enough, they look really weird and non-realistic. Appledash the light of honor 15:00, August 6, 2011 (UTC)
The herbs seem a little bright to me, so if you think the color is fine, then I guess darken the shading. Ivyheart =P 03:57, August 8, 2011 (UTC)
Reuploaded- I hate the shading. Mint Why did I pull the trigger? 14:21, August 8, 2011 (UTC)
It looks better! But the stripes are a little blotchy on the legs. SnowdazzleSeverusSnape. 19:41, August 8, 2011 (UTC)
Reuploaded- I don't know how stripes can be blotchy, so I blurred them. Mint Why did I pull the trigger? 00:30, August 10, 2011 (UTC)
Darken the shading on the neck. ∗ Mistystar ∗ Trust the Fire Within... 19:12, August 10, 2011 (UTC)
The haunch lineart closest to her front leg looks kind of...chewed? Or kind of like the pelt color went over it. Iveh Yo! 21:39, August 10, 2011 (UTC)
Reuploaded- I fixed the lineart problem. Mint Why did I pull the trigger? 02:41, August 11, 2011 (UTC)
I know it isn't your fault, but can you define the earpink? ∗ Mistystar ∗ Trust the Fire Within... 16:45, August 11, 2011 (UTC)
Reuploaded. Mint Why did I pull the trigger? 22:54, August 11, 2011 (UTC)
There are suddenly lighter spots in the chest area, and there is blurred lineart on the legs, tail, and a bit on the haunch. :3 ☄ℱrostheartϡ Hexakosioihexekontahexaphobia 00:32, August 12, 2011 (UTC)
Reuploaded. Mint Why did I pull the trigger? 15:48, August 12, 2011 (UTC)
You need to reupload it as Mothwing.mc.png (instead of Mothwing_mc.png) so it overwrites the old file. Shelly For a limited time only 17:02, August 12, 2011 (UTC)
Reuploaded- changes aren't showing. Mint Why did I pull the trigger? 14:59, August 13, 2011 (UTC)
It's been 24 hours. Roo Hawkfrost lover♥ 15:08, August 14, 2011 (UTC)
Broken Shadow (SC) - Tweaked[]
I screwed up this image. I added stripes, brightened the highlights, darkened shading, against the stripes, and of course, the shadign didn't seem to like my white paws. Comments? Appledash the light of honor 15:39, August 10, 2011 (UTC)
Fix the shading on the white paws, obviously. :P Add some more stripes on the haunch. ☄ℱrostheartϡ Hexakosioihexekontahexaphobia 16:29, August 10, 2011 (UTC)
Add a bit of shading to the tail, right now it looks 2 dimensional. Looks great! ∗ Mistystar ∗ Trust the Fire Within... 18:55, August 10, 2011 (UTC)
The White part of the front paws seems gray. And add some stripes on the bottom of the haunch to make it look more realistic too. Other than that it looks great! Fallenstars 20:09, August 10, 2011 (UTC)
The stripes look kinda pasted on top of the highlights, maybe lighten them where the highlight is. Also, are her hind paws supposed to have that orangey hue? I think it looks nice but a bit unnatural. Either way, this looks very good. ♌The Star that cannot Return to the Heavens♌ 20:11, August 10, 2011 (UTC)
Yeah, the stripes look a little too "painted on" should I say. Blend/smudge them in more with the pelt :3 Splook sweet creature 01:30, August 11, 2011 (UTC)
Make the colors more like her queen image. Pianokey; Frédéric François Chopin. 15:41, August 11, 2011 (UTC)
Re-Uploaded: I just re-did her completely, paws + shading + stripes are a pain when it comes to forgetting to save your images as an xcf. Appledash the light of honor 13:52, August 13, 2011 (UTC)
It's been 24 hours. Roo Hawkfrost lover♥ 15:08, August 14, 2011 (UTC)
Bluestar (A) - Tweaked[]
File:Bluestar.app.png I am aware this over the page limit, but Stormfur (Ki) should be archived. Original artist was Quietstep, and it needed to be darkend and earpink was inconsistent. Mint Why did I pull the trigger? 15:55, August 12, 2011 (UTC)
Darken the ear-pink a tad, it also looks kinda blotchy to me. Blur the shading on the shoulders and add/darken it under the chin. ♌The Star that cannot Return to the Heavens♌ 18:19, August 12, 2011 (UTC)
Reuploaded- I also brightened the shoulder highlight. Mint Why did I pull the trigger? 14:53, August 13, 2011 (UTC)
It's been 24 hours. Roo Hawkfrost lover♥ 15:08, August 14, 2011 (UTC)